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考点 23 应用文写作：投
诉信、求助信（解析版）
【命题解读】
书信类写作包括邀请信、感谢信、推荐信、求职信、祝贺信、告知信、求助信、建议信、
道歉信、咨询信以及慰问信等类别。
以下对投诉信、求助信类别提供对应的模板和基本写作技巧。
投诉信
【 布局思维导图 】【 基本模板 】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am writing to lodge complaints against ______(投诉原由). Here is the whole
story.
In the first place, ______( 问 题 一 ). In addition, ______( 问 题 二 ). Under these
circumstances, ______(问题的结果 ) . Consequently, I asked to remedy the situation.
However，ignoring how reasonable my request was, the staff refused to make any
compensation with a poor attitude.（投诉服务时可用）.
I sincerely hope you could look into the case. ______( 提 供 解 决 方 案 ).
Otherwise, I would seek legal/external support in the local customer committee.
Looking forward to your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作实操技巧】
假定你是李华，两周前你从网上订购一套书虫系列读物(Bookworm Series)昨天才到货，
且包装破损，数量不足。请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。
要点如下：①介绍购物情况; 反映存在问题; 提出解决方案
② ③注意：① 词数80词左右; 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯;
可能用到的生词：投诉com②plaint n.
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【模板范文】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am writing to lodge complaints against an unpleasant shopping experience at
your book store (投诉原由). Here is the whole story.
In the first place, I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I
didn’t receive them until yesterday(问题一). In addition, the books were so poorly packed up that
the cover of one book was torn (问题二). Under these circumstances, I could not use the series wi th
one book missing (问题的结果) . Consequently, I asked to remedy the situation. However,
ignoring how reasonable my request was, the staff refused to make any
compensation with a poor attitude..
I sincerely hope you could look into the case. I would appreciate it if you return my
money or better deliver a new set of books to me(提供解决方案). Otherwise, I would seek
external support in the local customer committee.
Looking forward to your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【仿写演练】
假定你是李华，你在上周日搭坐102号公交车，该公交车司机的不文明行为让乘客很
愤怒。于是你向公交车公司写一封投诉信。要点如下：
1. 司机的不文明行为（大声讲话、紧急刹车、态度粗鲁等）。
2. 希望尽快查清此事。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【模板范文】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am writing to lodge complaints against one of your bus-drivers’ improper and rude
behaviors (投诉原由). Here is the whole story.
Last Sunday, I was taking the No. 102 bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man
loudly but also drove very fast(问题一). In addition, some passengers advised him to concentrate
on driving, but he didn’t pay any attention and drove even faster (问题二). Under these
circumstances, another passenger couldn’t bear it, asking the driver to keep the passengers’ safety
in mind. But the driver stopped the bus so suddenly that all the passengers nearly lost their balance (问
题的结果) .
I sincerely hope you could look into the case. I’ll appreciate it if you can take
measures to prevent such an incident happening again (提供解决方案).
Looking forward to your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
求助信
【考情分析】
①第一种类型：请求提供信息如：“我”要去海外求学，请求对方提供相关学校的学费、住宿等信息。这种请求信也叫
“咨询信”，
【内容分析】
a.客观描述（靠翻译）
b.喜爱/推荐原因
重点准备：中国文化类，如节日，中国结，唐诗等中国元素相关的内容。
②第二种类型：请求对方付出建议或者某种行为（脑力或体力）
如：“我”要参加竞赛，请对方给“我”建议；
“我”是校报编辑，请求对方写文章。此种请求信也叫“约稿信”。
约稿信的变体：“我”是主办方代表，请求对方为某次展览提供摄影或绘画作品。
【布局思维导图】
首段 求助目的
段落要点 正文 具体求助内容
结尾 再次表示期望和感谢。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am ______(自我介绍) . I am writing to seek for your help in______(写信目的).
Now, I struggle a lot in ______(遇到的困难). I’ve found that ______(描述自己的困
难). For one thing, ______(困难一). For another, ______(困难二).
