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07 祝贺信
(2008年，全国卷I）假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直通过有关网站
(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现
在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：
1、自我介绍；
2、祝贺苏琳生日；
3、感谢工作人员；
4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意：1、词数100左右；
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3、开头语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/ Madam,
Greetings from Chian!
I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three
years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been
watching her grow on your website. Now she’s going to be there. I’d like to wish her a happy
birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and herparents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in
advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【范文点评】
本文写作的内容要点如下：1.自我介绍；2.信息来源；3.祝贺生日；4.感谢照顾；5.索
取照片；6.合适的结尾。这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开
头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文要活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，注意结合简
单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹。
亮点词汇：.delighted adj.欣喜的，快乐的 2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生，
生育
亮点句式：I’d like to wish her a hay birthday and to express my thanks to you for
your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a hay and healthy life
in the US. 我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情，正是你们的努力
工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。评析：定语从句的使用。
开头常用句式
It was exciting news for me to learn of …
Please accept my sincere/hearty/warm congratulations on …
It was a great pleasure to send you my congratulations on …
I was delighted to learn of your success /achievements in …
I am really happy to learn that you have been elected…
结尾常用句式
Wish you good luck!
We wish to share your honor and joy.
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.
May all go wonderfully in your new post!
May every happiness be yours!
All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future/successful career!May each succeeding year bring you great happiness and prosperity.
Every good wish to you for much health, happiness, and prosperity!
模板①
Dear ______ ,
I have learned with delight that you ______（祝贺事由）. I would like to extend to
you my utmost congratulations on ______. You must be ______. And I feel very happy
for you. ______（所取得的成绩）is quite exciting news! I know this is surely owing
to ______（被祝贺人过去的努力）.It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______（被
祝贺人的优点）. Kindly let me know when you ______（咨询对方何时有空）.
I hope ______（表达自己的愿望）.
My best wishes for your further success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear_____________,
Good news travels fast! It was delightful for me to hear that ______________ .
Please accept my sincere congratulations to your ___________. I have been watching your
progress with admiration all the years, and I know more than anyone else how much effort you
have put in. Now you prove to me a matured and well-rounded________ in every respect.
Judging from your current success / achievement, I am confident that in the future ___________ .
May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
模板③
Dear_____________,
Congratulations on your _______ . I know how hard you have been working and I
am very proud of you for your achievement. I understand for sure that it is your hard work /
your excellent ability that leads you to the current success. This new position, on the other hand,
adds a new dimension to your life and is bound to ________ . What’s more, I also believe that .May all goes beautifully in your new post!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
日常生活中，无论是亲朋好友毕业、晋升、获奖、开业，还是订婚、结婚、生日，都
需要写上一封信向对方表示祝贺。信中应表示为对方而高兴。祝贺信应当充满真诚和热情
收信人读后会感到喜悦和振奋。祝贺信既可以正式写，也可以随便写，具体视场合而定。
对不太熟悉的朋友适合正式写，以表示礼貌和尊重；对熟悉的朋友则可以随便一些。但无
论采用哪种方式，祝祝贺信是社交中的一种礼仪性信函。
祝贺信通常包括以下几个方面的内容：说明祝贺事由，表达热烈、诚挚的祝贺；围绕
祝贺事件表述贺喜内容；表达美好祝福。
祝贺信写作分三步走:说明事由并表达自己衷心的祝贺->展开评论事件、赞扬收信人->
再次表达良好祝愿。在写作主要内容的时候，可以重点赞扬一下当事人的优秀能力和取得
成就的原因、并展望他将来的美好发展前景等。贺信必须表达由衷的感情，而且写信要及
时。
Dear_______,
(1)I have learned with delight that you______. (1)获悉值得祝贺的消息，说出祝
贺事由
(2)I would like to extend to you my utmost
congratulations on __ __. (2)表达祝贺
(3)You must be very proud of your ______. (3)描述对方的心情
(4)And I feel very happy for you. (4)表达自己的心情
(5)____ _ is quite exciting news!
(5)被祝贺人所取得的成绩
(6)You are really__ .
(6)对对方的赞美
(7)I know this is surely owing to__ _ .
(7)对方取得成绩的原因
(8)It is a reward you deserve for your __ .
