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选择性必修第一册 Unit 4 Meeting the
muse
佳作抢鲜背 学写作思路，背精彩范文(人与自我——个人成长)
(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)作者是一名以英语为第二语言的中学生，在老师的鼓励下，
参加英语写作比赛，他以Paul Revere’s horse作为主题，以马的口吻来写文章。
当老师告诉作者获奖消息时作者万分欣喜，在参加主办方的颁奖仪式后来到老
师办公室……
精彩范文
I went to my teache r’s office after the award presentation. Giggling instantly
with a broad smile spreading on his face，he told me that he was proud of my
wonderful performance.It was at that moment that a warm surge of streams
washed through my body，and the image of the horse emerged in my mind，
encouraging me to continue writing. Indeed，I got a taste of victory and
learned to pursue my dream with perseverance，whatever difficulties might
arise.
学习借鉴
1.精彩的动词和形容词词组
was proud of，washed through，emerged in my mind，got a taste of victory，
pursue my dream with perseverance
2.提分高级句式
(1)with复合结构：
with a broad smile spreading on his face
(2)强调句型：It was at that moment that...
(3)现在分词短语作状语：
encouraging me to continue writing
1.compose v.作(曲)，创作；组成，构成(make up, consist of, comprise)；使镇静，
使平静(calm)→composer n.作曲家→composition n.组成，构成；创作，作曲；
作文
以练促学 一句多译
大家都知道，生活中不仅有阳光，还有风雨。(主旨升华)
→It is universally acknowledged that life is composed/comprised of not only
sunshine but also storms.(compose/comprise)
→It is universally acknowledged that life consists of not only sunshine but also
storms.(consist)
→It is universally acknowledged that life is made up of not only sunshine but also
storms.(make up)
用法归纳
be composed of＝consist of＝be made up of＝be comprised of 由……组成(或构
成)
compose oneself 使自己镇定下来
佳句背诵 She took a deep breath to compose herself.(情绪描写)
她深深地吸了一口气，使自己镇静下来。
2.contrast n.反差，对比 v.对比(compare)；对照
以练促学 单句语法填空/完成句子
①She failed the exam again, but her sister，in/by contrast, did it very well.②In this book，the writer contrasts good with/and evil.
③The snow was icy and white, contrasting with/in contrast with/to the brilliant blue
sky.(环境描写)
雪是冰冷的、白色的，与明媚蔚蓝的天空形成对比。
用法归纳
·contrast with 与……形成对照
contrast...with/and... 把……与……相对比
·in contrast with/to 与……相比(对照)
by/in contrast 与……相反；相比之下
(相当于副词)
佳句背诵 In sharp contrast to her mood, the clouds were breaking up to reveal a
blue sky.
乌云渐渐散开，露出了蓝天，这和她的情绪形成了鲜明的对照。
3.distinct adj.清晰的；明显不同的(different)→distinction n.差别；区分；卓著
以练促学 单句语法填空/完成句子
①The three parts were completely distinct from each other in content.
②There is a tiny distinction between the two words.
这两个词有细微的区别。
用法归纳
·be distinct from 与……截然不同
·distinction between...and... ……和……之间的
差别/区别/对比
佳句背诵 Without the writing brush，Chinese painting and calligraphy could not
have achieved such distinct features.(传统文化) 没有毛笔的话，中国画和书法
无法获得如此鲜明的特征。
4.bring out使显现；阐明，说出；出版
以练促学 完成语段
I don’t clearly remember who brought up (提出) the topic，but I clearly remember itbrought about (引起) a heated discussion，which brought back (使想起) my
memory of my parents.They not only gave me life，but also brought me up (把我养
大) with selfless love，feeling proud of my every tiny bit of progress.I am determined
to bring in (赚) more money after graduation and make sure they live a happy life.
用法归纳
bring up 抚养；培养；提出；呕吐
bring forward 提出(建议、想法等)；把……提前
bring down 减少，降低
bring about 导致；引起
bring in 引进；获利；赚钱
bring back 使想起；归还
佳句背诵 Fatherhood seems to have brought out the caring side of him.(家庭生
活)
当了父亲以后，他呵护体贴的一面似乎表现了出来。
5.light up照亮；露出喜色
以练促学 单句语法填空/完成句子
①Recent research has thrown light on the mystery, which has amazed the world.
②New facts about the ancient Egypt have recently come to light.
③A new approach offers an answer，and may shed/cast/throw new light on an even
bigger question.
新的方法提供了一个答案，并且可能让人们对一个更大的问题有进一步的了解。
用法归纳
come to light 为人所知
bring...to light 揭露
shed/cast/throw light on 使(问题等)较容易理解
佳句背诵 Her face lit up when I gave her the present.
我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩。句型公式：as引导非限制性定语从句
【教材原句】 As Tan once said ，Chinese music should carry “universal
expression” of the human spirit so as to be recognised by the whole world.
正如谭曾说过的，中国音乐要承载人文精神的“共同理念”，以便得到被全世
界认可。
以练促学 单句语法填空/句式升级
①As is said above，he has overcome the difficulty and starred in a TV series.
②He did not finish the work on time，which made his boss very angry.
③The newspaper reports that talks between two countries are making progress.
