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考点 19 应用文写作:推
荐信、告知信(解析版)
【命题解读】
书信类写作包括邀请信、感谢信、推荐信、申请信、祝贺信、告知信、求助信、建议信、
道歉信、咨询信以及慰问信等类别。
以下对推荐信、告知作提供对应的模板和基本写作技巧。
推荐信
【考情分析】
1.推荐物
推荐电影,书,歌曲,说明你喜欢的理由。
2.推荐人
推荐历史人物,老师,主持人,学生会主席,受尊敬的人等,介绍人物,并说明你推荐的
理由。
3.推荐事(行为)
推荐来中国旅游(景点,线路,特色)、来中国留学、过中国节日等,说明推荐理由。
【布局思维导图】【必备词句】
1. 词汇
能力:have a gift for, be skilled in, be experienced in, be an expert in, speak fluent English,
creative, a boy with great ability, efficient, intelligent, etc.
经历:graduate from, be a graduate from, major in, gain/win/get the first grade scholarship,
get good grades, an all-around student with excellent grades in, excellent grades in all subjects, be
given the title of, gain/win the first prize/place, win a gold/silver/copper medal, etc.
性格:outgoing, easy to get along with, enthusiastic, enthusiasm is part of his character, etc.
2. 经典句型
(1) He is an all-around student with excellent grades in all subjects. He has been given the title
of the "excellent student".
(2) As a boy with great potential, he is good at solving difficult problems.
(3) Li Ming, a graduate from Peking University, majors in computer software design.
(4) He has enjoyed the reputation/title of the Excellent Graduate.
3. 写作套路
开头:
(1) I am writing to recommend to you…
(2) I would like to recommend to you…
(3) It is a great honor for me to recommend to you…
(4) I take the pleasure in recommending to you…
结尾:
(1) If he can join your company, he will give full play to his talent. And your company will also
be greatly benefited. So I strongly recommend… to you.(2) In a word, he would be a good choice. I would be grateful if you would like to consider my
recommendation.
(3) I hope you can give him a chance. I believe he will make a great contribution to your
company.
(4) I hope that you would take my recommendation into consideration/account.
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
In response to your request for ______(推荐事由), I would like to recommend ______(具
体推荐事项). I recommend it mainly for the following three reasons.
Initially, ______(推荐理由一) . Additionally/Aside from it, ______(推荐理由二) . Plus,
______(推荐理由三) . If you want details, please______(联系方式) .
Your taking my recommendation into consideration will be highly appreciated/expected.
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作实操】
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Jimmy,由于COVID-19不得不宅在家里,所以他想利用
这段时间学习汉语, 想让你给他推荐一个汉语老师。请你给他写封回信,简单介绍一下你绐
他推荐的情况。内容包括:
1. 表示关心;
2. 介绍汉语老师的情况。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Jimmy (称谓)
In response to your request for a Chinese teacher (推荐事由), I would like to recommend
a candidate, who I think is the best suited for you (具体推荐事项). I recommend it mainly for the
following three reasons.
Initially, he is open-minded and eager to communicate with people, especially from different
backgrounds (推荐理由一) . Aside from it, his major is Chinese, which guarantees you will get
professional help (推荐理由二) . Plus, he also wants to learn English (推荐理由三) . If you
want details, please contact him at (联系方式) .
Your taking my recommendation into consideration will be highly expected.
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【仿写训练】
假定你是李华,你校美国交换生Peter打算在某小区租房子并向你求助。请根据以下提
示给他回复邮件。要点如下:
1.推荐某个小区;
2.说明推荐理由(至少三条);
3.表明提供帮助的意愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【模板范文】
Dear Peter (称谓)In response to your request for renting a house (推荐事由), I would like to recommend a
neighborhood called Garden Community to you (具体推荐事项). I recommend it mainly for the
following three reasons.
