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必修第二册 Unit 4 Stage and screen
佳作抢鲜背 学写作思路,背精彩范文(求助信——指导改编短剧)
(全国Ⅲ卷)假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教
Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1.剧情简介;2.指导内容;
3.商定时间地点。
精彩范文
Dear Miss Evans,
I’m writing to ask for your help with our English short play adapted from our
English textbook.
The story starts with a boy named Huckleberry Finn,who ran away from
home and lived with his friend Jim , a former slave , on a raft on the
Mississippi River. Then Finn was cheated by two men , with his raft stolen and
Jim sold to a farm. Finn and his friend Tom Sawyer made a plan to save Jim
from the farm.At last they managed to free Jim.
I wonder if you would like to give us some advice.The vocabulary and
grammar of the plot need to be adjusted,and we also need your guidance on
our performance.If possible , shall we meet you in your office at 10 am
tomorrow?
Looking forward to your early reply.Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
迁移运用
每日句型练透:with复合结构
1.He stood before his teacher _____________________________________.他低着头站在老师面前。
2.I sat in my room for a few minutes ___________________________________.
我在房间坐了一会儿,眼睛盯着天花板。
3._____________________________________________________________,
it’s a good idea to review your class notes.
随着考试的临近,复习一下你的课堂笔记是个不错的主意。
4._____________________________________________________________,
she headed for home joyfully.
东西买齐,她高兴地回家了。
1.combine v.(使)结合,(使)组合→combination n.结合;结合体
以练促学 单句语法填空/完成句子
①The menu in this beautiful colonial house includes traditional Thai cuisine
____________ (combine) with modern cooking methods.(2023·全国甲卷)
②Your four major essays will combine ___________ (form)the main part of the
grade for this course.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)
③_____________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________,the beautiful
scenery made our visit more enjoyable.
美丽的风景结合宜人的气候和美味的食物,使我们的旅行更加愉快。
用法归纳
·combine...with/and...把……与……结合起来
combine to do sth 联合起来做某事
be combined with 与……结合·in combination with 与……联合起来
[联想] 表示“把……与……联系起来”的短语还有:connect...with/to...,
associate...with...,link...with/to...,relate...to...。
佳句背诵 Lucy hesitated,uncertain of how to combine honesty and diplomacy
in her answer.(心理描写)
露西犹豫了一下,不确定如何在回答时既要诚实又要圆滑。
2.absorbed adj.专心致志的(concentrated)→absorb v.吸收;理解;吸引(注意)
以练促学 句式升级
Tom was so absorbed in reading the poetry that he forgot to inform her of the meeting.
→_____________________________________________________________,
Tom forgot to inform her of the meeting.(形容词短语作状语)
→_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________,
Tom forgot to inform her of the meeting.(分词短语作状语)
用法归纳
·(be) absorbed in...=absorb oneself in...专心于……;全神贯注于……
·absorb one’s attention 吸引某人的注意力
[联想] 与 be absorbed in 类似的结构还有:be lost in,be caught in,be buried
in,be devoted to,be occupied in,be involved in。
佳句背诵 He lay down there,looked up at the sky,and was soon absorbed in
thinking.(动作链)
他躺在那,看着天空,很快陷入了沉思。
3.appealing adj.有吸引力的(fascinating,inviting),有趣的→appeal n.魅力,吸引力;呼吁,请求;上诉 v.恳求,呼吁;上诉;对……有吸引力,引起兴趣
以练促学 单句语法填空/一句多译
①The police are appealing ____________ the public ____________ information
about the missing girl.
②我呼吁同学们去参观这个吸引人的艺术展,它展示了中国文化的多样性和魅
力。 (宣传稿,2021·浙江6月卷)
→I _____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
the appealing art show,which shows the diversity and charm of Chinese culture.
(appeal v.)
→I _____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
the appealing art show,which shows the diversity and charm of Chinese culture.
(appeal n.)
