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专题 25 书信类 03（求助信、祝贺信、慰问信等）（解析版）
书信类写作包括邀请信、感谢信、推荐信、求职信、祝贺信、告知信、求助信、建议信、道歉信、咨
询信以及慰问信等类别。
以下对求助信、祝贺信、慰问信类别提供对应的模板和基本写作技巧。
十、说明文
说明文用来解释或探讨各种问题，如机器的制造过程，自然现象或社会现象产生的原因，工程的规划
或问题的解决方案等等。
1. 说明事物的顺序
我们可以按以下三类顺序说明事物：
1、时间顺序，即按事物的发生、发展的先后顺序进行说明。
2、空间顺序，即按事物空间位置的顺序，由上至下，由近及远或由里至外地说明。
3、逻辑顺序，即按人们认识事物的规律进行说明，如由概括到具体，由整体到部分，由现象到本
质，由表及里，由原因到结果，由主要到次要，由特点到用途等。
2. 说明事物的方法
1、定义法。定义法的目的是让不知此事物的人对此物有一个起码的了解，以利于下文的展开。如：A
thermometer is an instrument used for measuring temperature. 就是对thermometer下了一个定义。有些事物也许不好下个明确定义，但我们可以交待这个事物的背景，来源，或列举出它的一些典型特征，以便让读者
明白。这类事物可以是术语，也可以是外国人所不了 的中国的传统事物，如龙舟节等。
2、举例说明法。举出具有代表性的例子，能够真切地说明事物，化抽象为具体，使段落变得有血有肉，
丰富起来。举例时常用的表达有：for example(例如)，for instance(例如)，as an example of (作为……的例
子)，take… for example (以……为例)等。
3、比较法。为了突出事物鲜明的特点，我们常把它与其他事物进行比较。比方说我们想向读者介绍什么
是“电脑”，我们可以说“It’s a kind of electrical or artificial (人工的)brain.”这样把电脑和人脑进行了比较，
从而使人们对“电脑”有更清晰的认识。[来源:学科网]
4、细节描述法。介绍一种事物，仅用概述性的词语如beautiful, friendly, boring, good 或bad 是不够的。作
者要提供一些细节，使被描述的对象更加形象具体，从而加深读者的印象。
除上述几种方法外，我们还可以通过引经据典 (即引用专家、名人等的话语)、列举数字等其他方法说明一
件事物，从而使文章更加严密，内容更具有科学性，更有说服力。也可以综合运用多种方法。
3. 写作模板
模板01（主题型）
①________ is a most effective _______to _______. ②For most people, it’s almost impossible to ______.
③________is really _________.④With the functions of _______,it enables us to _______.⑤It can even ______.
⑥Just imagine, all this can be done with _______. ⑦A convenient tool can certainly make _______, but it
doesn’t always help _______.⑧Too much _________.⑨Too many ________.⑩Relying too much on _______
makes ________.
①点明要介绍的事物的必要性 ②介绍该事物对多数人的重要意义 ③该事物优势或显著特点 ④该事物
的作用 ⑤进一步说明该事物的作用 ⑥说明该事物的重要性 ⑦承上启下，介绍事物的另一方面 ⑧该
事物的负面影响一 ⑨该事物的负面影响二 ⑩总结说明过分使用该物品给我们带来的负面影响。
模板02（说明原因型）
Nowadays, there are more and more in some big cities. It is estimated that ____________________.（用具体
数据说明某现象）
Why have there been so many ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first reason is
that __________________.（原因一）Besides, __________________.（原因二）The third reasonis __________________.（原因三）To sum up, the main cause of is due to__________________ .（指出主要原
因）
It is high time that something should be done. For one thing, __________________.（解决建议一）
For another thing, . All these measures will certainly __________________.（解决建议二）
模板03（描述事物型）
What I have known about is that _________________.（具体描述某事物）
Firstly, __________________.（描述要点一）__________________.（具体阐述要点一）Secondly, _____
_____________.（描述要点二）（具体阐述要点二）__________________. As a college
student, __________________.（结合自身描述要点三）
All in all, __________________.（做出总结）Therefore, we should __________________.（提出建议）
模板04（问题解决型）
In recent days, there has been a problem , which is becoming more and more serious.（说明问题及其现状）
First, __________________. Second, __________________.（进一步阐释现状）
We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ________. For another
thing, ________. Finally, ________.（列举解决该问题的方法）
Personally, I believe that ________/Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because
________.（结尾段，指出＂我＂的信心及理由）
模板05（说明利弊题型）
Nowadays, many people prefer A because it is playing a more and more important role in our daily life.
Generally/Generally speaking/On the whole, its advantages can be seen as follows./it has the following advantages.
First of all, _________________ (A的优点之一). Besides,/What’s more, _________________A的优点之二）.
However, every coin has two sides./Everything has both advantages and disadvantages. The negative aspects
are also apparent./Its disadvantages are also obvious. One of the important disadvantages is that
_________________ (A的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,/To make the matter worse,/To make things
worse/What’s worse, _________________(A的第二个缺点)．Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones./The above
analysis shows us that it has more advantages than disadvantages. Therefore, I would like to _________________
(我的看法)．
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it
according to the circumstances we are in. Only in this way can we_________________(对前景的预测)．)
【必背词句】
1简要说明图表内容的句型： 从图表可以看出
(1) The table/chart shows that …
(2) As can be seen from the chart…
(3) From the table/chart/forms we can see…
(4) The table tells us that…
2表示变化/比较的句型：
(5) There was a great / slight increase/rise in …
(6) There has been a sudden /slow/rapid fall/ drop in… It is 20% lower /higher than…
(7) The number/rate has nearly doubled, as against that of last year.
(8) The number is … times as much as that of…
(9) It increases/rises/decreases/reduces by … times/ … percent/ 2/3.
3说明原因的句型：
(10) The reason for …is that…
(11) One may think of the change as a result of…
(12) The change in… largely results from the fact that…
(13) There are several causes for this significant growth in … First…This brings out the important fact tha…
4 结尾句型：
(14) In summary, it is important….
(15) From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that…
(16) Obviously, if we want to…, it is necessary ….
(17) There is no doubt that attention must be paid…
4. 高频词句
1简要说明图表内容的句型： 从图表可以看出The table/chart shows that …
As can be seen from the chart…
From the table/chart/forms we can see…
The table tells us that…
2表示变化/比较的句型：
There was a great / slight increase/rise in …
There has been a sudden /slow/rapid fall/ drop in… It is 20% lower /higher than…
The number/rate has nearly doubled, as against that of last year.
The number is … times as much as that of…
It increases/rises/decreases/reduces by … times/ … percent/ 2/3.
