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考点 24 应用文写作： 活
动介绍、人物介绍 (解析
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【命题解读】
短文类写作包括通知、倡议书、演讲稿、新闻报道、日记、约稿、宣传稿等类别。
以下对活动介绍、人物介绍等提供对应的模板和基本写作技巧。
活动介绍
【布局思维导图】首段 邀请目的
段落要点 正文 介绍活动具体内容，并说明受邀人参加理
结尾 期待对方接受邀请，并尽快回复
【高频词句】
【常用词汇】
1. hold an English Speaking Competition/Contest
2. around the corner→draw near
3. take part in/participate in a voluntary activity
4. in order to do sth/with the purpose of doing sth
5. turn out/prove to be
6. on/upon arrival/arriving at/in sp
7. try one’s best /spare no effort to do sth
8. manage to do sth
9. think/speak highly of
10. arouse one’s interest in
11. xpand/widen/broden one’s horizons
12. benefit sb both physically and mentally
13. enrich one’s school life
14. As scheduled,
【常用句型】
1. The activity was spoken highly of/thought highly of, which turned out to be a great success.
2. Not only does it build up our body, but also enriches our school life.
3. Undoubtedly these events have received high praise and everyone feels prouder of the school
than ever before.
4. Then followed a big party, where everyone had the opportunity to appreciate many a beautiful
song and eye-catching talent show.
5. Never shall I forget the special Teachers’ Day.
6. Last Sunday witnessed a grand Coming of Age Ceremony held in our school.7. The ceremony we had long awaited fell on...,
8. It is really an unforgettable and meaningful birthday.
9. The ceremony will be held next Sunday.
10. And you should arrive at the stadium of our school before 9 am.
11. A lot of famous schoolmates will attend the ceremony.
12. What’s more, there will be plenty of wonderful performances.
13. Meanwhile, you can take photos of the ceremony if you like.
14. It is a pleasure to welcome you to the anniversary.
人物介绍
【高频词句】
【常用词汇】
1. determined perseverant capable warm – hearted easy – going energetic generous
intelligent ambitious attractive / charming forgetful honest humorous
diligenindependent
cautious talkative tolerant modest outstanding optimistic enthusiastic absent –
minded
bad – tempered behave well gifted / talented
2. make friends with sb.(和某人交朋友);
3. a strong personality (个性强);
4. a close friend (一个亲密的朋友);
5. trust each other (互相信任);
6. share...with sb.(与某人分享);
7. keep in touch with sb. (与某人保持联系);
8. stay best friends with sb. (和某人保持很好的友谊);
9. a friend in need (患难之交)
10. know sb. very well(熟知某人);
11. precious(珍贵的);12. worthy(有价值的);
13. understanding(善解人意的);
14. be loyal to(对……忠诚);
15. keep sb. company.(陪伴，做伴)．
16. respect vt.尊重；尊敬
17. separatev．使分离，分开
18. companion n．同伴；同事；伴侣
19. complain vt.&vi.抱怨→complaintn．抱怨，不满，投诉
20. conflict n．冲突
21. cooperate vi.合作
22. grateful adj.感激的
23. harmony n．和睦；和谐
24. modest adj.谦虚的；谦逊的
25. neighbourhood n．附近；街坊；街区
26. private adj.私人的；个人的；私有的；不公开的；秘密的；私立的
27. reliable adj.可信赖的，可靠的
28. respectful adj.恭敬的，有礼貌的
29. sincere adj.真诚的
30. tolerance n．忍受→tolerantadj.宽容的；容忍的→toleratevt.容忍，忍受
31. be concerned for/about对……担心/关心
32. be familiar to为……所熟悉
33. be on good terms与某人)关系好
34. get on/along well with sb.与某人相处融洽
【常用句型】
1. be admitted to…university
2. graduate from…department of…university
3. receive / get a master's / doctor's degree
4. When at college, he majored in English.=…, he was an English major.
5. gain /win/be awarded the first prize/place
6. set a good example to sb/set sb a good example
7. speak / think highly of…
8. be honored as…9. make great contributions to
10. ... is a near-sighted /far-sighted boy with a pair of glasses on his nose.
11. Zu Longtao set a new world record of swimming, which makes a great contribution to China.
12. ...always behaves himself / well.
13. ...is not only gifted but also diligent.
14. ... is very popular with the young.
15. ...is majoring in music at Zhongshan University.
16. ..., our Chemistry teacher, graduated from South China Normal University.
17. He has many hobbies,especially dance.
18. He prepares his lessons well and gives us a lot of practice in class.
19. He was kind to and patient with his students .
20. With his help / Under his guidance, the students work hard and make great progress.
21. To devote myself to our China, I came back this year without any hesitation.
【真题1】（2022年新高考I卷） 假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李
华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
.