(8)对对方取得成绩的肯定，说出
(9)With your___ __, I am sure that you will be a 被祝贺人的优点
success in whatever you undertake.
(9) 被祝贺人的优秀品质，表达对
(10)Kindly let me know when you____ 对方的祝福
.
(11) I hope .
(10)咨询对方的情况和时间
(12)My best wishes for your further success.
(11)表达愿望
Sincerely Yours,
(12)表达自己真诚的祝福
Li Hua1．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Mary来信告诉你，她已经被她的理想大学录取。请你给
她写一封回信表示祝贺，并就自己在学习生活中的困惑向她寻求帮助。内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 寻求帮助。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mary,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2．假定你是学校音乐俱乐部的负责人李华，上周俱乐部举行了一场留学生（international
students）乐器比赛，请为本周三的颁奖仪式写一篇英文发言稿。内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 回顾比赛；
3. 你的期望。
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3．假定你是高三学生李华，最近收到了你的英国朋友Peter的来信，得知他从剑桥大学
（the University of Cambridge）顺利毕业。请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：
1.向Peter表示祝贺；
2.谈谈你在大学专业选择上的困惑；
3.向对方征求意见或建议。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给，不计入词数。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going?
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
4．假定你是李华，你从网上得知你的英国好友Allen在家乡举办的歌唱比赛中获得一等奖，
请你给他写一封信，对他表示祝贺。内容包括：
1. 祝贺获奖
2. 肯定其付出的努力
3. 祝愿其取得更大的成功。
注意：
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Allen,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华，得知你的英国朋友John刚被北京大学中文系录取。请你写封邮件表示
祝贺，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 询问有效学习外语的方法。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，你校举办了一场有关建党102周年的英语演讲比赛，你的朋友Amy 获
得了第一名，请你给她写一封祝贺信。
内容包括：
1.表达祝贺；
2.肯定她的演讲；
3.希望她能够分享提高英语口语的方法。
参考词汇：建党102周年the 102nd anniversary ceremony of the Communist Party of China
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Amy,
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Yours,
Li Hua
7．假如你是晨光中学的李华，你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲
Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。
请你用英语回复，内容包括：
1．表示感谢并问候;
2．计划与家人一起做的事情;
3．你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
注意：1．词数不少于80;
2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
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8．假定你是高中生李华。为了庆祝国庆七十二周年、你市举办了“中华之美”中文演讲比
赛，你校交换生Ryan在本次大赛中获得了第一名。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 评论与赞赏；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________
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9．假定你是李华，你的好友Mary 在我校最近举办的英语单词大赛(English Vocabulary
Competition)中获得了第一名的好成绩，给了你重要的人生启迪。请写信向她表示祝贺。
注意:1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Peter不仅学业成绩优秀，而且担任国际部学生会主席一
职。本学期他荣获“校园卓越奖”(School Excellence Award)。请你给他写一封电子邮件，
向他表示祝贺。要点如下：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 赞扬对方的优秀表现（学业、履职等）。
注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。
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11．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter最近在某电视台举办的汉语演讲比赛中获得第一名，
请你写一封英文邮件，内容包括：
1、向他表示祝贺；
2、你认为他获奖原因；
3、请教参赛经验。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
12．假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛(Chinese
Traditional Culture Contest)”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信,内容包括：
1.表示祝贺；
2.回顾他的付出和努力；
3.期待他为弘扬中国文化做出贡献。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
13．假定你是李华。你的英国留学生朋友Mike写信告诉你，他被邀请参加由CCTV举办
的中国诗词大会比赛，希望你就赛前准备给他提供一些建议。请你给他写一封回信，内容
包括：
1、祝贺他受到邀请；
2、提出赛前准备建议；
3、愿意提供帮助并表达祝愿。
注意：1、100词左右；
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
14．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国好友Jim来信说他收到理想大学的面试通
知，他有些紧张。请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺并给予安慰；
2. 提供建议并说明理由。
注意： 1.词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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15．假设你是晨光中学的高三学生李津。高中毕业在即，你的英国朋友Jenny通过电子邮
件和你分享了她的高中生活感受。现在请你给她回信，介绍以下内容：
(1) 祝贺Jenny 顺利毕业；
(2)分享自己高中三年最大的收获，以及最想感谢的人和原因；
(3) 简单谈谈自己将来的理想。
注意：
(1)词数不少于 100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jenny,
I’m so glad to hear from you.