3说明原因的句型：
The reason for …is that…
One may think of the change as a result of…
The change in… largely results from the fact that…
There are several causes for this significant growth in … First…This brings out the important fact that…
4 结尾句型：
In summary, it is important….
From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that…
Obviously, if we want to…, it is necessary ….
There is no doubt that attention must be paid…
5. 写作实操技巧
学校正在组织科技创新大赛，你想为日常生活中某件物品(如钢笔、书包、鞋子……)设计添加新功能来
参赛。请以＂My Magic _______＂为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的创意。
内容：
1. 说明设计理由；
2. 介绍新功能。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
【思路点拨】
本书面表达是一篇说明文。所给出的题材十分贴近学生生活，学生能够对日常生活中的熟悉的物品适
当发挥想象。本书面表达要求写一篇说明文，所给的要点也很清楚：说明学生所选物品的设计理由；介绍
此物品的新功能。写作的时候注意以下几点： 1、切合题意。仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信
息，明确有哪些要点。2、简明扼要。此题材学生都有话可说，但要注意说明清楚：为什么要设计此物
品？此物品有哪些新功能？要点要全面。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合
英语习惯。
【参考答案】
My magic pen
Pens are necessities for every student. So we are all familiar with them.
I design my pen. On the one hand, it’s easy to carry. On the other hand, it’s used not only for writing but also
for other important aspects.
Firstly, I put some batteries in the pen and fix a light bulb, so when it is dark on my way home or to school, I
can use it as a flasher. I won’t be afraid of darkness any more. Secondly, I fix a tiny clock in the pen, so I can know
the time and I don’t have to wear my watch. At last, I put a sharp knife on the top of the pen, I can either use it for
cutting things or even protecting myself when I come across danger.
Such is the pen which I designed. Isn’t it useful and attractive?
【亮点说明】
本文语言规范，条理清楚，脉络清晰。过渡性词汇Firstly, Secondly, At last, On the one hand, On the
other hand等等的贴切使用使文章意义更连贯，逻辑更严密。总体上讲不失为一篇优秀的范文。
典例01假如你是李华，要参加你校举办的以"Better English, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提
示写一篇演讲稿讲述学英语的益处。
1.在生活上的好处；
2.在学业上的好处；
3.在就业上的好处。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【思路点拨】
演讲稿是绍性说明文，语言-定要准确简洁、通俗易懂、逻辑性强、结构多变、节奏感强。演讲稿
由开头语、正文和结束语三部分组成。开头语-般来说比较简单，目的就是吸引听众或读者的注意力。考
生在写作时首先要审清楚题目，题目已经要求内容包括三点，因此重点是将所要表达的语言点都表达到
位，不要遗漏了某一点。同时应尽量选择自己最熟悉的单词、句型来表达自己的意思。在写作过程中注意
使用起承转合的连词和高级词汇，这样作文就能得到比较高的分数。
【参考答案】
Hello, everyone!
I am here to show that the better English, the better life.
Initially, English can enrich our lives and broaden our horizons. Having a better command of English can
contribute to our reading original works. Besides, better English can improve our academic level, which increases
the potential of our being admitted to a key university. Finally, international companies prefer the staff with better
English. To put it differently, the more fluently you speak English, the more doors will open up to you.
Let’s better ourselves and polish our life through better English!
That’s all. Thank you!
6. 高考真题(1) 【2022年新高考1卷】
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
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【参考答案】
Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk
and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when
having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished
foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole
Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline
写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：establish→set up
了不起的：amazing→fabulous
帮助：aid→assistance
许多：plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了where引导的
限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal
with it.(运用了状语从句的省略)
(2) 【2022年全国甲卷】
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1. 海洋的重要性；
2. 保护海洋的倡议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
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【参考答案】When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June
8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the
balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our
daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call
on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect
ourselves.
【解析】
【导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建
议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
越来越：more and more→increasingly
重视：place importance on→attach importance to
重要的：key→significant
此外：what’s more→furthermore
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
拓展句：World Ocean Day, which falls on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature.(运
用了部分倒装结构)
[高分句型2]When it comes to ocean, its pollution becoming more and more serious.(使用了固定句型)
[高分句型3]First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.(使用了主语从句)
(3) 【2022年全国乙卷】
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一
篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 学习活动状况描述：
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写
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【参考答案】
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are
choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching
English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English
learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading
English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing
games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and
teachers to strengthen the guidance.
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文给学校英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择：choose → select提高：improve → strengthen
各种各样的：various → diverse
就我而言：as far as I’m concerned → from my perspective
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students
are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways.
拓展句：Nowadays, because smartphones and computers are becoming more and more popular, an increasing
number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English
songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以
及who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】It's urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline (运用了it作形式主语，to
improve their self-discipline为真正的主语)
(4) 【2022年6月浙江卷】
假定你是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一
同体验，内容包括：
1.位置与开放时间； 2.室内设施和功能。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考答案】
Dear Michael,
Good news ! Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open
to us students in our school library.
Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout
the weekdays. Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet.
It’s really convenient for us to do some group projects. Why not ask our group members to go and experience it?
Early reply and we can reserve one room for our project.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留
学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
由……组成：consist of→ be made up of
位于：be located on→ be situated on
与……相连接： be linked to →be connected to
预定：reserve→book
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us
students in our school library.
拓展句：Recently, a newly-furnished section, which consists of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us
students in our school library.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the
Internet.（of which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm
throughout the weekdays.（过去分词作状语）(5) 【2021.3天津卷】
假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目，请你给
该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：
（1）该地方的基本情况（如名称、地理位置等）；
（2）该地方的特色（如文化、景点等）；
（3）你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
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【参考答案】
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest,
such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan lrrigation project.
Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive
is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What's more, walking in the nature reserve, you have a chanceto see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here.
Another famous scenic spot is Dujangyan lrrigation Project. It dates from over 2, 000 years ago. However, it is still
playing an important part in irrigation today.
I'm sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction
Dujiangyan lrigation Project.
(6) 【2020.7全国二卷】
上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：
1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人感受。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。
题目：My Weekend
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【参考答案】
My Weekend
Last weekend，we took part in a picking activity. We drove from the school, and the farm was about 2
kilometers away from our school. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of animals, green fresh
vegetables and fruit trees in the farm. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for picking
fruits, the other packed up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the activity was over. But it was a meaningful day, whenwe learn a lot form it. Through this activity, we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is. We
should treasure the food planted by the farmers.
(7) 【2018全国3卷】
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信
内容包括：
1. 学校的体育场馆；
2. 主要的运动项目；
3. 你喜欢的项目。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Peter,
How are you doing? You asked me about how our school performs our PE classes in your last letter, so I'm
writing to share with you some details.
