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专题 23 书信类 02（告知信、建议信、道歉信）（原卷版）
书信类写作包括邀请信、感谢信、推荐信、求职信、祝贺信、告知信、求助信、建议信、道歉信、咨
询信以及慰问信等类别。
以下对告知信、咨询信、道歉信类别提供对应的模板和基本写作技巧。
四、告知信
1. 布局思维导图
首段 告知内容（原因、背景等）
段落要点 正文 告知具体事宜（时间、地点等）
结尾 表达期待愿望
2. 基本模板
写作模板①
Dear ______ (称谓)
Aware of your enthusiasm for /Delighted to learn that ______(活动主题、你对主题的兴趣), I’m writing to
extend my ______(看法、关心、欢迎等) and inform you of some relevant information.
______(活动信息). To begin with, ______(要点一). Furthermore, ______(要点二). To sum up, ______(要点
三).
I highly expect the experience to be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
写作模板②Dear ________，
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________，and I will try to make some conducive
suggestions here.
In my humble (谦虚的)opinion，you would be wise to take the following actions：________________(建议
的内容)．
I hope you will find these proposals useful，and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further
details.
Good luck with your________________ (祝愿)．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
3. 高频词句
【常用词汇】
1.inform sb. of sth. 告知某人某事
2.introduce sth.to sb. 向某人介绍某物
3.provide some information for sb. 为某人提供一些信息
4.work out my schedule 制订我的计划
5.as follows 列举如下
6.show sb. around... 带领某人参观某处
7.have a try 试试看，尝试一下
8.sign up for.. 报名参加
9.wok as/serve as/act as. 任……职，当……
10.mean/intend to do sth. 打算做某事
11.spare some time to do sth. 抽出时间做某事
12.take a course 参加一门课程
13.pay a visit to..… 去参观
14.make a difference 有影响；起（重要）作用
15.hesitate to do sth. 犹豫，有所顾虑
16.be scheduled at/on... 被安排在
17.make preparations for.. 为……准备
18.make an arrangement for sth. 为……做安排19.be intended to sth. 打算，意图
【常用句型】
1. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.
2. You are supposed/expected to …
3. You should/ You’d better …
4. There will be a lecture on ….
5. The lecture will last 3 hours. / The lecture will begin at … and end at …
6. Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you.
7. Please get there on time. / Please get everything ready ahead of time.
8. Don’t miss the chance. /Don’t be late.
9. Everyone is welcome to ……
10. I sincerely invite you to…
11. I am writing to express my views concerning... 我写此信来表达我关于……的观点。
12. You have asked me for my advice about...，and I will try to make some conducive suggestions. 对于你来信问我
关于……的事，现提供几条有益的建议。
13. I would like to suggest that... 我建议……
14. Why not.../ Why don't you...？为何不……？
15. I think it will be a good idea/more beneficial if you could... 我认为……是个好办法/有利的。
16. It's important to.../ It helps to...It should be a good idea to... 很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。
17. I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning... 我提出几条有关于……的建议。
18. Please take good consideration of my advice.Thanks. 请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。
19. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations helpful/useful. 希望这些建议对你有帮助。
20. Thank you for your attention.感谢你对此事的关注。
4. 写作实操技巧
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，
内容包括：
1．比赛信息；
2．赛前准备；3．表达期待。
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Dear Chris (称谓)
Delighted to learn that an important volleyball game will be launched in our school stadium (活动主题、你
对主题的兴趣), I’m writing to extend my excitement (看法、关心、欢迎等) and inform you of some relevant
information..
First and foremost, the competition to be held will begin at 2 P.M. and last for roughly 3 hours (活动信息).
Preparations should be made in advance, ranging from doing regular exercise, keeping positive attitude to
presenting yourselves ahead of time (要点一). Furthermore, it is necessary for you to take a good rest, which will
provide enough energy for you (要点二). To sum up, I wish that with joint efforts and excellent teamwork, we
could live up to the expectations of our school (要点三).
I highly expect the experience to be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
5. 仿写演练
假定你是学生会主席李华，你校的交换生Bob已学习中国象棋长达一年，特发邮件向你询问将由学生
会举办的中国象棋大赛的情况。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1．举办比赛的目的；
2．比赛的时间和地点；
3．建议他报名参加并说明理由。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中国象棋大赛Chinese Chess Contest______________________________________________________________________________________
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Dear Chris (称谓)
Aware of your enthusiasm for the Chinese Chess Contest to be held by the Students' Union (活动主题、你
对主题的兴趣), I’m writing to extend my opinion (看法、关心、欢迎等) and inform you of some relevant
information..
