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专题22 书信类01（邀请信、感谢信、推荐信）（解析版）
书信类写作包括邀请信、感谢信、推荐信、申请信、祝贺信、告知信、求助信、建议信、道歉信、咨
询信以及慰问信等类别。
以下对邀请信、感谢信、推荐信提供对应的模板和基本写作技巧。
一、邀请信
1. 布局（思维导图）
首段 邀请目的
段落要点 正文 介绍活动具体内容，并说明受邀人参加理
结尾 期待对方接受邀请，并尽快回复
2. 高频句型
1. I am pleased to invite you to attend.../It's a pleasure for me to invite you to attend...我很荣幸能邀请你参加……
2. I wonder if you could come...你是否能来……
3. My family and I would feel honored if you could come. 如果你能来，我和家人会倍感荣幸。
4. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself here. 相信你能在这儿过得愉快。
5. I am writing on behalf of all the students of our department to invite you to give a lecture on...我代表全系学生邀
请您为我们就……进行讲座。
6. We look forward to seeing you.我们期待见到你。
7. We would be looking forward to your participation in the party.我们期待你参加聚会。8. We would be very grateful if you could give a talk on... 我们会万分感激如果你能就……进行讲座。
9. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself here. 相信你能在这儿过得愉快。
10. I am writing on behalf of all the students of our department to invite you to give a lecture on...我代表全系学生邀
请您为我们就……进行讲座。
11. We look forward to seeing you.我们期待见到你。
12. We would be looking forward to your participation in the party.我们期待你参加聚会。
13. We would be very grateful if you could give a talk on... 我们会万分感激如果你能就……进行讲座。
3. 写作模板
模板①
Dear________,
________(开门见山地点、活动)，It would be pleasant to have you here(表达邀请愿望). Will you give me
the pleasure of your company(正式发出邀请)？
During the party/conference, we will have a lots of activities you will be interested in (开始介绍活动内容).
First, __________(介绍举行的活动一). Second, _________(介绍举行的活动二). I know/believe you be very
interested in _________(引出受邀请人参加的理由). First/For one thing________(希望受邀人参加的理由一)，
Second/For another__________(希望受邀人参加的理由二)。 The party/conference would not be complete
without you(总结受邀人参加的必要性).
The party/conference will begin at ________(提出活动的地点). It is possible for us to meet at ________(提
出具体约定时间). We do hope you can come ________(再次发出邀请).
Yours
Li Hua
模板②
Dear________,
There will be a________(内容) at/in________(地点) on________(时间). We would be honored to have you
there with us.The occasion will start at________________(具体时间). This will be followed by a________(进一步的安
排). At ________________(时间), we will have ________________________(另一个安排).
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before_________________________(通知你的最后期限).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作注意事项】
a. 盛情邀请参加聚会、共度假期或游览某地等；
b. 建立密切联系，加强感情交流；
c. 拓展相关内容，激发他人兴趣。
【写作方法】
① 首段：开门见山说明写作目的。
② 主体：
a. 具体交代邀请原因；
b. 邀请内容：活动性质、时间、地点、日期；
c. 有关要求和希望。
③ 尾段：
a. 再次盛情邀请；
b. 希望尽快答复。
【写作流程图】
发出邀请
说明事由
说明活动的时间、地点、对象等
表达期待和感谢
【必背词句】
邀请函写作必备词汇词组：1. 邀请 invite/ invitation
2. 做演讲 make/deliver a speech
3. 评委 judge
4. 感激 appreciate (vi. )/ be grateful
5. 荣幸 honor (v./n.)
6. 欢迎 welcome (v./n./adj.)
7. 接受邀请 accept sb’s invitation
8.代表学校 on behalf of our school
9. 我想邀请你做 I’d like to invite you to
10. 举办活动的目的是 The purpose of the activity is to
11. 活动的细节有 Here are some details about the activity
12.如果……我将感到荣幸 It’s my honor if
13.欢迎你参加 You are welcome to
【篇首句】介绍自己，简要说明活动，并邀请对方。
1. I’m Wang Ming from YuWen School，the president of the Student Union. 我是来自育文学校的王明，学生
会主席。
2. An English speaking contest of our school will be held on August 6. 我们学校有一场英语演讲比赛将在8月6
号举行。
3. There will be a party in my garden on Sunday.周日，在我的花园里会举行一场聚会。
4. I’d like to invite you to judge it.我想邀请你做它的裁判。
5. I’m writing to invite you to我写信是邀请你……
6. I wonder if you can come to 我想知道你是否能来……
7. We sincerely hope you can attend it. 我们真诚希望你能够参加。
8. It’s my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to 我很荣幸的邀请你……
9. It’s a pity that you have to go back to America soon. So a farewell party for you will be held in the Sun Club this
Saturday evening. Could you come at 6:00 pm? 很遗憾你不久就要回美国了。所以，这周六，在阳光俱乐
部我们会为你举行一个欢送会。下午六点你能来吗？
【篇中句】介绍活动具体内容，并说明受邀人参加理由。1. It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their
speeches. 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
2. We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。
3. During the afternoon, we’ll together. 下午，我们会一起……
4. Remember to take water and lunch with you. 记得带上水和午餐。
5. By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 in front of your apartment and it will take you directly to the club. 顺便
说一下，你可以乘坐你家公寓前的322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
6. I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite
you to be part of the contest. 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一个英语老师。我，代表我们学校，真诚的
邀请你来比赛现场。
7. Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. 既然你如此渴望提高英语，
这会是一个很好的机会。
8. I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there. 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
【篇尾句】期待对方接受邀请，并期待对方尽快回复。
1. Will you be available during that time? Please contact me at 1234567 at your earliest convenience.
那期间你有空吗？请方便时尽快给我打电话1234567。
2. Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation?
