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专题 23 书信类 02（告知信、建议信、道歉信）（解析版）
书信类写作包括邀请信、感谢信、推荐信、求职信、祝贺信、告知信、求助信、建议信、道歉信、咨
询信以及慰问信等类别。
以下对告知信、咨询信、道歉信类别提供对应的模板和基本写作技巧。
四、告知信
1. 布局思维导图
首段 告知内容（原因、背景等）
段落要点 正文 告知具体事宜（时间、地点等）
结尾 表达期待愿望
2. 基本模板
写作模板①
Dear ______ (称谓)
Aware of your enthusiasm for /Delighted to learn that ______(活动主题、你对主题的兴趣), I’m writing to
extend my ______(看法、关心、欢迎等) and inform you of some relevant information.
______(活动信息). To begin with, ______(要点一). Furthermore, ______(要点二). To sum up, ______(要点
三).
I highly expect the experience to be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
写作模板②Dear ________，
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________，and I will try to make some conducive
suggestions here.
In my humble (谦虚的)opinion，you would be wise to take the following actions：________________(建议
的内容)．
I hope you will find these proposals useful，and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further
details.
Good luck with your________________ (祝愿)．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
3. 高频词句
【常用词汇】
1.inform sb. of sth. 告知某人某事
2.introduce sth.to sb. 向某人介绍某物
3.provide some information for sb. 为某人提供一些信息
4.work out my schedule 制订我的计划
5.as follows 列举如下
6.show sb. around... 带领某人参观某处
7.have a try 试试看，尝试一下
8.sign up for.. 报名参加
9.wok as/serve as/act as. 任……职，当……
10.mean/intend to do sth. 打算做某事
11.spare some time to do sth. 抽出时间做某事
12.take a course 参加一门课程
13.pay a visit to..… 去参观
14.make a difference 有影响；起（重要）作用
15.hesitate to do sth. 犹豫，有所顾虑
16.be scheduled at/on... 被安排在
17.make preparations for.. 为……准备
18.make an arrangement for sth. 为……做安排19.be intended to sth. 打算，意图
【常用句型】
1. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.
2. You are supposed/expected to …
3. You should/ You’d better …
4. There will be a lecture on ….
5. The lecture will last 3 hours. / The lecture will begin at … and end at …
6. Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you.
7. Please get there on time. / Please get everything ready ahead of time.
8. Don’t miss the chance. /Don’t be late.
9. Everyone is welcome to ……
10. I sincerely invite you to…
11. I am writing to express my views concerning... 我写此信来表达我关于……的观点。
12. You have asked me for my advice about...，and I will try to make some conducive suggestions. 对于你来信问我
关于……的事，现提供几条有益的建议。
13. I would like to suggest that... 我建议……
14. Why not.../ Why don't you...？为何不……？
15. I think it will be a good idea/more beneficial if you could... 我认为……是个好办法/有利的。
16. It's important to.../ It helps to...It should be a good idea to... 很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。
17. I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning... 我提出几条有关于……的建议。
18. Please take good consideration of my advice.Thanks. 请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。
19. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations helpful/useful. 希望这些建议对你有帮助。
20. Thank you for your attention.感谢你对此事的关注。
4. 写作实操技巧
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，
内容包括：
1．比赛信息；
2．赛前准备；3．表达期待。
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【参考范文】
Dear Chris (称谓)
Delighted to learn that an important volleyball game will be launched in our school stadium (活动主题、你
对主题的兴趣), I’m writing to extend my excitement (看法、关心、欢迎等) and inform you of some relevant
information..
First and foremost, the competition to be held will begin at 2 P.M. and last for roughly 3 hours (活动信息).
Preparations should be made in advance, ranging from doing regular exercise, keeping positive attitude to
presenting yourselves ahead of time (要点一). Furthermore, it is necessary for you to take a good rest, which will
provide enough energy for you (要点二). To sum up, I wish that with joint efforts and excellent teamwork, we
could live up to the expectations of our school (要点三).
