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考点 26 非应用文写作：
投稿、宣传稿 (解析版)
【命题解读】
短文类写作包括通知、倡议书、演讲稿、新闻报道、日记、约稿、宣传稿等类别。
以下对投稿、宣传稿等提供对应的模板和基本写作技巧。
投稿
【布局思维导图】
投稿，通常会有特定的主题，如你最敬爱的人等等，话题基本上围绕书信类，如推荐
一个项目，那就和推荐信写作思路一致。如最想感谢的人，那就和感谢信思路一致，不过
在表达上可能人称需要换一下。基本上写一篇相关话题的小短文即可，小短文以记叙文或
者议论文为主。学生需要掌握相关词汇，句式用法等。首段 投稿约稿目的
段落要点 正文 介绍稿件的具体内容
结尾 期望祝福
【高频词句】
【常用词汇】
1. 旨在；以......为目的 be aimed at
2. 出版 publish
3. 文章的要求 requirements of the article
4. 如果 on condition that
5. 限制在......词 be limited to about ... words
6. 是很受......欢迎的 be very popular with...
7. 任何有关的事情 anything relevant to
8. 大约120字就可以了 About 120 words would be fine
9. 在......之前提交你的文章 submit your article before
10.体育专栏 sports column
11.娱乐专栏 entertainment column
12. 栏目特点 characteristics of the column
13.语言风格 language style
14.改编自 be adapted from
15. 延长截止日期 extend the deadline 、
【常用句型】
1. 我想邀请某人写一篇......文章 I would like to invite sb to write an article for...2. 我想请你为我们学校的英文报纸写一篇文章。 I’d like to ask you to writr an article for our
school’s English newspaper.
3. 你能写点关于你的学校生活吗？Could you/Would you please write something concerning
your school life?
4. 有兴趣的学生欢迎参加。 Any student who is interested is welcome to participate
5. 这里有一些关于我们渴望文章的相关细节。And here are some relevant detail about the
articles we are eager for .
6. 它携带外国学生写的关于他们家文化的文章。 It carries articles written by foreign students
concerning the culture of their country .
7. 这篇文章应该在400字以内。The article is supposed to be within 400 words .
8. 我们想知道在下周之前你是否完稿。We wonder if it is practicable to have it before next
week.
9. 你最好下星期日把你的文章发送给我，词数约120个词就好。You’d better send your article
to me next Sunday and about 120 words would be fine .
10. 期待您方便时尽快答复。 Looking forward to your reply at your convenience .
11. 期待您尽快确定。 Looking forward to your confirmation soon .
宣传稿
【布局思维导图】【基本模板】
宣传稿在一定程度上可以理解为报道+推荐或者报道+邀请。通常宣传稿需要写一下活
动的经历或者感受，再写几句邀请或者推荐相关的表达即可。以下模版可以根据具体题目
要求适当更改。
模版：
______(时间或地点) witnessed/saw ______(参加或者参观的活动), which impressed me a
lot.
What astonished me was that ______(令我吃惊的活动之一), giving me______(给我带来的
影响) . Besides/ additionally/ what’s more ______(感受及影响二). Eventually，______(感受及
影响三).
For those who have a keen passion for______(活动主题)，you simply can’t miss it by
______(推荐时间) at ______(推荐地点)!
【 写作实操技巧 】
昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展. 请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿，内容包括：
1. 展览时间、地点；
2. 观展感受；
3. 推荐观展.
注意： 1. 写作字数应为80 字左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
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【模板范文】
Yesterday (时间) witnessed a traditional Chinese painting exhibition organized by our
school(参加或者参观的活动), which impressed me a lot.
What astonished me was the poetry or calligraphy inscribed on paintings (令我吃惊的活动
之一), giving me a feast for my eyes(给我带来的影响) . Besides, the spiritual connotation of the
paintings that traditional Chinese paintings sought to portray the harmony between the natural world
and human emotion held me entirely in their power (感受及影响二). Eventually，it provided me
with an opportunity for hands-on learning, which let me gain a deeper insight into the Chinese
painting (感受及影响三).
For those who have a keen passion for the traditional Chinese paintings (活动主题)，you
simply can’t miss it by June 12 th (推荐时间) in our school hall(推荐地点)!
【 仿写演练 】
你的家乡(Qingshan Village)苹果大丰收，为了在电商平台上吸引外国客人购买，请你用
英语为其写一篇宣传稿，内容包括：
1.品质价格；
2.相关服务。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Qingshan (时间) witnesses a good harvest of apples these days (介绍活动).