用法归纳
·appeal to sb for sth为某事恳求/呼吁某人
appeal to sb to do sth 呼吁/恳求某人做某事
sth appeals to sb 某物对某人有吸引力
·make an appeal to sb for sth 为某事呼吁/恳求某人
make an appeal to sb to do sth 呼吁/恳求某人做某事
佳句背诵 The festival,aimed at promoting cultural exchanges,appealed to
people from different countries.(告知信,2022·浙江1月卷)
该节日旨在促进文化交流,吸引了来自不同国家的人们。
4.arrangement n.安排,筹备(通常用复数形式);整理,排列,布置→arrange
v.安排,筹备;整理,排列,布置
以练促学 单句语法填空/完成句子①You must call me ahead of schedule so that I can make some necessary
__________________ (arrange).
②We have arranged _______________ (watch) an English film from 16:00 to 17:
00 at our school theatre tomorrow.(通知)
③We’re overwhelmed with excitement at the knowledge that an oral English class
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
(将为我们安排).(建议信,2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)
用法归纳
·make arrangements (for...) (为……)做安排
·arrange (for sb) to do sth 安排(某人)做某事
arrange sth for sb 为某人安排某事
佳 句 背 诵 Please let me know as soon as possible so that I can make
arrangements.(邀请信)
请尽快让我知道,以便我做出安排。
5.absence n.缺席;缺乏,不存在→absent adj.缺席的;缺乏的;心不在焉的
以练促学 单句语法填空/同义句转换
①Dear Miss Ellis, I am writing to apologize to you for being absent ____________
the meeting on May 5th.(道歉信)
②As my brother is absent, I would like to thank all concerned on his behalf.
→_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________,I would
like to thank all concerned on his behalf.
用法归纳
·absence from 缺席;不在
absence of mind 心不在焉in one’s absence=in the absence of sb 某人不在时
·be absent from 不参加;缺席
佳句背诵 Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused by my absence.(道
歉信)
再次对我的缺席造成的不便表示歉意。
6.get across 解释清楚,传达;被理解
以练促学 用get短语完成语段
As soon as I ____________________________,I became nervous.Next to me sat a
woman who seemed to be difficult _____________________________________.
_____________________________________________________________I
managed
_________________________________________________________ Then she
_____________________________________________________________.
Before _____________________________________________________________,
we had become good friends.
我一上火车就紧张起来。坐在我旁边的是一个似乎很难相处的女人。我设法使
她明白了我的意思。然后她开始和我交谈起来。在下火车之前,我们就已经成
了好朋友。
用法归纳
get (...) across to... 被传达;被理解
get on 上(车、船等);进展,进行
get off 下(车、船等);离开;逃脱惩罚
get over 越过(墙等);克服
get through 完成;用完;通过;接通电话
get along/on with 进展;与……相处
get down to (doing) sth 开始(做)某事
佳句背诵 Your article won’t get across if you use too many technical terms in it.
(建议信)如果你使用太多专业术语的话,你的文章是不会被理解的。
7.put on表演(节目);穿上;涂抹(化妆品);增加(体重)
以练促学 用put短语完成语段
Mary _________________________________________________ to Mr Black
that she would _________________________________________________
to help the poor children in her hometown.Mr Black praised her and
_____________________________________________________________
to call on all the students to follow her.Soon many students
_____________________________________________________________
and _____________________________________________________________
to raise money.
玛丽向布莱克先生提出了她的想法,她要存些钱帮助她家乡的穷孩子。布莱克
先生表扬了她,并张贴了一个通知,号召所有的学生向她学习。很快,许多学
生把他们的游戏机收了起来,并进行公开表演来筹集资金。
用法归纳
put forward 提出(建议);推荐;将……提前
put aside 节省;储蓄;储存;留出;把……放在一边
put away 放好;积蓄
put off 延期;推迟
put up 举起;张贴;建立;提供食宿
put up with 容忍,忍受
put through 接通电话;完成
put down 写下;放下;镇压
put out 把……拿出去;把……准备好;熄灭,扑灭
佳句背诵 The local drama group are putting on “Sister Jiang” at the Capital
Theatre.(告知信)
当地的剧团正在首都剧场演出《江姐》。
句型公式:so...that...引导结果状语从句【教材原句】 The voices themselves sounded really unique—some of the female
voices were so high that I was sure they could break glass!
那些唱腔听起来非常独特——有的女声音调之高,以至于我确信都能震碎玻璃
了!
以练促学 一句多译
他是一位如此负责的老师,以至于我们都被深深地感动了。(人物介绍)
→He was
_____________________________________________________________
we were all deeply moved.(so)
→He was
_____________________________________________________________
we were all deeply moved.(such)
→_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________ that we
were all deeply moved.(倒装)
用法归纳
·so...that...句型的基本结构:
·such...that...句型的基本结构:
[点拨] 在“so...that...”和“such...that...”结构中,当so和such放在句首时,主
句要部分倒装。
佳句背诵 The festive atmosphere was so strong that I didn’t want to get back.(节
日介绍)
节日的气氛是如此的强烈,以至于我不想再回来了。维度一 语境辨义练——熟词生义/一词多义
1.写出加黑部分的词性和汉语意思
①He was overcome with grief and his friends were disappointed with his
behavior.____________
②Humor also transports your mind away from your daily troubles.____________
③In general , I don’t applaud the extreme methods currently
adopted.____________
2.选出escape的汉语意思
A.v.被忘掉 B.v.漏出 C.v.逃离
①The adult bees were angry and kept attacking as Ziyad escaped from the tree.
