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专题 05 祝贺信
刷大题、提能力
1．（江苏省镇江市丹阳市2023-2024学年高三试题）假如你是李华，你的美国网友David 参加校园戏曲艺
术节获得了一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。
内容包括：
1. 祝贺他获奖；
2. 肯定他付出的努力；
3. 期待他为弘扬中国文化做出贡献。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：校园戏曲艺术节Campus Opera Art Festival
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear David,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the First Prize in the Campus Opera
Art Festival.
You really deserve the honor for what you have devoted to Chinese traditional opera these years. Not only
have you had a good knowledge of Chinese culture through reading books, but also you have gained a deep insight
into traditional opera art by entering all kinds of Chinese opera contests. You have made it a habit to practise
Beijing Opera on a daily basis, which is the key to your success.
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】Congratulations again! I’m looking forward to your making greater contributions to the promotion of Chinese
culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的祝贺信。要求考生向美国网友David写信，祝贺他在校园戏曲
艺术节获得了一等奖，并肯定他的付出以及期待他为弘扬中国文化做出贡献。
【详解】1.词汇积累
真诚的：sincere→ genuine
真地：really → actually
各种各样的：all kinds of → a variety of
做出贡献：make contributions to→ contribute to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the First Prize in the Campus Opera
Art Festival.
拓展句：I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you because you won the First Prize in the Campus
Opera Art Festival.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You really deserve the honor for what you have devoted to Chinese traditional opera
these years.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】You have made it a habit to practise Beijing Opera on a daily basis, which is the key to your
success.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
2．（2023年湖北省武汉市黄陂区第一中学高三试题）假如你是晨光中学的李华，你在英国游学期间曾寄
宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中
最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：
1．表示感谢并问候;
2．计划与家人一起做的事情;
3．你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
注意：1．词数不少于80;
2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
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Dear Nancy,
I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during
my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.
Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I’m going to
Tian’ an men to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Oinghua Garden to enjoy
the elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid
development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to
join the Internet tide. Before choosing, I plan to consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions
for consultation.
Only with a clear learning goal, can I study in a targeted way, which will be more efficient.
Yours,
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封邮件，感谢游学期间你的住宿家庭Chris的妈妈，
回复她祝贺你顺利高中毕业的邮件，并告知她你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。内容包括：1．表示感谢
并问候；2．计划与家人一起做的事情；3．你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
感恩的：grateful →thankful
除此以外：in addition → what’s more
加入，参加：join →involve oneself in
游北京：travel to Beijing → pay a visit to Beijing
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Before choosing, I plan to consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for
consultation.
拓展句：Before I choose, I plan to consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for
consultation.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】Beijing.（运用了now that 引导原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】Only with a clear learning goal, can I study in a targeted way, which will be more efficient.（运用
了only +状语置于句首，部分倒装句型，运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
3．（2023年湖南师范大学附属中学高三试题）假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国
传统文化知识竞赛(Chinese Traditional Culture Contest)”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信,内容
包括：
1.表示祝贺；
2.回顾他的付出和努力；
3.期待他为弘扬中国文化做出贡献。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m
writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
It came as no surprise, for you are keenly interested in Chinese culture and have been continuously exploring
it. Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but also you consulted many locals and professionals, which
equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture.
Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture
and make it more accessible to people around the world.
Yours,
Li Hua
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化
知识竞赛”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
赢得：win→bear off
强烈的：keenly→intense
精通：good command of→proficiency in
致力于：devote oneself to→ commit oneself to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m
writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
拓展句：Because I have Learned your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized
by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but also you consulted many locals and
professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture.（运用
了倒装句，非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the
Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world.（运用and连接并列句，省略连词的宾
语从句）
4．（2023年广东省佛山市高三质量检测试题）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Alex已被香港大学录取。请
你写邮件祝贺Alex，并请教如何申请入读香港大学。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】【答案】
Dear Alex,
I’m thrilled to hear that you’ve been accepted into the University of Hong Kong! Congratulations on this
wonderful achievement! I am so proud of you and I know how hard you have worked to make it happen.
Meanwhile, I was wondering if you could share some insights on how you went about applying to the
university. I’m interested in knowing more about the process since I’m thinking about the possibility of studying
there. Any tips or advice you could offer would be greatly appreciated.
I hope that you’re excited for this new adventure and I wish you all the best for your studies in Hong Kong.
Please keep in touch and let me know how everything is going.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Alex写封邮件，祝贺他被香港大学录取，并请教
如何申请入读香港大学。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的：thrilled→excited
与此同时：meanwhile→in the meantime
提供：offer→provide
为……感到骄傲：be proud of→take pride in
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Any tips or advice you could offer would be greatly appreciated.
