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考点 18 应用文写作:邀
请信、感谢信(解析版)
【命题解读】
书信类写作包括邀请信、感谢信、推荐信、申请信、祝贺信、告知信、求助信、建议
信、道歉信、咨询信以及慰问信等类别。
以下对邀请信、感谢信提供对应的模板和基本写作技巧。
邀请信
【布局思维导图】
首段 邀请目的
段落要点
正文 介绍活动具体内容,并说明受邀人参加理结尾 期待对方接受邀请,并尽快回复
【高频句型】
I am pleased to invite you to attend.../It's a pleasure for me to invite you to attend...我很荣幸能邀
请你参加……
I wonder if you could come...你是否能来……
My family and I would feel honored if you could come. 如果你能来,我和家人会倍感荣幸。
I am sure that you will enjoy yourself here. 相信你能在这儿过得愉快。
I am writing on behalf of all the students of our department to invite you to give a lecture on...我
代表全系学生邀请您为我们就……进行讲座。
We look forward to seeing you.我们期待见到你。
We would be looking forward to your participation in the party.我们期待你参加聚会。
We would be very grateful if you could give a talk on... 我们会万分感激如果你能就……进行讲
座。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
In a bid to ______(活动目的), a/an ______(活动) is scheduled to be held in/at ______(地
点). I would like to invite you to participate in it.
As scheduled, the ______( 活 动 ) falls on ______( 具 体 日 期 ), lasting from______
to______(具体时间点) , during which time a wide variety of ______ (活动内容) will be put on.
For example, ______(具体内容). In addition, /As far as I can see, ______(其他活动/重要意义).
Hopefully, you can spare time to join us. Should you have any question, please don’t hesitate
to let me know. May you have a good time!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作实操】
假定你是学生会主席李华。你校新来一批美国交流生,学校要组织迎新晚会请你用英文给他们的领队Tom写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
时间:本周六晚上6点到8点;
地点:学校礼堂;
活动:表演节目,中美学生互动。
注意:词数 80 左右,可合理添加细节。
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【模板套用】
Dear Tom (称谓)
In a bid to celebrate your arrival (活动目的), a grand party (活动) is scheduled to be held
in the school hall (地点). I would like to invite you to participate in it.
As scheduled, the occasion (活动) falls on this Saturday(具体日期), lasting from 6 p.m. to
8 p.m., (具体时间点) , during which time a wide variety of wonderful performances (活动内容)
will be put on. For example, Students, blessed with a talent for music, cross-talk, or dance will
show themselves confidently(具体内容). In addition, there will be face-to-face talks in the
activities so that we will have a better understanding of each other (其他活动).
Hopefully, you can spare time to join us. Should you have any question, please don’t hesitate
to let me know. May you have a good time!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【仿写训练】
假定你是李华,你们学校要举办传统中医讲座,你的留学生朋友Chris对中国传统文化
有浓厚的兴趣,因此,你想邀请他参加该讲座。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.讲座的时间和地点;
2.讲座的内容。
注意:
1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:传统中医讲座 a lecture on traditional Chinese medicine
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【模板范文】
Dear Chris (称谓)
In a bid to deepen our understanding of Chinese traditional culture (活动目的), a lecture on
traditional Chinese medicine (活动) is scheduled to be held in the school hall (地点). I would
like to invite you to participate in it.
As scheduled, the lecture (活动) falls on this Saturday(具体日期), lasting from 8 p.m. to
11 p.m., (具体时间点) , during which time a lecture given by an expert (活动内容) will be put
on. He will narrate the development history of traditional Chinese medicine and share some
significant worldwide achievements with us. (具体内容). As far as I can see, it can enrich your
understanding of traditional Chinese medicine and make you realize how much difference traditional
Chinese culture has made in the present world. (重要意义).
Hopefully, you can spare time to join us. Should you have any question, please don’t hesitate
to let me know. May you have a good time!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
感谢信
【 布局(思维导图 】首段 表达感激之情,简单陈述的原因
段落要点 正文 说明要感谢的事由或介绍一些的情况
结尾 再次表感谢及真诚祝福
【 写作 模板 】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am eagerly writing to extend my heartfelt gratitude to you for ______(感谢的原因).
Undoubtedly,had it not been your assistance in ______(对方给予的具体帮助), I fear that I would
have been______ (没有对方帮助时的后果).
