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写作规范练(十六)
Ⅰ.应用文写作——投诉信
假设你是李华，上个月你在 Amazon 网站上订购了一份纽约时报(The New York
Times)，商家不但没有按时发货，而且你收到报纸后，发现竟然缺了3张，请你就此给商家
写一封投诉信。
注意：词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出)。
Dear shopkeeper，
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear shopkeeper ，
I couldn’t feel more annoyed about your service when receiving the newspaper you had
posted，so I’m writing to make a complaint.
Last month I purchased The New York Times on Amazon.To my dissatisfaction，it was not
until ten days later that I received the newspaper.Moreover，what made me shocked was that three
pieces of the newspaper were missing when I received it.Shouldn’t you apologize to me and send
another one?
I hope you can take my complaint seriously to avoid damaging your reputation and image.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours ，
Li Hua
Ⅱ.读后续写
(2022·山东泰安新泰一中期中)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
What started as a lonely graduation day for a teen in Alabama has turned into a priceless
opportunity to bond with his teacher.Now，that teacher is working to get that student a car that will
get him started in his adult life.
On Thursday，Bessemer City High School held its annual graduation ceremony.Dom Moore
was one of the teachers involved in coordinating the event.After the ceremony ended，Dom was
cleaning up.Nearly everybody had left to celebrate with friends and family，but one young man
was still sitting there by himself.“I knew his moods and I knew he wasn’t himself，” Domsaid.Not knowing what to say at first，the teacher told him，“I expect big things from you and
it’s going to be OK.”
Dom assumed that someone would show up eventually to give the graduate a ride home.But
nobody did.When Dom offered to drive him，the two had no idea that this was to be more than just
a ride home.The teacher decided to take him out to eat—at any restaurant of his choice.They ended
up at the Cheesecake Factory，and enjoyed a hearty meal and dessert to celebrate the graduate’s
achievement.
At first，the two were fighting back tears.But before long，they were having a great time
together.Dom never asked why the boy’s family did not attend the ceremony.What was important
to him was that the young man felt appreciated for what he had accomplished.Later that evening，
Dom took to Facebook to share a photo and some thoughts on the event.He says that he doesn’t
normally post about these situations，as they are all too common in his profession，but that
something inside urged him to share this experience.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
Actually，Dom wanted to help the young man.
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Dom thinks what these people did set an example to us.
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Actually，Dom wanted to help the young man.Dom shared his wish to raise money for the
young man in the post.He hoped someone may be a blessing to this young man.Luckily，before
long，generous people，many of whom were strangers，sent more than $5,000 as donations.Dom
took him to open a bank account with the money.Dom wanted to help him buy a car，which can
make his travel more convenient.He also taught the man to save up to attend college one day.
Dom thinks what these people did set an example to us.Dom felt amazed that so many people
would help the teen.He has undoubtedly raised much money beyond his imagination.Dom thinks
the story will remind us of what is truly important and give hope to those who are struggling.We
usually take life for granted，but the story shows us that there is always beauty in our heart.Even
though we have difficulties，at this moment it shows that mankind is good.