Equipped with two playgrounds as well as a splendid stadium, our school offers us an opportunity to do a
variety of sports. Not only dowe take volleyball and basketball courses, but our school also holds all kinds of sportscompetitions. Among all sports, I'm crazy aboutvolleyball. As far as I'm concerned, there is nothing better than
playing volleyball, which contributes to us cooperating with others.
Looking forward to hearing from you again!
Yours,
Li Hua
(8) 【2018年11月高考真题浙江卷】
假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦敦后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求
帮助。内容包括：
1．行程信息；
2．钱包特征；
3．联系方式。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, and I was a passenger on Flight FL743 of your airline to London from Hangzhou
yesterday. Unfortunately, I found that my wallet got lost when I arrived at the airport of London. Therefore I amwriting to ask for your help in finding my wallet, which is yellow with my name attached to the back. It contains
my ID cards and two bank cards. The most importantly, it's a birthday present that my father had given me. I would
greatly appreciate it if you could help find it. My telephone number is 3308-8977.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
Li Hua
(9) 【2018年3月高考真题天津卷】
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为 Chris 的外国学生发的帖子，得知
他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给Chris 留言：
（1）鼓励他来中国留学；
（2）说明来华留学的好处（如：加深对中国的了解，对个人发展的益处等）；
（3）表示愿意进一步提供帮助。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Any suggestions?
Posted on Mar. 22nd, 2018 9:00 PM
It's time to make a decision. I'm wondering if I should go to China for
Chris college.
Australia
Reply to Chris
Posted on Mar. 23rd, 2018 10:00 AM
Li Jin
Hi, Chris.
China
Yours,
Li Hua
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Hi, Chris. I’ve learnt from your post that you’re considering whether to study in China. As a Chinese high
school student, I’d love to offer some suggestions
to help you decide on this matter.
First of all, I would encourage you to choose a Chinese university. China is a nation with a long history and
diverse cultures, which I think you’ll be interested in. After four years of study, I believe, you would know a lot
about China. And with the degree you get and the Chinese language you pick up, you will probably find a good job
and have a bright future. Besides, Chinese people are friendly and kind. You’ll find it easy to make friends and
enjoy a happy and meaningful life here.
So, don’t hesitate. I’m willing to offer further help if you need.
(10) 【2016年四川卷】
某中学生英文报正举办＂The Season I Like Best＂的征文活动，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容应包括：
1. 你最喜欢的季节；
2. 你喜欢该季节的两条理由(如：气候、景色、活动、感受……)。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好；
3. 行文连贯，语篇完整；
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审题时考生需要注意三点：1. 既然是为征文活动写的短文，那么最好增加标题(题干已给出)，注意和
书信类的应用文有所区别。2. 如前所述，内容主体虽然只涉及两个大方面，但陈述两条理由的时候需要有
层次地展开：既可以从客观事实和主观感受两方面来写，也可以从季节本身的自然属性和发生在季节中的
人文活动入手，这是该作文要求中比较灵活的部分。3. 需要增加文章开头和结尾部分，以保证语篇的完整
性和逻辑的通畅性，这是该作文要求中比较开放的部分。这三点，是难点，也是失分点。
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The Season I Like Best
Each of us knows that there are four seasons a year. Different people like different seasons; my favourite
season is spring. I love to smell the fragrance of flowers, see the new green trees and hear the singing of small
birds. There are many busy butterflies and bees over the flowers. Sometimes it rains, but usually rains quietly. The
rain moistens the trees and the flowers. And I can play outside, too! Whether we like riding bikes, jogging or going
on long walks, spring allows us to enjoy outdoor activities that we had to put on the back burner during winter. Of
course, there are many other reasons to explain why I’m so excited about spring. Thank you, spring!
【技巧点拨】
事物介绍类书面表达属于说明文。说明文是用简洁的文字介绍事物的特性、构造、变化或结果的文
章。高考中，说明文常见的话题有：事物介绍、地点描述、方位描写、变化分析和购物指南等。写这类文
章需要注意以下几点：
1. 首先要审题，弄清需要介绍的内容，把握信息要点。
2. 写作内容要条理清楚，层次分明。说明科技方面的内容常用定义法、比较对比法、分类法和因果法等；
明自然环境方面的内容常用时空次序法与分类法等。
3. 时态常用一般现在时，当然若是介绍其历史，要用一般过去时；语态可能会用到被动语态；若是介绍地
点、环境等，要善于运用there be结构。
4. 人称多以第三人称为主。
必背范文
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人人都渴望朋友和友谊。为此，有人提出了建立，加深和保持友谊的三要素：1.诚实：建立友谊；2.慷
慨大方和乐于分享：加深友谊；3.通情达理：使友谊持久。请围绕以上三点，写一篇说明文，
注意：
1.使用一般现在时态；
2.词数100左右；
3.参考词汇：understanding adj./n.通情达理的/理解；generosity n.慷慨大方。
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To establish a long-term friendship，we must learn three important factors：be honest，be generous and be
understanding .
First, honesty is where friendship starts. Friends must trust each other. If we tell lies, our friends will find out
that we aren’t reliable, which may result in losing friends. Second, generosity means sharing, aimed at helping
friendship grow. But it is not involved with only money. We can share other valuable things such as studying skills
and feelings, etc. Third, understanding makes our friendship last longer. If friends have quarrels , just put ourselves
in our friends’ shoes, and we can understand them better, thus making up and as a result, our friendship will be
stronger and stronger and last forever.
Writing 2
仔细观察下面一幅图画，根据图画的内容，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。
情景：假定你叫李华，家住香港。你和几个朋友约定星期六在中心公园聚会。现请你写封信邀请在学校居
住的Brown女士参加，并根据下图告诉她来中心公园的路线。
参考词汇：have a gathering party(聚会)
Dear Mrs Brown,
We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday. Here is how you can find us.
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Dear Mrs Brown,
We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday. Here is how you can find us. We'll have our
gathering party in the Central Park. Maybe you've been there, haven't you?
Go straight on when you get out of the school gate and come to the street. Then turn right at the second
crossing and you'll find a hospital. Just opposite it is a No.7 bus stop. Take a bus and get off at the fourth stop.
