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考点 22 应用文写作：祝
贺信、慰问信（解析版）
【命题解读】
书信类写作包括邀请信、感谢信、推荐信、求职信、祝贺信、告知信、求助信、建议信、
道歉信、咨询信以及慰问信等类别。
以下对祝贺信、慰问信类别提供对应的模板和基本写作技巧。
祝贺信
【 布局思维导图】
【 基本模板 】Dear ______ (称谓)
I am writing to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______(祝贺事由). As
______(身份关系), I just want you to know how delighted I was when______(祝贺事由) .
For these years, you ______(被祝贺人过去的经历). Not only did/have/were______(被祝
贺人的努力), but also______(被祝贺人的努力). It is a reward you richly deserve for your
______(被祝贺人的优点) .
All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作实操技巧】
假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Michael在学校举办的“中国诗词大会”比赛中获得了
外国选手组一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。
1. 祝贺他获奖；
2. 肯定他付出的努力；
3. 询问何时方便，一起交流一下中国古诗词学习心得。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
中国诗词大会 Chinese Poetry Contest
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【模板范文】
Dear Michael (称谓)
I am writing to extend to you my utmost congratulations on your winning the first
prize of your group in the Chinese Poetry Contest (祝贺事由). As your friend(身份关系), I justwant you to know how delighted I was when I know your success(祝贺事由) .
For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese poetry and kept on reciting poems
every day (被祝贺人过去的经历). Not only have you accumulated much knowledge about
Chinese poetry (被祝贺人的努力), but also you have formed a deep understanding of it (被祝
贺人的努力). It is a reward you richly deserve for your appreciation towards those poems (被祝
贺人的优点) .
All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【仿写演练】
假设你是李华，来自美国的交流生Peter 在你班学习半年，与你成为好朋友。目前，他
即将完成学成回国，请你用英语给他写一篇临别留言。要点包括：
1.祝贺Peter学习汉语取得的成绩；
2. 取得成绩的原因；
3. 你们的友谊和对他的祝愿。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【模板范文】
Dear Peter (称谓)
I am writing to extend to you my utmost congratulations on your achievement in
your study (祝贺事由). As your friend (身份关系), I just want you to know how delighted I was
when I know have achieved your goa l (祝贺事由) .
For the past six months, you astonished us with your amazing talent in learning Chinese well
in a short of time (被祝贺人过去的经历). Not only are you diligen t and active , which is vit a lfor Chinese learning (被祝贺人的努力), but also you have showed your genuine passion for
Chinese reading, which enables you to have a good memory for Chinese characters
(被祝贺人的努力). It is a reward you richly deserve for your enthusiasm (被祝贺人的优点) .
Still I know it ’ s time for us to say goodbye . All my best wishes for an even
more prosperous future!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
慰问信
【布局思维导图】
【 基本模板 】
Dear ______ (称谓)
Words fail me to convey my worry when I heard that ______(写信原由). I am writing to
extend sincere pity and care for you (I hope that the unexpected failure/trouble won’t let you
down).
You must ______(表达对遭遇的理解). However，if you were brave enough not to
______(悲观失望等), which is admirable. Anyway，It can’t be better if you can lift your spirits
to face up to the result. Plus, ______(提供建议或帮助) . Remember, I won’t be far away.
I hope you can find my encouragement helpful（ Hope you can have your troublesremoved soon）.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【 写作实操技巧 】
假定你是李华，你的同班同学王刚的家乡遭受台风(Typhoon Mujigae)的袭击，洪水毁
坏了家园。你作为班长给他写一封信，内容如下：1. 表示安慰和关心；2. 提供帮助。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【模板范文】
Dear Wang Gang (称谓)
Words fail me to convey my worry when I heard that a horrible and severe Typhoon
Mujigae hit your hometown and your house is in ruins (写信原由 ). I am writing to
extend sincere pity and care for you.
You must have suffered a lot from the accident(表达对遭遇的理解). However，if you were
brave enough not to let out a cry (悲观失望等), which is admirable. Anyway，It can’t be better if
you can lift your spirits to face up to the result. Plus, we will spare no effort to help you .
We ’ ve made a donation of some money, expecting it can help you go through the
difficulty . As for the lessons you have missed, I am willing to help you make them up (提供建议
或帮助) . Remember, I won’t be far away.
Hope you can have your troubles removed soon.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【仿写演练】假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike来信说他现在心情很不好，因为在上周结束的校篮
球比赛中，他所在的班级篮球队以一分之差输了。请你给他写一封信，内容如下：1. 表示
安慰；2. 提出建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【模板范文】
Dear Mike (称谓)
Words fail me to convey my worry when I heard that y our team lost the basketball match last
weekend (写信原由). I am writing to extend sincere pity and care for you.
You must have been in bad mood (表达对遭遇的理解). However，if you were brave enough
not to be depressed (悲观失望等), which is admirable. Anyway，It can’t be better if you can lift
your spirits to face up to the result. Plus, the essence of competition lies not in victory but
in participation. Besides, you can also benefit from your loss by figuring out your strengths and
weaknesses (提供建议或帮助) . Remember, I won’t be far away.
I hope you can find my encouragement helpful.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua【真题 1】（2008全国1）假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直通过有关网站
(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现
在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：
1、 自我介绍；
2、 祝贺苏琳生日；
3、 感谢工作人员；
4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意：1、词数100左右；
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3、开头语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years
ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her
grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to
express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a
happy and healthy life in the US. By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third
birthday? Thank you very much in advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