→As is reported in the newspaper，talks between the two countries are making
progress.(非限制性定语从句)
用法归纳
关系代词as既可以引导限制性定语从句，也可以引导非限制性定语从句，as在
从句中作主语、宾语或表语。
·as引导非限制性定语从句时，有“正如”之意，常放于主句之前，有时也可放
在主句之后或主句之中。
·as引导限制性定语从句时，先行词常被the same，such，so/as等修饰。
·which 引导非限制性定语从句时，引导的从句通常放于主句后，意为“这一
点”，且无“正如/正像……”之意。
佳句背诵 As we can read，characters in fantasy literature are rather powerful，
behave bravely and never hesitate to help those in need.(书评)
正如我们读到的，幻想文学中的人物威力无比，行为勇敢，从不犹豫帮助那些
需要帮助的人。
维度一 语境辨义练——熟词生义/一词多义
1.写出加黑部分的词性和汉语意思
①“We floated the idea to my mum of sharing at a house，” says KathrynWhitehead.
(2020·全国Ⅲ卷) v. 提出，提请考虑 ( 想法或计划 )
②Nearly one home in ten across the country is wired up to receive TV via cable. v .
为 …… 接上电线
③The princess was so confused that she could hardly compose her thoughts. v . 使平
静
2.选出quote的汉语意思
A.n.引文，引语 B.v.引用，引述 C.v.报价
①He quoted Mr.Polay as saying that peace negotiations were already underway.B
②The paper starts its editorial comment with a quote from an unnamed member of
the House.A
③In early trading in Hong Kong yesterday ， gold was quoted at $368.20 an
ounce.C
维度二 语境运用练——单句语法填空
1.To frame his story，Klein creates the character of Ned，a fictional witness to the
progress brought about by the steam and electric revolutions in America during one
man’s lifetime.(2022·浙江1月卷)
2.The clock registers both short－term irregularities and long－term trends (trend) in
river dynamics.(2021·北京卷)
3.It was once common to regard Britain as a society with class distinction (distinct).
4.Through innovation (innovate) of many years, the company has improved its
product quality.
5.Through the experiment，I make it clear what water is composed (compose) of.
6.Hundreds of lives could be saved if the installation (install) of alarms was more
widespread.7.All that I had to show were these few tales (tale) and essays, which had blossomed
out like flowers in the calm summer of my heart and mind.
8.The monitor managed to set a panic in motion across the park on a sunny day.
9.As a new graduate，you should learn to contrast knowledge gained from practice
with/and knowledge gained from books.
10.As I explained on the phone, your request will be considered at the next meeting.
练一 单元话题作文(邀请信——邀请参加中学生艺术展)
1.根据提示，利用本单元所学知识翻译句子
①我写信是想邀请您参加创新艺术展，那里有一些古老的世代相传的展品。
(innovative，定语从句，pass down)
I am writing to invite you to attend the Innovative Art Exhibition where there are
some ancient exhibits passed down through generations .
②本次展览以艺术与技术的结合为特色，旨在培养学生的艺术创新能力。(分词
作定语，innovation)
This exhibition featuring the combination of art and technology aims to develop
students ’ innovation in art .
③不仅要展出剪纸、中国画等各种传统艺术作品，而且还会有抽象绘画和电脑
制作的3D动画片。(not only...but also..., on display, abstract, animation，分词作定
语)
Not only will a variety of traditional artworks ， such as paper cutting and Chinese
paintings be
on display but also there will be abstract paintings and 3D animations made by
computers.④我真的希望你能加入我们。请在您方便的时候尽早回复确认您的出席。(强调
谓语)
I do hope you are able to join us.Please reply to confirm your attendance at your
earliest convenience.
2.使用恰当的过渡衔接词连句成篇
【参考范文】
I am writing to invite you to attend the Innovative Art Exhibition where there are
some ancient exhibits passed down through generations.
This exhibition featuring the combination of art and technology aims to develop
students’ innovation in art.Not only will a variety of traditional artworks，such as
paper cutting and Chinese paintings be on display but also there will be abstract
paintings and 3D animations made by computers.
I do hope you are able to join us.Please reply to confirm your attendance at your
earliest convenience.
练二 续写增分技巧6——描写脚部动作
1.She dragged her feet as she unwillingly followed her parents home.
她拖着脚步很不情愿地跟随父母回了家。
2.At first，she planted her feet firmly to the ground and refused to move.
一开始，她把双脚牢牢地踩在地上，拒绝移动。
3.On arriving home，she pulled off her shoes and dashed into her bedroom，
barefoot and fast.
一到家，她就脱下鞋子，光着脚飞快地跑到自己卧室中。
4.We all jumped/leapt to our feet，dancing and screaming with joy.
我们都跳了起来，开心得欢呼雀跃。
5.Her father tapped/stamped his feet impatiently.
她爸爸不耐烦地跺着脚。
[小试身手]
Instantly I heard the news ， an idea floated into my mind ： it was a preciousopportunity for me to realize my dream of becoming a dancer！①I couldn’t wait to
share my decision with my mom.Then determined，②I leapt to my feet and dashed
home.However，instead of being keen to support me，Mom roared in a disappointed
voice，“Fancy that！You should ③attach great importance to science and study
hard in the hope of going to a key university！”
我一听到这个消息，脑海里就突然浮现出一个想法：这是我实现成为一名舞蹈
家梦想的一次难得的机会！我迫不及待地想和妈妈分享我的决定。下定决心后，
我一跃而起，冲回家去。然而，妈妈没有热心地支持我，而是用失望的声音吼
道：“真想不到！你应该重视科学，努力学习，希望能考上重点大学！”