请尽快告诉我你能否接受我的邀请好吗？
3. We will feel much honored if you could come.如果你能来，我们会非常荣幸。
4. We are looking forward to your coming.我们期待着你的到来。
5. I am longing to see you soon.我期待着尽早见到你。
4. 写作实操
假定你是学生会主席李华。你校新来一批美国交流生，学校要组织迎新晚会请你用英文给他们的领队
Tom写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
时间：本周六晚上6点到8点；
地点：学校礼堂；
活动：表演节目，中美学生互动。注意：词数 80 左右，可合理添加细节。
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【模板套用】
Dear Tom (称谓)
In a bid to celebrate your arrival (活动目的), a grand party (活动) is scheduled to be held in the school hall
(地点). I would like to invite you to participate in it.
As scheduled, the occasion (活动) falls on this Saturday(具体日期), lasting from 6 p.m. to 8 p.m., (具体时
间点) , during which time a wide variety of wonderful performances (活动内容) will be put on. For example,
Students, blessed with a talent for music, cross-talk, or dance will show themselves confidently(具体内容). In
addition, there will be face-to-face talks in the activities so that we will have a better understanding of each other
(其他活动).
Hopefully, you can spare time to join us. Should you have any question, please don’t hesitate to let me know.
May you have a good time!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
5. 仿写演练
假定你是李华，你们学校要举办传统中医讲座，你的留学生朋友Chris对中国传统文化有浓厚的兴趣，
因此，你想邀请他参加该讲座。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．讲座的时间和地点；2．讲座的内容。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：传统中医讲座 a lecture on traditional Chinese medicine
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【模板范文】
Dear Chris (称谓)
In a bid to deepen our understanding of Chinese traditional culture (活动目的), a lecture on traditional
Chinese medicine (活动) is scheduled to be held in the school hall (地点). I would like to invite you to participate
in it.
As scheduled, the lecture (活动) falls on this Saturday(具体日期), lasting from 8 p.m. to 11 p.m., (具体时
间点) , during which time a lecture given by an expert (活动内容) will be put on. He will narrate the
development history of traditional Chinese medicine and share some significant worldwide achievements with us.
(具体内容). As far as I can see, it can enrich your understanding of traditional Chinese medicine and make you
realize how much difference traditional Chinese culture has made in the present world. (重要意义).
Hopefully, you can spare time to join us. Should you have any question, please don’t hesitate to let me know.
May you have a good time!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua6. 高考真题
(1) 【2022年新高考1&2卷】
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。
内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk
and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when
having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished
foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole
Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline
写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：establish→set up
了不起的：amazing→fabulous
帮助：aid→assistance
许多：plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了where引
导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with
it.(运用了状语从句的省略)
(2) 【2022年6月北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交
流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；
2．交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Dear Jim.
How's everything?
I'm writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. Our classmates seem to be weak in
organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically,how to develop a
paragraph,and how to structure an essay?
The talk will be about an hour,and you can decide on a date at your convenience.Please let me know which
platform you'll be using It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of
your talk.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours.,
Li Hua
(3) 【2022年6月浙江卷】
假定你是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一
同体验，内容包括：
1.位置与开放时间； 2.室内设施和功能。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考答案】
Dear Michael,
Good news ! Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open
to us students in our school library.Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout
the weekdays. Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet.
It’s really convenient for us to do some group projects. Why not ask our group members to go and experience it?
Early reply and we can reserve one room for our project.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留
学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
由……组成：consist of→ be made up of
位于：be located on→ be situated on
与……相连接： be linked to →be connected to
预定：reserve→book
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us
students in our school library.
拓展句：Recently, a newly-furnished section, which consists of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us
students in our school library.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the
Internet.（of which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm
throughout the weekdays.（过去分词作状语）
(4) 【2020上海卷】
假如你是明启中学高三学生李华，前几日，你邀请你的好友王磊下周五去郊野公园一起欣赏露天
音乐会。面对天气恶劣、交通不便等原因，王磊一直犹豫不决。假如你是李华，请写一封信说服王磊
和你起参加。要求包括以下内容：1.解决王磊的困扰2.音乐会的重要性
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【参考答案】1
Dear Wang Lei,
It’s been a while since I heard from you. Last time, I invited you to attend the concert which will be
held next Friday in the century park. Though you did not reply to me, the hesitation wearing on your face
offered me a glimpse of what was going on in your mind. Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather or the
terrible traffic that hinder you from making up your mind. However, as far as I concerned, it’s still worth
our efforts.
This concert is not a pop music concert but a classic music one where several prestigious symphony
orchestras will perform many well-known compositions. It must be a feast for all the audience. Moreover,
chances are that we may have an album with performers’ autographs on it. You should never miss such a
fabulous concert!
In terms of difficulties you are worried about, I have already found some solutions. My father will be
available on that day so that he can drive us to the scene. I have managed to persuade him to make his
promise. In addition, in case of a rainy day, I have prepared two raincoats. I am confident that we will
indulge ourselves into the elegant flow of notes.
I am looking forward to hearing your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】2
Dear Wang Lei,How are you doing these days? You’ve been hesitated to go with me to the open-air concert in the
country park on Friday. It seems to me what’s holding you back is the terrible weather and the
inconvenient transportation, neither of which, in my opinion, is obstacles.
Firstly, there is no need to bother with things uncontrollable, such as the weather condition. We can
make plans ahead according to the weather forecasting. If you are not confident with it, we can plan for
both rainy day and sunny day.
Secondly, mobile navigation apps can help us choose the best way, saving us from the trouble of
worrying about the traffic conditions and the subways’ service time. Lastly, the most important thing is
that this concert is such a major event that you would regret if you didn’t come.
Besides, your favorite band will be performing! Wouldn’t it be amazing to see your idols face to face
and even get a chance to talk to them!
Hopefully you will take my suggestion into consideration. And I’m looking forward to hearing from
you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
(5) 【2020年1月浙江卷】
假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。
内容包括：
1.比赛时间；
2.演讲话题；
3.报名方式。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear George,
Knowing that you have a great passion for Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to participate in the
Chinese Speaking Competition organized by our school.
Scheduled to be held on January 20 in the school’s lecture hall, the competition focuses on the theme of
“first impression of China”. Undoubtedly, your fluent Chinese, excellent speaking skills, and especially profound
knowledge of China will never fail to impress the audience. So, if you’re interested, please sign up on the school’s
website before January 15.