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Li Jin
参考答案
1．Dear Mary,
Knowing that you have been admitted to your dream university, I’m so happy that I can’t
wait to offer you my heartfelt congratulations.
Meanwhile, I would like to ask you for help. First, I have trouble getting along with my
classmates. For example, when they are chatting, I want to join them but find it difficult to truly
understand their jokes. Moreover, I find my school life here is not as easy as that in my old school.
We have a lot of homework and most of them are in English, so I have to look up new words indictionary all the time. I feel upset about my life here. Can you help me out?
Congratulations again and best wishes for your bright future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的信件。要求考生给外国朋友Mary回信，
祝贺她考上了理想大学同时就自己在学习中遇到的问题向其求助。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy → delighted/joyful
与此同时：meanwhile→ at the same time
做某事有困难：have trouble doing→ have difficulty doing
沮丧：upset → depressed/blue
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First, I have trouble getting along with my classmates.
拓展句：What comes first is that I have trouble getting along with my classmates.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Knowing that you have been admitted to your dream university, I’m so happy that
I can’t wait to offer you my heartfelt congratulations.（运用了现在分词作状语， that引导的宾
语从句和tha引导的结果状语从句）
【高分句型2】For example, when they are chatting, I want to join them but find it difficult to
truly understand their jokes.（运用了when引导的状语从句和it做形式宾语）
2．Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua. I’m honored to be here to extend a warm welcome to you on behalf of our Musio
Club.
First of all, let’s congratulate the international student instrument competition on its successful
conclusion and warmly congratulate the award-winning contestants. During the one week
competition, international students actively signed up to participate and demonstrated a high level
of music proficiency. In addition, not only did the participating students broaden their horizons but
also they made many like-minded friends.
I hope that in the future, the school can hold more such activities to enrich our campus life.
Wish you an unforgettable time here! Thank you.Yours
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为本周三的留学生乐器比赛颁奖仪式写
一篇英文发言稿。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
荣幸的：honored→privileged
表示：extend→express
难忘的：unforgettable→memorable
另外：in addition→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First of all, let’s congratulate the international student instrument competition on its
successful conclusion and warmly congratulate the award-winning contestants.
拓展句：First of all, let’s congratulate the international student instrument competition on its
successful conclusion and warmly congratulate the contestants who has won awards.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] In addition, not only did the participating students broaden their horizons but also
they made many like-minded friends. (运用了部分倒装句)
[高分句型2] I hope that in the future, the school can hold more such activities to enrich our
campus life. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
3．Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I’m glad to receive your letter and know you’ve graduated from
the University of Cambridge. I’m writing to offer my warmest congratulations.
I am now in the process of university application, struggling with which major to choose. I’m
a science student now, so I am supposed to choose a major related to science and engineering. But
the problem is whether I should pursue my interest or just ensure me a good future job. Do you
have any suggestions on the choice of a major?
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerelyLi Hua
【写作指导】本文是应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Peter写一封，对他从剑桥大学顺利毕业
表示祝贺，并询问关于大学专业选择上的建议。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→happy
收到你的来信：receive your letter→hear from you
在做某事上有困难：struggle with→have trouble in doing sth.
和…有关：related to→relevant to
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：I’m a science student now, so I am supposed to choose a major related to science and
engineering.
拓展句：I’m a science student now, so I am supposed to choose a major that is related to science
and engineering.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】I’m glad to receive your letter and know you’ve graduated from the University of
Cambridge.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】But the problem is whether I should pursue my interest or just ensure me a good
future job.（由whether引导的表语从句）
4．Dear Allen,
I’ve learned from the Internet with delight that you won the first prize in the singing
competition held in your hometown. I’m writing to express my warmest congratulations.
As far as I know, you have the talent for music. In your spare time you practiced a lot and
always learned from others modestly. In my opinion, it was the efforts that you made that led to
your achievement. So it is a reward that you deserve for your perseverance and industry.