Initially, it is so convenient with an underground nearby that you can go anywhere as you
like (推荐理由一) . Additionally, it’s very beautiful, peaceful and clean to live in because of the
wonderful service of the Community Center (推荐理由二) . Plus, this Community is well-known
for its high level of safety (推荐理由三) . If you want details, please contact me (联系方式) .
Your taking my recommendation into consideration will be highly appreciated.
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
告知信
【 布局思维导图 】
首段 告知内容(原因、背景等)
段落要点 正文 告知具体事宜(时间、地点等)
结尾 表达期待愿望
【写作 模板 】
Dear ______ (称谓)
Aware of your enthusiasm for /Delighted to learn that ______(活动主题、你对主题的兴
趣), I’m writing to extend my ______(看法、关心、欢迎等) and inform you of some relevantinformation.
______(活动信息). To begin with, ______(要点一). Furthermore, ______(要点二). To sum
up, ______(要点三).
I highly expect the experience to be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【高频词句】
【常用词汇】
1.inform sb. of sth. 告知某人某事
2.introduce sth.to sb. 向某人介绍某物
3.provide some information for sb. 为某人提供一些信息
4.work out my schedule 制订我的计划
5.as follows 列举如下
6.show sb. around... 带领某人参观某处
7.have a try 试试看,尝试一下
8.sign up for.. 报名参加
9.wok as/serve as/act as. 任……职,当……
10.mean/intend to do sth. 打算做某事
11.spare some time to do sth. 抽出时间做某事
12.take a course 参加一门课程
13.pay a visit to..… 去参观
14.make a difference 有影响;起(重要)作用
15.hesitate to do sth. 犹豫,有所顾虑
16.be scheduled at/on... 被安排在
17.make preparations for.. 为……准备
18.make an arrangement for sth. 为……做安排
19.be intended to sth. 打算,意图
【常用句型】
1. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.
2. You are supposed/expected to …
3. You should/ You’d better …4. There will be a lecture on ….
5. The lecture will last 3 hours. / The lecture will begin at … and end at …
6. Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you.
7. Please get there on time. / Please get everything ready ahead of time.
8. Don’t miss the chance. /Don’t be late.
9. Everyone is welcome to ……
10. I sincerely invite you to…
【写作实操技巧】
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,
内容包括:
1.比赛信息;
2.赛前准备;
3.表达期待。
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【 模板范文 】
Dear Chris (称谓)
Delighted to learn that an important volleyball game will be launched in our school stadium
(活动主题、你对主题的兴趣), I’m writing to extend my excitement (看法、关心、欢迎等) and
inform you of some relevant information..
First and foremost, the competition to be held will begin at 2 P.M. and last for roughly 3
hours (活动信息). Preparations should be made in advance, ranging from doing regular exercise,
keeping positive attitude to presenting yourselves ahead of time (要点一). Furthermore, it is
necessary for you to take a good rest, which will provide enough energy for you (要点二). To sum up,wish that with joint efforts and excellent teamwork, we could live up to the expectations of our
school (要点三).
I highly expect the experience to be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【仿写训练】
假定你是学生会主席李华,你校的交换生Bob已学习中国象棋长达一年,特发邮件向
你询问将由学生会举办的中国象棋大赛的情况。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1.举办比赛的目的;
2.比赛的时间和地点;
3.建议他报名参加并说明理由。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:中国象棋大赛Chinese Chess Contest
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【模板范文】
Dear Chris (称谓)
Aware of your enthusiasm for the Chinese Chess Contest to be held by the Students'
Union (活动主题、你对主题的兴趣), I’m writing to extend my opinion (看法、关心、欢迎
等) and inform you of some relevant information..
First and foremost, Aimed at raising students' awareness of traditional Chinese culture and
developing students' love for Chinese chess, the contest will be held at the Student Center on
September 8 th (活动信息). Since you have learned to play Chinese chess for a year, I suggest that
you should participate in the contest (要点一). Furthermore, I am convinced that your participation
will surely make a difference (要点二). To sum up, through the contest, not only can you improve
your skills of playing Chinese chess but also you can make friends with other excellent players (要点三).