Looking forward to your wonderful presentation.
Yours,
Li Hua
(6) 【2019年6月全国卷III】
假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：1. 时间；2. 活
动安排；3. 欢迎他表演节目。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Allen,
How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And
I’m writing to invite you to join us.The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be
various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which
will add color and fun to our festival.
Don't hesitate to ask me for help if you have any questions.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
(7) 【2019年浙江卷】
假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢； 2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；3. 临别祝愿。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to
you for your help.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional
guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank
first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out,
which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong
enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua(8) 【2019全国III】
假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：1. 时间；2. 活
动安排；3. 欢迎他表演节目。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考答案】
Dear Allen,
How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And
I’m writing to invite you to join us.
The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be
various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which
will add color and fun to our festival.
Don't hesitate to ask me for help if you have any questions.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
(9) 【2019年浙江卷】
假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢； 2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；3. 临别祝愿。
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【参考答案】
Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to
you for your help.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional
guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank
first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out,
which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong
enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
(10)【2018·天津卷】
假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器
人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能
竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。
（1）比赛的时间、地点；（2）邀请他的原因；（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。
注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【思路点拨】
本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解
意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章
显得更有档次。
【参考答案】
【满分范文】
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end
of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the
Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your
involvement will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools.
With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice because you are more
experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
二、感谢信
1. 布局（思维导图）首段 表达感激之情，简单陈述的原因
段落要点 正文 说明要感谢的事由或介绍一些的情况
结尾 再次表感谢及真诚祝福
2. 写作模板
模板①
Dear ________(对象),
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for________________________________(感谢的原因). If it had
not been for your assistance in________________________________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would
have been________________________________(没有对方帮助会产生的后果).
Everyone agrees that it was you who ________________________________(给出细节). Again, I would like
to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere thanks.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear ______,
How about your life/ study/ work? I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____(感谢的原因). If it had
not been your assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_____ (没有对方帮助时的
后果).During the ______, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First, you _____.What’s
more, you ______. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is _______. (原因)
Thanks a lot for your kindness again. (再次致谢)
Give my best regards to ______. (祝愿)
Yours sincerely
_______
感谢信是用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助、以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。信件不适宜过长，只
需写明感谢他人的理由，信文要感情真挚，措辞得体。
感谢信一般分为三个部分：
第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因；
第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助；
第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。
感谢信的写作指导
1.有序组织要点
首先，应当友善地对对方的生活表示关心；其次，应明确陈述写信的目的,即致谢；然后，应肯定对方的
帮助恰当好处；最后，应对对方给予的帮助再次表示感谢并表示良好的祝愿。
2.灵活把握时态
感谢信的正文中的时态灵活多变。通常，在提到对方曾经所给予的帮助时，应用过去时态；在提到对方
的帮助所产生的实际效果时，可以使用现在完成时态；在涉及到现状时，应用一般现在时；在表达祝愿或
希望时，使用一般将来时态。
3.运用规范的语言
感谢信有其自身的特色语言，在行文的每一个环节也有一些常用句型。另外表示从对方的帮助中获益
时，可以从多种句型表达，要让句式灵活多样，这样更能增强表达效果。
4.表达感激之情
感谢信的主要目的在于向对方致谢，因此语言要诚挚，友善；在信的开头和结尾部分一般会使用
Thank you very much for your kindness and deep concern或 Thanks again and wish you all the best之类的语言
表达感激之情。3. 必备词句
第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因：
常用句式
1．I am writing this letter to thank you for …
2．I am writing to express my sincere thanks for
3．I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt(adj. 衷心的) thanks to you for…
4．With deepest gratitude I write you this letter to express…
5．I am writing this letter because I am indebted to you for …
6．I am obliged(adj.感激的) to you for/I owe you a great deal for …
7．I haven't seen you for a long time since we parted last time and I miss you very much. Thank you very
much for
第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助：
常用句式
8．It was nice/kind/thoughtful (adj. 考虑周到的) of you to..
9．Thank you very much for your kind hospitality (n. 好客, 热情招待) and the honor you showed me during
my visit…
10．It was your kind help that … (强调句型)
11．If it had not been for your (help/guidance/ assistance), I wouldn’t have (won the prize)(虚拟语气)
12．=But for/Without your help, I wouldn't have done…
第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望：
常用句式
13．Thanks again for your generous help.
14．I appreciate it more than I can say.
15．My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description.
16．I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.
17．Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.
18．Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me.
19．Thank you so much for...非常感谢……
20．I would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart for...我由衷地感谢你……
21．I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude for... 写此信来表达我的诚挚谢意……22．I'm grateful to you for...因你……，我深表谢意。
23．I truly appreciate your...我真诚感谢你……
24．Words fail to convey my gratitude to you. 我对你的感激之情难以用言语表达。
25．I take the opportunity to express to you my deep appreciation for... 我借此机会向你表达我深深的谢
意……
26．It's kind and generous of you to do this for me and I do appreciate it more than I can say.你如此善良和
慷慨地帮助我，我不胜感激。
4. 写作实操
假如你是李华，在过去一周你在英国参加中学生文化交流活动，其间，一直住在你的英国好友Peter
家，现在已经回国，请你根据以下要点给他写一封感谢信。要点包括：
1.表达感激之情；
2.回忆各种收获；
3.发出邀请。
注意：词数100左右。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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【写作指导】
书面表达考查考生运用已有的知和技能来进行思想交流完成特定的交际任务的能力。本篇书面表达
所设置的情景是感谢在英国参加中学生文化交流活动期间Peter对你的帮助，为应用文中的感谢信，是书
面表达中常见的考查类型。写作时宜用第一人称，时态以过去时和将来时为主。感谢信的语言要真诚，感
谢的事由要具体。根据题干的要点提示本篇书面表达的正文部分可分三段来写：
第一段：开门见山,说明写信目的——表达谢意。
第二段：简述收获，表达谢意。准确明了地写出对方对自己的帮助或付出并表示感谢。
第三段：发出邀请。合乎礼节，情真意切。重申对对方的感激之情并希望给予回报。
【范文赏析】Dear Peter,
I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country, without which
I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much.