First and foremost, Aimed at raising students' awareness of traditional Chinese culture and developing
students' love for Chinese chess, the contest will be held at the Student Center on September 8 th (活动信息). Since
you have learned to play Chinese chess for a year, I suggest that you should participate in the contest (要点一).
Furthermore, I am convinced that your participation will surely make a difference (要点二). To sum up, through
the contest, not only can you improve your skills of playing Chinese chess but also you can make friends with other
excellent players (要点三).
I highly expect the experience to be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
6. 高考真题
1．【2022年1月浙江卷】
假定你是李华，在“中国一爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国，请你给他写一
封邮件，内容包括：
1．回忆活动经历；
2．分享个人收获；
3．希望保持联系。注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．【2019·天津卷】
假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教
师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一
封电子邮件：
（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
（3）希望从中有何收获。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Jim，a student at Chenguang High School.
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Thank you for your time.
Yours，Li Jin
3．【2019年1月广东卷（春考）】
你是李华，就读于国同学校。你写信给《英文早报》的编辑Bob，希望结识一位来自英语国家的笔友（pen
pal），以便相互学习对方的语言和文化：你容易相处，熟悉中国历史，喜欢中国传统音乐。
内容要点：
1. 写信目的；
2. 自我介绍；
3. 表示感谢。
注意 : 1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不算词数；
3. 可以适当增加细节，并将开头型结尾抄写在答题卡上，以使行文连贯。
Dear bob,
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
4．【2019年新课标全国卷II】
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：
1.比赛信息； 2.赛前准备； 3.表达期待。
注意:
词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．【2018·全国卷1】
假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，
内容包括：
1．到达时间；2．合适的礼物；3．餐桌礼仪。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．【2017·全国卷1】
假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：
（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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7．【2017·天津卷】
假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提
示给她回复一封邮件。
（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；
（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天
津等）；
（3）希望她有机会重访天津。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：第十三届全运会 the 13th National Games
Dear Mrs. Green,
I’m glad to hear from you. _________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Jin
五、建议信
1. 考情分析
1、学习类：给图书馆建议，提高服务质量；给选修课提建议；给读书节提建议
2、环境保护类：给相关部门或报纸提建议①限制使用白色塑料袋，②节约食物 ③合理使用共享单车。3、文化自信类（★★★★★）：外国留学生，来你们学校学习，给他们的学习生活或学习中文提建议。
4、身心健康：给校长写信，关于提高学生身心健康：身体健康，减压等。
2. 布局思维导图
首段 写信目的
段落要点 正文 提出建议、说明原因
结尾 表达期望和祝愿
3. 基本模板
写作模板①
Dear ______ (称谓)
You can’t imagine how ______(情感) I am hearing about ______(写信的原因). I’m more than glad to
offer my advice for your reference.
Firstly, you are supposed to ______ (建议一) . Additionally(For one reason), it makes sense to ______ (建议
二/理由一) . Moreover（For another reason）, ______ (建议三/理由二)is also a good choice . Do bear in mind
that （Therefore）______ (建议四/理由三)
I am fully convinced that use the tips above and we will______ (以上建议的好处) . I would appreciate it if
you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua写作模板②
Dear________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive
suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further
details.
Good luck with your________________(祝愿).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
写作模板③
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主
题).
Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to
___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)
As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议).
I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hope ____________(表达愿望)。
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
1. 建议信写作注意事项
建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
2. 写作方法
① 首段：
a. 简介自己，不要罗嗦；
b. 说明目的，注意语气。
② 主体：
a. 提出具体建议；b. 首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则会变成投诉信；
c. 经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文。
③尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，使对方易于接受。
3. 写作流程图
说明写信目的
介绍详情、说明原因
提出建议
提出希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复
4. 必备词句
(1) I am writing to express my views concerning... 我写此信来表达我关于……的观点。
(2) You have asked me for my advice about...，and I will try to make some conducive suggestions. 对于你来信问我
关于……的事，现提供几条有益的建议。
(3) I would like to suggest that... 我建议……
(4) Why not.../ Why don't you...？为何不……？
(5) I think it will be a good idea/more beneficial if you could... 我认为……是个好办法/有利的。
(6) It's important to.../ It helps to...It should be a good idea to... 很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。
(7) I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning... 我提出几条有关于……的建议。
(8) Please take good consideration of my advice.Thanks. 请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。
(9) I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations helpful/useful. 希望这些建议对你有帮助。
(10) Thank you for your attention.感谢你对此事的关注。
【必背词句】
第一部分：说明写信的目的
套语：1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps
the following suggestions are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following
suggestions are helpful to you.