Therefore, could you please put forward some practical suggestions? I am convinced
that I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
I would appreciate it if you could respond at your earliest convenience.Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【 写作实操技巧 】
假设你是高三学生李华，今年的高考阅读量加大，而你的阅读能力较差，因此学习的
压力越来越大。请你根据你下内容向你的前外教Mr Jackson 求助。希望得到他的帮助。
注意：词数 80 左右，可合理添加细节。
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【模板套用】
Dear Mr Jackson (称谓)
I am Li Hua, preparing for the National College exam (自我介绍) . I am writing
to seek for your help in improving my English (写信目的).
Now, I struggle a lot in English reading(遇到的困难). I’ve found that w ith the
college entrance approaching I feel more stressed than ever (描述自己的困难). For
one thing, we have to read more articles in the exam and all the teachers attach
great significance to the capability of reading , asking students to expand vocabulary
and do more exercises (困难一). For another, h ard as I try , I still find it hard to
improve, which even makes me can ’ t sleep (困难二).
Therefore, could you please put forward some practical suggestions? I am convinced
that I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
I would appreciate it if you could respond at your earliest convenience.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【仿写演练】
假定你是李华，你正在为期中考试紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中
精力学习。于是你给学校心理老师Kate写了一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下:
1.作业多，没时间运动；2. 压力大，难以入睡；
3. 希望得到Kate的帮助
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【模板范文】
Dear Kate (称谓)
I am Li Hua (自我介绍) . I am writing to seek for your help in improving my English (写
信目的).
Now, I struggle a lot in my study(遇到的困难). I’ve found that h ardly do I take
sports due to too much homework (描述自己的困难). For one thing, it ’ s difficult for
me to fall asleep every night (困难一). For another, the high expectation from my
parents makes me extremely feel stressed (困难二).
Therefore, could you please put forward some practical suggestions? I am convinced
that I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
I would appreciate it if you could respond at your earliest convenience.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua【真题1】（2020全国III）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外
教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；2. 指导内容；3. 商定时间地点。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 结束语已为你写好。
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【参考范文】
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we
adapted according to the textbook.
We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for
a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river
navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the
adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything
inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script
attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at
your office next Tuesday to give you more details?
Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional
advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【真题2】（2016·新课标卷I）李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人
简历（resume）。给外教 Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式
（format）。
注意：
1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear MS Jenkins,
I’m Li Hua. I plan to take a part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday.I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. However, I am not sure
about the words and format. Therefore, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advice.
Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? Would you mind
finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? Besides, I’d like you to correct the mistakes
found in the materials and format.
I would much appreciate it if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【真题3】（2013·新课标卷I）假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李
明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需
说明：
李明：高个子，戴眼镜
航班号：CA985
到达：8月6日上午11:30
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语和结束语已为
你写好。
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve
asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.
Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take
him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!
His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he
is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua【模拟检测 1】（2022·天津和平·一模）假如你是晨光中学的李津，你给已经是大学一年级
学生的笔友Chris写信，请对方给你提一些建议。信的内容如下：
（1）询问Christ大学生活的状况；
（2）询问Christ当初根据什么选择的专业；
（3）自己希望选择的专业及原因（如兴趣、父母意愿、就业前景等）。
参考词汇：专业major
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
Nice to know that you have already been a first year student in the university. I am writing to
ask you for some suggestions on my major in the future.
What interests me is whether you have adapted to the university life. Do you have a tight
schedule on your studies? I was wondering what it was that made you choose your present
major. As for my major I am to take, I prefer to study English language because I have a great
passion for it. In addition, my parents also strongly recommend me to take it as my major, which
is playing a more and more significant role in spreading traditional Chinese culture around the
world. Thirdly and most importantly, it has a most promising employment prospect.Hope everything goes smoothly with you and looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给已经是大学一年级学生的笔友Chris写信，请对方给
你提一些有关大学生活和专业选择的建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
建议：advice→suggestion
选择：select→choose
角色：part→role
希望：wish→hope
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Do you have a tight schedule on your studies?
拓展句：Do you have a tight schedule that is on your studies?
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
What interests me is whether you have adapted to the university life. (运用了what引导的主语
从句和whether引导的表语从句)
[高分句型2]
In addition, my parents also strongly recommend me to take it as my major, which is playing a
more and more significant role in spreading traditional Chinese culture around the world. (运用
了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