I highly expect the experience to be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
5. 仿写演练
假定你是学生会主席李华，你校的交换生Bob已学习中国象棋长达一年，特发邮件向你询问将由学生
会举办的中国象棋大赛的情况。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1．举办比赛的目的；
2．比赛的时间和地点；
3．建议他报名参加并说明理由。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中国象棋大赛Chinese Chess Contest______________________________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Dear Chris (称谓)
Aware of your enthusiasm for the Chinese Chess Contest to be held by the Students' Union (活动主题、你
对主题的兴趣), I’m writing to extend my opinion (看法、关心、欢迎等) and inform you of some relevant
information..
First and foremost, Aimed at raising students' awareness of traditional Chinese culture and developing
students' love for Chinese chess, the contest will be held at the Student Center on September 8 th (活动信息). Since
you have learned to play Chinese chess for a year, I suggest that you should participate in the contest (要点一).
Furthermore, I am convinced that your participation will surely make a difference (要点二). To sum up, through
the contest, not only can you improve your skills of playing Chinese chess but also you can make friends with other
excellent players (要点三).
I highly expect the experience to be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
6. 高考真题
1．【2022年1月浙江卷】
假定你是李华，在“中国一爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国，请你给他写一
封邮件，内容包括：
1．回忆活动经历；
2．分享个人收获；
3．希望保持联系。注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
How is everything? I have missed you very much since you returned to Ireland.
I still remember the moments we spent together at the China-Ireland Cultural Festival. We went to lectures on
culture by leading scholars from both our countries. We also enjoyed music, dance, dramas and films.
I gained a better understanding of Irish culture during the festival, which has great significance for the cultural
exchanges between China and Ireland. What's more, a close friendship has been formed between us.
Let's keep in touch. Hope to see you again.
Yours,
Li Hua
2．【2019·天津卷】
假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教
师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一
封电子邮件：
（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
（3）希望从中有何收获。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Jim，a student at Chenguang High School.
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Thank you for your time.
Yours，
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. I got the news that your school will send teachers to my
school for a week-long summer exchange. During the activity，you will give a lecture on Western art. You want to
seek for advice on what topic the lecture will be about. From my personal note，music is my priority.
I am interested in all kinds of music，among which Jazz is my favorite. I want to know about the history of
jazz，and some famous jazz singers. I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz.
Thank you for your time.
Yours，
Li Jin
3．【2019年1月广东卷（春考）】
你是李华，就读于国同学校。你写信给《英文早报》的编辑Bob，希望结识一位来自英语国家的笔友（pen
pal），以便相互学习对方的语言和文化：你容易相处，熟悉中国历史，喜欢中国传统音乐。
内容要点：
1. 写信目的；
2. 自我介绍；
3. 表示感谢。
注意 : 1. 词数80左右；2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不算词数；
3. 可以适当增加细节，并将开头型结尾抄写在答题卡上，以使行文连贯。
Dear bob,
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Bob,
My name is Li Hua, an international school student. I am writing the letter to you to help me to find a pen pal.
I'm an outgoing and easy-going boy, so I am fond of making friends. Now I want to make a pen pal from
English-speaking country, from whom I can make a good command of English language and culture. At the same
time, I would like to share my favorite history and Chinese traditional music with him.
I would appreciate it if you can recommend a pen pal to me. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析
考查提纲类写作。本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。 第1步：根据提示可知，本文为一封
书信：你是李华,就读于、国同学校。你写信给《英文早报》的编辑Bob，希望结识一位来自英语国家的笔友
（pen pal），以便相互学习对方的语言和文化：你容易相处，熟悉中国历史，喜欢中国传统音乐。内容要
点：1. 写信目的；2. 自我介绍；3. 表示感谢。< b第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：an
international school student（一名国际学校的学生）；to help me to find a pen pal（帮助我找一个笔友）；
outgoing and easy-going boy（外向且容易相处的男孩）；fond of making friends（喜爱交朋友）；make a good
command of English language and culture（精通英语语言和文化）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整
洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
4．【2019年新课标全国卷II】假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：
1.比赛信息； 2.赛前准备； 3.表达期待。
注意:
词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Version 1
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our
school gym on the afternoon of July 4th . We will play against the team from HongXing High School. In order to
win the match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard. So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours
after school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.
