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十五、人物介绍
人物介绍的文章一般都是对所写之人的基本概况(如年龄、出生地、家庭背景、受教育
情况等)作简单的概述，继而再叙述其事迹或在某个领域中做出的贡献，最后对其进行评价。
具体写作结构如下：
1．开头句
(1)The person I admire most is...我最敬佩的人是……
(2)Of all the outstanding people，I admire...most.在所有杰出的人当中，我最钦佩……
(3)There are many respectable people around us.The one who I admire most is...我们周围有许多
可敬的人。我最崇拜的人是……
(4)When it comes to the person who I think highly of，I would say...without hesitation.说到我高
度评价的人，我会毫不犹豫地说……
2．中间句
(1)Born in...，on...，...is one of...出生在……，在……，……是……之一。
(2)Graduating from...，he worked as...毕业于……，他担任……
(3)In order to...，he made up his mind to do...为了……，他决定做……
(4)With strong will and great determination，he achieved the great success in...凭借坚强的意志和
决心，他在……方面取得了巨大的成功。
(5)Despite many difficulties，he/she managed to overcome them.尽管有许多困难，他/她还是设
法克服了。
(6)He/She put his/her heart into...and made great contributions to...他/她全身心投入……中去，
为……做出了巨大贡献。
3．结尾句
(1)As a great...，he/she will be remembered by us forever.作为一个伟大的……，他/她将永远被
我们铭记。
(2)It is his determination that inspires me to go on when I have difficulty in learning.是他的决心激
励我在学习上有困难时继续前进。
(3)Having set a great example for us，he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admirationand respect.他为我们树立了一个很好的榜样，是一个非常优秀的人，完全值得我们钦佩和尊
重。
(4)It’s her/his encouragement that contributes to shaping my personalities and inspires me to
accomplish my goals persistently.正是她/他的鼓励，有助于塑造我的个性，激励我坚持不懈地
完成目标。
(5)．..is such an respectable and admirable person that I will model myself after...and be a person
like...……是一个令人尊敬和钦佩的人，我将以……为榜样，做一个像……的人。
(2023·全国甲)
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为
题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1．人物简介及事迹；
2．意义或启示。
注意：1.写作词数应为100个左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
满分佳作 名师点评
Confucius is a wellknown figure in Chinese history.His 1.这是一篇人物介绍的记叙
teachings emphasized the importance of moral values ， 文，首段引入历史人物的事
respect for elders，and social harmony.Confucius traveled 迹，中间介绍该历史人物的
throughout the country，imparting his wisdom to countless 重要性，最后介绍该历史人
disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. 物的影响。
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated.His 2.文章中使用了一些高级词
teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of 汇，如wellknown，figure，
Chinese culture，fostering respect for authority，harmonious emphasize，harmony，
relationships，and the pursuit of knowledge.Even today，his impart，profound，
ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China significance，overstate，
and beyond. shape，ethical，foundation，
Confucius’s teachings about selfcultivation，respect for pursuit，individual等。
elders，and the pursuit of knowledge serve as a guiding light in 3.还使用了一些高级句式表
our fastpaced and interconnected world，which remind us of 达，如分词短语作状语和
the importance of integrity ， compassion ， and social which引导的非限制性定语
responsibility. 从句等。
你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请你以The Person I Admire Most为题写一篇短文参赛，
内容包括：
1．人物简介；2．他/她值得钦佩的原因。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．题目已给出，不计入总词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
The Person I Admire Most
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The Person I Admire Most
When it comes to the person I admire most，I can’t help thinking of Fan Jinshi who is an
archaeologist and a guard of Dunhuang.
After graduating from Peking University，Fan Jinshi chose to work in Mogao Caves，
Dunhuang.Although the living environment was terrible，she was deeply attracted by the works of
art and desired to protect them for the future generations.She and her team overcame difficulties，
explored scientific concepts and built a “digital Dunhuang” ， which has balanced the
relationship between cultural relics protection and tourism.
Fan Jinshi is called the daughter of Dunhuang.She deserves the respect of all at home and
abroad.