Central Park is just in front of it. We'll have our gathering party in a boat on the 1ake. What a funny thing! Do
come. We’ll wait for you at the park gate.
on time. We'll wait for you at the park gate.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 3
请以＂我最喜欢的未来机器人＂为题，写一篇100 词左右的说明文，描述自己理想中的未来机器人。
要包含以下要点：
1.我理想中的未来机器人是一个英俊的小伙子， 名叫杰里；
2.他不仅歌唱得好，也擅长踢足球。他很聪明，能说流利的中文和英文；
3.他理解我、关心我。当我沮丧时，他会鼓励我； 当我取得很大进步时，他会表扬我；
4.他帮我学习；
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My Favourite Robot in the Future
My favourite robot in the future is a handsome boy named Jerry. He not only can sing well but also is good at
playing football. He is clever and can speak both Chinese and English fluently.
He understands me and cares for me. He encourages me when I am upset, and praises me when I make great
progress. He shares my joys and sorrows as well. He can even help me with my studies. Jerry is my best friend and
I like him very much.
十一、求助信
1. 考情分析
①第一种类型：请求提供信息
如：“我”要去海外求学，请求对方提供相关学校的学费、住宿等信息。这种请求信也叫“咨询信”，
【内容分析】
a.客观描述（靠翻译）
b.喜爱/推荐原因
重点准备：中国文化类，如节日，中国结，唐诗等中国元素相关的内容。
②第二种类型：请求对方付出建议或者某种行为（脑力或体力）
如：“我”要参加竞赛，请对方给“我”建议；
“我”是校报编辑，请求对方写文章。此种请求信也叫“约稿信”。
约稿信的变体：“我”是主办方代表，请求对方为某次展览提供摄影或绘画作品。
2. 布局思维导图首段 求助目的
段落要点 正文 具体求助内容
结尾 再次表示期望和感谢。
3. 写作模板
模板①
Dear ______ ,
I am writing to formally request to ______（请求的内容）.The reason for _____________is
that_____________（给出原因）. I___________ , so I _____________（给出细节）.I would also like to request
___________（提出进一步的要求）. I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your
attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at __________（电话号码）.
I look forward to a favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
模板②
Dear________,
My name is _______________(自我介绍). I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met
difficulty in _______________(求助内容). First, I find ___________(困难1). Besides, ________(困难2). What’s
more, __________(困难3).
Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to ____________(委婉提出
请求)？In the meanwhile, I beg you to (请求内容) so that ___________(请求目的). Also, I would like you to (请
求内容).
I’m sure that I can make great progress in _____________(表达期待).Yours,
Li Hua
模板③
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am ______(自我介绍) . I am writing to seek for your help in______(写信目的).
Now, I struggle a lot in ______(遇到的困难). I’ve found that ______(描述自己的困难). For one thing,
______(困难一). For another, ______(困难二).
Therefore, could you please put forward some practical suggestions? I am convinced that I will benefit a
lot from your valuable and timely advice.
I would appreciate it if you could respond at your earliest convenience.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【必背词句】
常用句型：
（做某事有困难）
1.I have trouble in doing sth.
2.I find it extremely hard for me to do sth. 3.Doing sth is another terrible headache for me.
常见困难：
【生活方面】
与人相处
get along well with my classmates/ the new teacher / my parents.
和我的同新老师/父母相处
把握时间
arrange and make good use of my everyday time for valuable things.
安排和利用每天的时间去做有意义的事情
明确目标
know the purpose of my life and the destination of my future in order to passionately live a purpose-driven life ever
yday.
知道我生命的目的和未来的目标，以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活
【学习方面】
不懂语法have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them into use in my speaking and writing.
进步太慢
find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying me for a long time.
精力有限
can’t be passionate and energetic all day long so as to make every moment meaningful and splendid.
4. 写作实操技巧
假设你是高三学生李华，今年的高考阅读量加大，而你的阅读能力较差，因此学习的压力越来越大。
请你根据你下内容向你的前外教Mr Jackson 求助。希望得到他的帮助。
注意：词数 80 左右，可合理添加细节。
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Dear Mr Jackson (称谓)
I am Li Hua, preparing for the National College exam (自我介绍) . I am writing to seek for your help in
improving my English (写信目的).
Now, I struggle a lot in English reading(遇到的困难). I’ve found that w ith the college entrance
approaching I feel more stressed than ever (描述自己的困难). For one thing, we have to read more
articles in the exam and all the teachers attach great significance to the capability of reading, askingstudents to expand vocabulary and do more exercises (困难一). For another, hard as I try, I still find it
hard to improve, which even makes me can’t sleep (困难二).
Therefore, could you please put forward some practical suggestions? I am convinced that I will benefit a
lot from your valuable and timely advice.
I would appreciate it if you could respond at your earliest convenience.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
5. 仿写演练
1.
假定你是李华，你正在为期中考试紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是
你给学校心理老师Kate写了一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下:
1.作业多，没时间运动；
2. 压力大，难以入睡；
3. 希望得到Kate的帮助
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考答案】Dear Kate (称谓)
I am Li Hua (自我介绍) . I am writing to seek for your help in improving my English (写信目的).
Now, I struggle a lot in my study(遇到的困难). I’ve found that hardly do I take sports due to too much
homework (描述自己的困难). For one thing, it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night (困难一). For
another, the high expectation from my parents makes me extremely feel stressed (困难二).
Therefore, could you please put forward some practical suggestions? I am convinced that I will benefit a
lot from your valuable and timely advice.
I would appreciate it if you could respond at your earliest convenience.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
2.
假设你是李华，是一名高三学生。你的同班同学王强因患白血病(leukemia)而住院，目前已经花光了家
里的所有积蓄，现在需要骨髓移植(bone marrow transplant)，需要20万元。请你帮他写一封求助信。要点
如下：
1.对病人的简单介绍；
2.目前的困难；
3.希望得到捐助。
联系电话：白天5221600；晚上5221610。
注意：
1.词数100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
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【写作指导】
该写作根据要求可分为三部分来写，即先说明王强患病的情况，再简单介绍王强目前所处的困境，最后写
出求助要求和帮助方式。可用第一人称写，时态可以一般现在时为主。
【参考答案】
Dear friends,
I’m very sad to tell you that my classmate Wang Qiang, a Senior Three student, suddenly felt faint when he
was preparing for the coming College Entrance Examination. He is suffering from a serious illness "leukemia". He
has been in hospital for about three months and spent all the money his parents saved. His parents, both farmers,
tried every means to save him.
Wang Qiang is a top student in our class, but he is in hospital now. He is in urgent need of a bone marrow
transplant. However, his family is too poor to afford the expenses, which total 200,000 yuan. How can a poor
family afford such high expenses? But time is life. We can’t wait to see such a sunshine boy lose his life.