You're an excellent player. With you on the team, we are hopeful to win the game. Let's try hard together!
Cheers,
Li Hua
Version 2
Dear Chris,
Are you excited about our coming volleyball game against Yucai Middle School next Friday? Here I'd like to
inform you of some detailed information so that you can make full preparations for it.
First and foremost, the competition to be held in our school stadium will begin at 2 pm and last for roughly 3
hours. So significant is the game that it is required that everyone should present themselves punctually. Further, it is
necessary for you to take a good rest, which will provide enough energy for you. To sum up, I wish you could live
up to the expectations of our school. And I firmly believe hard work will pay off!Looking forward to our victory!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达是一封告知信。首先要告知写信目的；然后简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、地点以及
赛前的准备事项，注意事件信息的三要素：时间、地点、人物，要交代清楚；第三则要表达对队友的期待
和鼓励。
本文内容完整，详略得当，并运用了高级句式。I'm witing to let you know that we will have a volleyball
match next month。宾语从句；In order to win the match不定式作目的状语。文章语言流畅，上下文转换自
然。
5．【2018·全国卷1】
假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，
内容包括：
1．到达时间；2．合适的礼物；3．餐桌礼仪。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Terry,
How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the
Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.
Firstly, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional
culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my owncountry. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to
stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.
If you have any other problems, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
Yours
Li Hua
6．【2017·全国卷1】
假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：
（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Leslie，
I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese
culture. Now I'll tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang
Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the
true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the
Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.
Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua7．【2017·天津卷】
假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提
示给她回复一封邮件。
（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；
（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天
津等）；
（3）希望她有机会重访天津。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：第十三届全运会 the 13th National Games
Dear Mrs. Green,
I’m glad to hear from you. _________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Mrs. Green,
I’m so glad to hear from you. While it has been more than a year since you taught us English, I’ve missed you
a lot, thinking about those happy moments when we stayed with you. Actually, I’ve been doing pretty well in my
studies as well as in my life. Apart from my academic studies, I always manage to find time for what I’m interested
in. For example, I have successfully got admitted as a volunteer for the 13th National Games, which is scheduled to
be held at the end of this August. To get admitted, I have made good preparations beforehand, trying to know as
much as I could about my city, Tianjin.By the way, it’s my sincere hope that you can spare some time for a visit to Tianjin again, which has changed
greatly since you left.
Please let me know if you come to Tianjin.
Yours,
Li Jin
五、建议信
1. 考情分析
1、学习类：给图书馆建议，提高服务质量；给选修课提建议；给读书节提建议
2、环境保护类：给相关部门或报纸提建议①限制使用白色塑料袋，②节约食物 ③合理使用共享单车。
3、文化自信类（★★★★★）：外国留学生，来你们学校学习，给他们的学习生活或学习中文提建议。
4、身心健康：给校长写信，关于提高学生身心健康：身体健康，减压等。
2. 布局思维导图
首段 写信目的
段落要点 正文 提出建议、说明原因
结尾 表达期望和祝愿
3. 基本模板
写作模板①Dear ______ (称谓)
You can’t imagine how ______(情感) I am hearing about ______(写信的原因). I’m more than glad to
offer my advice for your reference.