(2023·浙江1月卷)______
②I was about to make a response to her when her name escaped me.______
③Look at the display of the monitor.Gas is escaping from the pipe.______
维度二 语境运用练——单句语法填空
1.With the right ____________ (combine) of animals and plants,he figured,maybe
he could clean up waste the way nature did.(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)
2.Adults are portrayed (描绘) alone in many settings and poses—____________
(absorb) in a volume,deep in thought or lost in a moment of leisure.(2023·新高考Ⅱ
卷)
3.A new study shows that wildness in urban areas is ____________ (extreme)
important for human well-being.(2023·新高考Ⅱ卷)
4.During China’s dynastic period, emperors planned the city of Beijing and____________ (arrange) the residential areas according to social classes.(2023·浙江1
月卷)
5.The ____________ (absent) of teaching excellence from the rankings is surprising
given the link between high-quality teaching and student success.(2023·北京卷)
6.In India and the Middle East,it’s considered very rude ____________ (eat) with
your left hand.(2022·全国甲卷)
7.The procedure appealed ____________ the staff a lot when it was introduced in
January.(2021·天津3月卷)
8.According to the latest report, human beings are to blame for the ____________
(normal) climate around the whole world.
9.I have created a way to get my message ____________ using as few words as
possible.
10.____________ (absorb) in the ____________ (romance) drama,the master didn’t
notice evening approaching.
练一 单元话题作文(求助信——征求关于戏剧表演的建议)
1.根据提示,利用本单元所学知识翻译句子
①随着英语戏剧节的临近,我们班要上演一部喜剧。(put on, comedy)
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
②我们现在感到有点失望。(disappointed)
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
③这背后的关键原因是,每件事似乎发展都不顺利,并没有达到我们的期望。(tick all the right boxes, live up to)
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
④目前,我们要做的是克服困难,专心于实践。(主语从句, overcome,
absorbed)
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
⑤我相信你一定能给我们一些实用的建议。(definitely)
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
2.使用恰当的过渡衔接词连句成篇
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
练二 续写能力升华(热考话题分步构思)
热考话题四 助人为乐类
助人为乐类话题是高考读后续写的热考话题之一。2020年新高考 Ⅰ 卷的主题
为卖爆米花帮助穷人,传递了人间温情。
助人为乐类可以这样构思情节:
第一步:描写困境及感受(困境描写、感受描写等)
第二步:呈现助人过程(想到办法、助人动作描写等)
第三步:皆大欢喜结局(感激、感动、升华等)
构思情节第一步:描写困境及感受
1.困境描写
①There was a man sick in bed,his wife,who took care of him and could not go
out to work,and their little boy.有一个男人卧病在床,他的妻子照顾他,不能出去工作,他们还有一个小男孩。
②Some people in the town had lost their jobs.Many of their families were
struggling to make ends meet.
镇上有些人失去了工作。他们的许多家庭都在努力维持生计。
2.感受描写
①He turned back,with his eyes full of horror.
他转过身来,眼里充满了恐惧。
②He stood silently,tears rolling down his cheeks.
他静静地站着,眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
③It greatly shocked her when she found that almost half of the villagers couldn’t
read.
当她发现几乎一半的村民不识字时,她感到非常震惊。
[小试身手]
On that Sunday,I paid a visit to Willard’s family.On entering his house,I was
surprised to find
①_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________.Willard
told me that ②_____________________________________________________,
③_____________________________________________________________.
When asked why he had given the two quarters,Willard mumbled,“I just want to
help others by contributing my milk money.”
④__________________________________
_____________________________________________________________ ,
deciding to help the kind-hearted boy.
那个星期天,我去拜访了威拉德的家人。进入他家时,我惊奇地发现一个只有
一张破床和一个脏沙发的空房间。威拉德告诉我,他五岁时,母亲去世了,父
亲失踪了,留下他和生病的祖母住在一起。当被问及为什么他给了两个二十五
分硬币时,威拉德咕哝着,“我只是想通过捐献我的牛奶钱帮助他人。”我忍
不住哭了起来,决定帮助那个善良的男孩。
(提示:构思情节第二步见下一单元。)