Guided by you, I had a chance to visit some places of interest in England and experience such unique culture
as well as beautiful scenery. Thanks to your generous help, I do believe that I have a better understanding of your
country and culture. What’s more, during the week, the comfortable room, delicious meals and especially your
friendly family made me feel at home.zx.x.k
I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness. I will show you around in China. I
am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作素材】
1.我写这封信是为了表达我对……的谢意/因……表达我对你的感激。
I’m writing to express my thanks for/convey my gratitude to you for
2.在信中我要为……向你表达我诚挚的谢意。
I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for
3.如果我有机会通过……报答你的好意，我会非常高兴。
I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by
【亮点点击】
正分三段来写，首段点明写作目的，此处用了感谢信的常用句式"I am writing to convey my gratitude
for....” 来开头，"without which..“这一非限制性定语从句的使用提升了文章的档次，彰显了作者深厚的写作
功底。
第二段简述Peter对自己的帮助，其中高级短语（文中加粗部分）以及非谓语动词Guided by you作状
语的运用，增强了表达效果。
▶正文尾段使用了感谢信的常用高级表达，其中动词repay的运用起到了画龙点睛的作用。
5. 仿写演练
假定你是李华，上周六你的英国好友Eric教你如何创建个人网站，你从中学到很多知识。 请你给他写
一封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示感谢；
2. 简述Eric给予你的帮助；
3. 希望向Eric学习更多相关知识。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
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______________________________________________________________________________________
【模板范文】
Dear Eric (称谓)
I am eagerly writing to extend my heartfelt gratitude to you for helping me create a personal website last
Saturday (感谢的原因). Undoubtedly，had it not been your assistance in furnishing me with professional
guidance (对方给予的具体帮助), I fear that I would not have created my own personal website (没有对方帮助
时的后果).
Whenever I encounter difficulties, not only did you explain it to me carefully and patiently, but you also
taught me the steps of creating a personal website in detail. Eventually, with your help, I made it ( 具体帮助事由 ) .
Again, no words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. Many thanks to you. I wish that I’ll learn
more relevant knowledge from you ( 表达祝愿或者回报意愿 ) .
Your sincerely,
Li Hua6. 高考真题
1．【2021年6月天津卷】
提纲类作文
假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母 亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝
贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一 个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：(1) 表示感谢并问候；
(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情；
(3) 你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。注意：
(1) 词数不少于100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；(3) 开头和结尾巳给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
Yours,Li Jin
【参考答案】
Dear Nancy,I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during
my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.
Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I'm going toTian
'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy the
elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid
development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people tojoin the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for
consultation. Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient.
Yours,Li Jin
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris
家，他母 亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一 个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：表示感谢并问候；计划与家人一起做的事情；你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该
专业做何准备。
【详解】1.词汇积累
照顾：take care of→look after
另外，此外：in addition→besides→what’s more雇佣：employ→hire
既然：now that→since
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句
原句：With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts
more and more people to join the Internet tide.拓展句：As the Internet industry develops rapidly，the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and
more people to join the Internet tide.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient. (运
用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. (运
用了now that引导的原因状语从句)
2．【2019年浙江卷】
假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢； 2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；3. 临别祝愿。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】
Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to
you for your help.Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional
guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank
first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out,
which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong
enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
3．【2017·北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制
作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：视频video
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【参考答案】Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated discussion, we agreed
on making a video to record our experiences at school. Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we
interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We
debated over what to put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect.
Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and
teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.
必背范文
Writting1
假如你是李华， 上周在英国参加了“中国学生文化交流周”活动，并住在 Kelly 家里。请你给在英
国期间认识的新朋友 Kelly 写封感谢信，内容包括：
1.交流活动中的收获；
2.难忘在 Kelly 家的美好日子；
3.感谢她送你的英文词典。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：文化交流周：Cultural Exchange Week
Dear Kelly,
I’ve been back home safely from England.____________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Kelly,I’ve been back home safely from England. Thank you for the warm help during my stay in England.Last week,
I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week for Chinese students. I enjoyed myself in your country. We visited the
city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society,
culture and history. Of course, I also made many new friends.
What’s more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. And I’ll never forget the days we spent together. Here
I especially thank you for the dictionary you offered me as a gift. It’s a great help for me to learn English well. I
will treasure and make full use of it.
Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you!
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
Writing 2
假如你叫李津，在英国学习期间，住在一户英国人家里，现在马上就要学成回国，临走前你给你的房
东Mrs. Jones写封感谢信，感谢她三个月来的悉心照顾。内容包括：
1.房东一家和蔼可亲，总是想办法让你快乐；
2.饭菜很合口；
3.利用周末带你聚会、野餐，玩得很开心；
4.经常与你交流，让你的口语表达取得很大进步。
注意：
1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mrs. Jones,
I am writing to express my thanks for the three happy months of my life I spent with you and your family.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________Gratefully yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Mrs. Jones,
I am writing to express my thanks for the three happy months of my life I spent with you and your family.
During the past time, you were so kind to me and you did everything possible to make me happy. You're such
an excellent cook that I could enjoy different meals every day. I really appreciate your taking your weekends off to
take me around and show me so many places. The parties, the picnics were so delightful that I can never thank you
enough. You are so helpful as to spare your time to communicate with me. I have made rapid progress in spoken
English with your help.
You may be sure that I will always continue to enjoy the days which I have just spent in your home.
Best wishes
Gratefully yours,
Li Jin
Writing 3
假定你是李华，现在是华南师范大学(South China Normal University)大一新生，你高三时在王老师的帮
助下，英语进步很大，为表示感谢，给王老师写一封感谢信。
要点如下：
1.梦想成真，考上理想大
2.因为王老师的辅导和鼓励，英语由差变好；
3.对老师表示祝福。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I’m writing to tell you a piece of good news and express my thanks for helping me improve my English.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Again, I sincerely thank you for your help!
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Wang,
I’m writing to tell you a piece of good news and express my thanks for helping me improve my English.