Firstly, you are supposed to ______ (建议一) . Additionally(For one reason), it makes sense to ______ (建议
二/理由一) . Moreover（For another reason）, ______ (建议三/理由二)is also a good choice . Do bear in mind
that （Therefore）______ (建议四/理由三)
I am fully convinced that use the tips above and we will______ (以上建议的好处) . I would appreciate it if
you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
写作模板②
Dear________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive
suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further
details.
Good luck with your________________(祝愿).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
写作模板③
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主
题).
Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to
___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)
As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议).
I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hope ____________(表达愿望)。Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
1. 建议信写作注意事项
建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
2. 写作方法
① 首段：
a. 简介自己，不要罗嗦；
b. 说明目的，注意语气。
② 主体：
a. 提出具体建议；
b. 首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则会变成投诉信；
c. 经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文。
③尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，使对方易于接受。
3. 写作流程图
说明写信目的
介绍详情、说明原因
提出建议
提出希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复
4. 必备词句
(1) I am writing to express my views concerning... 我写此信来表达我关于……的观点。
(2) You have asked me for my advice about...，and I will try to make some conducive suggestions. 对于你来信问我
关于……的事，现提供几条有益的建议。
(3) I would like to suggest that... 我建议……
(4) Why not.../ Why don't you...？为何不……？(5) I think it will be a good idea/more beneficial if you could... 我认为……是个好办法/有利的。
(6) It's important to.../ It helps to...It should be a good idea to... 很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。
(7) I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning... 我提出几条有关于……的建议。
(8) Please take good consideration of my advice.Thanks. 请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。
(9) I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations helpful/useful. 希望这些建议对你有帮助。
(10) Thank you for your attention.感谢你对此事的关注。
【必背词句】
第一部分：说明写信的目的
套语：
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps
the following suggestions are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following
suggestions are helpful to you.
我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients
（顾客）.
我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。
4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions
here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few
suggestions.
很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。
6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English
well in high school.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。
第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因套语：
(1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their
speeches.
(2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。
We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.
(3) 下午，我们会一起……
During the afternoon, we’lltogether.
(4) 记得带上水和午餐。
Remember to take water and lunch with you.
(5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club.
(6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。
I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite
you to be part of the contest.
(7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。
Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
(8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
第三部分：提出建议
套语：
我建议……
1．I’d like to suggest that…
2．May I suggest that…?
3．In my opinion…
4．I would like to make a recommendation that…
5．I am writing to advise…
6．If I were you, I would…
第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复套语：
1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never
say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。
3. Best wishes!
（给你）最美好的祝愿！
4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your
studies/work！
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。
6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
5. 写作实操技巧
假如你是李华，你的外教Mr Geller计划让8岁的女儿在中国学习一门传统艺术作为兴趣培养，正在书
法、剪纸与象棋中选择，写邮件寻求你的看法和学习建议。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐内容及简要原因；
2.切实可行的学习建议；
3.祝福与希望。
注意：1．词数：80词左右；
2．内容应包括以上要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
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Dear ______ (称谓)
You can’t imagine how overjoyed (情感) I am hearing about your plan (写信的原因). I’m more than glad
to offer my advice for your reference.
Firstly, you are supposed to choose Chinese calligraphy because it’s a natural combination of beauty,
strength, history and technique (建议一) . Additionally, aiming at learning it well, it makes sense to devote
himself/ herself to long hours of practice (建议二) . Moreover, signing up for a calligraphy course (建议三)is
also a good choice, which would help her study in a systematic way . Do bear in mind that it’d also be beneficial
to study and imitate the works of famous calligraphers (建议四)
I am fully convinced that use the tips above and you will gain benefit (以上建议的好处) . I would appreciate
it if you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
6. 仿写演练
假定你是李华，你朋友张帅在美国学习，你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业，前不久, 他来信就
是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信。
1.建议他回国。
2.你的理由是国内形势好、学有所用、就业机会多、便于照顾父母、报效祖国等。
注意：1.词数80左右：
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Zhangshuai (称谓)
You can’t imagine how overjoyed (情感) I am hearing about you are going to graduate (写信的原因). I’m
more than glad to offer my advice for your reference.