So your help is badly needed. Let’s do what we can to save our fellow student. The life of a lovely boy is in
your hand. Your love can save a life. You can contact 5221600 in the daytime and 5221610 at night.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【范文亮点】
该范文结构合理，层次分明，语言表达地道，行文流畅。内容涵盖了所有的要点，运用了较多的高级
语法结构和词汇，如which引导的非限制性定语从句，when引导的时间状语从句等。
6. 高考真题
(1) 【2021.1八省联考】
假定你是李华，准备参加学校组织的英文诗朗诵比赛。请给外教George写封邮件求助，内容包括:
1. 说明比赛要求； 2. 请他推荐英文诗； 3. 请教朗诵技巧。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear George,
I'm writing to ask for your help.
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【参考答案】
Dear Mr. George,
I’m writing to ask for your help. Our school will hold an English Poetry Reading Contest next weekend. I am
eager to have a try. It is required that the theme should be about nature. Each contestant is given up to five minutes
to read the poem. So would you please be so kind to give me some recommendations on which poem to choose?
Besides, what I need are the skills of recitation, including pronunciation and intonation, which will perfect my
performance.
I’d appreciate it if you could give me some guidance. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【官方范文】
Dear George,
I'm writing to ask for your help. I'm preparing for the English Poem Recitation Competition of our
school. The competition requires every participant to recite an English poem of our own choice within
five minutes and the poem should be easy to understand. I wonder if you could recommend a few Englishpoems to me. Besides, I wish you could teach me some techniques for reciting poems. I tried with some
simple ones but found it hard to recite at an appropriate speed. The competition will be held in two
weeks. I'd be grateful if you could help me.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(2) （2020全国III）
假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮
件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；2. 指导内容；3. 商定时间地点。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 结束语已为你写好。
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Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to
the textbook.
We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English
play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is
going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script,we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft
script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office
next Tuesday to give you more details?
Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look
forward to your early reply. Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
(3) 【2020北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班班长李华。居家学习期间，你们班开展了一次以“自律”为主题的
调研活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文稿件，给你们学校英文网站投稿，记述你在本
次活动中发现问题并解决问题的过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：自律self-discipline
【参考答案】
This unusual term witnessed a swift heart-shaking growth in our self-discipline,which was, is and will
always be leaving a significant influence on our development.With the unexpected COID－19 threatening our health and safety continuously,staying indoors and
working online is a must-take defensive measure.We senior 3 students are just among those, who have no
other choice but to manage ourselves at home by learning on the Internet.However, one day ,a survey came
,which showed an awful result that most of us had not made full use of this kind of resources,wasting
much time playing online games or paying no carefulness to the required lessons.Immediately,being the
monitor of our class, I frowned with endless anxiety.At dinner,a talk took place in my family,where my
considerate father and mother put forward practical suggestions.With the purpose of strengthening self-
discipline awareness together,I organized an online classmeeting ，stating a series of advice ,calling on
everyone to improve our self-discipline and ending up with a regular rule.Finally came the time when three
months flew away.A new survey showing our progress excited me greatly,with the result that I called my
headteacher,telling him our long-expected achievements.Meanwhile,delight mixed with bits of satisfaction
surged into his heart and mine.
It is owing to this special period that we have grown up rapidly.Nothing is impossible if we are
determined enough to control ourselves and build self-discipline in any situation.
(4) 2018年6月高考真题全国卷I
假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮
件，内容包括:
1. 到达时间；
2. 合适的礼物；
3. 餐桌礼仪。
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Terry,
I am delighted to learn that you will visit your Chinese friend in his house soon. According to the
questions you raised, I'd like to offer you the following advice.
Firstly, you should confirm the arrival time with him before your visit. It's better to turn up 5
minutes in advance. Besides, I recommend that you should bring a proper gift with you, which can be aprime wine, a selected skin care product or some popular honey produced in New Zealand. I think the
family will appreciate any of them as they are quite popular in China. Most importantly, Chinese table
manners are very different from yours. What's considered to be polite is taking food just presented in
front of you with a spoon or chopsticks. Also, don't worry if they keep filling your bowl with various
food, because it always means welcome and friendship in our culture, which you can feel free to enjoy.
I can't wait to see you in China! Hope you have a pleasant trip!
With love,
Li Hua
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【参考答案】
Dear Terry,
How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend’s home.
Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.
To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the
family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you’d better bring some gifts,
like a book or a Chinese knot. What’s more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making
noises while chewing food.
Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a
great time.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua(5) 2018年高考真题全国卷III
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信
内容包括：
1. 学校的体育场馆；
2. 主要的运动项目；
3. 你喜欢的项目。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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（1）
Dear Peter,
How are you doing? You asked me about how our school performs our PE classes in your last letter,
so I'm writing to share with you some details.
Equipped with two playgrounds as well as a splendid stadium, our school offers us an opportunity to
do a variety of sports. Not only dowe take volleyball and basketball courses, but our school also holds all
kinds of sports competitions. Among all sports, I'm crazy aboutvolleyball. As far as I'm concerned, there
is nothing better than playing volleyball, which contributes to us cooperating with others.
Looking forward to hearing from you again!
Yours,
Li Hua
（2）Dear Peter,
How are you doing these days? I just received your letter yesterday, and I'm glad to know you're
interested in the sports activities in our school.
Our school has a sports field which covers an area of about two square kilometers. We have three
indoor activity rooms as well, located in the east of our campus.
Our school often holds footballand basketball matches, and players from other schools often come to
play against us.
My favorite sport is basketball. I'm a member of the Dragon Team. What's your favorite sport?
Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
（3）
Dear Peter,
I am so delighted to have received your letter. You asked me in your last letter about theme physical
exercise in our school and the following information may give you some help.
To my great joy, a famous new stadium has been put up, which has become the landmark in our
school. Besides, with the stadium built, a wide range of sports activities can be carried out, of which
table tennis, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. I am particularly fond of
basketball because it has been giving me strength to confront the challenge in my life.
Finally, I sincerely invite you to visit our school and join in the sports we both like.
Yours,
Li Hua
(6) （2016·新课标卷I）
李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她
帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。
注意：
1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________
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【参考答案】
Dear MS Jenkins,
I’m Li Hua. I plan to take a part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. I have already
filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. However, I am not sure about the words and format.
Therefore, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advice.
Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? Would you mind finding out the
mistakes in terms of words and format? Besides, I’d like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials and
format.
I would much appreciate it if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(7) （2013·新课标卷I）
假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中
国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：
李明：高个子，戴眼镜
航班号：CA985
到达：8月6日上午11:30
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【参考答案】
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to
bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.
Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel
since this is his first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!
