文档内容
必修第一册 Unit 5 Into the wild
佳作抢鲜背 学写作思路，背精彩范文(人与自然——保护蜂鸟)
(2023·浙江1月卷)作者被邀请去一个农场享用露天烧烤，发现有一只蜂鸟被蜘
蛛网困住了，于是作者救了这只蜂鸟。但是，蜂鸟却迟迟不肯飞走，徘徊了许
久后才离开。后来，在作者准备离开时，这只蜂鸟又出现了……
精彩范文
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. With a squeaking
call，she dived towards me and hovered before my face，looking at me
with her bright eyes.Then she stopped on my left shoulder.I patted her on the
back which was covered by colorful feathers.And I took out my water bottle，
trying to give her some water.Content and joyful, she flew about 2 meters
above the ground，turning her head from side to side as if expressing her
gratitude for saving her life to me again. At that moment，happiness and the
feeling of being moved mingled，welling up into my heart，tears rolling down
my cheeks.
学习借鉴
1.富有表现力的动词和词组
dived，hovered，patted her on the back
2.提分高级句式
(1)现在分词短语作伴随状语
①looking at me...
②trying to give her some water
③turning her head from side to side...
④welling up into my heart...(2)定语从句
which was covered by colorful feathers
(3)独立主格结构
tears rolling down my cheeks
1.measure v.量，测量； 衡量 link－v.(指尺寸、长短、数量等)量度为…… n.
措施；方法→measurement n.测量；尺寸
以练促学 猜测词义/单句语法填空/一句多译
①The tailor measured me carefully and made a suit to my measure. v t . 测量 n . 尺
寸
②The young couple lived in a furnished flat，measuring (measure) approximately 15
metres by 16 metres.
③因此，是我们采取有效措施保护海洋的时候了。(环境保护，2022·全国甲卷)
→Therefore，it is high time that we took effective measures to protect the oceans.
(主动语态)
→Therefore，it is high time that effective measures were taken to protect the oceans.
(被动语态)
用法归纳
·measure...by...用……来衡量……
·make...to one’s measure 按某人的尺寸做……
take measures(to do sth)＝take action/steps(to do sth) 采取措施(做某事)[点拨] (1)measure 表“措施”时，应用复数形式。
(2)measure表“有……长(或宽、高等)”时，是系动词，后跟测量的结果，不用
于被动语态及进行时态。
佳句背诵 In my opinion，some effective measures should be taken to protect our
traditional culture.(传统文化)
我认为，应该采取一些有效的措施来保护我们的传统文化。
2.determine v.测定，确定；决定 →determined adj.坚决的；有决心的
→determination n.决心
以练促学 单句语法填空/句式升级
①Looking at his determined (determine) face，I was touched by his courage.(2022·
新高考Ⅰ卷)
②Though their task was a difficult one ，their great determination (determine)
carried them through.
③As they are determined to complete (complete) the job on time，they concentrate
on their work immediately.
→Determined to complete the job on time ， they concentrate on their work
immediately.(形容词短语作状语)
用法归纳
·determine to do... 决定做……(表示动作)
determine on/upon 决定
·be determined to do... 决心做……(表示状态)
·with determination 坚决地；果断地
佳句背诵 Ruby wiped her tears and determined to spare no effort to learn math
with Ollie.(心理描写)鲁比擦了擦眼泪，决心要不遗余力地和奥利一起学习数学。
3.amazing adj.惊人的，了不起的→amaze vt.使惊奇；使惊诧→amazed
adj.吃惊的；惊讶的→amazement n.惊奇；惊愕
以练促学 单句语法填空/一句多译
① Xiao long bao (soup dumplings)，those amazing (amaze) constructions of
delicate dumpling wrappers encasing hot, tasty soup and sweet，fresh meat，are far
and away my favorite Chinese street food.(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)
②使妈妈惊奇的是，他们在爸爸的指导下成功做了早餐。(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)
→To Mom’s amazement，under the guidance of their father，they successfully made
the breakfast.(amazement)
→It amazed Mom that under the guidance of their father，they successfully made
the breakfast.(it作形式主语)
→What amazed Mom was that under the guidance of their father，they successfully
made the breakfast.(what引导主语从句)
→Mom was amazed that under the guidance of their father，they successfully made
the breakfast.(amazed)
用法归纳
·be amazed at/by/that... 对……感到惊讶
·It amazes sb that... ……让某人感到惊讶
What amazes sb is that...让某人感到惊讶的是……
·in amazement 惊讶地
to one’s amazement 使某人惊讶的是
[点拨] 以－ing结尾的形容词强调事物的特征，常译为“令人……的”；以－
ed结尾的形容词强调人内心的感受，常译为“感到……的”。佳句背诵 Standing on the top, you will be rewarded with an amazing view of the
distant mountains, trees, lakes, and a seemingly endless sky.(环境描写)
站在山顶，你会欣赏到令人惊叹的景色，有远处的山脉、树木、湖泊和似乎无
边无际的天空。
Clara ， having just a moment ago opened her eyes ， looked about her in
amazement.