In my opinion, you are supposed to come back after you finish your studies abroad (建议) . For one reason,
what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China and it will be quite easy for you to find a good job (理由
一) . For another reason, it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old
(理由二). Therefore，it's a good idea for you to return. (总结)
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
7. 高考真题
(1) 【2022年全国乙卷】
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一
篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 学习活动状况描述：
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
(2) 【2021年6月全国乙卷】
你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以 Be smart online learner 写一篇发言稿参赛,
内容包括：
1. 分析优势及不足；
2. 提出学习建议。
注意：
1. 词数100词左右；
2. 题目和首句以为你写好。
(3) 【2019年6月天津卷】
假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英
方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给 Chris
写一封电子邮件：
（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
（3）希望从中有何收获。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School.
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
(4) 【2019北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询
问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:
1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。
注意:
1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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(5) 【2019·天津卷】
假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教
师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一
封电子邮件:（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
（3）希望从中有何收获。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100：
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Jim，a student at Chenguang High School.
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Yours，
Li Jin
(6) 【2018全国卷I】
假如你是李华, 你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客, 发邮件向你询问有关习俗, 请你回复邮件,
内容包括：
到达时间； 2.合适的礼物； 3.餐桌礼仪
注意：1.词数不少于80；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年
来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
(1) 表示欢迎；
(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；
(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：(1). 词数不少于50；
(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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(8) 【2017·北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年
来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
(1) 表示欢迎；
(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；
(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：
(1) . 词数不少于50；
(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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(9) 【2017·北京卷】
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之
旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝
愿。
注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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六、道歉信
1. 考情分析
①活动没有去参加（道歉时，活动已经结束）；
②活动不能去参加（道歉时，活动还没有开始）；
③给别人造成了损失：如把对方东西弄丢；把车给损坏了；
④答应的事情（或任务）没有按时完成等。2. 布局思维导图
首段 表表示歉意，道歉的原由
段落要点 正文 解释原因，提出弥补措施；
结尾 再次请求原谅。
3. 基本模板
写作模板①
Dear ______ (称谓)
I 'm terribly sorry to inform you that ______(写信事由). Thus, I am writing to apologize for not keeping my
word. Something unexpected happened and ______(失约理由) .
Shall we fix another time? I’ll be available any time after______(补救办法). Will ______(另约时间) suits
your convenience? If it’s ok, let’s meet at ______(见面地点). If not, let me know what time suits you best. I hope
the adjustment won’t put you into much trouble.
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
写作模板②Dear ________(对象),
I am truly sorry that ___________________________________(道歉的原因).
The reason is that ______________________________________(介绍原因).
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my appologies and understand my
situation.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming
写作模板③
Dear ________,
I am excessively sorry to say/tell you that ①______________ (直接表达自己不能实现先前的愿望或约定).
②Now, I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret__________ (表达歉意). ③Please accept my
sincere apology__________(诚恳希望对方能接受道歉). ④I fear you are displeased at _________(表达出自己的
心情，并请求对方原谅).⑤I hope you will understand me and excuse me for__________(过渡句). ⑥Let me
explain(开始介绍道歉的原因). ⑦The reason for my delay/absence was that _________(阐述自己当时的处境和
情况). ⑧I had no way out because ___________ (总结自己道歉的原因). ⑨Therefore it’s not in my power to
___________(希望下次再次实现愿望). ⑩Naturally, I want to suggest ____________. I shall be glad if you will
kindly write and tell me when and where you____________(约定下次约会的时间和地点)
We may meet again and I hope to see you soon.