我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients
（顾客）.
我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。
4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions
here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few
suggestions.
很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。
6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English
well in high school.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。
第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因
套语：
(1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their
speeches.
(2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。
We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.
(3) 下午，我们会一起……
During the afternoon, we’lltogether.
(4) 记得带上水和午餐。
Remember to take water and lunch with you.
(5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club.
(6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。
I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite
you to be part of the contest.
(7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。
Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
(8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
第三部分：提出建议
套语：
我建议……
1．I’d like to suggest that…
2．May I suggest that…?
3．In my opinion…
4．I would like to make a recommendation that…
5．I am writing to advise…
6．If I were you, I would…
第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复
套语：
1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never
say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。
3. Best wishes!
（给你）最美好的祝愿！
4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your
studies/work！
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。
6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
5. 写作实操技巧
假如你是李华，你的外教Mr Geller计划让8岁的女儿在中国学习一门传统艺术作为兴趣培养，正在书
法、剪纸与象棋中选择，写邮件寻求你的看法和学习建议。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐内容及简要原因；
2.切实可行的学习建议；
3.祝福与希望。
注意：1．词数：80词左右；
2．内容应包括以上要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
参考词汇：书法：calligraphy 剪纸：paper-cutting 象棋：Chinese chess
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Dear ______ (称谓)
You can’t imagine how overjoyed (情感) I am hearing about your plan (写信的原因). I’m more than glad
to offer my advice for your reference.Firstly, you are supposed to choose Chinese calligraphy because it’s a natural combination of beauty,
strength, history and technique (建议一) . Additionally, aiming at learning it well, it makes sense to devote
himself/ herself to long hours of practice (建议二) . Moreover, signing up for a calligraphy course (建议三)is
also a good choice, which would help her study in a systematic way . Do bear in mind that it’d also be beneficial
to study and imitate the works of famous calligraphers (建议四)
I am fully convinced that use the tips above and you will gain benefit (以上建议的好处) . I would appreciate
it if you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
6. 仿写演练
假定你是李华，你朋友张帅在美国学习，你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业，前不久, 他来信就
是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信。
1.建议他回国。
2.你的理由是国内形势好、学有所用、就业机会多、便于照顾父母、报效祖国等。
注意：1.词数80左右：
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Zhangshuai (称谓)You can’t imagine how overjoyed (情感) I am hearing about you are going to graduate (写信的原因). I’m
more than glad to offer my advice for your reference.
In my opinion, you are supposed to come back after you finish your studies abroad (建议) . For one reason,
what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China and it will be quite easy for you to find a good job (理由
一) . For another reason, it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old
(理由二). Therefore，it's a good idea for you to return. (总结)
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
7. 高考真题
(1) 【2022年全国乙卷】
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一
篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 学习活动状况描述：
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【参考范文】
Learning English Beyond the ClassroomNowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are
choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching
English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English
learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English
books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s
urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to
strengthen the guidance.
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文给学校英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择：choose → select
提高：improve → strengthen
各种各样的：various → diverse
就我而言：as far as I’m concerned → from my perspective
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students
are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways.
拓展句：Nowadays, because smartphones and computers are becoming more and more popular, an increasing
number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English
songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以
及who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】It's urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline (运用了it作形式主语，to
improve their self-discipline为真正的主语)
(2) 【2021年6月全国乙卷】
你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以 Be smart online learner 写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括：
1. 分析优势及不足；
2. 提出学习建议。
注意：
1. 词数100词左右；
2. 题目和首句以为你写好。
【参考范文】
Be smart online learners
Just like the old saying goes, "each coin has two sides." On the one hand, providing an easy access to plenty
of excellent learning sources, online learning is really a helping hand. On the other hand, what we learn online isn't
necessarily what we need, not to mention its constant damage to our eyes.
For me, online learning is, after all, just a tool. It's not the new method itself but the person who use it that
really matters. To become a smart online learner, not only should we carefully choose from countless alternatives
we may face, but extra attention needs to be attached when we take lessons online. What's more, on condition that
we could apply what we learn online to our daily life, online learning would be more meaningful.
Thanks, everyone. Hope we all could be smart online learners.