Now, I’m a freshman in South China Normal University. That’s all because of our careful guidance. Without
your help, I wouldn’t have made such great progress in English, let alone been admitted to a good university. So
I’m very grateful to you for that. I still remember the days when you taught me English in Grade 3 of senior school.
My English was once poor, but you were very patient with me and tried to tutor me after class. It was your help and
encouragement that made my dream come true.zx.x.k
From the bottom of my heart. I hope more and more of your students can go to their ideal colleges. Wish you a
healthy body and a happy life!
Again, I sincerely thank you for your help!
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 4
假如你是李华，最近在新加坡参加了一个国际交流活动。回国后，你决定给新结交的朋友John写一封
感谢信。内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.参加这个活动的收获；
3.邀请他方便时来中国。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
I am writing to express my gratitude to you____________________________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear John,
I am writing to express my gratitude to you while I was in Singapore. It was an unforgettable experience for
me and I have also benefited a lot from it.
While participating in the exchange program, I visited some high schools and famous tourist attractions in
Singapore, which broadened my horizons and enriched my knowledge. Besides, I made some new friends just like
you, who gave me lots of assistance. During my visit, I improved my English communication skills greatly because
I was totally exposed to an English-speaking environment.
Are you interested in Chinese culture? If you can come to China one day, I’ll be your tour guide and show you
around my city.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
三、推荐信
1. 考情分析
1.推荐物
推荐电影，书，歌曲，说明你喜欢的理由。
2.推荐人推荐历史人物，老师，主持人，学生会主席，受尊敬的人等，介绍人物，并说明你推荐的理由。
3.推荐事（行为）
推荐来中国旅游（景点，线路，特色）、来中国留学、过中国节日等，说明推荐理由。
2. 布局思维导图
3. 基本模板
模板①
Dear ______ ,
①It affords me much pleasure to recommend ______(要推荐的人)to you.②During his/her graduate years
he/she was my ______ . ③As his/her ______ I found him/her ______. (介绍与此人的关系)
④His/Her performance in the school years was outstanding. ⑤First, he/she had been and showed great talents
in ______ . ⑥In addition, he/she has a very pleasant personality. ⑦He/She has developed a strong sense of ______,
and working with him/her is always pleasant. ⑧I can state that he/she has all the qualities of being ______.(介绍此
人的能力)
⑨Therefore, I here recommend him/her to you with all my heart. ⑩Should you favor him/her with a position
in your company/Should you accept him/her in your university？I am sure that his/her future work will prove
worthy of your trust. I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming
模板②
Dear______,I take the pleasure in recommending to you __________(被推荐的人或物). I hope you will be interested in
_______（him/her）.
There are several reasons why I think ______ is a good choice. Firstly, _______(理由一). Secondly,
________（理由二）. Last but not least, ________（理由三）. In a word, _______（总结）. I would be most
grateful if you would like to consider my recommendation.
4. 必备词句
1. 词汇
能力：have a gift for, be skilled in, be experienced in, be an expert in, speak fluent English, creative, a boy
with great ability, efficient, intelligent, etc.
经历：graduate from, be a graduate from, major in, gain/win/get the first grade scholarship, get good grades,
an all-around student with excellent grades in, excellent grades in all subjects, be given the title of, gain/win the
first prize/place, win a gold/silver/copper medal, etc.
性格：outgoing, easy to get along with, enthusiastic, enthusiasm is part of his character, etc.
2. 经典句型
(1) He is an all-around student with excellent grades in all subjects. He has been given the title of the ＂
excellent student＂.
(2) As a boy with great potential, he is good at solving difficult problems.
(3) Li Ming, a graduate from Peking University, majors in computer software design.
(4) He has enjoyed the reputation/title of the Excellent Graduate.
3. 写作套路
开头：
(1) I am writing to recommend to you…
(2) I would like to recommend to you…
(3) It is a great honor for me to recommend to you…
(4) I take the pleasure in recommending to you…
4. 结尾：(1) If he can join your company, he will give full play to his talent. And your company will also be greatly
benefited. So I strongly recommend… to you.
(2) In a word, he would be a good choice. I would be grateful if you would like to consider my
recommendation.
(3) I hope you can give him a chance. I believe he will make a great contribution to your company.
(4) I hope that you would take my recommendation into consideration/account.
5. 写作实操技巧
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jimmy,由于COVID-19不得不宅在家里，所以他想利用这段时间学习汉
语， 想让你给他推荐一个汉语老师。请你给他写封回信,简单介绍一下你绐他推荐的情况。内容包括：
1. 表示关心；
2. 介绍汉语老师的情况。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【模板范文】
Dear Jimmy (称谓)In response to your request for a Chinese teacher (推荐事由), I would like to recommend a candidate, who
I think is the best suited for you (具体推荐事项). I recommend it mainly for the following three reasons.
Initially, he is open-minded and eager to communicate with people, especially from different backgrounds
(推荐理由一) . Aside from it, his major is Chinese, which guarantees you will get professional help (推荐理由二)
. Plus, he also wants to learn English (推荐理由三) . If you want details, please contact him at (联系方式) .
Your taking my recommendation into consideration will be highly expected.
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
6. 仿写演练
假定你是李华，你校美国交换生Peter打算在某小区租房子并向你求助。请根据以下提示给他回复邮
件。要点如下：
1.推荐某个小区；
2.说明推荐理由（至少三条）；
3.表明提供帮助的意愿。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【模板范文】
Dear Peter (称谓)In response to your request for renting a house (推荐事由), I would like to recommend a neighborhood
called Garden Community to you (具体推荐事项). I recommend it mainly for the following three reasons.
Initially, it is so convenient with an underground nearby that you can go anywhere as you like (推荐理由
一) . Additionally, it’s very beautiful, peaceful and clean to live in because of the wonderful service of the
Community Center (推荐理由二) . Plus, this Community is well-known for its high level of safety (推荐理由三)
. If you want details, please contact me (联系方式) .
Your taking my recommendation into consideration will be highly appreciated.