I highly expect the experience to be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【真题1】2019年3月高考真题天津卷
假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的 "读书月" 活动,你校英语社团的微信公众号开
展以 "Let's Read" 为题的征文活动。要求同学根据个人的阅读体会,从所读过的书籍中选
定一种类型,推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括:
(1)推荐书籍的类型及特点;
(2)推荐的理由。
参考词汇:
科幻小说 science fiction 侦探小说 detective novel 魔幻小说 fantasy
传记文学 biography 科普读物 popular science
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围;
(3)内容充实,行文连贯;
(4)题目已给出,不计入总词数。
【参考范文】
Let’s Read
Knowing that during “Reading Month” in our school English Society will hold an
activity named “Let’s Read” on Wechat, I’d like to share something about my own experience and
feeling with all the students.
I have been crazy about reading since I was a child. My favorite type of book is always
science fictions. Science fiction is based on the latest technology and discovery and telling us afantasy story that will possibly happen in the future. In the past decades, science fiction has been
more and more popular with teenagers. Therefore, it has come into a new style and even a culture.
While reading science fictions, I not only feel shocked and amazed about the unknown future
made up by the author but also know more knowledge and information about the development of
science.
I’m sure every teenager will like science fiction and benefit from it! Looking forward to
getting you to take part in “Let’s Read”!
【真题2】2018年3月高考真题天津卷
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为Chris 的外国学生发的
帖子,得知他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给Chris 留言:
(1)鼓励他来中国留学;
(2)说明来华留学的好处(如:加深对中国的了解,对个人发展的益处等);
(3)表示愿意进一步提供帮助。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
【参考范文】
Hi, Chris. I’ve learnt from your post that you’re considering whether to study in China. As a
Chinese high school student, I’d love to offer some suggestions to help you decide on this matter.
First of all, I would encourage you to choose a Chinese university. China is a nation with a
long history and diverse cultures, which I think you’ll be interested in. After four years of study, I
believe, you would know a lot about China. And with the degree you get and the Chinese language
you pick up, you will probably find a good job and have a bright future. Besides, Chinese people
are friendly and kind. You’ll find it easy to make friends and enjoy a happy and meaningful life
here.
So, don’t hesitate. I’m willing to offer further help if you need.
【真题3】2016年北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣,并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信,内容包括:
1. 该人物是谁;
2. 该人物的主要贡献;
3. 该人物对你的影响。
注意:
1. 词数不少于50;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
It's great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history. As for my
favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.
He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern
technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to
major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world.
Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.Cheers!
Yours,
Li Hua
【真题4】2014浙江卷
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书, 现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越,你认为学校图书
馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用
英语给图书馆王老师写一封100—120词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由。
注意:信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。
Dear Mr. Wang,
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Yours sincerely
Li Yue
【参考范文】Dear Mr. Wang,
Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.
What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic
principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects
better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.
In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I
recommend another category of books:literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present
great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and
excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.
I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Yue
【真题5】(2019·天津卷)假设你是晨光中学的李津,英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为
期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间,英方教师 Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就
讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
(1)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一);
(2)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容;
(3)希望从中有何收获。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim,a student at Chenguang High School.
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___________________________________Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. I got the news that your school will send
teachers to my school for a week-long summer exchange. During the activity,you will give a
lecture on Western art. You want to seek for advice on what topic the lecture will be about. From
my personal note,music is my priority.
I am interested in all kinds of music,among which Jazz is my favorite. I want to know about
the history of jazz,and some famous jazz singers. I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions
of enjoying jazz.
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【真题6】(2018·全国卷1)假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,
发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Terry,
How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused
about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.Firstly, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in
Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some appropriate gifts with me,
such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay
attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead,
laying them on your dish is a smart choice.
