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写作规范练(十)
Ⅰ.应用文写作——建议信
假如你是李华，刚参加完高考且取得了优异的成绩。你的朋友王东今年读高三，因感到
读书压力大，晚上睡不着而写信向你求助，希望你能给出一些建议让他能够顺利度过高三学
习生活。内容包括：
1．相信自己的老师，提高课堂听课效率；
2．课后合理安排时间，提高解题效率；
3．尽可能抽空锻炼，树立信心。
注意：1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出)；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Wang Dong，
I am sorry to hear that you are sleepless under the stress of study in Senior Three. ________
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Yours，
Li Hua
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Dear Wang Dong ，
I am sorry to hear that you are sleepless under the stress of study in Senior Three. I would like
to share some advice with you.
To begin with，you are supposed to believe in your teachers and improve your efficiency in
class.What’s more，it is a good idea to arrange your time properly after school，which can
enhance the efficiency of your problem solving.At last，taking time to exercise as much as
possible will help build up selfconfidence.
Hopefully，my advice can help you.Looking forward to your good news.
Yours ，
Li Hua
Ⅱ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sometimes things may seem beyond our effort，but keep on and you will find beautiful views
in front of you.I was on my second outdoor experience trip that every student had to go on.That
year，we had a choice of what difficulty level we wanted: one through five.My friends and I had
agreed that one would make us seem lazy and that challenging ourselves would make for a good
story.In choosing level two，we believed that it would still be a fun experience.
We were quickly proven wrong.The further we drove into the White Mountains，the higherthe walls on either side of the winding highway grew.I was still in awe of the mountains I had seen
so many times before，but I couldn’t help feeling my heart shaking with anxiety.Soon I would
have to leave the school bus that brought 50 students out into the wilderness like every year before.
My group consisted of my friends，Riley and Ann，and six extremely athletic boys.We
arrived at the base camp lodge(小屋) first.After putting things aside and rearranging our bags，we
made our way out into the wilderness.
The three of us girls were questioning if this was really a level two.The path was unbelievably
steep and rocky toward the top of the mountain where the first hut was located.We were practically
jogging in an attempt to keep up with the boys ahead of us.Before the trip，we were told to take
breaks as often as we needed to drink water，but that wasn’t helping our pounding hearts and
heavy breathing as much as it should have.
Then,30 minutes into the most difficult hike the three of us had ever done，Riley slipped and
landed on her knee.After a few moments，we turned back down the mountain as it was decided
that Riley could not make the trip with us.
We sat on the grass outside the lodge where we had started while Riley was brought inside to
join the level one group.Ann and I exchanged breathless glances，our cheeks red and wet with
sweat.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
“Do you think we should ask if we could join the level one group too？” I asked Ann.
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The next days，although extremely exhausted，we kept on. ______________________
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“Do you think we should ask if we could join the level one group too？” I asked Ann.“I
know you won’t，” she breathed out.“I won’t！” I said to myself，looking at the
awesome mountains in the distance.Then we started up the steep and rocky path again，attempting
to keep up with the boys.Our bags felt heavier; legs burned; backs hurt; tears threatened to spill
over our sweatcovered eyes.I wanted nothing more than to turn back and leave right then and
there.But I couldn’t.I didn’t want to be someone who gave up easily.
The next days，although extremely exhausted，we kept on.Ann and I still found ourselves
lagging behind the boys.Instead of embarrassment，I felt as though I was gaining more out of the
trip than anyone else.As the boys ran，Ann and I hung back and took breaks，drinking water and
admiring the deep green valleys from high above.Level two was fun，too.And eventually we made
it to the destination.Facing the beautiful views in front of us，I exchanged a glance with Ann，
both of us beaming.