1 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years
since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas
with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know
how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you
are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your
coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请
给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：establish→set up
了不起的：amazing→fabulous
帮助：aid→assistance
许多：plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.
(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know
how to deal with it.(运用了状语从句的省略)
【真题2】（2020·新课标Ⅱ）上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:
1. 农场情况；2. 采摘过程；3. 个人感受
注意:
1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。
题目:My Weekend
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【参考范文】
My Weekend
Last weekend，we took part in a picking activity. We drove from the school, and the farm was
about 2 kilometers away from our school. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of animals,
green fresh vegetables and fruit trees in the farm. We were divided into two groups. One group was
responsible for picking fruits, the other packed up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the activity was
over. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it. Through this activity, we know how
hard the farmers are and how precious the food is. We should treasure the food planted by the
farmers.
【真题3】（2020·天津卷）假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人
礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍关
情况，内容包括:
(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像)；
(2)对活动的感受；
(3)对自己未来的展望。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯；
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony新冠脑炎 COVID-F9
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I am so glad to hear from you. The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June
8th this month. During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping
into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. After that, we all watched the
video of alumnus fighting against the epidemic.
Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us
stronger and more determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome
them. In the future, I will be a good doctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devoting
myself to my work.
Best wishes！
Yours,
Li Jin
【真题4】（2016·北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校
的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为
题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：地球日Earth Day【参考范文】
Actions for a Greener Earth
A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in
the actions for a greener earth.
Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our
classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned those into
dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood
and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts,
especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and
experience with all the students of our school.
We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.
【真题5】（2020·新课标Ⅰ）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人
为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 人物简介；
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。（1）写作思路：
第一步：确定题目类型——人物介绍类命题作文。
第二步：确定写作要点：
1. 话题引入；指明介绍的人物对象；介绍人物的身份、发生的故事等；
2. 分条写明尊敬该人物的原因，建议描述原因不少于2条；
3. 可适当补充细节，例如指明该人物对自己的影响，并进行升华。
（2）参考词汇、短语：
1. admire 敬佩；
2. look up to sb. 尊敬某人；
3. be worthy of 值得；
4. idol 偶像；
5. role model 榜样；
6. when it comes to… 当提及……。
（3）参考句式：
1. 名词性从句的使用：The reason why…is that… ……的理由是……
2. 定语从句的使用：The one that I regard as my role model is… 我视作榜样的人是……
3. 非谓语动词的使用：Though suffering from so many difficulties, he was still… 尽管经历着
如此多的困难，他仍然……
4. 强调句的使用：It was from him that I learn that… 正是从他身上我学到了……
标注
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容
包括：
1. 人物简介；
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
【参考范文】
The person I respect
We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of
our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves hiswork and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to
accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.
When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently
and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by
his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.
【真题6】（2014 全国卷2）一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根
据下列要求和你的想象完成短文。
1.家庭； 2．工作；3．业余生活。
注意： 1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
【参考范文】
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten
years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely
child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I’ll enjoy my work and get
along well with my colleagues. I’ll do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I’ll continue to
take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I’ll travel
around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.
【真题7】（2016年北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友 Jim 在给你
的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给
Jim回信，内容包括：
1. 该人物是谁；
2. 该人物的主要贡献；
3. 该人物对你的影响。
注意：
1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
It's great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history. As for my
favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.
He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi（Maps and Records of the World）, introduced modern technologies
and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in
college to be a bridge between China and the world.
Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.Cheers!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
my favourite figure 最喜欢的人物
in the late Qing Dynasty 清朝晚期
open our eyes 打开视野
【真题8】（2015·安徽）某英文杂志正在举办以"Fancy yourself as an interviewer"为主题的
征文活动，请你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview" 为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1. 采访的对象；2. 采访的原因；3. 想提的问题。
注意：
1. 词数120左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4. 短文的标题已给出，不计人总词数。
A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview
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【参考范文】
A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview
The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.
I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but
also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration
and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.
If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was
trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun
as I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be
very interesting.
【模拟检测 1】（2022·天津河东·一模）假设你是李津，你的英国的笔友Peter想了解你最
近生活和学习的情况，请给他写一封电子邮件，介绍你们学校寒假期间开展的“品读经典，
提升素养”读书月活动的情况。要点如下：
①介绍活动的目的、形式、参加对象；②介绍你在活动中读过的一本经典书籍：③表达你
的感受。
注意：1.词数不少于100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.必须包含提示内容：
3.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
How are you?