【解析】
本篇书面表达是演讲稿，一种常见的应用文，与去年英语作文比赛稍有差别。英语书面表达近几年
来稳中求变，在测试考生的英语表达能力，看其是否能够运用学过的英语知识和掌握的技能，进行思想交
流的同时，注重文体变化，突出实用性，更考查学生能否利用所学语言知识、文化知识等，根据不同目的
和受众，通过书面形式创新语篇。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。
作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如非谓语动词：providing an easy access to plenty of excellent learning
sources, online learning is really a helping hand.；名词性从句：what we learn online isn't necessarily what we
need, not to mention its constant damage to our eyes. 倒装：To become a smart online learner, not only should we
carefully choose from countless alternatives we may face, but extra attention needs to be attached when we take
lessons online.；状语从句：on condition that we could apply what we learn online to our daily life, online
learning would be more meaningful.等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。
(3) 【2019年6月天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英
方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给 Chris
写一封电子邮件：
（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
（3）希望从中有何收获。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School.
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High school. Hearing that you will be sent to our school to participate in a
one-week communication activity on behalf of our partner-school, I feel excited to give some advice on the speech
about western art, which will be given by you. Here are some of my suggestions.
From my perspective, among all the themes on western culture like music, drawing and dancing, I would like
to have a better understanding of music, for a great number of my classmates are fond of music. To enhance our
knowledge, I would appreciate it if you add some information about the history and development of western music.
In addition, some excellent works of music and the introduction of several distinguished musicians would be a good
way to broaden our horizon.
Anyway, I can't wait to meet you from the bottom of my heart!
Thank you for your time!
Yours,
Li Jin本篇写作为应用文体，书信类的建议信。
第一步：审题。
（1）判断时态与写作主语：时态为一般现在时为主，人称第一人称。
（2）根据细节判断文章段落：三段式：开头寒喧说明理由（需要补充），中间发展说明具体事项，结束
表达感谢或祝福（已给出）。
第二步：细节补充：
第一段：说明写信目的：根据题目提示，说明写信背景（友好校活动以及老师讲座），点名主题（关于讲
座给出建议）。
第二段：针对写作细节详细介绍：从三个话题中做出选择，并说明选择的理由。补充想要了解的内容（建
议1-2点）。
第三段：表达见面的期望并感谢阅信。（由于最后一段文章已给提示为感谢，可考虑将期望放到第二段结
尾）。
最后，整洁的卷面是写作获得良好印象分的关键，记得用心誊抄哦。
(4) 【2019北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询
问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:
1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。
注意:
1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Li Hua【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m pleased that you’re coming to tour in China.
I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you
can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities. Summer in these
cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.
Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
(5) 【2019·天津卷】
假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教
师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一
封电子邮件:
（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
（3）希望从中有何收获。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100：
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Jim，a student at Chenguang High School.
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Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. I got the news that your school will send teachers to my
school for a week-long summer exchange. During the activity，you will give a lecture on Western art. You want to
seek for advice on what topic the lecture will be about. From my personal note，music is my priority.
I am interested in all kinds of music，among which Jazz is my favorite. I want to know about the history of
jazz，and some famous jazz singers. I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz.
Thank you for your time.
Yours，
Li Jin
(6) 【2018全国卷I】
假如你是李华, 你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客, 发邮件向你询问有关习俗, 请你回复邮件,
内容包括：
到达时间； 2.合适的礼物； 3.餐桌礼仪
注意：1.词数不少于80；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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Dear Terry,
How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and feel confused about the
Chinese customs, I am writing to offer you some advice.
To begin with, I would like to suggest that you should arrive on time, because it is impolite to be late in
Chinese traditional culture. In addition, it is a good idea to bring some appropriate gifts, such as a bunch of flowersor a box of Chocolates. Last but not least, you are supposed to pay attention to table manners when enjoying the
meal. For example, you should avoid-making noise while chewing the food or sticking your chopsticks into your
food.
I sincerely hope that my suggestions would be helpful/beneficial/be of benefit to you. I am sure you will have
a great time.
Yours,
Li Hua
(7) 【2018年6月北京卷（1）】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年
来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
(1) 表示欢迎；
(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；
(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：(1). 词数不少于50；
(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【思路点拨】
本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信,为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍一下写作背景
( Jitm
对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习),表达欢迎。然后推荐一-所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因(如大学的特
色，可以学到什么等)。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习次语，读点有关中国传统文化的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人
称。
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my
warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in
Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best
universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in
Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of
the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language
environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day
comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
(8) 【2017·北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年
来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
(1) 表示欢迎；
(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；
(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：
(1) . 词数不少于50；
(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,____________________________________________________________________________________________
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Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my
warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in
Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best
universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in
Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of
the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language
environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day
comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
(9) 【2017·北京卷】
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之
旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝
愿。
注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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Dear Jim,
I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the
tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot
about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-
known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
六、道歉信
1. 考情分析
①活动没有去参加（道歉时，活动已经结束）；
②活动不能去参加（道歉时，活动还没有开始）；
③给别人造成了损失：如把对方东西弄丢；把车给损坏了；
④答应的事情（或任务）没有按时完成等。
2. 布局思维导图首段 表表示歉意，道歉的原由
段落要点 正文 解释原因，提出弥补措施；
结尾 再次请求原谅。
3. 基本模板
写作模板①
Dear ______ (称谓)
I 'm terribly sorry to inform you that ______(写信事由). Thus, I am writing to apologize for not keeping my
word. Something unexpected happened and ______(失约理由) .