If you have any other problems, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
Yours
Li Hua
【真题7】(2017·全国卷1)假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友 Leslie学习汉语。请你
写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:
(1)时间和地点;(2)内容:学习唐诗;(3)课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Leslie,
I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested
in Chinese culture. Now I'll tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn
poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it
is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class,
you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.
Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua【真题8】(2017·天津卷)假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green 一直保持联系。
近日她来信询问你的近况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活;
(2)告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备
(如深入了解天津等);
(3)希望她有机会重访天津。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:第十三届全运会 the 13th National Games
Dear Mrs. Green,
I’m glad to hear from you. _________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Mrs. Green,
I’m so glad to hear from you. While it has been more than a year since you taught us English,
I’ve missed you a lot, thinking about those happy moments when we stayed with you. Actually, I’ve
been doing pretty well in my studies as well as in my life. Apart from my academic studies, I always
manage to find time for what I’m interested in. For example, I have successfully got admitted as a
volunteer for the 13th National Games, which is scheduled to be held at the end of this August. To
get admitted, I have made good preparations beforehand, trying to know as much as I could about
my city, Tianjin.
By the way, it’s my sincere hope that you can spare some time for a visit to Tianjin again,
which has changed greatly since you left.Please let me know if you come to Tianjin.
Yours,
Li Jin
【真题9】(2019年新课标全国卷II)假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的
队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包括:
1.比赛信息; 2.赛前准备; 3.表达期待。
注意:
词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
How is everything going? I have good news to tell you. A volleyball match is going to be held
in a few weeks and our team will participate.
As for the detailed information of the match, there will be probably dozens of teams which are
going to make a revolving competition. Additionally, not only can the top three teams each be
awarded a medal but all the other teams taking part in it will get a reward as well. What will be the
most attractive is that it will be a great honor for the top three teams to receive special volleyballs
that have the name of the most popular volleyball player on them. Therefore, we must do enough
preparations before the match, such as training as frequently as we can.
So excited am I that I can’t wait to join in it.How about you? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【模拟检测 1】(2022·福建泉州·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的新西兰笔友Terry在厦门
中学生助手微信公众号里发邮件询问你今年暑假的安排,请你在公众号中回复邮件,内容
包括:
1. 当社区志愿者;
2. 为大学生活做准备。注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Terry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Terry,
Learning that you want to know my plan in summer holiday, I am writing to tell you what I
will do.
First, I will be a community volunteer, because I want to help people in my community. I can
do some cleaning, talk with the old, and teach them how to surf the Internet. Besides, since I will
enter college, I will make full use of the holiday to do some preparations for my college life, which
can make me better adapt to the new life.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给新西兰笔友Terry回复邮件,告诉他你今年暑假的安
排,内容包括:当社区志愿者;为大学生活做准备。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
①暑假:summer holiday→summer vocation
②大学:college→university
③此外:Besides→In addition
④充分利用:make full use of→take full advantage of2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I can do some cleaning, talk with the old, and teach them how to surf the Internet.
拓展句:I can do many meaningful things, which include doing the cleaning, talking with the old,
and teaching them how to surf the Internet.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Learning that you want to know my plan in summer holiday, I am writing to tell you
what I will do. (运用了非谓语动词作状语和what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, since I will enter college, I will make full use of the holiday to do some
preparations for my college life, which can make me better adapt to the new life. (运用了since引
导的状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【模拟检测 2】(2022·湖北省罗田县第一中学模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友
Peter得知你校开设了名为“心灵小屋(Soul House)”的心理咨询室,来信询问其具体情
况。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 开设原因和目的;
2. 具体实施情况;
3. 效果及反馈。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua参考答案:
Dear Peter,
Delighted to know that you show an interest in the Soul House in our school, I’m honored to
inform you of the relevant details.