Whenever I encounter difficulties, you ______(具体事由和感想) .
Again, no words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. Many thanks to you. I wish
______(表达祝愿或者回报意愿).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【 必备词句 】
Thank you so much for...非常感谢……
I would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart for...我由衷地感谢你……
I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude for... 写此信来表达我的诚挚谢意……
I'm grateful to you for...因你……,我深表谢意。
I truly appreciate your...我真诚感谢你……
Words fail to convey my gratitude to you. 我对你的感激之情难以用言语表达。I take the opportunity to express to you my deep appreciation for... 我借此机会向你表达我深深
的谢意……
It's kind and generous of you to do this for me and I do appreciate it more than I can say.你如此善
良和慷慨地帮助我,我不胜感激。
【 写作实操 】
假定你是李华,现在是中山大学(Sun Yat-sen University)大一新生,高三时在李老师的帮助
下,英语进步很大,为表示感谢,给李老师写一封感谢信。
要点如下:
1. 梦想成真,考上理想大学;
2. 因为李老师的辅导和鼓励,英语由差变好;
3. 对老师祝福。
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【 模板范文 】
Dear Mr. Li (称谓)
I am eagerly writing to extend my heartfelt gratitude to you for helping me improve my
English (感谢的原因). Undoubtedly,had it not been your assistance in providing me learning
skills (对方给予的具体帮助), I fear that I would not have been a student of Sun Yat-sen
University (没有对方帮助时的后果).
Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always help me out and cheer me up, which helps me
feul my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence ( 具体帮助事
由 ).
Again, no words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. Many thanks to you. I wish
you plenty of pleasure in your life (表达祝愿或者回报意愿).
Your sincerely,Li Hua
【 仿写训练 】
假定你是李华,上周六你的英国好友Eric教你如何创建个人网站,你从中学到很多知识。
请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;
2. 简述Eric给予你的帮助;
3. 希望向Eric学习更多相关知识。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【 模板范文 】
Dear Eric (称谓)
I am eagerly writing to extend my heartfelt gratitude to you for helping me create a personal
website last Saturday (感谢的原因). Undoubtedly,had it not been your assistance in furnish ing
me with professional guidance (对方给予的具体帮助), I fear that I would not have created my
own personal website (没有对方帮助时的后果).
Whenever I encounter difficulties, not only did you explain it to me carefully and patiently,
but you also taught me the steps of creating a personal website in detail. Eventually, with your
help, I made it ( 具体帮助事由 ) .
Again, no words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. Many thanks to you. I wish
that I’ll learn more relevant knowledge from you ( 表达祝愿或者回报意愿 ) .
Your sincerely,【真题1】2022年(新高考I卷) 假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李
华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
.
1 节目介绍;
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years
since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas
with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know
how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you
are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your
coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给
外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立:establish→set up了不起的:amazing→fabulous
帮助:aid→assistance
许多:plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句:You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.
(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know
how to deal with it.(运用了状语从句的省略)
【真题2】(2017·新课标卷II)假定你是李华,想邀请外教 Henry 一起参观中国剪纸
(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;2.展览内容。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Henry,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know you’re interested in one of
Chinese traditional art forms — papercutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it.
It’ll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9:00 am to 7:00 pfrmo m
Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118,
Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon? I will meet you a:t 2
00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like.
You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which papercutting is one of the
most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of papercuttings. Maybe you can
learn one or two skills of the cutting.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Regards,
Li Hua【真题3】(2018·天津卷)假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友
Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,
参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小
组给他写一封电子邮件。
(1)比赛的时间、地点;(2)邀请他的原因;(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出
建议。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you.
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in
Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won
an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the
coming competition. I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in winning the award but
also enhance the friendship between our two schools.
With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice because
you are more experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition asteam partners.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【真题4】(2017·全国卷3)假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给
你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括:
1. 球队活动;2. 报名方式及截止日期。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Eric,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to invite you to join the table tennis team in our school. It is known
that we can benefit a lot from playing table tennis. It can prevent us from getting shortsighted and it
can keep us physically healthy. As to the activities, we plan to invite experienced players to giving
training to us every Friday afternoon. At the same time, we will divide the members into several
groups to practice at 5:00pm after school.