Shall we fix another time? I’ll be available any time after______(补救办法). Will ______(另约时间) suits
your convenience? If it’s ok, let’s meet at ______(见面地点). If not, let me know what time suits you best. I hope
the adjustment won’t put you into much trouble.
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
写作模板②
Dear ________(对象),
I am truly sorry that ___________________________________(道歉的原因).The reason is that ______________________________________(介绍原因).
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my appologies and understand my
situation.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming
写作模板③
Dear ________,
I am excessively sorry to say/tell you that ①______________ (直接表达自己不能实现先前的愿望或约定).
②Now, I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret__________ (表达歉意). ③Please accept my
sincere apology__________(诚恳希望对方能接受道歉). ④I fear you are displeased at _________(表达出自己的
心情，并请求对方原谅).⑤I hope you will understand me and excuse me for__________(过渡句). ⑥Let me
explain(开始介绍道歉的原因). ⑦The reason for my delay/absence was that _________(阐述自己当时的处境和
情况). ⑧I had no way out because ___________ (总结自己道歉的原因). ⑨Therefore it’s not in my power to
___________(希望下次再次实现愿望). ⑩Naturally, I want to suggest ____________. I shall be glad if you will
kindly write and tell me when and where you____________(约定下次约会的时间和地点)
We may meet again and I hope to see you soon.
Sincerely Yours,
Li Hua
写好道歉信的关键在于措辞要朴实、委婉，语气要诚恳、真挚，解释要详细明了。例如＂I’m
excessively sorry＂、＂sincere apology＂、＂deep regret＂等都是致歉之词，这就恰如其分地表达了写信人
的真诚歉意。
道歉信通常包括三部分内容：
1.表示歉意，道歉的原由；
2.出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施；
3.请求原谅。语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实。
4.补充说明。客套话。
好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增进彼此的感情。4. 必备词句
1) I would like to express my apology for... 对于……，我想要表达我的歉意。
2) Will you be good enough to excuse me for.../Excuse me for... 请原谅我……
3) Please accept my sincerest and deepest apology for... 请接受我最真诚的致歉……
4) I'm terribly sorry to tell you that.../ I regret to inform you that...很抱歉地告诉你……
5) I write to you to express my deep regret. 我写此信向你表示深深的懊悔。
6) I am writing to apologize to you for... 我写信向你致歉，因为……
7) Would you mind if I...？你是否介意如果我……？
8) To make up my thoughtless behavior，I...为了弥补我欠考虑的行为，我……
9) I wish I could be given a chance to make up for my inconsideration. 我希望你能给我一个机会来弥补我的考虑
不周。
10) I would like to express my apology for... 对于……，我想要表达我的歉意。
11) Will you be good enough to excuse me for.../Excuse me for... 请原谅我……
12) Please accept my sincerest and deepest apology for... 请接受我最真诚的致歉……
13) I'm terribly sorry to tell you that.../ I regret to inform you that...很抱歉地告诉你……
14) I write to you to express my deep regret. 我写此信向你表示深深的懊悔。
15) I am writing to apologize to you for... 我写信向你致歉，因为……
16) Would you mind if I...？你是否介意如果我……？
17) To make up my thoughtless behavior，I...为了弥补我欠考虑的行为，我……
18) I wish I could be given a chance to make up for my inconsideration. 我希望你能给我一个机会来弥补我的考虑
不周。
【必背词句】
1. 道歉信中开头段常用句式和套话
(1) I am writing this letter to express my regret…我写这封信是想表达我的遗憾……
(2) I am writing to apologize for…我写信是为……道歉。
(3) I would like to give you my apology for…我想……向你道歉。
(4) I am very sorry to say that…我很抱歉……
(5) I must apologize about (not) doing sth…对于做了/没做……，我必须道歉。(6) Please accept my sincere apology for…请接受我对于的真诚道歉。
(7) I am writing to say sorry for…我写信是想对……说抱歉。
(8) I am terribly sorry, but…我很抱歉，但是……
2.道歉信中结尾段常用句式和套话
(9) Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.我对于所造成的任何不便再次道歉。
(10) Please allow me to say sorry again.请允许我再一次说抱歉。
(11) Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.希望你们能够接受我的道歉，理解我的处境。
(12) I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.我真诚的希望你能够站在
我的位置想一想，并且接受我的道歉。
(13) I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.我想让你知道我现在感觉多么的遗憾。
(14) I am sorry that I can’t… but trust that you will be able to understand.很抱歉我不能……，但我相信，你会理解
的。
5. 写作实操技巧
假定你是李华，你和外教MrSmith本来约好去看在你们所在城市举行的国际摄影展，但你因故不能赴
约。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括:
1.表示歉意；
2. 解释原因；
3.补救措施。
注意:1. 词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear MrSmith (称谓)
I 'm terribly sorry to inform you that I can' t accompany you to the International Photography Festival held
this Saturday (写信事由). Thus, I am writing to apologize for not keeping my word. Something unexpected
happened and my parents have to go outside of the city this Saturday, so I have to stay at home and take care of my
little brother (失约理由) .
