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写作规范练(五)
Ⅰ.应用文写作——感谢信
假定你是李华,父亲节即将来临,在父亲节这天,需要说哪些话语来感谢自己的父亲呢?
请根据以下要点用英语给父亲写一封感谢信。内容包括:
1.感谢养育之恩;
2.感谢父亲在你遇到挫折时给予鼓励和安慰;
3.感谢父亲在你成功时以你为荣;
4.表达对父亲的爱。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Father,
With Father’s Day approaching,
Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Father ,
With Father ’ s Day approaching, I want to express my gratitude to you for bringing me up
from the bottom of my heart.Never will I forget the timely encouragement and comfort you gave
me whenever I was faced with difficulties and the pride in your eyes when I achieved my
goals.Without you,I would not go further confidently and bravely.
Your love can never be repaid but I am determined to work hard and never make you
disappointed.I love you,Father!
Yours ,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Girl with Stage Fright
It was obviously going to be one of those days.Students were preparing for a singing contest
actively.Paul,a music teacher,made comments on the students’ performance at the end of a
rehearsal(彩排).A girl named Lisa did the poorest preparation.Paul was very annoyed and entirely
frustrated with her.He doesn’t recall how he closed the rehearsal,but he’s sure the words hechose were not words that would lift the girl’s spirits but rather satisfy his selfish need to punish
her for the poor performance.
The moment Paul dismissed the students,Lisa,the very reserved freshman girl,made a
path straight toward him.She looked him right in the eye and said,“I hate you!” Paul was
taken aback and frightened by the passion and honesty in her voice.Though entirely shocked,he
was somehow able to collect himself and stay calm.He looked her right in the eye and
said,“Well,that’s a shame,but it’s my duty to remind you and inspire you.” She didn’t
react,but rather stormed away,her anger unchanged.
Several days later,they had the occasion to speak in private.Lisa asked if Paul remembered
the time when she told him that she hated him.How could he forget? She went on to admit quite
openly and honestly that it was herself,not him,who she hated.The moment got heavy and she
began to tell him of her fear and pressure when standing on the stage.She believed that no matter
how well she prepared,she would perform terribly on the stage.Paul became aware that she had
serious stage fright and also realized that maybe he had done something improper several days
ago.Then he talked to her patiently and sincerely,hoping to help her build the confidence.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
The day before the contest,she was practicing for the singing competition alone.
However,the next morning,when she stood on the stage,her face turned pale.
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The day before the contest,she was practicing for the singing competition alone.She thought
about how to sing every key and practiced it time and time again,so that she could prepare herself
well enough.At that moment,Paul came to her and told her that actually he himself was also a
person with stage fright when he was young.But he believed that as long as he practiced hard,he
would win.Finally,he did beat the stage fright.Hearing that,Lisa knew that she would be another
Paul.
However,the next morning,when she stood on the stage,her face turned pale.Looking
around,she saw Paul sitting in the audience,smiling at her.Lisa remembered what Paul had told
her,and she believed that she had got well prepared.Gradually,she found herself lost in singing
her song and forgot all the bad feelings.After her performance,the whole audience applauded for
her.She won.