His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing
glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
必背范文
Writting1
假定你是李华，前不久听了美国文学教授Mr. Smith关于"读英语文学作品，提高英语运用能力"的讲
座，受益匪浅，但仍有一些问题不是很清楚，所以写信向他求助，内容包括：
1.自我介绍；
2.请教读文学作品时要注意什么；3.请他为你推荐几本适合阅读的英语作品。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【写作指导】
本题要求写一封求助信，所以考生需要特别注意的是求助信中证据要客气委婉。首先考生可以简要介
绍自己，说明自己是哪个年级的学生，以便Mr.Smith 推荐书籍；其次，一定要用客气地道的表达方式清
晰明了地提出自己的请求；最后表示感谢。
1.求助的常用词汇：give/lend sb. a hand；do sb. a favor等。
2.求助的常用句型：Could you please； I was wondering whether you could等。
3.感谢的常用句型：I’d be grateful if you could； I’d appreciate it if you could等。
【参考答案】
Dear Mr. Smith,
My name is Li Hua, a senior 3 student. The other day, I attended your lecture on "Read English literary works
to improve your ability to use English" which has benefited me a lot. But in some aspects, I still need your help, so
I’m writing to you today.
First, could you please tell me what I should mainly focus on when reading English literary work, vocabulary,
grammar, culture or something else? Besides, what’s the correct order to deal with the different aspects? What’s
more, I was wondering whether you could recommend some good works which are suitable for senior 3 students.
I’d appreciate it if you could do me a favor! Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Writting2假如你是李华。最近，你与父母之间关系紧张， 甚至发生争吵。你决定给外国的笔友Charlie写一封
信，向他求助。内容包括：
1.谈谈你目前遇到的问题；
2.针对如何改善与父母的关系向他求助。
注意：
1.词数100左右， 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Charlie,
How are you getting along?
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I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Charlie,
How are you getting along? Recently I have quarreled with my parents, which makes me very annoyed. I am
writing to ask you for help.
You know, my parents don’t allow me to go out and play with my friends at weekends. They think I should
make full use of every minute to work on my lessons. However, I think I need to play with my friends so that I can
relax myself after a week’s hard work at school and it is a good way for me to keep in touch with my friends. I
know it is wrong to quarrel with them, but I don’t know what to do to persuade them to change their mind and
develop a good relationship with them. Would you please offer me some advice?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li HuaWriting 3
假设你是学生李华，你的家乡剪纸艺术负有盛名，你写了一篇英文宣传稿，想请外籍教师Bob帮助润
色。请根据提示，用英语给Bob写一封求助信。内容包括：
1.求助事由；
2.求助内容；
3.表达感激。
注意：
1.词数120左右；
2.信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.
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Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Bob,
I' m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor. When it comes to papercutting, there is
no denying that it enjoys a great reputation in my hometown. For a long time I have been 1onging to write an
appealing article to make it better known. However, only when I put the idea into practice did I find that my
English is far from satisfaction.
As far as I’m concerned, you have a good command of written English, which impresses me a lot. Would you
like to do me a favor to have my draft polished? I will pay you a visit at your earliest convenience.
I would appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 4假如你叫李华，上高中快一年了，发现自己还是不能适应高中的学习生活。现在请你就目前的情况给
自己初中时最信任的老师写一封求助信，信的重要内容如下：
1.高中生活基本情况：
( 1 )有9 门课程；
( 2 )每天作业时间4—5小时，课外活动时间少；
( 3 )睡眠时间不足，上课有时感到疲劳；
( 4 )考试压力大，家长期望高。
2.你目前遇到的最大问题以及现在的感受并希望得到建议。
注意：
1.内容应包括以上所有信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2.词数120左右。信的开头和结尾已经写好，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇： 压力 pressure; 家长的高期望 high expectations from parents
Dear Mr. Li,
I'm Li Hua. Do you remember me ? _________________________
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All the best.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Mr. Wang,
I’m Li Hua. Do you still remember me ? How are you now ? I am writing to you, asking for your help because
I find I’m not very used to the senior high school life.
We have nine subjects which are more than I had in junior high school. Every day I have to spend four to five
hours doing my homework, so there is little time left for after-school activities. I hardly have any time to do what Iwant. Besides, I sometimes feel sleepy in class because I don’t have enough sleep. The great pressure of exams and
high expectations from my parents often make me even more tired.
The biggest problem I meet now is my maths, which is more difficult than that in junior high school. I don’t
know how to improve it. So I hope I can get some advice from you.
All the best.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
Writing 5
假设你是李华，是一名高三学生。你的同班同学王强因患白血病(leukemia)而住院,目前已经花光了家
里的所有积蓄，现在需要骨髓移植(bone marrow transplant),需要20万元。请你帮他写一封求助信。要点如
下：
1.对病人的简单介绍；
2.目前的困难；
3.希望得到捐助。
联系电话：白天5221600；晚上5221610。
注意:
1.词数100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
I’m very sad to tell you that
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【参考答案】Dear friends,
I’m very sad to tell you that my classmate Wang Qiang, a Senior Three student, suddenly felt faint when he
was preparing for the coming College Entrance Examination. He is suffering from a serious illness "leukemia". He
has been in hospital for about three months and spent all the money his parents saved. His parents, both farmers,
tried every means to save him.
Wang Qiang is a top student in our class, but he is in hospital now. He is in urgent need of a bone marrow
transplant. However, his family is too poor to afford the expenses, which total 200,000 yuan. How can a poor
family afford such high expenses? But time is life. We can’t wait to see such a sunshine boy lose his life.
So your help is badly needed. Let’s do what we can to save our fellow student. The life of a lovely boy is in your
hand. Your love can save a life. You can contact 5221600 in the daytime and 5221610 at night.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
Writing 6
假如你是李华。本期你校开设了英语口语课,由于你不太适应外教Chris的授课，你决定给她写一封求
助信。内容包括：
1.告诉她你的困难；
2.求助的内容(推荐一些听力材料、周末和她练习口语等)；
3.希望得到帮助。
注意：
1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
I am Li Hua, one of your students in Oral English class.
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Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Chris,
I am Li Hua, one of your students in Oral English class. I am writing to seek help from you.
You know, I come from a junior high school in the countryside, where teachers don’t speak much English in
class. That is why I am not good at listening or speaking. Now I find it really hard to follow you in class. I hope you
can recommend some listening materials to me so that I can improve my listening after class. Besides, could I
practice speaking with you for half an hour at weekends at your convenient time? I think it can help me improve
my spoken English.
I would be grateful if you could lend me a helping hand.
Yours,
Li Hua
十二、祝贺信
1. 布局思维导图
2. 基本模板日常生活中，无论是亲朋好友毕业、晋升、获奖、开业，还是订婚、结婚、生日，都需要写上一封信
向对方表示祝贺。信中应表示为对方而高兴。祝贺信应当充满真诚和热情，收信人读后会感到喜悦和振
奋。祝贺信既可以正式写，也可以随便写，具体视场合而定。对不太熟悉的朋友适合正式写，以表示礼貌
和尊重；对熟悉的朋友则可以随便一些。但无论采用哪种方式，祝贺信必须表达由衷的感情，而且写信要
及时。
模板①
Dear_______,
(1)I have learned with delight that you______.