拓展句：I would appreciate it if you could offer me some tips or advice.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m thrilled to hear that you’ve been accepted into the University of Hong Kong! (运用了
that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Meanwhile, I was wondering if you could share some insights on how you went about applying to the
university. (运用了if引导的宾语从句和how引导的宾语从句)
5．（2023年新疆维吾尔自治区高三二模试题）假如你是李华，上周五你校举办了以“Be a Lifelong
learner”为主题的演讲比赛，你的朋友David获得一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝
贺。
内容要求：
1. 祝贺获奖；
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】2. 表达你对该主题的理解。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours,
LiHua
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Dear David,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your wining the first prize in the speech contest
entitled “Be a Lifelong Learner”. As your friend, I just want you to know how glad I am at your success.
I’m deeply impressed by your speech. Lifelong learning is the best education. For one thing, it helps us adapt
to changes. We are supposed to embrace new technology and learn new knowledge. For another, learning is a good
way to remain curious and stay young.
Your success has greatly encouraged me to be a lifelong learner. Hope we can both continue to study to
improve ourselves.
Congratulations again!
Yours,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，上周五你校举办了以“Be a Lifelong learner”为主题的
演讲比赛，你的朋友David获得一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
演讲：speech→lecture
比赛：contest→competition
接受：embrace→accept
高兴的：glad→happy
2.句式拓展
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your wining the first prize in the speech contest
entitled “Be a Lifelong Learner”.
拓展句：Learning that you won the first prize in the speech contest entitled “Be a Lifelong Learner”, I am writing
to offer my sincere congratulations to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As your friend, I just want you to know how glad I am at your success. (运用了how引导
宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your wining the first prize in the speech
contest entitled “Be a Lifelong Learner”. (运用了动名词的复合结构作宾语)
6．（2023年山西省怀仁市第一中学校高三模拟试题）假定你是李华。你的美国笔友Eric被中国北京大学
录取了。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 询问学习经验。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
Dear Eric,
Knowing that you have been admitted to Peking University, I’m so happy that I can’t wait to offer you my
heartfelt congratulations.
Opportunities favor those who are well-prepared. I believe that the final realization of your goal comes from
years of hard work. Now your efforts have paid off. Congratulations! I’m sure that, at Peking University where
more chances will be available for you, you will make even more remarkable achievements. Besides, I believe that
you must have some valuable learning experience that helps you in your study. I’d appreciate it if you could share
some with me.
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】Congratulations again and best wishes for your bright future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于英文中的应用文写作。要求考生给自己的笔友Eric写信，祝贺他被北京大学录
取，并向其询问学习经验。
【详解】1.词汇积累
源自于：come from→ originate from
坚信：be sure → be convinced
可得到的：available→ accessible/at hand
此外：besides → what’s more
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句：Knowing that you have been admitted to Peking University, I’m so happy that I can’t wait to offer you my
heartfelt congratulations.
拓展句：When I know that you have been admitted to Peking University, I’m so happy that I can’t wait to offer
you my heartfelt congratulations.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Opportunities favor those who are well-prepared.（运用了who引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】I’m sure that, at Peking University where more chances will be available for you, you will make
even more remarkable achievements.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和where引导的定语从句）
7．（2023年湖南省郴州市高三质量监测试题）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Kevin来信说他在“留学生
汉字书法竞赛Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students”取得了第一名的好成绩。请你给他
写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 肯定他的成绩和努力；
3. 期待与他交流学习心得。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Kevin,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Kevin,
Learning that you have won the first place in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students,
pretty excited, I’m writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.
Just as the saying goes, you reap what you sow. It’s your passion and hard work that contribute to your
winning! Interested in Chinese culture, you have long been devoted to Calligraphy, learning from masters and
keeping practicing every day. How I wish you could share your experience and reflection with me as I am eager to
get my Calligraphy improved!
Once again, congratulations on your splendid achievement. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国朋友Kevin来信说他在“留学生汉字书法竞赛Chinese Calligraphy
Competition for International Students”取得了第一名的好成绩，要求考生写一封邮件表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
相当、非常：pretty → quite
表达：express → convey
促成：contribute to → lead to
极佳的、非常好的：splendid →unexceptionable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Learning that you have won the first place in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International
Students, pretty excited, I’m writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.
