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【一轮复习讲义】2024年高考英语高频考点题型归纳与方法总结(新高考通用)
第 27 讲 应用文写作之祝贺信类(精讲精练)
题型目录一览
祝贺信
一、知识点梳理
一、文体概述
祝贺信是指在日常生活中,你得知同学或朋友考试取得好成绩、竞赛获奖、考上大学
等,给对方祝贺的信件。书写时应做到真诚、自然和亲切。
结构:说明事由并表明祝贺→肯定对方的付出及优点等→表达自己的期望(分享经验或交流探讨)。
时态:一般现在时和一般过去时
二、套用句式
表示祝贺:
1.It is exciting news for me to learn of you winning…. Congratulations on your success.
2.I was delighted to learn of you winning.... Please accept my sincere /hearty/ warm congratulations.
3.I am really happy to learn that you have won…. It was a great pleasure to send you my congratulations.
4.I have learned with delight that you have won....I am writing to express/send/extend/give/offer my sincere
congratulations to you.
5.I feel very proud of you. And it’s really good news to your family.(你高兴的心情)
3. I am delighted to learn that you have won the first place in the English speech contest. Congratulations.
4. I am writing to express my congratulations on your success in the National College Entrance Examination.
资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】肯定对方的付出:
1. I know this is surely owing to your diligence. You deserve it.
2. It is a reward you deserve for your hard work.
3. To be honest, what I admire most is your diligence and determination. It’s from you that I have learned a
valuable lesson, that is, "No pains, no gains."
4. As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits. ”
5. I strongly believe that you have the ability and undoubtedly, your hard work and determination contribute to
your success.
6. I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I know more than anyone else how
much effort you have put in it. Now you prove to us all you are a good Guzheng player.
7. As we all know, it is your hard work and persistence that lead you to the current success. In the past few
months, you have been devoting time and effort to practicing Guzheng every day, because of which you have
made great progress.
8. With your excellence, I am sure that you will be a success in whatever you undertake.
请求交流切磋:
1. Congratulations again. Kindly let me know when you have free time to talk with me.
2. At last, I hope to play Guzheng with you so that we can make progress together. Please tell me when you
have time.
3.Eventually, would you tell me when it’s convenient for you. I feel like communicating and playing with
you. Sincere congratulations to you again!
4. My best wishes for your further success.
题型分析
【典例】
(2023·重庆万州·重庆市万州第二高级中学校考二模)假定你是李华,最近收到了你的英国朋友 Jacob
资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】的来信,得知他已被剑桥大学(the University of Cambridge)录取。请你写信向他表示祝贺,并就你在大
学专业选择上遇到的困惑征求他的意见。内容包括:
1.向Jacob表本祝贺;
2.谈谈你在大学专业选择上的困惑;
3.向对方征求意见和建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jacob,
How is everything going? I’m glad to receive your letter and know you’ve been admitted to the University
of Cambridge. I’m writing to offer my warmest congratulations.
I am now in the process of university application, struggling with which major to choose. I’m a science
student in high school, so I’m supposed to choose majors related to science and engineering. But the problems
are that I’m not sure where my interest lies and which majors have a bright prospect that can ensure me a good
job. Do you have any suggestions on the choice of a major?
I would appreciate it if you could share your opinions with me.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jacob回信,就他被剑桥大学(the University
of Cambridge)录取向他表示祝贺,并就在大学专业选择上遇到的困惑征求他的意见。
【详解】1.词汇积累
被……录取:be admitted to→gain admission to
与……有关:related to→ connected with
保证:ensure→guarantee
感激:appreciate→ be grateful
2.句式拓展
并列句变简单句
原句:I’m a science student in high school, so I’m supposed to choose majors related to science and
engineering.