(1)获悉值得祝贺的消息，说出祝贺事由
(2)I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on
(2)表达祝贺
__ __.
(3)You must be very proud of your ______. (3)描述对方的心情
(4)And I feel very happy for you. (4)表达自己的心情
(5)____ _ is quite exciting news!
(5)被祝贺人所取得的成绩
(6)You are really__ .
(6)对对方的赞美
(7)I know this is surely owing to__ _ .
(7)对方取得成绩的原因
(8)It is a reward you deserve for your __ .
(8)对对方取得成绩的肯定，说出被祝贺人的
(9)With your___ __, I am sure that you will be a success
优点
in whatever you undertake.
(10)Kindly let me know when you____ . (9) 被祝贺人的优秀品质，表达对对方的祝
福
(11) I hope .
(12)My best wishes for your further success.
Sincerely Yours, (10)咨询对方的情况和时间
Li Ming (11)表达愿望
(12)表达自己真诚的祝福
模板②
Dear ______ ,
I have learned with delight that you ______（祝贺事由）. I would like to extend to you my utmost
congratulations on ______. You must be ______. And I feel very happy for you. ______（所取得的成绩）is
quite exciting news! I know this is surely owing to ______（被祝贺人过去的努力）.It is a reward you richly
deserve for your ______（被祝贺人的优点）. Kindly let me know when you ______（咨询对方何时有空）.
I hope ______（表达自己的愿望）.
My best wishes for your further success.
Yours sincerely,Li Ming
模板③
Dear_____________,
Congratulations on your _______ . I know how hard you have been working and I am very proud of you for
your achievement. I understand for sure that it is your hard work / your excellent ability that leads you to the
current success. This new position, on the other hand, adds a new dimension to your life and is bound to ________ .
What’s more, I also believe that .
May all goes beautifully in your new post!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
模板④
Dear_____________,
Good news travels fast! It was delightful for me to hear that ______________ . Please accept my sincere
congratulations to your ___________. I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I
know more than anyone else how much effort you have put in. Now you prove to me a matured and well-
rounded________ in every respect. Judging from your current success / achievement, I am confident that in the
future ___________ .
May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
模板⑤
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am writing to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______(祝贺事由). As ______(身份关系),
I just want you to know how delighted I was when______(祝贺事由) .
For these years, you ______(被祝贺人过去的经历). Not only did/have/were______(被祝贺人的努力), but
also______(被祝贺人的努力). It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______(被祝贺人的优点) .
All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
3. 写作实操技巧假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Michael在学校举办的“中国诗词大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等
奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。
1. 祝贺他获奖；
2. 肯定他付出的努力；
3. 询问何时方便，一起交流一下中国古诗词学习心得。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
中国诗词大会 Chinese Poetry Contest
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Dear Michael (称谓)
I am writing to extend to you my utmost congratulations on your winning the first prize of your group in
the Chinese Poetry Contest (祝贺事由). As your friend(身份关系), I just want you to know how delighted I was
when I know your success(祝贺事由) .
For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese poetry and kept on reciting poems every day (被祝贺
人过去的经历). Not only have you accumulated much knowledge about Chinese poetry (被祝贺人的努力), but
also you have formed a deep understanding of it (被祝贺人的努力). It is a reward you richly deserve for your
appreciation towards those poems (被祝贺人的优点) .
All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua【必背词句】
祝贺信是社交中的一种礼仪性信函。通常包括以下几个方面的内容：说明祝贺事由，表达热烈、诚挚
的祝贺；围绕祝贺事件表述贺喜内容；表达美好祝福。
写作三步走 ：
说明事由并表达自己衷心的祝贺->展开评论事件、赞扬收信人->再次表达良好祝愿
在写作主要内容的时候，可以重点赞扬一下当事人的优秀能力和取得成就的原因、并展望他将来的美好发
展前景等。
开头常用句式
It was exciting news for me to learn of …
Please accept my sincere/hearty/warm congratulations on …
It was a great pleasure to send you my congratulations on …
I was delighted to learn of your success /achievements in …
I am really happy to learn that you have been elected…
结尾常用句式
Wish you good luck!
We wish to share your honor and joy.
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.
May all go wonderfully in your new post!
May every happiness be yours!
All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future/successful career!
May each succeeding year bring you great happiness and prosperity.
Every good wish to you for much health, happiness, and prosperity!
4. 仿写演练
1. 假设你是李华，来自美国的交流生Peter 在你班学习半年，与你成为好朋友。目前，他即将完成学成
回国，请你用英语给他写一篇临别留言。要点包括：
1.祝贺Peter学习汉语取得的成绩；
2. 取得成绩的原因；
3. 你们的友谊和对他的祝愿。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【参考答案】
Dear Peter (称谓)
I am writing to extend to you my utmost congratulations on your achievement in your study (祝贺事
由). As your friend(身份关系), I just want you to know how delighted I was when I know have achieved your
goa l (祝贺事由) .
For the past six months, you astonished us with your amazing talent in learning Chinese well in a short of time
(被祝贺人过去的经历). Not only are you diligent and active, which is vital for Chinese learning (被祝贺人
的努力), but also you have showed your genuine passion for Chinese reading, which enables you to have a
good memory for Chinese characters (被祝贺人的努力). It is a reward you richly deserve for your enthusiasm
(被祝贺人的优点) .
Still I know it’ s time for us to say goodbye. All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
2. 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter最近在某电视台举办的汉语演讲比赛中获得第一名，他给了你重要
的人生启迪。请写信向他表示祝贺与感谢。
注意：
1.词数1000左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【写作指导】
本题要求写一封信，既表示祝贺又表示感谢。人称应以第一人称为主。基本时态应为一般现在时和现
在完成时。书信是考生非常熟悉的应用文体，因此下笔会很容易，但应注意词数的限制和内容的呈现方
式。写作时可能用到的表达有congratulations to you on"为……向你表示祝贺"；admire"钦佩"；learn a
lesson"学到了一课"；express thanks"表达谢意"；thank you for"因……感谢你"等。
【参考答案】
Dear Peter,
Congratulations to you on your winning first place in the Chinese Speech Competition held recently. You
deserve the honor. The past years have seen your devotion, persistence and strenuous efforts, eventually your rapid
progress in Chinese learning.