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
7. 高考真题
1. 【2021年6月浙江卷】
昨天你去学校参观了中国画的展览，请你为学校英语报写一篇宣传稿：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 你的感受；
3. 强烈推荐。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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【参考答案】
Dear editor,［活动的人物、时间、地点、目的］In order to better experience traditional Chinese culture, the
Students’ Union of our school organized a meaningful activity to visit an Chinese painting exhibition in the school
hall last weekend.
［活动详情］In the activity, the guide enthusiastically explained each piece in detail and introduced to us the
Chinese famous painters we admire most, such as Xu Beihong, Qi Baishi and so on. [活动感受] By participating
in the well-organized activities, I’ve benefited a great deal from them. Not only can I cultivate my
patience and imagination, but also I can get easier access to our excellent history and culture, which can
enrich my mind.
[表达推荐期望] To be honest, it will be a good chance for you to learn about traditional Chinese culture.
I strongly appeal to all the students in our school to make use of their spare time to taste these wonderful works
carefully!
Yours
Li Hua
（参考译文：为了更好地体验中国传统文化，上周末我校学生会组织了一次有意义的活动，参观了在
学校礼堂举行的国画展览。在活动中，导游热情给我们详细解释介绍给我们最敬佩的中国著名画家，如徐
悲鸿、齐白石等。通过参与组织很好的活动，我获益匪浅。它不仅可以培养我的耐心和想象力，而且我可
以更容易地接触到我们优秀的历史和文化，丰富我的思想。老实说,这将是一个好机会让你了解中国传统文
化。我强烈呼吁我们学校的所有学生利用他们的业余时间仔细品尝这些美妙的作品!
【名师导学】高级语块：better experience；meaningful；enthusiastically；piece；in detail；
participating in；benefited a great deal from； access to； enrich；To be honest；strongly appeal to；taste等。
高级句型：In order to，such as；and so on；which；Not only … but also …等。这篇参考范文结构严谨、
层次清晰：首先告知活动的人物、时间、地点、目的，其次简要地回顺了自己昨天观看学生国画作品展的
过程，最后写自己的感受和推荐观展；多用高级词汇、句型使得本范文结构严谨、行文流畅。
【参考答案】
As is known to all, Chinese painting is a crucial part of our traditional cultural; therefore, with great honor and
curiosity, I paid a visit to the Chinese painting display exhibited in our school lecture hall at 9 a.m. yesterday.
During my one hour and a half’s visit, I was fully exposed to a world of art. The visit includes three parts, first of
which is a brief introduction of the history of Chinese painting, traced back to 7000 years ago. In this part, many
works painted on pottery, ground and rock wall in pictures are shown. The second part is tool display. The basictools used are brush and ink and mineral pigments. At first, Chinese painting was painted on pottery, ground and
rock wall, and gradually developed into painting on wall, silk and paper. In the third part of this exhibition, many
paintings by famous arts are appreciated and discussed by students and teachers., Through this visit, I fall in love
with Chinese painting and I would like to recommend my fellow students to have an amazing experience to this art
show as well. And you won’t regret it.
【审题】
时态：昨天
人物：第一人称
题材：宣传稿
宣传稿的特点带有新闻稿的特点，都是要客观，公正，不要夸大其词，其次语言要诙谐，幽默，引起共
鸣，第三，可以运用数据增加可信度，增加宣传力度。
写作目的：为学校英语报写一篇宣传稿，宣传中国画的展览。
【考察点】
1. 记叙文部分（记叙昨天参观中国画的展览，客观叙述时间，地点，用过去时态），
2. 抒情议论部分（“我”的感受， 包括所见，所闻，所感，用过去时叙述参观的东西，一般现在时抒发
情感），
3. 终级目的：强烈推荐（推荐对象是谁？思维发散：对象就是中学生为主，因为是发表在校报的）
【难点】参观的内容需要展开合理想象。
补充信息：
中国的绘画史可以上溯到原始社会的新石器时代，距今至少有七千余年的历史。最初的中国绘画，
是画在陶器、地面、和岩壁上的，渐而发展到画在墙壁、绢、和纸上。使用的基本工具是毛笔和墨，以及
天然矿物质颜料。在无数画家不断探索、创新的努力之下，逐渐形成了...
The history of Chinese painting can be traced back to the Neolithic Age of primitive society, with a history of
at least 7000 years. At first, Chinese painting was painted on pottery, ground and rock wall, and gradually
developed into painting on wall, silk and paper. The basic tools used are brush and ink, as well as natural mineral
pigments. Under the efforts of innumerable painters' continuous exploration and innovation, it gradually formed
2. 【2021年6月上海卷作文】国外朋友Bill想学中文，有两种课程二选一，一个是听说，还有一个是读写。让你推荐一个，比较两
个课程，写出推荐的原因。
【解题】
题材：推荐信
人物关系：和外国朋友Bill
内容：1.Bill想学中文，听说课程和读写课程不知道选择哪一个，让你推荐一个。
2. 推荐一个适合Bill 的课程，写出推荐的原因。
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【参考答案】
Dear Bill,
It’s so great to learn from your last letter that you want to learn Chinese language. You mentioned that you
have two optional courses, one is listening and speaking in Chinese, the other is reading and writing in Chinese. But
you have no idea about which one to choose.
From my perspective, I’d like to recommend listening and speaking course, the reasons are as follows. For one
hand, only by speaking and listening can you keep practicing it and only by putting what you have learnt into use,
can you master Chinese as quickly as possible. For another, good listening and speaking ability will be of great help
for you to adapt yourself in class so that you can understand the teachers’ words and instructions. As for wiring and
reading, I think after you master a Chinese character’s pronunciation, you can try to write a diary in Chinese to
memorize its spelling.
In a word, be relaxed and if you have any problem in learning Chinese, I am willing to offer my help at any
time. Hope you make more progress in the future.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua3. 【2019年3月天津卷】
假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的 "读书月" 活动，你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以 "Let's Read"
为题的征文活动。要求同学根据个人的阅读体会，从所读过的书籍中选定一种类型，推荐给其他同学。现
请你投稿，文章内容应包括：
（1）推荐书籍的类型及特点；
（2）推荐的理由。
参考词汇：
科幻小说 science fiction 侦探小说 detective novel 魔幻小说 fantasy
传记文学 biography 科普读物 popular science
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围；
（3）内容充实，行文连贯；
（4）题目已给出，不计入总词数。
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【参考答案】
Let’s Read
Knowing that during “Reading Month” in our school English Society will hold an activity named “Let’s
Read” on Wechat, I’d like to share something about my own experience and feeling with all the students.