If you are interested, sign up on our school website before August 10.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【真题5】(2017·浙江卷)假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友 Chris
写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1. 参加者;2. 时间、地点;3. 活动:登山、野餐等。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
How are you now? The purpose of my writing is to tell you that there will be an outgoing for
us these days. I would be honored to have you there with us, enjoying the colorful days.
The occasion will start on the next Sunday morning. We will go to Siming Mountain, where
we can have a climb. What’s more, we can also hold a picnic party with the local people.
I really hope you can make it. And I do look forward to receiving your reply letter as soon as
possible.
【真题6】(2016·全国卷2)假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国
际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信,请他提供作品。信的内容包括:
1.主题:环境保护;2.展览时间; 3.投稿邮箱:intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
注意:
1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student
Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th
and last for three weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take
good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I
remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This issurely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to
intlphotoshow@gm.school.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【真题7】(2015·全国卷2)假如你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人
们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件,邀她一同前往,内容包
括:
1.出发及返回时间;2.活动:包饺子、表演节目等。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.结语已为你写好。
【参考范文】
Dear Lucy,
I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the
Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings
and cakes with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing
and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in
the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the
gate at 9 in the morning.
Looking forward to your reply.Yours
Li Hua
【真题8】(2019全国III)假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国
朋友Allen参加,内容包括:1. 时间;2. 活动安排;3. 欢迎他表演节目。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Allen,
How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the
school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.
The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then
there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome
to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.Don't hesitate to ask me for help if you have any questions.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【真题 9】(2019年浙江卷)假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自
己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示感谢; 2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助;3. 临别祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my
heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under
your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant
surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties,
you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me
to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
【真题10】【2017·北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺
序,写一篇英文周记,记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全
过程。
注意:词数不少于60。
提示词:视频video_______________________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated
discussion, we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school. Material collecting
took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect
of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over what to put into the video.
Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect. Several days later, when the
video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers shared
a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.
【模拟检测1】(2022·江苏·新沂市第一中学模拟预测)假如你是李华,你校为了增强学生
体质,提升锻炼意识,将邀请歌手兼健身教练刘畊宏(Jay Chou)开展一次关于他非常受欢迎的健身操(fitness routines)《本草纲目》(A Herbalist’s Manual)的网络讲座,请你
写封电子邮件给美国的交换生Betty,内容包括:
1、邀请她参加讲座。
2、告知讲座的时间及登录方式。
3、讲座内容。
注意:1、写作词数在80词左右;
2、可以适当增加细节使行文流畅。
Dear Betty,
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Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案:
1.Dear Betty,
I sincerely invite you to attend an on-site lecture concerning one of the most-watched fitness
routines to be held next Saturday, aimed at strengthening students’ bodies and raising health
awareness.
Scheduled at 9:30 a.m., the lecture is mainly about how to exercise and dance to upbeat songs
and to show their moves. The fitness routines are set to A Herbalist’s Manual from Jay Chou, a
singer and fitness trainer. Liu will teach how to keep fit and develop a good lifestyle as he did on
TikTok.
Looking forward to your participation!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国的交换生Betty写封电子邮件,邀请他参加歌
手兼健身教练刘畊宏(Jay Chou)开展的一次关于他非常受欢迎的健身操(fitness
routines)《本草纲目》(A Herbalist’s Manual)的网络讲座。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
诚挚地:sincerely→genuinely
健身:fitness→bodybuilding
增强:strengthen→build up
保持健康:keep fit→keep healthy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I sincerely invite you to attend an on-site lecture concerning one of the most-watched
fitness routines to be held next Saturday, aimed at strengthening students’ bodies and raising
health awareness.
拓展句:I sincerely invite you to attend an on-site lecture concerning one of the most-watched
fitness routines to be held next Saturday, whose aim is to strengthen students’ bodies and raise
health awareness.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I sincerely invite you to attend an on-site lecture concerning one of the most-
watched fitness routines to be held next Saturday, aimed at strengthening students’ bodies and
raising health awareness. (运用了动词不定式作后置定语)
【高分句型2】Liu will teach how to keep fit and develop a good lifestyle as he did on TikTok.