Shall we fix another time? I’ll be available any time after this Saturday(补救办法). Will this Sunday(另约时
间) suits your convenience? If it’s ok, let’s meet at our school gate at 8 a.m .(见面地点). If not, let me know what
time suits you best. I hope the adjustment won’t put you into much trouble.
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
6. 仿写演练
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友David本周六即将结束在中国的旅行，乘飞机返回英国，你因有事无法
按原定计划取机场为他送行，只好写信向他道歉，内容如下:
1.表达歉意；2.说明不能送行的原因。
注意:
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear David (称谓)
I 'm terribly sorry to inform you that I cannot make it to see you off at the airport this Saturday as promised
(写信事由). Thus, I am writing to apologize for not keeping my word. Something unexpected happened and I
have to help make preparations for the English Speaking Contest to be held this weekend. Actually, I have just been
informed of this plan by the schoolmaster. Moreover, as the chairman of the Student Union, I feel responsible for
this job. How I wish I could have the chance to talk with you once more about the happy days we spent together
before you leave! (失约理由) .
I hope the adjustment won’t put you into much trouble.
Wish you a safe journey.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
7. 高考真题
1. 【2021年6月北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文
给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因；
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
How are you these days? We have planned to hang around together this weekend, and how much I am
expecting that! To my pity, I was informed to attend the nursery house with the Student Union this morning. Since
this weekend is the Double Ninth Day, a traditional day celebrated for the senior in China, our school has launched
this activity to show our concern and responsibility for the old, which is a meaningful and instructive activity for us
teenagers. I am really sorry and how about going out together next weekend, and as a compensation, I would like to
teat you a big meal and invite you to visit local museum. If the time is not convenient for you, you can set anytime
next week. Please accept my sincere apology for that.
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
2. 【2016·新课标卷III】
假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意； 2.说明原因； 3.另约时间。
注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【思路分析】
题目要求写一封道歉信，李华因不能和Bob一起去书店而向Bob道歉，文章应使用第一人称和一般现在时
进行写作。写作内容包括：表示歉意；说明原因；另约时间。注意使用连接词，使作文内容连贯。
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Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I can't go to the bookshop with you on Sunday morning as we planned last week. I am
writing to apologize for breaking my promise.
Here is the reason why I can’t go to the bookstore with you. Since the final exam is just around the corner, I
decide to stay at home to go over my lessons. You know, I didn’t do well in the last exam. So I want to devote all
my spare time to working on my lessons in order to get good scores in the final exam.
I am wondering if we can go to the bookstore on the second Sunday in January. Sorry again for the
inconvenience caused to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点睛】
此作文是常规的书信作文，要求写一封道歉信，是应用文的一种。写作的内容已经给出，表达歉意的
同时，还要与对方另约时间。因此，不仅仅是一封道歉信。写作时应注意涵盖所有要点，还要兼顾上下文
的连贯性。
3. 【2014·北京卷】
你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：
1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；
2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；
3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。
注意：
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【思路分析】
本题考查学生应用文写作，是一封书信，但开头和签名都已给出，学生只需写出要点即可。书信一般开头
应有寒暄的句子，然后过渡到想要表达的内容。最后要有结束语。本文的得分点分布在五个内容上∶寒
暄、三件事和结束语。
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
How is everything going?
I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you
as planned.