What will astonish you is the price, not high but reasonable, ranging from $1 per pound to $ 2
per pound, varying in variety (宣传好处一). Besides, the green farming methods guarantee their
nutrition and keep the apples from any pollution (宣传好处二). Eventually，it situated near the
drinking water sources area, which is the special conditions that make for the apple’s good quality--big
in size, red and tasty (宣传好处三).
For those who have a keen passion for the apples (活动主题)，you simply can’t miss it
with our promise to pay 8% of delivery fee(提供服务)! Just purchase now!
【真题1】2022年(全国甲卷)你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，
请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1. 海洋的重要性；
2. 保护海洋的倡议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
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【参考范文】When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling
on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains
the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place
importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more,
we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are
involved, the better the ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect
ourselves.
【解析】
【导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要
性并提出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
越来越：more and more→increasingly
重视：place importance on→attach importance to
重要的：key→significant
此外：what’s more→furthermore
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原 句 ： World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean
conservation.
拓展句：World Ocean Day, which falls on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean
conservation.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance
of nature.(运用了部分倒装结构)
[高分句型2]When it comes to ocean, its pollution becoming more and more serious.(使用了固
定句型)
[高分句型3]First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.(使用了主语
从句)【真题2】2022年(全国乙卷)72. 学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the
Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 学习活动状况描述：
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【参考范文】
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of
students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and
watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English
books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study
is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to
chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline,
and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文给学校
英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累选择：choose → select
提高：improve → strengthen
各种各样的：various → diverse
就我而言：as far as I’m concerned → from my perspective
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing
number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways.
拓展句：Nowadays, because smartphones and computers are becoming more and more popular,
an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various
ways.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening
to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主
语，that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】It's urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline (运用了it作
形式主语，to improve their self-discipline为真正的主语)
【真题3】（2021年3月天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信
息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去
过的地方。内容包括：
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)；
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
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A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places
of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most
impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What’s more , walking in the
nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There
are also many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan
Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it is still playing an important part
in irrigation today.
I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the
construction Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
【真题4】（2016·全国卷2）假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国
际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容包括：
1．主题：环境保护；
2．展览时间；
3．投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student
Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th
and last for three weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take
good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I
remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is
surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to
intlphotoshow@gm.school.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【真题5】（2015·全国卷1）假定你是李华，你校英文报＂外国文化＂栏目拟刊登介绍美
国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：
1. 栏目介绍； 2. 稿件内容； 3. 稿件长度：约 400 词； 4. 交稿日期：6月28 日前。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
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【参考范文】
Dear Peter,I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
The ＂Foreign Cultures＂section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries
articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write
something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome
articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school
students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative.400 words would
be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【真题6】（2013·四川卷）某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题，请你结合
自身学习实际，按以下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。
1．说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；
2．介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；
3．描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。
注意：
1．词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.
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【参考范文】
It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.As we all know, good learning habits can
make your study go to succeed.As a student, we should pay more attention to our habits which we
develop in our study.
I'm sure “repeat” is a best habit.Do you develop the habit? If we want to improve our study,
we should repeat what the teachers have taught us again and again, and then we can understand orremember the knowledge which the teachers demand us to master.How to develop the habit？Set
a timetable, and stick to carry out the plan; don't stop.
When I do my homework, I often make mistakes with carelessness. How to overcome the
shortage? I think I should think about it over and over as long as I do my homework.And then I do
it little by little.Maybe I can correct my mistakes in this way.
【真题7】（2013·安徽卷）假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征
文活动，请你以“On the Way to School”为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容主要包括：
1.遵守交通法规；2.注意举止文明。
注意：
1.词数120左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4.短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数。
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On the Way to School
These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to
life and the environment.Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of
everyone.As for me, it should start on my way to school.
I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way.If I ride a bicycle, I'll always keep to the right and
never cross a road until the traffic light turns green.If I walk, I'll never forget to use the pedestrian
crossing.Meanwhile, I'll regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy.Not
only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter
whenever possible.I hope my behavior will make a difference.
【真题8】（2013·辽宁卷）一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。
写作要点：
1．它是中国的传统节日之一；2．家人团聚；
3．赏月、吃月饼；4．还有旅游、访友等其他活动。
注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
4．参考词汇：中秋节 the Mid－Autumn Festival
农历 lunar calendar赏月 enjoy the full moon月饼 moon cake
The Mid－Autumn Festival
The Mid－Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar
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The Mid－Autumn Festival
The_MidAutumn_Festival_falls_on_the_15th_of_the_eighth_month_of_our_Chinese_lunar_
calendar.As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our
country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the
celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most
is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together
and eat mooncakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have
a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.