克拉拉刚刚睁开眼睛，惊讶地环顾四周。
4.survive v.活下来，幸存；幸免；比……活得长→survival n.幸存；残存物
→survivor n.幸存者
以练促学 单句语法填空/完成句子
①Those people trapped in the traffic jam greatly need fresh food and water for
survival (survive).
②The traveler trapped in the lonely island survived on the fish caught in the sea.
③Life isn’t about how to survive the storm；it’s about learning to dance in the rain.
(主旨升华)
生活不在于如何在暴风雨中幸存，而在于学会在雨中翩翩起舞。
用法归纳
survive sb by 活得比某人长……
survive sth (经历意外、战争、疾病等
后)幸存，活下来
survive on sth 靠某物继续维持生活
佳句背诵 The Xi’an City Wall is the most complete city wall that has survived
China’s long history.(传统文化，2021·全国甲卷)
西安古城墙是中国悠久历史上幸存下来的最完整的城墙。
5.shock n.吃惊，震惊(terror，horror，fright)；休克 v.(使)震惊(frighten，
terrify)→shocking adj.令人震惊的→shocked adj.感到震惊的
以练促学 单句语法填空/完成句子
①The shocking (shock) news shocked (shock) all the people around，which was
also a great shock to people all over the country.
②On returning to the town，they were shocked to find (find) their neighborhood in
ruins.
③Shocked and proud，their mother said in a sweet whisper, “Thanks, my kids.”
(心理描写＋动作描写)
既震惊又自豪，他们的母亲温柔地轻声说：“谢谢，我的孩子们。”
用法归纳
·be a great shock to sb对某人来说是极大的震惊
in shock 震惊；吃惊
·be shocked at/by 对……吃惊
be shocked to do sth 做某事很吃惊
佳句背诵 She was numb with shock at the sight of something, with her mouth
wide open.(情绪描写＋动作描写)
她看到什么东西，惊呆了，嘴巴张得大大的。
6.variety n.多样化，变化；变种，变体→vary vi.变化；改变→various adj.各种
各样的；各种不同的
以练促学 同义替换/完成句子
①Yellowstone National Park offers all kinds of ranger programs throughout the
park，and throughout the year.(2023·新高考Ⅱ卷)various/a variety of/varieties of
②I like reading almost every column of Youth，varying from Chinese poems to
English stories.(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)
我喜欢阅读 Youth 几乎所有的栏目，从中国诗歌到英语故事。
用法归纳·a variety of＝varieties of 各种各样的
·vary from...to... 由……到……不等
vary with 随……变化
vary in 在某方面不同
佳句背诵 During the Dragon Boat Festival, people in China will hold a variety of
activities, such as holding dragon boat racing, eating tasty rice dumplings and so on.
(传统节日)
在端午节期间，中国人会举行各种各样的活动，比如举行赛龙舟、吃美味的粽
子等等。
7.concentrate v.专注，专心，集中(注意力、思想等)(focus)→concentrated
adj.浓缩的；集中的→concentration n.集中；专心
以练促学 单句语法填空/句式升级
①It is our teacher’s concentration (concentrate) and friendliness that win our
respect.
②He concentrated his attention on playing the piano，so he didn’t notice me come
in.
→Concentrating his attention on playing the piano，he didn’t notice me come in.(分
词短语作状语)
→With his attention concentrated on playing the piano，he didn’t notice me come in.