拓展句：The fact that you have won the first place in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International
Students makes me quite excited, which is also the reason why I am writing this letter to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s your passion and hard work that contribute to your winning!(运用了强调句式)
【高分句型2】How I wish you could share your experience and reflection with me as I am eager to get my
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】Calligraphy improved!(运用了感叹句和as引导的原因状语从句)
8．（四川省成都市石室中学2023年高三试题）假定你是李华，得知你的朋友Frank被牛津大学(University
of Oxford)录取，请给他写一封英文邮件，内容包括：
1.表示祝贺;
2.赞扬他的努力及对你的鼓舞;
3.美好祝愿。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Frank,
Good news travels fast! Please accept my hearty congratulation on your graduation from senior school and
admission to University of Oxford.
I know how hard you have been working these years and I am very proud of you for your success. I am firmly
convinced that it is your hard work that contributes to your success today. Just as the old saying goes, “No pains, no
gains.” It is a reward for your diligence and persistence. Your success is also a great encouragement to me to study
harder and I hope that one day I will enter a famous university just like you.
I believe it will be a new beginning and a chance for you to embrace a fuller life and pave the way for a
brilliant future. All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以李华的身份就朋友Frank被牛津大学录取一事，表达自己
的祝贺，赞扬他的努力和对自己的鼓舞，以及表达自己美好的祝愿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
真挚的：hearty→sincere/genuine
坚决地：firmly→steadily
鼓励：encouragement→motivation
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】希望：hope→wish
2. 句式拓展
同义句
原句：I know how hard you have been working these years and I am very proud of you for your success.
复合句：Knowing how hard you have been working these years，I am very proud of you for your success.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I am firmly convinced that it is your hard work that contributes to your success today.
(that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 I hope that one day I will enter a famous university just like you.（that引导的宾语从句）
9．（2023年山西省高三调研试题）假定你是李华，你校英语翻译爱好者协会成功举办了中华诗词英译大
赛，请你代表协会在本次活动的颁奖仪式上进行总结发言，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 回顾本次活动；
3. 表达希望。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow schoolmates,
It’s my great honor to make a concluding statement here.
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】
Dear fellow schoolmates,
It’s my great honor to make a concluding statement here. At this moment, I’d like to extend my sincere
congratulations to all of the participants.
The competition would not be a great success without the joint efforts of everyone. My hearty thanks go firstly
to our teachers, whose guidance and encouragement have given us much insight into translation of Chinese poetry.
Besides, all the participants’ devotion and wonderful performance impressed us a lot. Most importantly, the
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】competition has further stimulated our passion for Chinese poetry and boosted our cultural confidence.
I sincerely hope that we students will work to learn English well, carry forward and spread traditional Chinese
culture.
That’s all. Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表校英语翻译爱好者协会在中华诗词英译大赛颁奖仪式上
进行总结发言，回顾活动并表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
此刻：at this moment→ now
诚挚地：sincerely→genuinely
比赛：competition→match
推进：boost→promote
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, all the participants’ devotion and wonderful performance impressed us a lot.
拓展句：Besides, what impressed us a lot is all the participants’ devotion and wonderful performance.
【点睛】【高分句型1】My hearty thanks go firstly to our teachers, whose guidance and encouragement have
given us much insight into translation of Chinese poetry.（运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I sincerely hope that we students will work to learn English well, carry forward and spread
traditional Chinese culture.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
10．（重庆市名校2022-2023学年高三上学期一诊英语试题）假设你是李华，你的南非朋友Martin给你发
来一封邮件, 告诉你他在外国人汉字书法大赛(Chinese Calligraphy Contest For Foreigners)中获得一等奖。请
你用英语给他回一封邮件。内容包括：
1.对他表示祝贺；
2.肯定他的付出；
3.了解参赛经验。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Martin,
Learning that you’ve won the first prize in Chinese Calligraphy Contest For Foreigners, I’m writing to offer
my congratulations to you.
Success favors the mind that is prepared. Not only have you referred to calligraphy books, but also you have
consulted some masters. It is your hard work and talent that make you succeed in winning the championship.
I’d like to know some experience about taking part in the contest. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给南非朋友Martin写信祝贺他在外国人汉字书法大赛中获得
一等奖，同时肯定他的付出并了解参赛经验。
【详解】1.词汇积累
天赋：talent→ gift
知道：learn→ know
获得一等奖：win the first prize→ win the championship
参加：take part in→ join in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’d like to know some experience about taking part in the contest.
拓展句：I’d like to know some experience which is about taking part in the contest.
【高分句型1】Success favors the mind that is prepared.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Not only have you referred to calligraphy books, but also you have consulted some masters.（运
用了not only…but also…引导的部分倒装句）
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