I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Joe
4. 【2014·山东卷】
假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因
准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件：
1.未及时回信的原因；2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）
注意：1. 词数：120-150；2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【思路分析】
本题要求写的书面表达为书信类型，而为了考查考生审题能力，命题人并没有把如＂感谢＂、＂道歉
＂、＂建议＂、＂申请＂等明显的字眼放在题中，而是通过考查学生对题干的审题能力暗示学生此书信体
作文应大体包含道歉和告知两个方面。因此文章的主干部分要先表示歉意、解释原因，后写假期的打算。
从写作要点和得分点来看，考生应在宏观上把握书信体写作的要求，如格式、文体等，写作段落以三
段式为宜，首段体现问候、写信背景等,尾段再次致歉、也可询问Tom署假里的打算，体现书信体的交际
性;而中间段具体交待未及时回信的原因、假期的打算。考生在微观层面.上应具体把握写作的内容和语言,
做到句子之间有效的连接，长短句结合，多用doing及物做主语，句子加半句原因、结果、目的等具体细
节的解释、利用简单而有效的中文思路扩展英文细节。考生若能在写作部分做到内容充实符合要求、语言
精彩与众不同、结构清晰- -目了然，相信这样的文章能让考生获得一-个相对满意 的成绩。
【经典套路】
第一段：问候+写信背景+写信目的
第二段：＂道歉＂部分(相当于＂写信背景＂)
第三段：＂假期安排＂部分
第四段：补充说明+客套话
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know,
I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back. In your letter, you asked me for my
plans on summer vacation. Now, I am writing to tell you some specific details.
Overall, three things will make my summer vacation meaningful. To start with, doing a part-time job is my
dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my
horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during thevacation, in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends. What is more, doing voluntary work, I think,
will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my life.
I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, what’s your plan to spend your summer vacation? I am
looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
必背范文
Writting1
假如你是李华，昨天晚饭时你的同学 Mary 告诉你她打算报考历史专业，但是你说了打击她的话，
令她很失望。请用英语给她写一封道歉信，要点如下：
1.向她表示道歉；
2. 表达你现在的认识；
3. 请求她的原谅。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mary，
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mary,
I’m writing to apologize for what I said to you at dinner yesterday. I shouldn’t have told you that history was a
useless major. Even worse, I spoke without thinking and didn’t take your feelings into consideration.There’s no arguing that what I said was improper, and I should have known how let down you would be to get such
a discouraging response from a friend. I’m so sorry for my stupid words and hope that you can generously forgive
me.
Wish our friendship can be continued. (87 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing2
假如你是李华。你和外教Christina原定于本周六上午一起参加＂中国传统文化日＂活动。但因故你不
能履约，请根据下面的写作提示，用英语给她发一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1.告诉她不能履约；
2.解释爽约的原因；
3.希望她谅解。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【必背范文】
Dear Christina,
I am Li Hua. I’m writing to apologize to you for not being able to participate in the ＂Chinese Traditional
Culture Day＂ activity to be held on the Saturday morning with you as we planned last week.
To be honest, I wish I could join in the activity, but I am afraid I will not be available because I was informed
yesterday that I would have to go to Beijing for a contest on the morning of Saturday. That is why I can’t go withyou. I am awfully sorry for breaking my promise and I apologize for any inconvenience it brings to you. I hope you
can understand me.
Wish you a good time there.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing3
假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不
能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：
1. 表示歉意；
2. 解释原因；
3. 另约时间。
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【写作指导】
这是一篇应用文，要求写一封道歉信。写作要求只给出了大体的框架，因此具有很大的开放性。道
歉信主要是向收信人表明歉意，请求对方谅解自己的过失。写道歉信时要明确不是找借口为自己辩护，而
是承认自己的过错并提出弥补过错的具体建议和方法。此类信件的关键是用词准确，表达真诚。在写作时
可以根据提示的要求按照三段式的模式布局谋篇。
首段：重述自己做错的事，表示歉意。
主体段落：说明道歉的具体原因，应尽量详细描述做错事的经过。写信时应该注意在申述理由时要照
顾读信人的感受，切忌强词夺理。
结尾段：再次表明承认错误的态度，请求收信人的谅解。也可以提出补救的办法。
【必背范文】
Dear Tom，I am indeed very sorry that I can’t go to Beijing with you next week, which I have promised. I feel badly about
it and want you to know what happened.
Just now, my cousin, Li Qiong, who left home to Australia for his further study last year, informed me that
he will return this Saturday morning. And ask me to pick him up at the airport with his family. You know, we
haven’t seen each other for nearly a year.