Please accept my hearty congratulations again and wish you further success in the futher.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。由于英国好友Allen在家乡举办的歌唱比赛中获
得一等奖，因此要求考生给英国朋友Allen写一封祝贺信。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累比赛：competition→match
我认为：in my opinion→as far as I am concerned
成就：achievement→ accomplishment
真挚的：hearty→sincere
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to express my warmest congratulations.
拓展句：I’m writing to express my warmest congratulations on what you have gained.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】I’ve learned from the Internet with delight that you won the first prize in the
singing competition held in your hometown.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 So it is a reward that you deserve for your perseverance and industry.（运用了
强调句的结构）
5．One possible version:
Dear John,
I am writing to convey my heartfelt congratulations on your admission to Peking University.
Knowing that you have been studying Chinese for years, we consider it a reward you really
deserve.
This is a new start and a good chance for you to learn from the great minds. Besides,
witnessing your terrific achievement, I would like to ask you for your advice on how to study
English effectively. Would you be so kind as to share it with me?
Congratulate you again on your success. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给被北京大学中文系录取的英国朋
友John写祝贺的邮件，需表示祝贺，并询问有效学习外语的方法。
【写作分析】1. 词汇积累
表达：convey→express, voice
诚挚的：heartfelt→sincere, genuine
机会：chance→opportunity
此外：besides→in addition, additionally, moreover了不起的：terrific→wonderful, marvelous, superb
有效地：effectively→effectually, efficaciously
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This is a new start and a good chance for you to learn from the great minds.
拓展句：This is a new start, which is a good chance for you to learn from the great minds.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] Knowing that you have been studying Chinese for years, we consider it a reward
you really deserve. (运用了现在分词短语Knowing…作状语、连接词that引导宾语从句、关
系代词that/which引导限制性定语从句修饰先行词reward并被省略)
[高分句型2] Besides, witnessing your terrific achievement, I would like to ask you for your
advice on how to study English effectively. (运用了现在分词短语witnessing…作状语)
6．Dear Amy,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing this letter to express my congratulations to you for winning the first
prize in the English Contest of the 102nd anniversary ceremony of the Communist Party of China.
Your performance was perfect, especially your excellent spoken English, which has left a
deep impression on all the teachers and students present. Besides, what surprised us most was that
you were so confident and brave on the stage when facing plenty of audience. To be honest, you
are a hero in my heart, and I would like to take this chance to learn from you. I would appreciate it
if you could share with me some methods of improving oral English.
All in all, no words can express my congratulations. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你校举办了一场有关建党102周
年的英语演讲比赛，你的朋友Amy 获得了第一名，请你给她写一封祝贺信。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
表达：express→convey
说实话：To be honest→Honestly
此外：besides→in addition
勇敢的：brave→courageous
2.句式拓展同义句转换
原句：To be honest, you are a hero in my heart, and I would like to take this chance to learn from
you.
拓展句：To be honest, you are a hero in my heart, whom I would like to take this chance to learn
from.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] I’m writing this letter to express my congratulations to you for winning the first
prize in the English Contest of the 102nd anniversary ceremony of the Communist Party of China.
(运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] Besides, what surprised us most was that you were so confident and brave on the
stage when facing plenty of audience. (运用了what引导主语从句)
7．Dear Nancy,
I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of
me during my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.
Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to
Beijing. I’m going to Tian’ an men to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I
want to go to Oinghua Garden to enjoy the elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have
decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid development of the Internet industry,
the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.
Before choosing, I plan to consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for
consultation. Only with a clear learning goal, can I study in a targeted way, which will be more
efficient.
Yours,
【写作指导】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封邮件，感谢游学期间你的住宿
家庭Chris的妈妈，回复她祝贺你顺利高中毕业的邮件，并告知她你将如何安排高中最后
一个假期。内容包括：1．表示感谢并问候；2．计划与家人一起做的事情；3．你决定选择
哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
【写作分析】1. 词汇积累
感恩的：grateful →thankful
除此以外：in addition → what’s more
加入，参加：join →involve oneself in游北京：travel to Beijing → pay a visit to Beijing
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Before choosing, I plan to consult people engaged in this major or go to training
institutions for consultation.
