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写作规范练(一)
Ⅰ.应用文写作——求助信
假定你是李华，临近高考，心理压力特别大，于是向学校心理老师 Tom写一封信，求
助如何缓解压力，在高考中取得优异成绩。要点如下：
1．自我介绍；
2．压力大的原因；
3．希望得到老师的帮助。
注意：1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出)；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom，
I am Li Hua，a Senior 3 student.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Tom ，
I am Li Hua ， a Senior 3 student. With the college entrance examination approaching，I feel
great psychological pressure.So I’m writing to you，asking for help on how to relieve the
pressure and get excellent results in the college entrance examination.
I’m encountering some problems which trouble me a lot.First，I have to spend so much time
on my homework that I hardly have time to do sports.Moreover，the high expectations from the
teachers and my parents make me extremely stressful because I don’t want to let them down.What
troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night.
Faced with the above problems，I’m anxious to get your help.Could you please offer me
some advice on how to solve these problems?
Yours sincerely ，
Li Hua
Ⅱ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My mother eyed me with suspicion(怀疑)．I dared not look at her.Knowing that I was late for
school five days continuously，I could not offer an acceptable explanation.I knew she did not
believe that I had extra classes every day and arrived home after 5 pm.However，realizing she had
little choice but to believe in me，she told me that dinner was in the refrigerator.She had to rush forher night shift at the local clinic.
Ever since we lost our dad in an accident，my mother became the breadwinner.I was the
eldest among the four siblings(兄弟姐妹) and it fell upon my shoulder to ensure that they could
become responsible adults.Besides helping mother with the housework，I regularly coached them
in their studies.Thankfully，never once did I have to raise my voice or force them to complete their
homework.But all of us missed dad very much.He was a model father and husband.Life was cruelly
taken away from him at a very young age of 42.
However，my mother managed to pull through and found a job at the clinic.It was very tough
on someone like her who had never worked before in her life.But money was scarce and there were
five mouths to feed.Dad did not leave much behind.He never suspected he would die so young.We
stopped dining out and had our meals mostly at home.We basically lived from hand to
mouth.That’s when it dawned on me that I had to do my part for the family.I knew mother would
not agree but I threw caution out of the window and managed to get a part-time job at a fast-food
restaurant.I worked three hours a day and managed to bring home money so that my siblings and I
could go out for occasional movies or meals.I was sure that mother suspected something.But she
could not quite point the finger to the source of her suspicion.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
One day，while I was busy serving the customers，I was shocked to see mother standing
opposite the counter.
Mother made me sit down.She was already crying，so were my siblings.
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One day，while I was busy serving the customers，I was shocked to see mother standing
opposite the counter.So surprised was I that I dared not look into her eyes.She appeared shocked
when I clumsily took her orders and saw her staggering to a table occupied by my siblings! My
supervisor saw my worried expression and ， knowing about my family situation ， quickly
volunteered to take over my duties.Slowly，I removed my apron and joined my family.
Mother made me sit down.She was already crying，so were my siblings.She covered my
hands with hers and told me that she was grateful for my help.I could not hold back my tears and
hugged her.How guilt-ridden I was! I told my mother that contributing financially to the family was
the least I could do to relieve her burden.To my great relief，my beloved mother understood my
situation and reassured me everything would be alright.It was then that I came to realize that I
should not have hidden such a big secret from her.