(with复合结构)
用法归纳
concentrate on (doing) sth 专心于(做)某事
concentrate one’s mind/attention/energy on把心思/注意力/精力集中于
[联想] 表示“集中精力于；专心于”的短语还有：
·focus/fix (one’s attention/mind) on
·put one’s heart into·be absorbed in
·be buried in
·be lost in
佳句背诵 It’s up to you to concentrate on your studies and make something of
yourself.(建议信)
是否能专心学习并取得一定成就要靠你自己。
8.reaction n.(对某一情形或事件的)反应(response)→react
v.作出反应；回应(respond)；起化学反应
以练促学 单句语法填空/完成句子
①I can’t imagine how my sister will react to the news that she will be employed by
the big firm in the urban district.
②The chemistry teacher shows us how iron reacts with air and water.
③My father’s reaction astonished me.I was anxious to know how he could be so
calm.(心理描写)
父亲的反应让我很惊讶，我想知道他怎么能如此镇静。
用法归纳
·reaction to 对……的回应
·react to 对……作出反应
react with 与……起化学反应
react against 反对；反抗；反叛
佳句背诵 The moment she saw my reaction, she froze with fright, as if rooted on
the ground.(情绪描写＋动作描写)
当她看到我的反应时，她吓得僵住了，一动不动地站着。
9.cut down砍倒；减少；削减；删节
以练促学 猜测词义/单句语法填空
①My uncle hasn’t been able to quit smoking, but at least he has cut down.减少②She was really cut up when all her friends refused to help her.
③The water supply has been cut off temporarily because the workers are repairing
the main pipes.
④When you give a speech, you’d better cut out unimportant details.
用法归纳
cut in 插嘴；(马达或发动机)发动
cut up 切碎；切开；使伤心
cut out 删除；(马达或发动机)突然熄火
cut across 穿过(某地)(尤指抄近路)
cut off 切断；中止；隔绝
佳句背诵 Many trees are being cut down.Shouldn’t we take measures to make a
difference？(发言稿)
许多树木正在被砍伐。难道我们不应该采取措施产生影响吗？
句型公式：the＋比较级……，the＋比较级……
【教材原句】 The more we know about this lovely creature，the greater the
chance it will survive...
我们对这种迷人的生物了解越多，它活下来的机会就越大……
以练促学 完成句子
①More and more cars (越来越多的汽车) are running in the streets nowadays, in
which case more and more waste gases (越来越多的废气) will be sent into the air.
②The further Jane went in the forest，the more nervous and anxious she became (她
越紧张焦虑).(心理描写)
③The more she thought about it，the more frightened she felt (她越感到害怕)，her
palms sweating and her heart pounding wildly.(情绪描写)
用法归纳
·“the＋比较级(＋主语＋谓语)，the＋比较级(＋主语＋谓语)”意为“越……，就越……”。
·“比较级＋and＋比较级”意为“越来越……”，表示本身程度的变化。
·“the more..., the less...”意为“越……，越不……”。
[点拨] “the＋比较级……，the＋比较级……”结构中，第一个“the＋比较
级……”是表示条件的状语从句，在表示将来意义的情况下，从句用一般现在
时表示将来；第二个“the＋比较级……”是主句，用一般将来时。
佳句背诵 The harder you work，the greater progress you will make.(建议信)
你工作越努力，进步就越大。
维度一 语境辨义练——熟词生义/一词多义
1.写出加黑部分的词性和汉语意思
①I filed the letters away in a drawer. v . 把 …… 归档
②Share prices crashed to an all－time low yesterday. v . 暴跌
③I froze with fright，too scared to move an inch. v . 呆住
④The story captured the hearts and minds of a generation. v . 俘获
2.选出image的汉语意思
A.n.影像；映像 B.n.意象，比喻
C.n.形象，声誉
①He drew a hand.Nothing else.Just an empty hand.His abstract image attracted the
imagination of his classmates.B
②Lots of bad behavior still exists in our school, which does great harm to the image
of our school.C
③Slowly, an image began to appear on the screen.A维度二 语境运用练——单句语法填空
1.We offer the newest bicycles in a wide variety (various)，including basic bikes
with foot brake (刹车)，bikes with hand brake and gears (排挡)，bikes with child
seats，and children’s bikes.(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)
2.Their recovery (recover) has been so successful that the U.S. Fish and Wildlife
Service has twice attempted to de － list grizzlies, which would loosen legal
protections and allow them to be hunted.(2023·全国甲卷)
3.I am amazed (amaze) by the co－existence of old and new，and how a city was
able to keep such a rich heritage(遗产) while constantly growing.(2023·全国乙卷)
4.So I was shocked (shock) when, not long after the email, Professor Mary Devon,
who was running the programme, invited me to observe the work being done in her
lab.(2023·北京卷)
5.The position—measuring (measure) soil quality in the Sahara Desert as part of an
undergraduate research programme—had felt like the answer I had spent years
looking for.(2023·北京卷)
6.That project, which I could complete from my sofa instead of in the burning heat of
the desert, not only survived (survive) the lockdown but worked where traditional
methods didn’t.(2023·北京卷)
7.As a special education teacher at the school，I was familiar with the challenges
David faced and was proud of his strong determination (determine).(2022·新高考Ⅰ
卷)8.There has been a mixed reaction (react) to her appointment as director.