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. I would appreciate your allowing
me to make another date to show you around Beijing. Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
Writing4
假如你是小明，前天踢足球时你撞倒了你的好朋友李华，因而你俩发生争吵。经过两天的冷静思考，
你觉得不应该因为这件小事而失去一个好朋友，于是决定写一封道歉信，希望和他冰释前嫌，内容包括：
1.说明写信的目的；
2.承认自己的错误；
3.指出李华的不足；
4.提出希望，重归于好。
注意：
1.请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息；
2.可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
3.词数不少于100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Hua,
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Xiao Ming
【必背范文】Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to have quarrelled with you about knocking you down the day before yesterday. I feel that it’s not
necessary for me to do that, so I make a sincere apology to you and hope that you will forgive me.
As a friend, I should not have quarreled with you about a small thing. What’s worse, it’s foolish of me to have
said bad things to hurt you, though I was sure I didn’t mean to. On the other hand, you were not so sensible then. If
you had asked me why I knocked you down, the quarrel would have been avoided.
Therefore, we should keep calm no matter what happens in the future. Only in this way can we deal with
things correctly and maintain our friendship. At last, I hope we will have a lifelong friendship!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Xiao Ming
Writing5
假如你是李华。上周，外教Shelley外出度假之前给你留言，让你为她喜欢的茉莉花浇水。你因故忘记
为茉莉花浇水，导致茉莉花干死。你决定给Shelley写一封信，内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.解释原因和补偿措施；
3.请求原谅。
注意：
1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：茉莉—jasmine
Dear Shelley,
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Yours,Li Hua
【必背范文】
Dear Shelley,
I’m writing to apologize for not watering your jasmine, which caused its death, while you were away. Now
let me explain what happened to me and my family.
I was so busy preparing for the coming exam that I had no time for other things. What’s more, my mother
had her ankle injured while she was walking, so I had to take good care of her, who stayed at home alone. That was
why I failed to water your favorite plant. I would like to buy a new one as a compensation for your loss. Please
forgive me.
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies.
Yours,
Li Hua
【思路分析】本篇书面表达要求写一封道歉信。写作时，应用第一人称，感情要真挚，语气委婉。道歉这
一话题与考生的日常生活息息相关，符合高考的命题趋势，充分体现了高考注重对考生语言交际能力的培
养。根据试题说明，本文应分三个部分：
第一段：开门见山，说明写信目的——向对方道歉。
第二段：主要陈述因何事需要向对方道歉，并给出具体的补偿措施。
第三段：再次表示歉意，希望得到对方的谅解。写作时注意语言要真挚。
写作素材
1.我写这封信是因……而道歉。I’m writing to apologize for/say sorry for
2.为做了某事我深表歉意I am really sorry for doing
3.某事发生的原因是……The reason why was that
4.没有时间做某事have no time for
5.那就是某事发生的原因。That was why
6.我真诚地希望你接受我的歉意。I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies.
Writing6
假如你是育才中学的学生李华，昨天你在英语课上做数学作业被英语老师Miss Cheng发现了，你的数
学书被英语老师收走了。请用英语给英语老师写一封道歉信，内容应包括以下要点:
1.向老师道歉；2.解释上课为什么做数学作业；
3.提出自己的请求并作出保证。
注意：
1.词数120左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Cheng,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Miss Cheng,
I sincerely apologize to you for doing maths homework in your class. I would appreciate it if you can forgive
me.
Having been caught doing other things in your class, I know any excuse may be meaningless. However, I did
so because my mother happened to fall ill yesterday and I had to send her to hospital and look after her by myself,
for my father is a migrant worker working far away. As you know, the next class would be maths. If I could’t finish
my maths homework before it, I would be severely punished.
Anyway, doing other things in class is not acceptable to any teacher. I swear it will never happen again. But I
do need my maths book back.zx.x.k
Will you be so kind as to give it back to me? Thanks a lot!
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing7假如你是新华中学的学生李华，上周在外教Mr. Jackson的口语课上使用手机被老师发现，手机被收走。
请用英语给Mr. Jackson写一封道歉信，内容应包括以下要点：
1.表示歉意；
2.解释上课使用手机的原因；
3.提出自己的请求并适当表态。
注意:
1.词数：100左右；信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节以使文章连贯。
Dear Mr. Jackson,
I am really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your class last week.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【必背范文】
Dear Mr. Jackson,
I am really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your class last week. Please accept my heart-felt apology
for being so rude a student.
I know any word might sound a make-up excuse. But I didn’t use my mobile phone in class for no reason. I
was trying to find a part-time job last week and that day, I got a job offer and they needed my further information
immediately. Therefore, I got no choice but to try sending them a text message in class and that was exactly what I
was doing when you caught me.
Anyway, using a mobile phone in class was not acceptable to any teacher. I swear it will not happen again. But
I do need my phone back to keep in touch with others.
Will you be so kind as to give it back to me? Thanks a million!
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,Li Hua
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