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佳作抢鲜背 学写作思路，背精彩范文(人与自我——参加篮球赛选拔)
作者在参加篮球选拔赛时由于身体不够强壮，技术不够熟练而落选。之后，听
从妈妈的建议，下定决心刻苦训练……
精彩范文
Then I threw myself into as many basketball opportunities as I could find. I
also took lessons to sharpen my skills.When summer rolled around，I
threw myself into every basketball camp available.Through camp after
camp，my abilities grew，and I knew I was finally in the shape necessary for
tryouts.When it became a struggle to run down the basketball court ，my
determination fueled my discipline，bringing me to the point I knew I could
reach. I became a bit taller，better－built，and much more confident.
学习借鉴
1.富有表现力的动词和词组
sharpen my skills，rolled around，threw oneself into，fueled
2.提分高级句式
现在分词短语作结果状语：
bringing me to the point I knew I could reach
1.approve v.赞成，同意；批准；认可→approval n.赞成；批准，通过
→approving adj.赞同的
以练促学 单句语法填空/一句多译①My mother doesn’t approve ____________ my attending such a party, because it
finishes at midnight.
②如果您批准我们的提议，我们将不胜感激。
→We would be grateful if you could ______________________________
_____________________________________________________________.
(approve)
→We would be grateful if our proposal could _______________________________.
(approval)
用法归纳
·approve sth 批准某事
approve of 赞成；同意
·get one’s approval 得到某人的同意/赞成/批准
give approval to 同意；批准
in approval 表示赞成
佳句背诵 After hearing the proposal，all people present arose from their chairs and
applauded，nodding in approval.(动作描写)
听到提议后，在场的所有人都从椅子上站起来鼓掌，点头赞同。
2.commitment n. 投 入 ， 花 费 ； 承 诺 ； 奉 献 (devotion, contribution ，
dedication)→commit
v.犯罪，犯错；承诺，保证→committed adj.尽心尽力的；坚定的
以练促学 单句语法填空/一句多译
①Good management, like good parenting, is a long－term ____________ (commit).
(2022·浙江6月卷)
②我最钦佩的人是我的邻居，因为他致力于帮助他人。
→The person I admire most is my neighbour
_____________________________________________________________
______________________________________________.(定语从句；commit)→My neighbour ________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
I admire him most.(so...that，committed)
→_____________________________________________________________
__________________________________________, my neighbour is the
person that I admire most.(分词短语作状语)
用法归纳
·make a commitment 做出承诺
·commit oneself to (doing) sth专心致志于；承诺/保证(做)某事
·be committed to (doing) sth承诺/全身心地投入(做)某事
佳句背诵
I committed a silly mistake in front of so many people ， my face red with
embarrassment.(情绪描写)
我在如此多的人面前犯了一个愚蠢的错误，窘得满脸通红。
3.consequence n.后果，结果→consequent adj.随之发生的；作为结果的
→consequently adv.所以，因此
以练促学 一句多译
我祖父在医院接受治疗，因此我得照顾他。(道歉信，2021·北京卷)
→My grandfather was under treatment in hospital ， and
_____________________________________________________________，
I have to take care of him.
→My grandfather was under treatment in hospital，and _____________________，I
have to take care of him.
→My grandfather was under treatment in hospital，and ____________________，I
have to take care of him.
用法归纳
as a consequence/result＝in consequence 因此，结果as a consequence/result of＝in consequence of 因为……的缘故
佳句背诵 Little as the matters seem to be, we cannot afford to overlook the serious
consequences they will bring.
尽管事情看起来微不足道，但我们不能忽视它们将带来的严重后果。
4.evidence n.证据；根据；证明→evident adj.清楚的；显然的(obvious，
apparent)→
evidently adv.明显地
以练促学 单句语法填空/完成句子
①There is growing evidence ________________ people whose diets are rich in
vitamins are less likely to develop some types of cancers.
②_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
all the evidence we collected proved him to be guilty.
很明显，我们收集的所有证据都证明他是有罪的。
用法归纳
·evidence
·It is evident that... 很明显……
佳句背诵 She walked slowly down the road，evidently in pain.(动作描写)
她沿路慢慢地走着，显然很痛苦。
5.lay aside把……搁置一边
以练促学 单句语法填空/完成句子
①Most of employers are planning to cut down on wages instead of laying
____________ employees in response to the economic depression.
②All the judges listened carefully as Tom ___________________________.
当汤姆陈述他的计划时，所有的评委都仔细地听着。
用法归纳
lay up 贮存，收集
lay off 停止，别再打扰；解雇
lay out 布置，设计；铺开，展开；阐述lay down 放下；制定；中断(工作)
佳句背诵 At last，we decided to lay aside our differences and try to solve the
problems together.
最后，我们决定抛开分歧，尝试共同解决问题。
句型公式：so that引导的目的状语从句
【教材原句】 I drew the inside of the boa constrictor，so that the grown－ups
could see it clearly. 我又画了一幅蟒蛇身体内部的画，这样大人们就可以看得
很清楚。
以练促学 完成句子/一句多译
①The story is very interesting _______________________________________.