With a growing number of students feeling stressed out, our school set up the Soul House,
aiming at relieving students’ pressure and ensuring their health. It opens from 5:40 p.m. to 6:40 p.m.
on weekdays. A psychologist is on duty in the room and he provides psychological expertise and
guidance for students and helps resolve their mental health issues and concerns. As its name suggests,
“Soul House” has become a place of peace for our souls and played an important role in our mental
health.
Hope my account can contribute to your understanding. If you have any other questions,
don’t hesitate to turn to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Peter写封信,介绍你校开设的名为“心灵
小屋(Soul House)”的心理咨询室的相关情况,内容包括:1. 开设原因和目的;2. 具体
实施情况;3. 效果及反馈。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→glad
荣幸的:honored→privileged
相关的:relevant→related
在……中起重要作用:play an important role in→play an important part in
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With a growing number of students feeling stressed out, our school set up the Soul House,
aiming at relieving students’ pressure and ensuring their health.
拓展句:With a growing number of students feeling stressed out, our school set up the Soul
House, whose aim is to relieve students’ pressure and ensure their health.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Delighted to know that you show an interest in the Soul House in our school, I’m
honored to inform you of the relevant details. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] If you have any other questions, don’t hesitate to turn to me. (运用了if引导的条件
状语从句)
【模拟检测 3】(2022·河北石家庄·二模)假定你是李华,你校四月份举办了“世界读书
日”系列活动。请给你的笔友Adam写一封电子邮件,介绍相关情况。内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动内容;
3. 你的收获。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Adam,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案:
I’m Li Hua, writing to introduce a series of activities which were held in my school on World
Reading Day.
Based on the theme of the Reading Day — Reading Chinese Classics and Inheriting Chinese
Culture, all the activities are intended to raise our awareness of traditional Chinese culture. Diverse
activities such as Reading Salon and Books Exchange took place on that day. I benefited a lot from
the activities, which enriched my knowledge about traditional culture and helped me develop a good
reading habit.
I hope we can share our reading experience some day. Looking forward to your reply.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给笔友Adam写一封电子邮件介绍你校四月份举办了“世界读书日”系列活动。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
一系列:a series of→a chain of
目的是: are intended to→ are aimed to
多样的:diverse→various/a variety of
希望:hope→ wish/be eager to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Diverse activities such as Reading Salon and Books Exchange took place on that day.
拓展句:Diverse activities which includes Reading Salon and Books Exchange took place on that
day.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Based on the theme of the Reading Day — Reading Chinese Classics and
Inheriting Chinese Culture, all the activities are intended to raise our awareness of traditional
Chinese culture.(运用了非谓语动词做状语)
【高分句型2】I benefited a lot from the activities, which enriched my knowledge about traditional
culture and helped me develop a good reading habit.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从
句)
【模拟检测 4】.(2022·山东菏泽·二模)假定你是李华,你校外教Tom来信说因疫情
(the Covid-19 pandemic)不能按时返校参加读书节活动。请你给他回封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示遗憾;
2. 做好防护;
3. 表达愿望。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________参考答案:
Dear Tom,
Extremely sorry to get the news that on account of the Covid-19 pandemic you failed to return
to take part in the Reading Day, I’m writing to express my concern.
Regretful as I am, I have no alternative but to accept it though we are all expecting your turning
up. With the pandemic situation becoming more and more serious, I’d like to have you take care of
yourself, doing a good job in protecting yourself from infecting it. At the same time, having a good
rest at home and avoiding the crowds are also helpful. Of course, it is high time that you built your
body up to guard yourself against the virus.
Finally, wish you safely go through the period, and looking forward to your coming back.
Yours,
Lihua
【解析】
本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。学校外教Tom来信说因疫情(the Covid-19 pandemic)不能
按时返校参加读书节活动,要求学生给外教写一封信,表达遗憾和祝愿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累:
选择:alternative→choice
极其,非常:extremely→fairly/very
因为,由于:on account of→because of/owing to
有用的:helpful→beneficial/useful
2.句式拓展:
同义句转化
原句:At the same time, having a good rest at home and avoiding the crowds are also helpful.