拓展句:Being a science student in high school, I’m supposed to choose majors related to science and
资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】engineering.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am now in the process of university application, struggling with which major to
choose.(运用了现在分词作伴随状语。)
【高分句型2】But the problems are that I’m not sure where my interest lies and which majors have a bright
prospect that can ensure me a good job.(运用了where和which引导的宾语从句以及that引导的限制性定
语从句。)
【题型训练】
1.(2023·福建泉州·福建省德化第一中学校联考一模)假定你是李华,你的留学生好友 Peter在你市举
办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛(Chinese Traditional Culture Contest)”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他
写一封信,内容包括:
1.表示祝贺;
2.回顾他的付出和努力;
3.期待他为弘扬中国文化做出贡献。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】[参考范文]
Dear Peter,
Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m
writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
It came as no surprise, for you are keenly interested in Chinese culture and have been continuously
exploring it. Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but also you consulted many locals and
professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture.
Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese
culture and make it more accessible to people around the world.
Yours,
Li Hua
资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,你的留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文
化知识竞赛”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
赢得:win→bear off
强烈的:keenly→intense
精通:good command of→proficiency in
致力于:devote oneself to→ commit oneself to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city,
I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
拓展句:Because I have Learned your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest
organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but also you consulted many locals
and professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture.
(运用了倒装句,非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the
Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world.(运用and连接并列句,省略连词
的宾语从句)
2.(2023·新疆·统考二模)假如你是李华,上周五你校举办了以“Be a Lifelong learner”为主题的演讲
比赛,你的朋友David获得一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。
内容要求:
1. 祝贺获奖;
2. 表达你对该主题的理解。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours,
LiHua
【答案】Dear David,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your wining the first prize in the speech contest
资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】entitled “Be a Lifelong Learner”. As your friend, I just want you to know how glad I am at your success.
I’m deeply impressed by your speech. Lifelong learning is the best education. For one thing, it helps us
adapt to changes. We are supposed to embrace new technology and learn new knowledge. For another, learning
is a good way to remain curious and stay young.
Your success has greatly encouraged me to be a lifelong learner. Hope we can both continue to study to
improve ourselves.
Congratulations again!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华,上周五你校举办了以“Be a Lifelong learner”为主
题的演讲比赛,你的朋友David获得一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
演讲:speech→lecture
比赛:contest→competition
接受:embrace→accept
高兴的:glad→happy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your wining the first prize in the speech
contest entitled “Be a Lifelong Learner”.
拓展句:Learning that you won the first prize in the speech contest entitled “Be a Lifelong Learner”, I am
writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As your friend, I just want you to know how glad I am at your success. (运用了how引
导宾语从句)
[高分句型 2] I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your wining the first prize in the
speech contest entitled “Be a Lifelong Learner”. (运用了动名词的复合结构作宾语)
3.(2023·山西朔州·怀仁市第一中学校校考二模)假定你是李华。你的美国笔友 Eric被中国北京大学
录取了。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示祝贺;
2. 询问学习经验。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear Eric,
Knowing that you have been admitted to Peking University, I’m so happy that I can’t wait to offer you my
heartfelt congratulations.
Opportunities favor those who are well-prepared. I believe that the final realization of your goal comes
from years of hard work. Now your efforts have paid off. Congratulations! I’m sure that, at Peking University
where more chances will be available for you, you will make even more remarkable achievements. Besides, I
believe that you must have some valuable learning experience that helps you in your study. I’d appreciate it if
you could share some with me.
Congratulations again and best wishes for your bright future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于英文中的应用文写作。要求考生给自己的笔友 Eric写信,祝贺他被北京大
学录取,并向其询问学习经验。
【详解】1.词汇积累
源自于:come from→ originate from
坚信:be sure → be convinced
可得到的:available→ accessible/at hand
此外:besides → what’s more
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句:Knowing that you have been admitted to Peking University, I’m so happy that I can’t wait to offer you
my heartfelt congratulations.