(运用了as引导的方式状语从句)
【模拟检测2】.(2022·吉林长春·模拟预测)北京冬奥会圆满闭幕,中国青少年掀起了学
滑雪的热潮。假设你校要组建一个滑雪社团,作为校学生会主席,请你代表学校给本校的
国际交流生Chris写封邮件发出邀请,
内容包括:
1.活动的目的和意义;
2.报名的时间和方式。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
参考答案:
Dear Chris,
After seeing the excellent performances of athletes in the Beijing Winter Olympic Games,
Chinese teenagers set off an upsurge of learning skiing. Therefore, our school is planning to form
a ski club, whose aim is to help keen skiers learn skiing. I am writing to invite you to join the ski
club.
The club will organize training courses to teach basic and advanced skiing skills. If interested,
you can visit our school website and sign up online or come to the Student Union Office at Room
101 to fill out a paper application before next Sunday.
Looking forward to your joining.
Student Union
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给国际交流生Chris写一封邀请信,邀请他参加滑雪社
团。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
精彩的:excellent→marvellous
因此:Therefore → Hence/So
组建:form→set up
安排:organize→ arrange
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句
原句:After seeing the excellent performance of athletes in the Beijing Winter Olympic Games,
Chinese teenagers set off an upsurge of learning skiing.
拓展句:After they saw the excellent performance of athletes in the Beijing Winter Olympic
Games, Chinese teenagers set off an upsurge of learning skiing.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Therefore, our school is planning to form a ski club, whose aim is to help keen
skiers learn skiing.(运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】If interested, you can visit our school website and sign up online or come to the
Student Union Office at Room 101 to fill out a paper application before next Sunday.(运用了状
语从句的省略)
【模拟检测3】.(2022·江苏南通·一模)假如你是李华,你校将组织高三年级师生去郊区进
行公园清扫活动。请你给外教Chris写一封邮件。内容包括:
1. 活动时间;
2. 活动内容;
3. 邀请他参加。
注意:1. 写作此数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案:
Dear Chris,
This weekend, our school will organize a park clean-up activity for teachers and students of
senior grade three.
When we arrive at the park outside the city, we will be divided into three groups. Group onewill pick up rubbish on the ground. Group Two will put up a “No littering” sign at the entrance to
stop people littering. Group Three will be responsible for carrying rubbish.
I am happy to invite you to this activity. It will be absolutely worth our effort.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如考生是李华,你校将组织高三年级师生去郊区进行公园清
扫活动。请你给外教Chris写一封邮件。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
活动:movement→activity
负责任:take responsibility for→be responsible for
高兴的:pleased→happy
完全地:completely→absolutely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am happy to invite you to this activity. It will be absolutely worth our effort.
拓展句:I am happy to invite you to this activity,which will be absolutely worth our effort.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] When we arrive at the park outside the city, we will be divided into three groups.
(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Group Three will be responsible for carrying rubbish. (运用了动名词作宾语)
【模拟检测4】(2022·新疆乌鲁木齐·一模)假定你是李华,2022年北京冬季奥运会即将开
幕。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Peter收看,内容包括:
1.收看时间(2月4日—20日)和方式;
2.邀请理由;
3.表达期待。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考答案:
Dear Peter,
With the 2022 Winter Olympic Games around the corner, I’m writing to invite you to watch
it.
The Games, an international sports competition to be held in Beijing, appeal to people all
around the world. Additionally, they consist of over 100 events, and feature sports on snow and
ice, including many interesting and thrilling ones. Moreover, we Chinese have made long and full
preparations, so it is really worthwhile to watch the Games.
The great events will be broadcast live both on CCTV-1 and on CCTV-5 from February 4th to
February 20th. They are also available on some other media platforms. Hopefully, you won’t miss
the wonderful opportunity.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。2022年北京冬季奥运会即将开幕要求学生写封邮件邀请英国朋
友Peter收看。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
吸引:appeal to→ attract
此外:Additionally→ Besides
包含:consist of→ comprise
机会:opportunity→ chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Additionally, they consist of over 100 events, and feature sports on snow and ice,
including many interesting and thrilling ones.
拓展句:Additionally, they consist of over 100 events which feature sports on snow and ice,
including many interesting and thrilling ones.
【点睛】[高分句型1] With the 2022 Winter Olympic Games around the corner, I’m writing to invite you
to watch it. (运用了with的复合结构)
[高分句型2] Moreover, we Chinese have made long and full preparations, so it is really
worthwhile to watch the Games. (运用了so引导的结果状语从句)