拓展句：Before I choose, I plan to consult people engaged in this major or go to training
institutions for consultation.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to
travel to Beijing.（运用了now that 引导原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】Only with a clear learning goal, can I study in a targeted way, which will be more
efficient.（运用了only +状语置于句首，部分倒装句型，运用了which引导非限制性定语从
句）
8．Dear Ryan,
How is everything going? I’m writing to express my congratulations to you for winning the
first prize in the Chinese speech contest of the 72nd anniversary of National Day.
Your performance is perfect, especially your excellent spoken Chinese, which gives all the
teachers and students a deep impression. Besides, what surprises us most is that you are confident
and brave on the stage when facing plenty of audience. To be honest, you are a superstar in my
heart, and I would like to take this chance to learn from you.
Looking forward to your earliest reply. Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生Ryan写一封邮件，祝贺其在国
庆七十二周年“中华之美”中文演讲比赛中获得了第一名，内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.评论
与赞赏；3.表达祝愿。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
表达：express → convey
勇敢的：brave → courageous
说实话：to be honest → honestly speaking
机会：chance → opportunity2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Besides, what surprises us most is that you are confident and brave on the stage when
facing plenty of audience.
拓展句：Besides, it surprises us most that you are confident and brave on the stage when facing
plenty of audience.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] Your performance is perfect, especially your excellent spoken Chinese, which gives
all the teachers and students a deep impression.（运用了关系代词which引导的非限定性定语
从句）
[高分句型2] Besides, what surprises us most is that you are confident and brave on the stage
when facing plenty of audience.（运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句以及
when引导的时间状语从句的省略句）
9．Dear Peter,
Congratulations on your winning first place in the English Word Contest held by our school
recently. You deserve the honor. The past years have seen your rapid progress in English learning
through your great efforts.
To be honest, what I admire most is your diligence and determination. It’s from you that I
have learned something valuable, that is,“ No pains, no gains.” Therefore, I would like to express
my sincere thanks to you for what you have taught me.
Wish you greater achievements in your studies!
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写信向在英语单词大赛中获得第一名的
好友表示祝贺。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
最近：recently→lately
宝贵的：valuable →precious
真诚的：sincere→genuine
迅速的：rapid→fast/quick/swift
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句
原句：Congratulations on your winning first place in the English Word Contest held by our
school recently. You deserve the honor.
拓展句：Congratulations on your winning first place which you deserve in the English Word
Contest held by our school recently.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】To be honest, what I admire most is your diligence and determination.（运用了
what引导的主语从句）
【高分句型2】It’s from you that I have learned something valuable, that is,“ No pains, no
gains.”（运用了It is…that结构的强调句）
10．参考范文:
Dear Peter, I am thrilled to hear that you have won the School Excellence Award this
semester. Congratulations on this amazing achievement!
You truly deserve this recognition for your excellent academic performance and outstanding
leadership skills. Since you were appointed as Chairman of the Students’ Union, you have been
devoted to working heart and soul and organizing a variety of inspiring extracurricular activities. It
is your dedication and the virtue of serving others that leave us a deep impression and set a good
example for us. I am confident that you will continue to achieve in the future.
Once again, congratulations on this well-deserved award. Looking forward to celebrating
your success with you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国朋友Peter写封电子邮件，祝贺他
他荣获“校园卓越奖”并赞扬对方的优秀表现（学业、履职等）。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
兴奋的：thrilled→excited
优秀的：outstanding→excellent
美德：virtue→goodness
各种各样的：a variety of→all kinds of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句原句：You truly deserve this recognition for your excellent academic performance and
outstanding leadership skills.
拓展句：You truly deserve this recognition because you have excellent academic performance
and outstanding leadership skills.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] Dear Peter, I am thrilled to hear that you have won the School Excellence Award this
semester. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It is your dedication and the virtue of serving others that leave us a deep impression
and set a good example for us. (运用了强调句)
11．Dear Peter,
Having received the news that you’ve won the first prize in the Chinese Speech Competition
held recently, I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you.
It comes as no surprise to me that you have won first prize because you have been practicing
Chinese since you studied here three years ago. It is your devotion, persistence and strenuous
endeavors that eventually allow you to gain rapid progress in Chinese. Your success is also an
encouragement for me to study hard. I will take part in an English competition. Would you like to
give some advice?