I have been crazy about reading since I was a child. My favorite type of book is always science fictions.
Science fiction is based on the latest technology and discovery and telling us a fantasy story that will possibly
happen in the future. In the past decades, science fiction has been more and more popular with teenagers.
Therefore, it has come into a new style and even a culture. While reading science fictions, I not only feel shockedand amazed about the unknown future made up by the author but also know more knowledge and information about
the development of science.
I’m sure every teenager will like science fiction and benefit from it! Looking forward to getting you to take
part in “Let’s Read”!
4. 【2018年6月北京卷（1）】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划
明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
1.表示欢迎；
2.推荐他上哪所大学；
3.建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：
1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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【参考答案】
Dear Jim,
I'm so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my
warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in
Beijing.Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best
universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in
Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance is needed like The Story of
the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese Language
environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it's my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day
comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
express my warmest welcome to you 表达我对你最温暖的欢迎
learning your keen interest in Chinese culture 知道你对中华文化炙热的爱
apply for Peking University 准备上北京大学
I sincerely hope your dream will come true 我真心希望你的梦想实现
5. 【2018·北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划
明年来北京上大他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
(1) 表示欢迎；
(2) 推荐他上哪所大
(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：(1). 词数不少于50；
(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Li Hua
【思路点拨】
本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大首先可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim
对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特
色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中国传统文
化的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人
称。
【满分范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my
warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in
Beijing.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day
comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
6. 【2018年3月天津卷】
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为Chris 的外国学生发的帖子，得知他有
意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给Chris 留言：
（1）鼓励他来中国留学；
（2）说明来华留学的好处（如：加深对中国的了解，对个人发展的益处等）；
（3）表示愿意进一步提供帮助。注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
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【参考答案】
Hi, Chris. I’ve learnt from your post that you’re considering whether to study in China. As a Chinese high
school student, I’d love to offer some suggestions to help you decide on this matter.
First of all, I would encourage you to choose a Chinese university. China is a nation with a long history and
diverse cultures, which I think you’ll be interested in. After four years of study, I believe, you would know a lot
about China. And with the degree you get and the Chinese language you pick up, you will probably find a good job
and have a bright future. Besides, Chinese people are friendly and kind. You’ll find it easy to make friends and
enjoy a happy and meaningful life here.
So, don’t hesitate. I’m willing to offer further help if you need.
7. 【2017·高考仿真卷】
假如你是李华，是新华中学的一名学生。你想在寒假找一份工作锻炼自己。请根据下面的招聘信息写
一封申请信，推荐自己。
Five English Tutors(家教) Wanted
Work during the winter vacation
At the SOS children’s village
Help Children with learning difficulty
If interested, send your letter of application(申请) to
sosvillage@163.com before December 30, 2016
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【范文赏析】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua High School. I know from the advertisement that five volunteers are
wanted at the SOS children’s village during the winter holidays. I am writing to recommend myself.
To begin with, I am doing well in my lessons, especially in English, and got the first prize in an English speech
contest last year. More importantly, I am willing to help others, so I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time.
By helping children with their lessons, I can gain some teaching experience and learn how to communicate with
others. My dream is to become a teacher in the future, so this is really a good chance for me to put my talent into
good use.zx.x.k
I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and give me a chance. Looking forward to
your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
8. 【2016年北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你
介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
1. 该人物是谁；
2. 该人物的主要贡献；
3. 该人物对你的影响。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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【参考答案】
Dear Jim,
It's great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history. As for my favourite figure in
Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi
（Maps and Records of the World）, introduced modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to
the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world.
Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.Cheers!
Yours,
Li Hua
必背范文
Writing 1
假如你是李华，你的美国笔友 Clifford打算在寒假时来中国做志愿者，但不知道自己该参加何种志愿
者工作，特写信向你求助，请你结合以下要点给他回信：
1.推荐适合他的志愿者工作；
2.推荐的原因；
3.可能的收获。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【写作指导】本题要求给美国笔友Clifford写一封回信,向他推荐适合他的志愿者工作并说明推荐原因及他可能会获
得的收获。话题贴近考生的日常生活，给了考生自由发挥的空间。基本时态应该为一般现在时，人称应以
第二人称为主。
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【参考范文】
Dear Clifford,
Nice to receive your letter telling me your plan for the winter vacation. And I’m really willing to give you
some advice.
In my community, there is a youth club helping students to study English, where voluntary workers are in
great demand. Given that you can speak both Chinese and fluent English and you are outgoing, sociable and
responsible, it could be a good choice for you. In addition, you can not only improve your Chinese but also deepen
your understanding of China and its culture.
Hope my advice will be helpful for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】范文要点齐全，层次分明，结构完整，时态正确，用词精准，语言流畅，出色地完成了写作
任务。值得一提的是，范文灵活地使用了较多的亮点词汇和高级句式，给范文增色不少。
亮点词汇：be in great demand, sociable, in addition, deepen, understanding等；
高级句式：where引导的非限制性定语从句(where voluntary workers are in great demand),given that引导的原
因状语从句(Given that responsible)等。
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假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack热爱中国的传统文化，想去文化底蕴深厚的城市旅游。请你给他写
封电子邮件，推荐一些他可能感兴趣的景点。内容包括:
1.推荐地点；
2.推荐原因。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【写作指导】
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
I’m more than pleased to learn that you’re coming to China for a visit. And I’ll recommend some historic
places.
The first city you can’t miss is, of course, Beijing. There’re many imperial gardens in Beijing, of which the
Summer Palace is the most famous. Besides, the city of Hangzhou, known for its historic relics and natural beauty,
will never fail to attract you with its West Lake, near which are scenic places such as Leifeng Pagoda and Lingyin
Temple. Other historic cities are Xi’an, Kaifeng and so on.