拓展句:In the meanwhile, it is also beneficial to have a good rest at home and avoid the crowds.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
Of course, it is high time that you built your body up to guard yourself against the virus.(运用了
虚拟语气。)
【高分句型2】
Regretful as I am, I have no alternative but to accept it though we are all expecting your turningup.(运用了部分倒装。)
【模拟检测 5】(2022·浙江绍兴·二模)假如你是李华,参加了专门研究中英文化差异的
英国籍外教Mr. Smith的讲座,感觉受益匪浅,现请你给他写一邮件,内容要点包括:
1. 内容要点回顾:
2. 你的具体所得;
3. 期待更多讲座。
注意:
1. 词数80左右:
2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________
参考答案:
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m lucky enough to have attended your lecture regarding cultural differences between China
and Britain. It is so impressive, benefiting me a lot.
During the lecture, you mainly introduced to us what the specific differences are, why they
came into being and how we can communicate properly on different occasions. Undoubtedly, such
a lecture helps me gain a deeper insight into my own and your cultures and builds my confidence in
cross-cultural communication.
Thank you so much! And I’m looking forward to more wonderful lectures concerning what
you specialize in.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教教授写一封信,回顾参加的教授专门研究中英
文化差异的讲座,内容包括:1. 内容要点回顾;2. 你的具体所得;3. 期待更多讲座。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累①幸运的:lucky→fortunate
②令人难忘的:impressive →imposing
③具体的:specific→detailed
④毫无疑问:Undoubtedly→There is no doubt
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Undoubtedly, such a lecture helps me gain a deeper insight into my own and your cultures
and builds my confidence in cross-cultural communication.
拓展句:Undoubtedly, such a lecture helps me gain a deeper insight into my own and your
cultures and builds my confidence in cross-cultural communication, which will truly have a
lifelong influence on me.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m lucky enough to have attended your lecture regarding cultural differences
between China and Britain.(运用了非谓语动词作定语)
【高分句型2】And I’m looking forward to more wonderful lectures concerning what you specialize
in.(运用了what引导宾语从句)
【模拟检测 6】(2022·广西桂林·模拟预测)假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Peter来信说他
的父亲经常腰痛,听说中医疗效不错,特来信向你咨询。请你回复一封电子邮件。内容包
括:
1.推荐针灸;
2.简要介绍针灸及其优点;
3.祝愿早日康复。
注意:
1.词数100字左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:针灸acupuncture
Dear Peter,
I'm so sorry to hear that your father has been suffering from waist pain.
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案:
Dear Peter,
I'm so sorry to hear that your father has been suffering from waist pain. Now I'd like to
recommend the method of acupuncture to you.
Acupuncture is a key component of traditional Chinese medicine, which has a long history of
more than two thousand years. This technique has been widely recognized as an effective
treatment for a variety of diseases, such as neck pain, back pain and waist pain. What's more, it's
a painless procedure with thin needles inserted into the body. I think your father's symptom will
be gone after several treatments.
Hope your father will recover soon. And don't hesitate to contact me if necessary.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国的朋友Peter回复一封电子邮件简要介绍一下针灸。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
推荐:recommend → advise
组成部分:component → part
此外:what’s more → besides
治疗:treatment → therapy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:What's more, it's a painless procedure with thin needles inserted into the body.
拓展句:What's more, it's a painless procedure though thin needles was inserted into the body.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Acupuncture is a key component of traditional Chinese medicine, which has a
long history of more than two thousand years.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 And don't hesitate to contact me if necessary.(运用了状语从句的省略)【模拟检测 7】(2019·天津市红桥区教师发展中心二模)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,
你的美国笔友 Chris得知你校在2019年3月5日刚刚举行了一次读书交流活动, 他非常感
兴趣, 写信给你,希望你介绍相关情况, 请根据以下提示给他写一封回信。
(1)简单介绍读书交流活动在你校引起的反响;
(2)介绍此活动交流的内容(如阅读方法,读物类别等);
(3)期望Chris多读书。
注意:(1) 词数不少于100;
(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3) 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
On receiving your letter saying that
_______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
参考答案:
Dear Chris,
On receiving your letter saying that you were interested in the reading communication
activity held by our school on March 5th, 2019, I am very glad to introduce it to you as follows:
For one thing, most of students thanked our school for holding such a rewarding reading
communication activity, in which they improved their reading ability and interest. Therefore,
students appealed to our school to keep on holding the reading communication activity in future.