【真题9】（2012·福建卷）假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者，以下漫画内容是你的所见
所闻，请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。内容要求：
1．描述漫画内容；2.发表个人感想。注意：
1．短文标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数；2．考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、
连贯；
3．词数120左右；4．文中不能出现考生的具体信息。
参考词汇：告示牌 sign
Mind Your Behavior in Public Places
Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.
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Mind Your Behavior in Public Places
Last_Sunday,_I_went_sightseeing_with_my_friends_in_the_Fairy_Lake_Park.The park was
full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When I was
enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. A young couple in a
boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. What's
worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign “No
Littering” nearby. What a shame!
Such behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did, the
lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think all of us should mind our
behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful
surroundings.
【真题10】（2012·江西卷）某英文报社举办以“I Like Reading”为主题的征文活动，你打
算投稿。请根据以下要点写一篇短文：
1．你为什么喜欢读书；2.你喜欢读哪一类的书(例如：历史、科学、文学等)？请给出至少两个理由。
注意：词数120左右。
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【参考范文】
I Like Reading
Reading is my favorite hobby. I can never stop the love for reading because books are like
wise teachers as well as good friends in my life. As we know, books are the source of knowledge. I
benefit a great deal from reading.
There are a variety of books for us to choose from, like history books, science books, literary
books and so on. But what interests me most is literary books, especially those by famous writers.
For one thing, they help to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizons. For another, they
can enrich my life and provide me with great fun. Isn’t it a pleasure to have great calm in mind
while you are reading?
【真题11】（2012·江苏卷）生活中冲突时有发生。 假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发
生争执，导致关系紧张。 请你结合此事，并根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向学校英
文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。
简要描述事情的经过 打篮球、碰撞、争执，等等
分析发生冲突的原因
1. 遇事不够冷静
2. ……
谈谈避免冲突的做法 (请考生根据自己的经历或感想，提出至少两种做法)
注意：
1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2. 词数150 左右。 开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
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【参考范文】
Conflicts_with_others_are_common_in_everyday_life. During the basketball game
yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then
they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.
To be honest, it was Su' s fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and
both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of
fact，blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.
To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a
harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and
stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in
others' place.
Don' t be selfcentered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and
wisely.
【真题12】（2021年新高考I卷）你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短
文投稿，内容包括：
1. 读报的经历；2. 喜爱的栏目；3. 期望和祝福。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。
Youth and Me
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【参考范文】
Youth and Me
It has been 10 years since Youth was founded. In my memory, it is Youth that accompanies methrough my whole high school. When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which
includes a lot of imaginative stories. These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.
Besides, I even submitted my own fiction to Youth. Refused as I was, I still received some great
encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer.
I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.
【真题13】（2021年全国高考乙卷）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以 Be smart online
learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 分析优势与不足；2. 提出学习建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
【参考范文】
Be smart online learners
Network learning has increasingly become an important means for people to acquire knowledge
and solve problems.But being smart online learners has its advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, as smart online learners, we can make full use of the most extensive educational
resources to broaden the horizon. Besides, We can take the initiative in our study by ourselves
without time and space limit.
Of course, these disadvantages are as follows.Faced with all kinds of information on the
internet, We can't tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our
study and life. On the other hand, online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult
for us not to be affected.
In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find
a proper way to make our study more efficient.
【模拟检测 1】（2022·江苏连云港·模拟预测）你校英文报正在举办征文比赛，主题为弘扬中华传统美德。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 介绍一种美德；
2. 你的理解；
3. 你的做法。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Embrace Traditional Virtues
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【参考范文】
Embrace Traditional Virtues
As the saying goes, honesty is the best policy. Honesty means telling the truth and being fair
in act, which can be of great benefit to us. Not only does it make us happy, but it also gains us solid
friendship.
Practising honesty has been given priority in my life. I always observe regulations. Once I
could have achieved higher marks if I had cheated in the exam, but I chose not to. I am proud of
what I did.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“弘扬中华传统美德”为主题，写一篇征文。内容
包括：1. 介绍一种美德；2. 你的理解；3. 你的做法。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
公平的：fair→equitable
真正的：solid→genuine/real
规则：regulation→rule
分数：mark→grade/score2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I always observe regulations.
拓展句：That means I always observe regulations in any situation.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Honesty means telling the truth and being fair in act, which can be of great
benefit to us.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Practising honesty has been given priority in my life.(运用了非谓语动词作主语)
【模拟检测 2】（2022·河北唐山·一模）你校英文报正在举办以“认识自我，完善自我”为
主题的英语征文活动，请你给校报投稿，内容包括：
1. 你的优点：
2. 你的不足：
3. 如何完善。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Possible Version
We all have our strengths and weaknesses. I am no exception. I am warm-hearted, which
makes me well received. Plus, determination and patience are the qualities I am proud to have,
so I think I can overcome any challenges life might throw at me.
