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选择性必修第二册 Unit 6 Survival
佳作抢鲜背 学写作思路,背精彩范文(人与社会——邻里关爱)
(新高考Ⅰ卷)由于经济衰退,许多家庭都在努力维持生计。Mrs. Meredith是个
善良体贴的人,她拜访贫穷的人,给他们送去食物和药品。在她拜访过一个家
庭后,她把这个家庭的情况告诉给了孩子们,并希望他们去帮助那个叫伯纳德
的小男孩……
精彩范文
When Mrs. Meredith heard of Joh n’s idea , she thought it was a good one ,
too.When the three siblings called on Bernard and shared the “big” project
with the poor boy , Bernard’s face lit up, but quickly his excitement
faded.“Thank you for your big box of corn,but I don’t have a single penny to
buy paper bags” Bernard sighed heavily.Smiling shyly,John produced 50
dollars,which was contributed together by Clara and Harry.Excitement returned to
Bernard’s face as he murmured a sincere “thank you” with a trembling voice.
学习借鉴
1.富有表现力的副词
quickly,heavily,shyly
2.精彩的神情描写
①Bernard’s face lit up but quickly his excitement faded.
②sighed heavily
3.提分高级句式
(1)现在分词短语作状语:
Smiling shyly...
(2)无灵主语句:
①his excitement faded②Excitement returned to Bernard’s face...
(3)介宾短语作状语:with a trembling voice
1.appreciate v.欣赏;赏识;感激→appreciation n.欣赏;感激→appreciative
adj.赞赏的;感激的
以练促学 单句语法填空/完成句子
①Here I sincerely express my appreciation (appreciate) if you could help find the
lost suitcase.
②I appreciate being given (give) the opportunity to work in your company.
③I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into account.(邀请信,2022·
新高考Ⅰ卷)
如果您能考虑一下我的邀请,我将不胜感激。
用法归纳
appreciate (one’s) doing sth 感激(某人)做某事
I would appreciate it if...如果……我将不胜感激
[点拨] appreciate后面接if引导的从句时,要先接 it再跟从句,其中的it指代
后面从句的内容,相当于形式宾语。类似用法的还有love,hate,like,prefer,
dislike等。
佳 句 背 诵 Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he made great
contributions to society.(人物介绍,2023·全国甲卷)范仲淹因为对社会做出了巨大贡献而受到高度赞赏。
2.terrifying adj.极其可怕的,骇人听闻的(frightening)→terrified adj.恐惧的;受
惊吓的→terror n.恐惧→terrify vt.使恐惧,使十分害怕,使惊吓
以练促学 完成语段
Terrified of the approach of the polar bear, I just froze in terror.Suddenly, the polar
bear opened its bloody mouth,as if trying to terrify me into handing over the
camera.Never before had we experienced such a terrifying moment.
北极熊的临近把我吓坏了,我吓得呆在那里了。突然,北极熊张开它血淋淋的
嘴好像在试图吓唬我尽快把相机交出来。我们从未经历过如此可怕的时刻。
用法归纳
·be terrified of (doing)... 害怕(做)……
·in terror 惊慌地
·terrify sb into doing... 吓唬某人做……
佳句背诵 I was too terrified to forget to do so just now.(心理描写)
我太害怕了所以刚才忘记那样做了。
3.expose v.使暴露(于险境);揭露,使曝光;露出;使接触,使体验→exposed
adj.暴露的;无遮蔽的→exposure n.暴露,揭露
以练促学 单句语法填空/句式升级
①Seeing us approaching,she smiled joyfully,exposing (expose) nice little teeth.
②Many people in China have limited exposure (expose) to English.(2021·浙江6月
卷)
③If you expose yourself to the sunlight for a long time in summer,you will get
sunburnt.
→Exposing yourself to the sunlight for a long time in summer , you will get
sunburnt.(现在分词短语作状语)→Exposed to the sunlight for a long time in summer,you will get sunburnt.(过去分
词短语作状语)
用法归纳
·expose...to... 把……暴露在……,
使……接触……
expose oneself to... 接触……;使自己暴露于……
·be exposed to 接触……;暴露于……
佳句背诵 It was sixteen degrees below zero, the chill wind blew across my body,
and my own face hurt from just a few seconds’ exposure to the icy air.(环境描写)
零下十六度,寒风吹在我身上,我自己的脸在冰冷的空气中暴露了几秒钟就疼
了。4.wipe out彻底摧毁,消灭;抹去(旧事)
以练促学 单句语法填空/完成句子
① We both have a moral as well as economic obligation to wipe out this extreme
hunger in the next 20 years.
②First, he wiped up/away/off the crumbs of cereal he left on the kitchen counter.
③As Susan bent her head, she heard the remark and wiped away tears.(动作描写)
苏珊低着头,听到这句话,抹去眼泪。
用法归纳
wipe away/up/off(用布、手等)擦掉,清除掉,抹掉
佳句背诵 To create a greener city,effective measures should be taken to wipe out
the city’s toxic waste.(环境保护)
为了创建更绿色的城市,应该采取有效措施消灭城市中的有毒废物。
句型公式:that引导同位语从句
【教材原句】 There is evidence that urban racoons are more intelligent thantheir wild cousins...
有证据表明,城市里的浣熊比它们的野生近亲更聪明……
以练促学 单句语法填空/完成句子
①He made a promise to his son that/which made his son excited all day.