拓展句:When I know that you have been admitted to Peking University, I’m so happy that I can’t wait to
offer you my heartfelt congratulations.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】 Opportunities favor those who are well-prepared.(运用了who引导的定语从
句)
【高分句型 2】I’m sure that, at Peking University where more chances will be available for you, you will
make even more remarkable achievements.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和where引导的定语从句)
4.(2023·湖南郴州·统考三模)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Kevin来信说他在“留学生汉字书法竞
赛Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students”取得了第一名的好成绩。请你给他写一封邮
件,内容包括:
1. 表示祝贺;
2. 肯定他的成绩和努力;
3. 期待与他交流学习心得。
注意:
资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Kevin,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Kevin,
Learning that you have won the first place in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International
Students, pretty excited, I’m writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.
Just as the saying goes, you reap what you sow. It’s your passion and hard work that contribute to your
winning! Interested in Chinese culture, you have long been devoted to Calligraphy, learning from masters and
keeping practicing every day. How I wish you could share your experience and reflection with me as I am eager
to get my Calligraphy improved!
Once again, congratulations on your splendid achievement. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国朋友 Kevin 来信说他在“留学生汉字书法竞赛 Chinese
Calligraphy Competition for International Students”取得了第一名的好成绩,要求考生写一封邮件表示祝
贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
相当、非常:pretty → quite
表达:express → convey
促成:contribute to → lead to
极佳的、非常好的:splendid →unexceptionable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Learning that you have won the first place in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International
Students, pretty excited, I’m writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.
拓展句:The fact that you have won the first place in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International
Students makes me quite excited, which is also the reason why I am writing this letter to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s your passion and hard work that contribute to your winning!(运用了强调句式)
【高分句型2】How I wish you could share your experience and reflection with me as I am eager to get my
资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】Calligraphy improved!(运用了感叹句和as引导的原因状语从句)
5.(2023春·四川成都·高三石室中学校考开学考试)假定你是李华,得知你的朋友Frank被牛津大学
(University of Oxford)录取,请给他写一封英文邮件,内容包括:
1.表示祝贺;
2.赞扬他的努力及对你的鼓舞;
3.美好祝愿。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Frank,
Good news travels fast! Please accept my hearty congratulation on your graduation from senior school and
admission to University of Oxford.
I know how hard you have been working these years and I am very proud of you for your success. I am
firmly convinced that it is your hard work that contributes to your success today. Just as the old saying goes,
“No pains, no gains.” It is a reward for your diligence and persistence. Your success is also a great
encouragement to me to study harder and I hope that one day I will enter a famous university just like you.
I believe it will be a new beginning and a chance for you to embrace a fuller life and pave the way for a
brilliant future. All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以李华的身份就朋友Frank被牛津大学录取一事,表达自
己的祝贺,赞扬他的努力和对自己的鼓舞,以及表达自己美好的祝愿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
真挚的:hearty→sincere/genuine
坚决地:firmly→steadily
鼓励:encouragement→motivation
希望:hope→wish
2. 句式拓展
同义句
原句:I know how hard you have been working these years and I am very proud of you for your success.
复合句:Knowing how hard you have been working these years,I am very proud of you for your success.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】 I am firmly convinced that it is your hard work that contributes to your success
资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】today.(that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 I hope that one day I will enter a famous university just like you.(that引导的宾语从句)
6.(2023·山西·统考一模)假定你是李华,你校英语翻译爱好者协会成功举办了中华诗词英译大赛,
请你代表协会在本次活动的颁奖仪式上进行总结发言,内容包括:
1. 表示祝贺;
2. 回顾本次活动;
3. 表达希望。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow schoolmates,
It’s my great honor to make a concluding statement here.
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】One possible version:
Dear fellow schoolmates,
It’s my great honor to make a concluding statement here. At this moment, I’d like to extend my sincere
congratulations to all of the participants.