这部小说很有趣，因而我非常喜欢。
②她给诺尔提供了一顿免费的饭和一张床，以便他能睡一夜好觉。
→She provided Noel a free meal and a bed
_____________________________________________________________.
→She provided Noel a free meal and a bed
_____________________________________________________________.
用法归纳
·so that引导目的状语从句，相当于 in order that，从句中往往含有情态动词，如
can，could，may，might等。
·so that也可以引导结果状语从句，此时从句中往往没有情态动词。
佳句背诵 Then I can spare some time to learn kung fu again so that we can
practice together every day.
然后我可以抽出一些时间再学习功夫，这样我们就可以每天一起练习了。
维度一 语境辨义练——熟词生义/一词多义
1.写出加黑部分的词性和汉语意思
①I swallowed the emotion down my throat and met her pale blueeyes.____________
②He paused ， walking away steadily ， leaving her alone to digest the
information.____________
③Stronger animals prey on weaker ones.____________
2.选出deposit的汉语意思
A.v.存款 B.n.存款 C.n.订金 D.v.使沉积
E.n.沉淀物，沉积物
①The flood waters fell, depositing mud over the whole area.______
②There’s a night safe outside the bank, so you can deposit money whenever you
wish.______
③Decant the wine carefully, so that you leave the deposit in the bottom of the
bottle.______
④To open an account, you need to make a minimum deposit of $500.______
⑤Terri，who now rents a house with friends in Wandsworth，South West London，
says DIY also saves her from losing any deposit when a tenancy (租期) comes to an
end.(2023·全国甲卷)______
维度二 语境运用练——单句语法填空
1.Some of our ____________ (memory) are funny，especially from the early years
when our children were little.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)
2.High－intensity exercise is more suitable _________________ the young.(2022·新
高考Ⅱ卷)
3.For a long time ， this ineffective hiding method was interpreted as evidence
____________ children are hopelessly “egocentric”(自我中心的) creatures.(2022·全国乙卷)
4.I decided to devote myself ____________ the task of working with the subjects，
while he developed the scientific model.(2022·浙江1月卷)
5.Crystal knew that visions alone don’t produce results, but ____________ (conclude)
that “we’ll never produce results that we can’t envision”.(2022·北京卷)
6.Society pushes us to specialize, to become experts.This requires ____________
(commit) to a particular occupation, branch of study or research.(2021·天津3月卷)
7.Plenty of habitats of wild animals were destroyed.As ____________ consequence，
most of them disappeared.
8.I can’t agree to anything without my partner’s ____________ (approve).
9.It’s wiser to have a light healthy breakfast so you’re not tempted ____________
(eat) more than you should when the big meal arrives.
10.However，some people try their best to search for them and take possession of
them __________________ (illegal).
练一 单元话题作文(演讲稿——成长)
1.根据提示，利用本单元所学知识翻译句子
①童年时，父母常常把许多美德传给孩子，其中不自私是最重要的。(childhood,
virtue, selfish)
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
②孩子们被教导要珍惜生命、友谊，在遇到困难时不要灰心。(cherish,
disheartened)
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
③当父母告诉孩子这些美德时，孩子不会立即理解。(instantly)
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
④渐渐地，当孩子们长大了，经历了各种各样的事情之后，他们就会成熟并领
会这些美德。(gradually, varied, mature, digest，virtue)
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
⑤在成年后，在某一时刻，孩子们会想起父母曾经说过的话，完全赞同他们。
(adulthood, approve of)
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
⑥因此，有时他们会把这些美德传给他们的孩子。(consequence)
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
2.使用恰当的过渡衔接词连句成篇
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
练二 续写增分技巧9——描写各种“哭”
1.She hugged her child tightly with her eyes flooded with tears of gratitude.
她紧紧地抱住孩子，眼里满是感激的泪水。
2.When the girl heard the news，her heart ached，and she started to sob ，and
couldn’t stop crying.
听到这个消息，女孩心痛，她开始抽泣起来，哭个不停。
3.There was a lump in my throat and I felt I would cry.
我哽咽了，我觉得我要哭了。
4.His eyes were filled with tears as his hard work paid off.
因为他的劳动得到了回报，他热泪盈眶。5.He held/fought back his tears and tried to comfort her.
他忍住泪水，并试图安慰她。
[小试身手]
The next evening we welcomed Mrs.Mueller back at her door.She slowly made her
way into the house and turned on the lights.Greeted by the sparkling Christmas tree，
Mrs.Mueller was rooted to the spot，①_______________________________.
Then a sweet smile appeared on her face and ②_________________________.
③_______________________________ and said softly “Thank you so much.”
第二天晚上，我们在米勒太太家门口迎接她。她慢慢地走进屋子，打开了灯。
看到闪闪发光的圣诞树，米勒太太呆呆地站在那里，显得很惊讶。然后，她脸
上露出了甜蜜的微笑，泪水涌上了她的眼睛。她强忍住泪水，轻声说：“非常
感谢。”
