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写作规范练(七)
Ⅰ.应用文写作——祝贺信
假设你是李华，来自美国的交换生Peter 在你班学习半年，并与你成为好朋友。目前，
他即将完成学业回国，请你用英语给他写一篇临别赠言。要点包括：
1．祝贺Peter学习汉语取得的成绩；
2．取得成绩的原因；
3．你们的友谊和对他的祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter，
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Peter ，
I feel delighted that you have achieved your goal.I would like to express my congratulations
on your achievement.
It is excellent of you to get such a high mark in the Chinese test，for after all you have just
been staying with us for only six months.You are always diligent and active，which is vital for
Chinese learning.Moreover，your great interest in reading enables you to have a good memory for
Chinese characters.So you deserve it.
Still I know it’s time for us to say goodbye.I will recall those beautiful days we spent
together and when we helped each other.I have thousands of blessings for you.Wish you all
possible joy!
Yours ，
Li Hua
Ⅱ.读后续写
(2023·山东临沂测试)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Kumar was a hard-working and ambitious student in Academic Magnet High School，who
had a preference for the engineering design.One day he was walking home from school.Nothingpleased him more than to walk along the busy street and look at the glass doors of the shops.When
doing so，he never failed to stop to look at the latest laptops in the computer shop.He was
thinking，“I would love so much to own that laptop.But nobody will buy it for me.”
So Kumar thought hard of what to do.The school holiday was coming up next week.An idea
struck him.He would do odd jobs to earn some money.Yes! That was what he would do.
His house is next to East Lake shore Drive in Chicago，where there stand varieties of cottages
with beautiful gardens.It follows that he designed a plan of working in his neighbors’
gardens.First，he would approach them and ask them to let him clean up their gardens.After his
finishing the job，each owner would probably pay him $50 or $60.Working in more than ten
gardens would enable him to accumulate enough cash to buy his beloved laptop.Making up his
mind triggered a feeling of joy and a brisk walk home.
The next day，he went around his neighborhood and asked the residents if he could clean
their gardens.He asked them politely，“Excuse me，can I work in your garden during the school
holiday？” Many of the owners were kind of curious about what Kumar was requiring and asked
why.Having known about his thirsty for a laptop，they all replied “Yes”．They liked the
courteous(有礼貌的) boy.
So Kumar started working in his first house.He woke up early that morning.He took three
hours to clear the rubbish and cut the grass.It was not easy work.He had to mow the grass.After
that，he had to pull the weeds.Then，he had to arrange the flowerpots.This arduous(艰巨的) work
went on for a week.Consequently，he had no time for games or even watching television.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
After that week，his parents and friends had different voices.
At the end of November，he had saved up enough money.
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After that week ， his parents and friends had different voices.A friend Bakri told
him，“Heh，forget about your laptop.Come and join our football game.” His mother felt
concerned for her son’s well-being and told her husband，“Just give him the money for the
laptop.” His father said，“No.It is better for him if he works hard for it.He would appreciate his
laptop more.” After two weeks，he managed to save $700.All the money was kept safely inside a
drawer.He was thinking，“Not too bad.” After this，he needed another $300.That would mean
another week of clearing gardens.
At the end of November，he had saved up enough money.He now had $1,000.Early in the
morning，he went to the computer shop in great delight.The owner of the shop smiled upon seeingKumar.As usual，he asked，“Come to look at the laptop again？” This time，Kumar said
proudly，“Oh no，not just take a look.This time I come to buy it.” However，the shop owner
went on，“But the only one left has been sold yesterday.” Although Kumar aroused a deep
regret，he left the shop knowing that what he had done counted.