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Peter，
Last month was my school’s “Reading Month”, which required every student at my school to
read at least on classic book during the month.
At the end of the month, students would gather in groups and discuss the books they read. It
was a great time to learn more knowledge, cultivate our reading interest, and exchange different
opinions with each other. I finally had the time to finish The Little Prince, written by the French
author Antoine de Saint-Exupery. It tells the story of a boy from space who travels around the
universe to meet people of every background. He views each world through his innocent eyes. The
words of wisdom in the book, such as “One sees clearly only with the heart”, touched me
deeply.
Looking back, I really enjoyed the adventure with the little prince, all thanks to this “Reading
Month”.
Yours，
Li Jin
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Peter写一封电子邮件，介绍学校寒假期间
开展的“品读经典，提升素养”读书月活动的情况。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
要求：require → request
培养：cultivate → develop
交流：share → exchange
打动：touch → move
欣赏：enjoy → appreciate2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last month was my school’s “Reading Month”. It required every student at my school to
read at least on classic book during the month.
拓展句：Last month was my school’s “Reading Month”, which required every student at my
school to read at least on classic book during the month.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Last month was my school’s “Reading Month”, which required every student at my
school to read at least on classic book during the month.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从
句）
[高分句型2]I finally had the time to finish The Little Prince, written by the French author
Antoine de Saint-Exupery.（运用了过去分词作后置定语）
[高分句型3]Looking back, I really enjoyed the adventure with the little prince, all thanks to this
“Reading Month”.（运用了现在分词作状语）
【模拟检测 2】（2022·山东淄博·一模）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友A1ice观看了北京冬
奥会开幕式，发来邮件向你咨询相关细节。请你给她回复件，内容包括：
1.办奥理念；
2.精彩瞬间；
3.观看感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答；
3.开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
As you know, the 2022 Winter Olympics opening ceremony was held on February 4th in
Beijing.
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Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Alice,
As you know, the 2022 Winter Olympics opening ceremony was held on February 4th in
Beijing. It coincides with “Lichun”, indicating the start of spring. The presentation of 24 solar
terms became an important element.
What impressed me most was the scene that the Olympic flame was dancing lightly in the air
at the heart of the cauldron, which represents China’s commitment to an eco-friendly and low
carbon footprint, in line with the principle of hosting a “green, inclusive, open and clean” Games
put forward by president Xi.
I felt deeply moved and proud as a Chinese. Welcome to Beijing if you’re interested in winter
sports.
Yours.
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Alice回复信件，介绍北京冬奥会的相关
细节。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
出现：presentation→appearance
规范：principle→standard
感动的：moved→touched
自豪：proud→take pride in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It coincides with “Lichun”,indicating the start of spring.
拓展句：It coincides with“Lichun”,which indicates the start of spring.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】What impressed me most was the scene that the Olympic flame was dancinglightly in the air at the heart of the cauldron, which represents China’s commitment to an eco-
friendly and low carbon footprint, in line with the principle of hosting a “green, inclusive, open
and clean” Games put forward by president Xi.（运用了what引导主语从句，that引导同位语
从句，以及which引导非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Welcome to Beijing if you’re interested in winter sports.（运用了if引导条件状
语从句）
【模拟检测 3】（2022·广东光明·二模）假定你是李华，上个月你参加了学校举办的郊游
活动。请给你的英国朋友Jim写一封电子邮件，介绍有关情况。内容包括：
1.活动组织(参加人员、时间、地点)；
2.活动过程；
3.你的感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
How are you doing? I’m writing with delight to share with you my experience in an activity
organized by my school.
On a sunny Sunday last month, I joined some of my schoolmates and took a trip to a lakeside
village in the suburbs, where we had a great time. We were amazed by the beautiful scenery. Wewent boating on the lake and hiking in the woods. We also talked to farmers about their life. It’s
really refreshing to get close to nature and learn about the local customs.
Don’t you think this is wonderful?
Yours,
Li Hug
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封电子邮件给你的英国朋友Jim，介绍上个月你
参加学校举办的郊游活动。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴：delight→ pleasure
参加：join→ take part in/participate in
惊讶的：amazed→ surprised
接近：get close to→ approach to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing with delight to share with you my experience in an activity organized by my
school.
拓展句：I’m writing with delight to share with you my experience in an activity which was
organized by my school.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I joined some of my schoolmates and took a trip to a lakeside village in the
suburbs, where we had a great time.（运用了关系副词where引导的定语从句。）
【高分句型2】It’s really refreshing to get close to nature and learn about the local customs.（运
用了it作形式主语，动词不定式to do sth作真正的宾语。）