Sincerely Yours,
Li Hua
写好道歉信的关键在于措辞要朴实、委婉，语气要诚恳、真挚，解释要详细明了。例如＂I’m
excessively sorry＂、＂sincere apology＂、＂deep regret＂等都是致歉之词，这就恰如其分地表达了写信人
的真诚歉意。
道歉信通常包括三部分内容：
1.表示歉意，道歉的原由；
2.出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施；
3.请求原谅。语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实。4.补充说明。客套话。
好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增进彼此的感情。
4. 必备词句
1) I would like to express my apology for... 对于……，我想要表达我的歉意。
2) Will you be good enough to excuse me for.../Excuse me for... 请原谅我……
3) Please accept my sincerest and deepest apology for... 请接受我最真诚的致歉……
4) I'm terribly sorry to tell you that.../ I regret to inform you that...很抱歉地告诉你……
5) I write to you to express my deep regret. 我写此信向你表示深深的懊悔。
6) I am writing to apologize to you for... 我写信向你致歉，因为……
7) Would you mind if I...？你是否介意如果我……？
8) To make up my thoughtless behavior，I...为了弥补我欠考虑的行为，我……
9) I wish I could be given a chance to make up for my inconsideration. 我希望你能给我一个机会来弥补我的考虑
不周。
10) I would like to express my apology for... 对于……，我想要表达我的歉意。
11) Will you be good enough to excuse me for.../Excuse me for... 请原谅我……
12) Please accept my sincerest and deepest apology for... 请接受我最真诚的致歉……
13) I'm terribly sorry to tell you that.../ I regret to inform you that...很抱歉地告诉你……
14) I write to you to express my deep regret. 我写此信向你表示深深的懊悔。
15) I am writing to apologize to you for... 我写信向你致歉，因为……
16) Would you mind if I...？你是否介意如果我……？
17) To make up my thoughtless behavior，I...为了弥补我欠考虑的行为，我……
18) I wish I could be given a chance to make up for my inconsideration. 我希望你能给我一个机会来弥补我的考虑
不周。
【必背词句】
1. 道歉信中开头段常用句式和套话
(1) I am writing this letter to express my regret…我写这封信是想表达我的遗憾……
(2) I am writing to apologize for…我写信是为……道歉。
(3) I would like to give you my apology for…我想……向你道歉。(4) I am very sorry to say that…我很抱歉……
(5) I must apologize about (not) doing sth…对于做了/没做……，我必须道歉。
(6) Please accept my sincere apology for…请接受我对于的真诚道歉。
(7) I am writing to say sorry for…我写信是想对……说抱歉。
(8) I am terribly sorry, but…我很抱歉，但是……
2.道歉信中结尾段常用句式和套话
(9) Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.我对于所造成的任何不便再次道歉。
(10) Please allow me to say sorry again.请允许我再一次说抱歉。
(11) Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.希望你们能够接受我的道歉，理解我的处境。
(12) I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.我真诚的希望你能够站在
我的位置想一想，并且接受我的道歉。
(13) I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.我想让你知道我现在感觉多么的遗憾。
(14) I am sorry that I can’t… but trust that you will be able to understand.很抱歉我不能……，但我相信，你会理解
的。
5. 写作实操技巧
假定你是李华，你和外教MrSmith本来约好去看在你们所在城市举行的国际摄影展，但你因故不能赴
约。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括:
1.表示歉意；
2. 解释原因；
3.补救措施。
注意:1. 词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear MrSmith (称谓)
I 'm terribly sorry to inform you that I can' t accompany you to the International Photography Festival held
this Saturday (写信事由). Thus, I am writing to apologize for not keeping my word. Something unexpected
happened and my parents have to go outside of the city this Saturday, so I have to stay at home and take care of my
little brother (失约理由) .
Shall we fix another time? I’ll be available any time after this Saturday(补救办法). Will this Sunday(另约时
间) suits your convenience? If it’s ok, let’s meet at our school gate at 8 a.m .(见面地点). If not, let me know what
time suits you best. I hope the adjustment won’t put you into much trouble.