The competition would not be a great success without the joint efforts of everyone. My hearty thanks go
firstly to our teachers, whose guidance and encouragement have given us much insight into translation of
Chinese poetry. Besides, all the participants’ devotion and wonderful performance impressed us a lot. Most
importantly, the competition has further stimulated our passion for Chinese poetry and boosted our cultural
confidence.
I sincerely hope that we students will work to learn English well, carry forward and spread traditional
Chinese culture.
That’s all. Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表校英语翻译爱好者协会在中华诗词英译大赛颁奖仪
式上进行总结发言,回顾活动并表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
此刻:at this moment→ now
诚挚地:sincerely→genuinely
比赛:competition→match
推进:boost→promote
资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, all the participants’ devotion and wonderful performance impressed us a lot.
拓展句:Besides, what impressed us a lot is all the participants’ devotion and wonderful performance.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】My hearty thanks go firstly to our teachers, whose guidance and encouragement
have given us much insight into translation of Chinese poetry.(运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I sincerely hope that we students will work to learn English well, carry forward and spread
traditional Chinese culture.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
7.(2023·全国·一模)假设你是李华,你的南非朋友Martin给你发来一封邮件, 告诉你他在外国人汉
字书法大赛(Chinese Calligraphy Contest For Foreigners)中获得一等奖。请你用英语给他回一封邮件。内
容包括:
1.对他表示祝贺;
2.肯定他的付出;
3.了解参赛经验。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Martin,
Learning that you’ve won the first prize in Chinese Calligraphy Contest For Foreigners, I’m writing to
offer my congratulations to you.
Success favors the mind that is prepared. Not only have you referred to calligraphy books, but also you
have consulted some masters. It is your hard work and talent that make you succeed in winning the
championship.
I’d like to know some experience about taking part in the contest. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给南非朋友Martin写信祝贺他在外国人汉字书法大赛中
获得一等奖,同时肯定他的付出并了解参赛经验。
【详解】1.词汇积累
天赋:talent→ gift
资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】知道:learn→ know
获得一等奖:win the first prize→ win the championship
参加:take part in→ join in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’d like to know some experience about taking part in the contest.
拓展句:I’d like to know some experience which is about taking part in the contest.
【高分句型1】Success favors the mind that is prepared.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Not only have you referred to calligraphy books, but also you have consulted some masters.
(运用了not only…but also…引导的部分倒装句)
8.(2023·重庆万州·重庆市万州第二高级中学校考三模)假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Ann在北京
冬奥会期间提供志愿者服务,并被评为优秀志愿者。请你给他写封电子邮件,表示祝贺,内容包括:
1. 表示祝贺;
2. 告知庆祝派对安排的相关事宜;
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Ann,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ann,
Knowing that you have worked as a volunteer of the Beijing Winter Olympics and have been selected as
an excellent volunteer, I'm really happy for you. And I'd like to offer my sincere congratulations to you.
To celebrate your achievement, I will hold a party for you this Saturday evening. I will invite some of our
friends over, who have prepared surprise gifts for you and are eager to know about your experiences during the
Winter Olympics. In addition, you will enjoy delicious Chinese food cooked by myself. I'm sure you will like
the party. Please arrive at my home by 5: 00 pm.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的新西兰朋友Ann在北京冬奥会期间提供志愿者
服务,并被评为优秀志愿者的事情,写封电子邮件,表示祝贺。
资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】【详解】1.词汇积累
选择:selected→ chosen
此外:In addition → what’s more
高兴:happy→ glad/pleased
渴望:be eager to→ long for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In addition, you will enjoy delicious Chinese food cooked by myself.
拓展句:In addition, you will enjoy delicious Chinese food, which was cooked by myself.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you have worked as a volunteer of the Beijing Winter Olympics and
have been selected as an excellent volunteer, I'm really happy for you.(运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作
原因状语。)
【高分句型2】I will invite some of our friends over, who have prepared surprise gifts for you and are eager to
know about your experiences during the Winter Olympics.(运用了连词who引导的非限制性定语从句。)
资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】