However, I am a little bit careless, which creates embarrassing moments or disappointing
performance. To better myself, I shall make check lists and to-do lists. In this way I canconcentrate better.
Hopefully, I can be better than I have ever been.
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“认识自我，完善自我”为主题，谈谈自己的优缺
点，以及自我完善的措施。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
长处，优势：strength→advantage
缺点：weakness→ disadvantage
克服：overcome→conquer
集中注意力：concentrate→ focus
2.句式拓展
句式转化
原句： Plus, determination and patience are the qualities I am proud to have, so I think I can
overcome any challenges life might throw at me.
拓展句：What’s more, it is determination and patience that are the qualities I am proud to have,
so I think I can overcome whatever challenges life might throw at me.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Plus, determination and patience are the qualities I am proud to have, so I think
I can overcome any challenges life might throw at me.（运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从
句，省略连接词that的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】However, I am a little bit careless, which creates embarrassing moments or
disappointing performance.（运用了which引导非限定性定语从句）
【模拟检测 3】（2022·广东·执信中学模拟预测）你校上学期开展了一系列劳动实践课程，
包括蔬菜种植、手工制作、家电维修等等。请你写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，内容包括:
1. 你喜爱的课程；
2. 你的心得体会；
3. 对课程的建议。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favorite Hands-on Course
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【参考范文】
My Favorite Hands-on Course
In response to the call of nationwide labor education, a series of hands-on courses were
launched last term in our school, ranging from planting vegetables to making traditional
handicrafts.
Sewing is one of my favorite courses, where I obtained a fundamental knowledge of
essential life skills such as sewing a button, knitting a scarf, and making a cushion by operating
the sewing machine. It was surely a rewarding and fulfilling experience, which not only enriched
our extracurricular life but also helped us acquire practical basic working capabilities for
livelihood and form the good habit of labouring.
The hands-on courses have won wide popularity among students and exerted a positive
effect on the personal growth of everyone involved. If possible, an exhibition could be held to
demonstrate students’ well-designed works and display their creativity.
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生写一篇短文，介绍自己最喜欢的劳动实践课程。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
课程：lesson→course
获得：gain→obtain
影响：influence→effect
展示：show→display
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句原句：In response to the call of nationwide labor education, a series of hands-on courses were
launched last term in our school, ranging from planting vegetables to making traditional
handicrafts.
拓展句：In response to the call of nationwide labor education, a series of hands-on courses
were launched last term in our school, which ranged from planting vegetables to making
traditional handicrafts.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Sewing is one of my favorite courses, where I obtained a fundamental knowledge
of essential life skills such as sewing a button, knitting a scarf, and making a cushion by operating
the sewing machine. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It was surely a rewarding and fulfilling experience, which not only enriched our
extracurricular life but also helped us acquire practical basic working capabilities for livelihood
and form the good habit of labouring. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【模拟检测 4】（2022·山东潍坊·一模）你校英文报Youth正在征集关于北京冬奥会的征文，
请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.简单介绍北京冬奥会；
2.难忘的一个瞬间；
3.你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Beijing Winter Olympics in My Eyes
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【参考范文】
The Winter Olympic Games are an international winter sport event taking place every four years.
Beijing successfully held the 2022 Winter Olympics last month, which is certain to strengthen the
east and west culture bridge again.
Besides the lovely mascot that captured my hearts, I was also impressed by the spectacularopening ceremony. The dreamlike colors, the eye-catching high-tech and the warm atmosphere
demonstrated in The Bird’s Nest thrilled my heart, which is something I will never forget.
With the Winter Olympics, Beijing has become the world’s first city to host both the summer
and winter editions of the Olympic Games. It is absolutely a great honor for China.
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于征文。要求考生给校英文报Youth投稿，介绍北京冬奥会和其中难忘的
一个瞬间。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
巩固，增强：strengthen → enhance
吸引，捕获：capture → catch/seize
展示：demonstrate → show
使兴奋，使激动：thrill → excite
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The Winter Olympic Games are an international winter sport event taking place every four
years.
拓展句：The Winter Olympic Games are an international winter sport event which takes place
every four years.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Beijing successfully held the 2022 Winter Olympics last month, which is certain to
strengthen the east and west culture bridge again. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides the lovely mascot that captured my hearts, I was also impressed by the
spectacular opening ceremony.(运用了that引导限制性定语从句)