Best,
Li Hua
【名师点评】1.本篇范文内容精练，表达准确,思路清晰，布局合理,要点齐全。2.使用了较多的亮点词汇(如
more than pleased, recommend, fail to, scenic等)和高级句式(如that引导的宾语从句，of which和near which
引导的定语从句，倒装句等),很好地完成了写作任务，也增添了文章的亮点。
Writing3
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书， 现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科
普类图书（popular science books）和文学类图书（literary books）。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100
—120词的信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。注意：信的开头与落款已给出（不计入总词数）。
Dear Mr. Wang,
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Yours sincerely
Li Yue
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Wang,
Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.
What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of
nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity
about scientific discoveries.
In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another
category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating
stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.
I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Yue
【试题分析】根据提示你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100—120词的信，可知这里应该是考生比较熟悉的
书信格式。 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书， 现向学生征求意见。先写这个内容来引出你要提出的建议。
在写推荐的两类书时，要写出为什么要推荐这些书。
Writing4
假如你是学生会主席张凡，学校安排你给即将到你校任教的外籍教师Snow推荐(recommend)一名学生
帮手(assistant) 。请根据以下要点给他写封推荐信。1.欢迎Snow的到来；
2.推荐李华为学生帮手(高一年级学生，16岁)；
3.介绍李华当帮手的优势(电脑，沟通能力，英语水平)。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．不要逐句翻译，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．信件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Snow,
I’m Zhang Fan, chairman of the Students Union.
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Yours sincerely,
Zhang Fan
【参考范文】
Dear Snow,
I’m Zhang Fan, chairman of the Students’ Union. It’s great to learn that you are coming to teach in our school
next term.
I was asked to write to you, recommending Li Hua, a Senior 1 student, aged 16, to be your assistant. He(She)is
a diligent student, who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. What’s more,
he (she) is expert at spoken English and always ready to help others in need. I am confident that he (she) can be
helpful in your work and life in China. If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to ask me.
Looking forward to your coming soon.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Fan
Writing5假如你叫王兰，你从China Daily上看到一个旅游公司招聘导游的广告，你想向公司推荐你的同学林
萍，请你用英语向这个公司写一封推荐信，信的内容包括以下几方面：
1.林萍，女，即将从湖南大学毕业。讲流利的普通话，英语好，曾获得英语比赛一等奖。了解中国的
很多名胜古迹。信箱:太原大同路998号。电话: 8483628。
2.表达你个人的愿望。
注意：
1.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.词数100左右。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I learned from China Daily the other day that your company needs a travel guide and I’d like to
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Hope for your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Lan
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I learned from China Daily the other day that your company needs a travel guide and I’d like to recommend
my classmate to you, Lin Ping, who is going to apply for a position in your company.
She will graduate from Hunan University in a month. She is easygoing and she enjoys working with people.
She is a delightful and helpful student who always gives a hand to those in trouble. She can speak standard Chinese
and what makes her more excellent is that she can also speak English fluently. She once won first prize of the
English competition in our university. She is very interested in traveling and has a good knowledge of many places
of interest in China. I think she is suitable for the job. If you can let her have this chance, I think she will try her
best to do it well. You can connect her by posting a letter to Post Office Box 998, Datong Road, Taiyuan or dial this
number 8483628.Hope for your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Lan
Writing6
假定你是李华，想申请参加2017全球青年峰会(Global Youth Summit)。你写信请外教Mr. Smith帮你写
一封推荐信，介绍你的英语能力、个性特点等，并于7月5日前发到gys2017@GYLeadership. org。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【必背范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Li Hua from your class. I'm writing to ask whether you could possibly write me a recommendation letter.
I am applying to participate in the 2017 Global Youth Summit, which requires me to provide a recommendation
from my English teacher. Could you please comment on my English competence, class performance as well as my
personality? You can refer to my statement attached to this 1etter. If it is convenient to you would you be kind
enough to send it to gys2017@GYLeadership. org by July 5th?I sincerely hope you can spare some time from your
busy schedule to do me the favor.
Thank you for your kindness.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
Writing7
假定你是李华，听闻国外某网站要在全球范围内评选 ＂The Most Qualified Student＂(最美中学生)，请
你用英语给该网站写一封推荐信。内容包括：1.介绍被推荐人(林扬)的基本信息；
2.说明推荐理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【必背范文】
Dear Editor,
I’m a senior high school student and I happened to hear that your website was hosting an activity to select The
Most Qualified Student. It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends, Lin Yang.
First of all, he, who is among the most diligent students in our school, not only studies hard, but also behaves
well. Secondly, he stands out for his diverse hobbies, including painting and playing the violin. Last but not least,
he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need.
Therefore, I here recommend him to you with all my heart and I look forward to hearing from you at the
earliest possible moment.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing8
假设你是李华，你的美国网友Tom写信给你，表示里约奥运会上＂飞鱼＂菲尔普斯(Michael Phelps)背
上拔火罐留下的印迹使得他对中医产生兴趣，想来中国学习中医。请你根据以下提示给他回信：1.介绍中医文化；
2.推荐一所中医学校；
3.推荐该校的原因。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中医 traditional Chinese medicine；诊断的diagnostic
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【必背范文】
Dear Tom,
I am glad to hear from you. Traditional Chinese medicine is an important part of Chinese culture and has a
long history. With its unique diagnostic methods and remarkable effects, it is being used to treat people all around
the world, for example Michael Phelps. If you want to learn it, I recommend Beijing University of Chinese
Medicine, because it is a first-class traditional Chinese medical higher learning institution and has established itself
as a leader in the field of traditional Chinese medicine education.
Looking forward to seeing you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】本文考查的是应用文中书信的写作。内容要点包括：1.介绍中医文化，如其悠久的历史；2.
推荐一所中医学校给Tom；3.推荐该校的原因。注意时态和人称的正确使用，以及所阐述理由的充分性。
根据所给提示信息可知，本文的时态应以一般现在时为主；人称以第一人称为主。同时，为了提高作文的
档次，可适当使用高级句式。
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