②Hearing the news that you were fired from the work, I felt greatly worried.(慰问
信)
听到你被解雇的消息,我感到非常担心。
用法归纳
·that 引导的同位语从句常作 news,fact,hope,idea,suggestion,promise,
truth等名词的同位语。
·that引导同位语从句和定语从句时的区别在于:引导定语从句时,that为关系
代词,在从句中作主语或宾语,有意义;而引导同位语从句时,that在从句中
只起引导词的作用,不作成分,没有意义。
佳句背诵 The fact that the earth is becoming warmer and warmer these years
has worried many scientists. 这些年来地球逐渐变暖的事实,使许多科学家感到
担 忧 。
维度一 语境辨义练——熟词生义/一词多义
1.写出加黑部分的词性和汉语意思
①Stolen goods were found in the trunk of her car. n .( 汽车后部的 ) 行李箱
②I tried to wipe the whole episode from my mind. v . 抹去
2.选出fuel的汉语意思
A.v.刺激,增加 B.v.给……加燃料
C.n.燃料
①Producing food that no one eats wastes the water, fuel, and other resources used togrow it.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)C
②Let your expertise in one field fuel your passions in all related areas.(2021·天津3
月卷)A
③The helicopter has already been fuelled and is ready to take off.B
维度二 语境运用练——单句语法填空
1.No matter where I buy them,though,one steamer basket is rarely enough,yet
two seems greedy (greed).(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)
2.They often cover only their eyes with their hands,leaving the rest of their bodies
exposed (expose).(2022·全国乙卷)
3.Very small drones with advanced (advance) sensors and AI and travelling ahead of
the train could guide it like a co-pilot.(2022·全国乙卷)
4.But how can a painting be appreciated (appreciate)by someone who’s blind?
(2022·浙江6月卷)
5.I decided to commit to completing (complete) the applications.(2022·北京卷)
6.According to a recent study in the Journal of Consumer Research, both the size
and consumption (consume) habits of our eating companions can influence our food
intake.(新高考Ⅰ卷)
7.It is estimated (estimate) that smoking causes 100,000 premature deaths every
year.
8.For the rest of the game we restricted ourselves to cheering on our own team.
9.More importantly, he always stays optimistic about life and has a positive influenceon his friends and classmates.
10.In the past, there was often an automatic reaction (react) to increased traffic: just
widen the roads.
练一 单元话题作文(报道——地震经历)
1.根据提示,利用本单元所学知识翻译句子
①上周,当我在郊区散步时,一场猛烈的地震意外地袭击了我的城市。(fierce,
suburb)
A fierce earthquake unexpectedly struck my city last week when I was walking in the
suburb .
②它发生在白天,所以很多人在户外,很多在室内的人也可以迅速做出反应。
(indoors,react)
It happened in the day time, so lots of people were outdoors and many people who
were indoors could also react quickly .
③我们的政府立即努力找出关键的解决方案。(crucial)
Our government made efforts to figure out the crucial solution immediately.
④消防队员、警察和军队都迅速处理了此事。(firefighter, cope with)
Firefighters, police and the army all coped with it quickly .
⑤不久,他们把一切都控制住了。(bring...under control)
Before long, they brought everything under control .
⑥我相信现在的情况很快就会好转。
I believe that the present situation will soon become better.
2.使用恰当的过渡衔接词连句成篇
【参考范文】
A fierce earthquake unexpectedly struck my city last week when I was walking in the
suburb.Fortunately, it happened in the day time, so lots of people were outdoors
and many people who were indoors could react quickly.Thankfully, our
government made efforts to figure out the crucial solution immediately.In themeanwhile,firefighters, police and the army all coped with it quickly.Before long,
they brought everything under control.I believe that the present situation will soon
become better.
练二 续写增分技巧14——描写“激动与兴奋”
1.Enjoying the beautiful view,Mom could hardly contain her excitement.
欣赏着美景,妈妈兴奋得难以自抑。
2.Mom walked towards the lake,and then came an excited scream/then came a
scream of excitement.
妈妈朝湖边走去,然后传来一阵兴奋的尖叫声。
3.On the journey to the lake,a wide excitement took hold of Mom.
在去往湖边的途中,妈妈兴奋得不能自已。
4.Breathing in the fresh air and smelling the delicious food,we jumped up and
down in/with excitement.
呼吸着新鲜的空气、闻着美味的食物,我们兴奋地上蹦下跳。
5.As it was the first time that we had helped father cook food outdoors,my brother
and I also felt thrilled/excited.
因为这是第一次帮爸爸在户外做饭,我和哥哥也感到很兴奋。
[小试身手]
Father folded the map up,put it in his pocket and headed to the woods.①As we
settled ourselves comfortably in the grass,cool things started to occur.“Look!”
② Mom could hardly contain her excitement , pointing at two rabbits eating
grass,“We’re not the only ones who think this is a good place for a picnic.” Just
then,we heard a big sound,and hundreds of birds rose up out of the trees,and
flew into the sky!③ It occurred to me that this was the most magical thing I had
ever seen in my life!
父亲把地图折叠起来,放进他的口袋里,向树林走去。当我们在草地上舒服地
坐下时,绝妙的事情开始发生了。“看!”妈妈指着两只吃草的兔子,无法抑
制内心的激动:“并非只有我们认为这里是野餐的好地方。” 就在那时,我们
听到一声巨响,几百只鸟从树上飞起来,飞上了天空!我突然想到,这是我一生中见过的最神奇的事情!