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
6. 仿写演练
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友David本周六即将结束在中国的旅行，乘飞机返回英国，你因有事无法
按原定计划取机场为他送行，只好写信向他道歉，内容如下:
1.表达歉意；2.说明不能送行的原因。
注意:
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear David (称谓)
I 'm terribly sorry to inform you that I cannot make it to see you off at the airport this Saturday as promised
(写信事由). Thus, I am writing to apologize for not keeping my word. Something unexpected happened and I
have to help make preparations for the English Speaking Contest to be held this weekend. Actually, I have just been
informed of this plan by the schoolmaster. Moreover, as the chairman of the Student Union, I feel responsible for
this job. How I wish I could have the chance to talk with you once more about the happy days we spent together
before you leave! (失约理由) .
I hope the adjustment won’t put you into much trouble.
Wish you a safe journey.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
7. 高考真题
1. 【2021年6月北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文
给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因；
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Li Hua
2. 【2016·新课标卷III】
假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意； 2.说明原因； 3.另约时间。
注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【思路分析】
题目要求写一封道歉信，李华因不能和Bob一起去书店而向Bob道歉，文章应使用第一人称和一般现在时
进行写作。写作内容包括：表示歉意；说明原因；另约时间。注意使用连接词，使作文内容连贯。
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3. 【2014·北京卷】
你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；
2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；
3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。
注意：
1.词数不少于50；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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4. 【2014·山东卷】
假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因
准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件：
1.未及时回信的原因；2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）
注意：
1. 词数：120-150；2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Writting1
假如你是李华，昨天晚饭时你的同学 Mary 告诉你她打算报考历史专业，但是你说了打击她的话，
令她很失望。请用英语给她写一封道歉信，要点如下：
1.向她表示道歉；
2. 表达你现在的认识；
3. 请求她的原谅。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mary，
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Yours,
Li Hua
Writing2
假如你是李华。你和外教Christina原定于本周六上午一起参加＂中国传统文化日＂活动。但因故你不
能履约，请根据下面的写作提示，用英语给她发一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1.告诉她不能履约；
2.解释爽约的原因；
3.希望她谅解。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Writing3
假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不
能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：
1. 表示歉意；
2. 解释原因；
3. 另约时间。
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Writing4
假如你是小明，前天踢足球时你撞倒了你的好朋友李华，因而你俩发生争吵。经过两天的冷静思考，
你觉得不应该因为这件小事而失去一个好朋友，于是决定写一封道歉信，希望和他冰释前嫌，内容包括：
1.说明写信的目的；
2.承认自己的错误；
3.指出李华的不足；
4.提出希望，重归于好。
注意：
1.请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息；
2.可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；3.词数不少于100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry________________________________________________________________________________
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Xiao Ming
Writing5
假如你是李华。上周，外教Shelley外出度假之前给你留言，让你为她喜欢的茉莉花浇水。你因故忘记
为茉莉花浇水，导致茉莉花干死。你决定给Shelley写一封信，内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.解释原因和补偿措施；
3.请求原谅。
注意：
1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：茉莉—jasmine
Dear Shelley,
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Yours,
Li HuaWriting6
假如你是育才中学的学生李华，昨天你在英语课上做数学作业被英语老师Miss Cheng发现了，你的数
学书被英语老师收走了。请用英语给英语老师写一封道歉信，内容应包括以下要点:
1.向老师道歉；
2.解释上课为什么做数学作业；
3.提出自己的请求并作出保证。
注意：
1.词数120左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Cheng,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing7
假如你是新华中学的学生李华，上周在外教Mr. Jackson的口语课上使用手机被老师发现，手机被收走。
请用英语给Mr. Jackson写一封道歉信，内容应包括以下要点：
1.表示歉意；
2.解释上课使用手机的原因；
3.提出自己的请求并适当表态。
注意:
1.词数：100左右；信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节以使文章连贯。
Dear Mr. Jackson,
I am really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your class last week.____________________________________________________________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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