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写作规范练(十七)
Ⅰ.应用文写作(图表类写作)
学校英文报正在开展以“Protecting Our Eyes to Enjoy a Bright World”为题的讨论。请使
用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1．学生近视率状况描述；
2．简单评论；
3．你的建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．短文题目已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Protecting Our Eyes to Enjoy a Bright World
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参考范文
Protecting_Our_Eyes_to_Enjoy_a_Bright_World
The health of children’s vision is facing a growing threat.Data shows that 14.3 percent of
preschool kids are shortsighted.The rate is 35.6 percent for primary school pupils,71.1 percent for
junior high school students and 80.5 percent for senior high school students.
The age for the beginning of shortsightedness is getting younger.Meanwhile ， the
phenomenon of shortsightedness during the middle school is rapidly increasing.
To tackle the growing problem，schools should reduce the academic burden of students and
increase the time of outdoor activities.What’s more，we should attach importance to our visual
health and control the time spent on electronic devices.
Ⅱ.读后续写(动物救人)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was in about 40 feet of water all by myself.I knew I should not have gone alone，but I was
rather competent and just took a chance.There was not much current，and the water was so
warm，clear and attractive.When I got a cramp(抽筋)，I realized at once how foolish I was.I was
not too alarmed，but was completely doubled up with stomach cramps.I tried to remove my weightbelt，but I was so doubled up that I could not get to the catch.I was sinking and began to feel more
frightened，unable to move.I could see my watch and knew there was only a little more time on
the oxygen tank before I would be out of air.I tried to massage(按摩) my stomach.I wasn’t
wearing a wet suit，but couldn’t straighten out and couldn’t get to the cramped muscles with
my hands.I thought，“I can’t go like this! I have things to do！” I just couldn’t die this way
with no one to even know what happened to me.I called out in my mind ，“Somebody，
something，help me！”
I was not prepared for what happened.Suddenly I felt a push from behind me under the arm.I
thought，“Oh no，sharks！” I felt real fear and desperation.But my arm was being lifted
forcefully.Around into my field of vision came an eye—the most extraordinary eye I could ever
imagine.It was smiling.It was the eye of a big dolphin.Looking into that eye，I knew I was safe.I
was flooded with relief.I felt that the animal was comforting me as well as lifting me toward the
surface.My stomach cramps went away and I relaxed with security.
At the surface it drew me all the way into shore.It took me into water so shallow that I began
to be concerned that it might be beached，and I pushed it back a little deeper，where it waited，
watching me，I guess to see if I was all right.
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
When I took off the weight belt and oxygen tank ，I went back into the ocean to the
dolphin.________________________________________________________________________
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After a while it brought me back to shore.__________________________________________
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参考范文
When I took off the weight belt and oxygen tank，I went back into the ocean to the dolphin.I
felt so light and free and alive，and just wanted to play in the sun and the water happily and
freely.The dolphin took me back out and played around in the water with me.I noticed that there
were a lot of dolphins there，farther out.However，I did not feel scared at all.I relaxed，hugging
it.How I wished to stay with him forever!
After a while it brought me back to shore.I was very tired at that time，almost collapsing and
he made sure that I was safe in the shallowest water.Then he turned sideways with one eye looking
into mine.We stayed that way for what seemed like a very long time，timeless I guess，staring
into space，with personal thoughts from the past going through my mind.Afterwards，he made
just one loud sound and went out to join the others.And all of them left.
