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考向 50 应用文写作之咨询信和推荐信
咨询信
【写作示例】
假定你是李华, 打算今年暑假去美国旅游。请你给Travel America国际旅行社写一封电子邮件进行咨询, 内容
如下:
1. 请其推荐合适的旅游路线;
2. 请其告知相关的旅游费用。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【考场审题】
Step 1: 精准审题 谋篇布局
人称 第一人称 (I), 第二人称(you)
时态 一般现在时
开头点题: 说明写信目的
段落布局 主体段落: 说明需要咨询的内容
结尾: 期待对方的回信
Step 2: 头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词: inquire, recommend, in addition, intend, appreciate
(2)佳句:
①I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and
have a taste of local customs.
②In addition, I’d like to know the prices of the routes, covering all the traveling expenses.
Step 3: 斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1: 我打算在美国住10天左右, 希望能看一看那些独特的自然风景, 品味一下当地的风俗。一般表达: I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, and I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery
and have a taste of local customs.
句式升级(定语从句)
I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and
have a taste of local customs.
要点2: 除此之外, 我想了解包括所有旅行费用的路线的价格。
一般表达: In addition, I’d like to know the prices of the routes, and all the traveling expenses.
句式升级(分词短语作定语)
In addition, I’d like to know the prices of the routes, covering all the traveling expenses.
Step 4: 衔接过渡 斐然成篇
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m planning to travel to the USA in the coming July. Therefore, I’m writing to inquire about travel routes of your
agency.
I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery
and have a taste of local customs. So, could you please recommend some suitable travel routes? In addition, I’d like to
know the prices of the routes, covering all the traveling expenses.
A reply at your earliest convenience is highly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
推荐信
【写作示例】
假定你是李华。你的美国网友David看完电影《哪吒之魔童降世》海外版后非常喜欢, 写信想请你再推荐一
部中国电影。请你根据以下要点给他回信:
1. 表示高兴;
2. 推荐一部电影;
3. 推荐的理由(至少两条)。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。【考场审题】
Step 1: 精准审题 谋篇布局
人称 第一人称 (I), 第二人称(you)
时态 一般现在时; 一般将来时
开头点题: 说明写信目的
段落布局 主体段落: 推荐的电影和推荐的理由
结尾: 表达希望
Step 2: 头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词: delighted, fascinated, have much in common with, appeal to sb. , additionally, perfectly
(2)佳句:
①I’m delighted to know you’re fascinated by the Chinese film, Ne Zha.
②This animated film, which is also based on classic Chinese fairy tales, has much in common with Ne Zha.
Step 3: 斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1: 我很高兴知道你对中国电影《哪吒之魔童降世》感兴趣。
一般表达: I am glad to know you’re interested in the Chinese film, Ne Zha.
句式升级(高级词汇, 被动语态)
I’m delighted to know you’re fascinated by the Chinese film, Ne Zha.
要点2: 这部电影也是以神话故事为基础, 和哪吒有许多相似之处。
一般表达: This animated film is also based on classic Chinese fairy tales, and has much in common with Ne Zha.
句式升级(定语从句)
This animated film, which is also based on classic Chinese fairy tales, has much in common with Ne Zha.
Step 4: 衔接过渡 斐然成篇
【参考范文】
Dear David,
I’m delighted to know you’re fascinated by the Chinese film, Ne Zha. And I’m perfectly willing to recommend
another impressive Chinese movie at your request.
Since I know animated films are your favorites, you can’t miss Monkey King: Hero Is Back. This animated
film, which is also based on classic Chinese fairy tales, has much in common with Ne Zha, so I think it’ll appeal to
you. Additionally, Monkey King and Nezha are both regarded as heroes by Chinese people. Through movies, you will
get a better understanding of Chinese culture.
I hope you’ll find the movie well worth seeing.
Yours,
Li Hua【检测训练】
1．假设你是美国纽约市的一名高中生 Chris, 打算暑假来天津学习汉语，来信向你在天津 一中的笔友李津咨
询他们学校的国际班汉语课程。请你根据以下提示给李津写一封咨询 信。
内容要点：
1. 想学汉语的原因（中国文化；个人发展……）
2. 咨询国际班汉语课程的情况（班级大小；是否侧重听说；能不中国学生交流）
3. 询问是否提供食宿。
注意：
（1） 词数不少于 100；
（2） 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
（3） 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear li Jin,
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Yours
Chris
2．假设你是李华，你想参加剑桥大学（University of Cambridge）的夏令营活动。请写封信向夏令营负责人
Smith教授咨询相关事宜，要点如下：
1、表达你的意愿；
2、咨询相关事宜。
注意：1、词数100左右；
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours sincerely,Li Hua
3．假定你是高三学生李华。随着高考的临近，你感到学习压力越来越大。晚上经常失眠，上课精力不集中，学
习效率低下,现在对备考复习很茫然。你写信给心理学家Dr. Bloom, 咨询解决问题的方法。内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 咨询内容；
3. 期待回复。
Dear Dr. Bloom,
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Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
4．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter打算这个寒假来中国旅游，让你推荐个城市，你想推荐杭州作为他旅游
行程的首选。请用英语给他写封推荐信，内容包括：
1.推荐城市；
2.推荐理由；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．假如你是学生会主席李华，学校安排你给即将到你校任教的外教Martin推荐一名学生助手，请根据以下要
点给他写封推荐信。
1.欢迎Martin的到来，推荐Wang Peng同学当助手(assistant)
2.推荐的理由（沟通能力；热心助人；英语水平等）3.美好祝愿。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Tom的中文取得很大的进步，且对中国文学有着深厚的兴趣，他想买一本书，
请你写一封e-mail，向他推荐一本书，并写出推荐的理由。
内容包括：
1. 推荐的书名；
2. 推荐这本书的三个主要原因；
3. 重申这本书的优点。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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