For another, the reading communication activity was made up of reading methods, reading
categories and so on. Reading methods enabled our students to reading efficiency and speed. At
the same time, we understood the fact that reading should be selective because reading blindly
was just a waste of time. What’s more, for the purpose of broadening our horizons, what counts
was that we were supposed to read extensively, such as literature, art, history, finance, computer,
etc.
As a great writer said, “Books are the ladder of human progress.” I sincerely hope that youread more books in your daily life.
Yours,
Li jin
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,假设考生是晨光中学的学生李津,你的美国笔友 Chris得知你
校在2019年3月5日刚刚举行了一次读书交流活动, 他非常感兴趣, 写信给你,希望你介
绍相关情况, 请根据以下提示给他写一封回信。。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣:take an interest in →be interested in
高兴的:happy →glad
继续:continue →keep on
除此以外:Moreover →What’s more
2.句式拓展
句式转化
原句:Reading methods enabled our students to reading efficiency and speed.
拓展句:It was reading methods that enabled our students to reading efficiency and speed.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】For one thing, most of students thanked our school for holding such a rewarding
reading communication activity, in which they improved their reading ability and interest.(运用
了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s more, for the purpose of broadening our horizons, what counts was that
we were supposed to read extensively, such as literature, art, history, finance, computer, etc.(运
用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
【模拟检测 8】(2022·贵州·六盘水市第一中学模拟预测)假如你是李华,你的朋友Susan
来信说,她打算最近来“凉都·六盘水”旅游,但她对这座城市了解不多,请你给她回复电
子邮件,介绍家乡的情况,内容包括以下三点:
1. 谈谈“凉都·六盘水”的气候特点。
2. 推荐六盘水著名的旅游景点。
3. 对她的到来表示欢迎和祝愿。注意:1. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2. 开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
3. 词数100个左右。
4. 可能使用的参考词汇
The Cool City 凉都 recommend 推荐 tourist attractions 旅游景点
Dear Susan,
I’m so happy to know that you are planning to visit my hometown, the Cool City· Liupanshui.
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案:
Dear Susan,
I’m so happy to know that you are planning to visit my home town, the Cool City·
Liupanshui. Now I’m writing to tell you something about the city.
As is well-known to all, Liupanshui was entitled the honorable name “The Cool City”.
Temperature here being nineteen degrees on average, the climate is very cool in summer and
autumn. Therefore, it is a wonderful season now to pay a visit.
There are a great many of tourist attractions here you should visit, such as The Yushe
National Forest Park, Ski Resort in YuShe , Wumeng Prairie and so on. They are worth seeing.
Apart from beautiful scenic spots, people in the city are friendly and enthusiastic. I’m sure
you will receive warm welcome. I do believe you will have a good time here.
Best wishes!
Sincerely Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的朋友Susan来信说,她打算最近来“凉都·六盘水”旅游,
但她对这座城市了解不多,要求考生给她回复电子邮件,介绍家乡的情况。【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:happy→delighted
另外:apart from → besides
热情的:enthusiastic→passionate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Temperature here being nineteen degrees on average, the climate is very cool in summer
and autumn.
拓展句:Because Temperature here is nineteen degrees on average, the climate is very cool in
summer and autumn.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m so happy to know that you are planning to visit my home town, the Cool City·
Liupanshui.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】As is well-known to all, Liupanshui was entitled the honorable name “The Cool
City”.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)