To be honest, what I admire most is your diligence and determination. It’s from you that I have learned a
valuable lesson, that is, "No pains, no gains." Therefore, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you for what
you have taught me.
Wish you greater achievements in your study!
Yours,
Li Hua
5. 高考真题
(1) 【2008 年高考英语全国卷 I】假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生
的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封
信：
1、 自我介绍；
2、 祝贺苏琳生日；
3、 感谢工作人员；
4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意：1、词数100左右；
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3、开头语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
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ours truly,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China! I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About
three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her
grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks
to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US. By
the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua必背范文
Writting1
假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Alice在学校的演讲比赛中得了第一名，给她写封信，词数120—150，
包括如下内容：
1.祝贺她取得优异成绩；
2.告诉她你在高三学习中的苦与乐；
3.邀请她方便的时候来中国玩。
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Dear Alice,
How are you doing these days?
From your letter, I know that you won first place in the speech contest of your school. Congratulations! I
strongly believe that you have the ability and undoubtedly, your hard work and determination contribute to your
success.
It is several months since I entered Senior Three. During these days, anxiety and happiness accompany me.
Sometimes when I meet with some difficulties, I feel depressed. But I feel content more often because study
occupies most of my time, for I know success lies in hard work. Only by making every effort will I realize my
dream of entering Peking University.
Welcome to China if it is convenient for you! I promise that I will take you to many places of interest and you
can taste delicious dishes. I know you must like it.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,Li Hua
Writing 2
假定你是李华，你的朋友Jack在第二十六届英语演讲比赛中取得第一名的好成绩，你给他写信祝贺。
要点包括：
1.得知他取得英语演讲比赛第一名的好成绩，你表示祝贺；
2.对他获奖一事的看法和认识；
3.希望与他共进晚餐以示庆祝。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Jack,
I have learned with great delight that you have won the championship of the 26th English Speech Contest. I
would like to extend to you my congratulations on your success. I feel very proud of you. And it’s really good news
to your family and teachers.
Winning the championship of the English Speech Contest is quite exciting news! You must be very happy and
excited at this moment. I know this is surely the result of your diligence and intelligence. It is a reward you richly
deserve.With your excellence, I am sure that you will be successful in whatever you undertake. I hope that I can have
dinner with you and express my congratulations face to face. Again, please accept my sincere congratulations.
Best wishes for your further success!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
按题目要求，本文是一封祝贺信，可分三段，第一段说明你听到消息，并表示祝贺；第二段可描述
Jack平时付出的努力和向他学习的决心；第三段邀请共进晚餐。另外，你也可根据自己的人生经验和经历
适当增加写作内容。写作时注意用比较地道的表示祝贺和邀请的英语表达，并且用适当连接词以使行文流
畅。
Writing 3
假如你是李华，你的好友李明在中学生英语朗诵比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容，给他写一封
祝贺信。内容包括：
1.向他表示祝贺；
2.请他介绍成功的经验；
3.希望有一天能像他一样取得成功。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；
3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Ming,
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【参考答案】
Dear Li Ming,
I hear that you have won first prize in the English Recitation Contest for middle school students, so I am
writing to send my congratulations to you from the bottom of my heart.
As your best friend, I am proud of you! I know you have always been hard-working. Your efforts pay off at
last. Your pronunciation and fluent English, especially your beautiful voice, left me a deep impression. I hope that I
can be successful like you one day. So could you share with me how you improve your English? Your experience
will be of great help to me in my learning.
I will appreciate it if you can write me back and give me your advice. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 4
假如你是高三学生李华，得知你的英国笔友Reed被剑桥大学(University of Cambridge)录取，请你给他
写一封电子邮件。要点如下：
1.向Reed表示祝贺；
2.介绍自己目前的学习情况；
3.请教学习方法
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
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Li Hua【参考答案】
Dear Reed,
I am very excited and inspired by the news in your e-mail that you have been admitted to University of
Cambridge. First of all, I’d like to give my congratulations to you on your great success. Meanwhile, I also want to
enter a famous university just like you.
Now I want to tell you something about myself. As you know, I’m busy preparing for the College Entrance
Examination right now. I have been working very hard and sometimes have to stay up late doing all sorts of papers.
However, I’m always feeling stressed out and wondering whether my efforts will pay off, which makes me
frustrated and exhausted. Will you be kind enough to give me some advice?
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
十三、慰问信
1. 布局思维导图
2. 基本模板
Dear ______ (称谓)
Words fail me to convey my worry when I heard that ______(写信原由). I am writing to extend sincere pity
and care for you (I hope that the unexpected failure/trouble won’t let you down).
You must ______(表达对遭遇的理解). However，if you were brave enough not to ______(悲观失望
等), which is admirable. Anyway，It can’t be better if you can lift your spirits to face up to the result. Plus,
______(提供建议或帮助) . Remember, I won’t be far away.I hope you can find my encouragement helpful（Hope you can have your troubles removed soon）.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
2. 写作实操技巧
假定你是李华，你的同班同学王刚的家乡遭受台风(Typhoon Mujigae)的袭击，洪水毁坏了家园。你作
为班长给他写一封信，内容如下：1. 表示安慰和关心；2. 提供帮助。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Wang Gang (称谓)
Words fail me to convey my worry when I heard that a horrible and severe Typhoon Mujigae hit your
hometown and your house is in ruins (写信原由). I am writing to extend sincere pity and care for you.
You must have suffered a lot from the accident(表达对遭遇的理解). However，if you were brave enough not
to let out a cry (悲观失望等), which is admirable. Anyway，It can’t be better if you can lift your spirits to face
up to the result. Plus, we will spare no effort to help you. We’ve made a donation of some money, expecting it
can help you go through the difficulty. As for the lessons you have missed, I am willing to help you make them
up(提供建议或帮助) . Remember, I won’t be far away.Hope you can have your troubles removed soon.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
3. 仿写演练
假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike来信说他现在心情很不好，因为在上周结束的校篮球比赛中，他
所在的班级篮球队以一分之差输了。请你给他写一封信，内容如下：1. 表示安慰；2. 提出建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【参考答案】
Dear Mike (称谓)
Words fail me to convey my worry when I heard that y our team lost the basketball match last weekend (写信
原由). I am writing to extend sincere pity and care for you.
You must have been in bad mood (表达对遭遇的理解). However，if you were brave enough not to be
depressed (悲观失望等), which is admirable. Anyway，It can’t be better if you can lift your spirits to face up
to the result. Plus, the essence of competition lies not in victory but in participation. Besides, you can also benefit
from your loss by figuring out your strengths and weaknesses (提供建议或帮助) . Remember, I won’t be far
away.I hope you can find my encouragement helpful.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
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