9.Deserts were also created because people cut down trees and dug up grass.
10.I was concentrating on reading a novel when I heard someone in the distance call
my name.
练一 单元话题作文(倡议书——保护野生动物)
1.根据提示，利用本单元所学知识翻译句子
①越来越多的野生动物的栖息地正在被人类破坏。(destroy)
More and more habitats of wild animals are being destroyed by humans .
②为了获取肉、皮和毛，各种各样的野生动物被杀害。(variety)
A variety of wild animals have been killed for their meat ， skins and fur .
③如此多种类的动物无法生存。(survive)
So many kinds of animals cannot survive .
④我们应该寻求保护野生动物的解决办法。(solution)
We should seek solutions to protecting wild animals.
⑤毕竟，保护野生动物在某种意义上就是保护我们自己。(after all)
After all ， protecting wildlife is ， in a sense ， protecting ourselves .
⑥我们的政府应该采取有效的措施来保护野生和濒危动物。(measure)
Our government should take effective measures to protect wild and endangered
animals.
⑦只有当我们人类尊重自然环境，我们才能最终与周围的动物和谐相处。(倒装，
show respect to)
Only when we human beings show respect to the natural environment can we
eventually live in harmony with animals around us .
2.使用恰当的过渡衔接词连句成篇
【参考范文】
More and more habitats of wild animals are being destroyed by humans and a
variety of wildanimals have been killed for their meat，skins and fur.As a result, so many kinds of
animals cannot survive.
Therefore ， we should seek solutions to protecting wild animals.After all ，
protecting wildlife is ， in a sense ， protecting ourselves.Meanwhile ， our
government should take effective measures to protect wild and endangered animals.
Only when we human beings show respect to the natural environment can we
eventually live in harmony with animals around us.
练二 续写能力升华(热考话题分步构思)
构思情节第二步：冲突化解
1.“I’m so sorry.” he said，gently petting Jackson’s head.
“对不起。”他说到，轻轻地摸摸杰克逊的头。
2.His mother silenced him by gently putting her finger on his lips，gave a soft kiss
on his forehead and walked out of the study.
他妈妈轻轻地把手指放在他的嘴唇上，让他停止说话，在他额头上轻轻地吻了
一下，然后走出了书房。
3.“I wanted to surprise you！” he pointed at a neatly wrapped box with his eyes
gleaming.
“我想给你一个惊喜！”他指着一个包装精美的盒子，眼里闪烁着光芒。
4.Seeing his families sitting together and staying together harmoniously，Cater felt a
surge of happiness.
看到他的家人坐在一起，和睦相处，卡特感觉到一种幸福感。
5.I looked at her，tears of love and gratitude welling up in my eyes.
我看着她，爱和感激的泪水在我的眼中涌起。
[小试身手]
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.It turned out that they
were concerned I would spend money on something unimportant.In fact，they had
already signed up for a football training camp for me since I was keen on
football.They just hoped I could contribute a little too.Right now having realized my
selfishness，① I was feeling ashamed yet more moved，with tears streaming down
my cheeks.Racing forward and throwing my arms around my dad，② I gave him abig hug and apologized.From then on，③ never did I doubt my parents ’ love and I
did grow up.(2021·浙江6月卷)
我立刻明白了父母在担心什么。原来他们担心我会把钱花在不重要的事情上。
事实上，他们已经为我报名了一个足球训练营，因为我很喜欢足球。他们只是
希望我也能做出一点贡献。此刻，意识到自己的自私，我感到羞愧，但更感动
了，眼泪顺着脸颊流了下来。我冲上前，抱住爸爸，给了他一个大大的拥抱，
并向他道歉。从那以后，我再也没有怀疑过父母的爱，我也长大了。
(提示：构思情节第三步见下一单元。)