Congratulations again on your success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本文是一篇应用文。你的美国朋友Peter最近在某电视台举办的汉语演讲比赛
中获得第一名，请你写一封英文邮件，内容包括：1、向他表示祝贺；2、你认为他获奖原
因；3、请教参赛经验。
【写作分析】1. 词汇积累
因为：because→since
获得：gain→obtain
参加：take part in→participate in
建议：advice→suggestion
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I will take part in an English competition. Would you like to give some advice?拓展句：Would you like to give some advice becuase I will take part in an English competition.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】It comes as no surprise to me that you have won first prize because you have been
practicing Chinese since you studied here three years ago. (运用了that引导的主语从句，
because引导的原因状语从句以及since引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】It is your devotion, persistence and strenuous endeavors that eventually allow you
to gain rapid progress in Chinese. (运用了强调句型)
12．[参考范文]
Dear Peter,
Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by
our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
It came as no surprise, for you are keenly interested in Chinese culture and have been
continuously exploring it. Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but also you consulted
many locals and professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good
command of Chinese culture.
Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the
Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Peter在你市举办
的“中国传统文化知识竞赛”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信表示祝贺。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
赢得：win→bear off
强烈的：keenly→intense
精通：good command of→proficiency in
致力于：devote oneself to→ commit oneself to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized
by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
拓展句：Because I have Learned your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional CultureContest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】 Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but also you consulted many
locals and professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command
of Chinese culture.（运用了倒装句，非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to
spreading the Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world.（运用and
连接并列句，省略连词的宾语从句）
13．Dear Mike,
I’m more than delighted to receive your letter in which you told me that you were invited to
participate in the Chinese Poetry Competition to be held next month. I’m writing to express my
sincere congratulations to you.
I’d like to give you some advice. As far as I know, it is a good idea for you to recite ancient
Chinese poetry as many as possible. What’s more, it is necessary to learn more about the
background of each poet. I firmly believe that only if you make full preparations in advance are
you likely to get through the next round of the competition.
Don’t hesitate to let me know if you need further help. Wish you a satisfactory result.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华。你的英国留学生朋友Mike写信告
诉你，他被邀请参加由CCTV举办的中国诗词大会比赛，希望你就赛前准备给他提供一些
建议。请你给他写一封回信。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
参加：participate in→take part in
比赛：competition→contest
表达：express→convey
必要的：necessary→essential
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’d like to give you some advice.
拓展句：I’d like to give you some advice, which I hope will be of great benefit to you.【典型句式】
[高分句型1] I’m more than delighted to receive your letter in which you told me that you were
invited to participate in the Chinese Poetry Competition to be held next month. (运用了“介词
+关系代词”结构定语从句)
[高分句型2] I firmly believe that only if you make full preparations in advance are you likely to
get through the next round of the competition. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
14．Dear Jim,
It was great to hear from you. Congratulations on being selected for the university interview!
I know it can be a nerve-wracking experience, but I have every faith you’ll do brilliantly.
In terms of advice, remember to be yourself. You have a unique set of skills and experiences,
so don’t be afraid to showcase them. Also, research the university thoroughly and prepare some
questions that show your interest in the course. This will demonstrate your level of commitment
and passion for the subject area. Additionally, do some practice interviews with friends or family
members. This will help you feel more comfortable and confident on the day of the actual
interview.
Good luck! I am rooting for you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国好友Jim来信说他收到理想大学的面试通知，
他有些紧张。要求考生给他回复一封邮件，表示祝贺并给予安慰，同时提供建议并说明理
由。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
选择：select → choose
建议：advice → suggestions
害怕的：afraid → frightened
此外：Additionally → In addition
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Additionally, do some practice interviews with friends or family members. This will help
you feel more comfortable and confident on the day of the actual interview.
拓展句：Additionally, do some practice interviews with friends or family members, which willhelp you feel more comfortable and confident on the day of the actual interview.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1]I know it can be a nerve-wracking experience, but I have every faith you’ll do
brilliantly. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Also, research the university thoroughly and prepare some questions that show your
interest in the course. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
15．Dear Jenny,
I’m so glad to hear from you. Congratulations on your graduation and I feel greatly honored
to share my senior life with you here. More details are as follows.
To begin with, as a senior student, life is busy and fulfilling due to the ultimate goal —
College Entrance Examination. Apart from study, I would play football with my friends after
school or at the weekend to get myself relaxed, which in turn refreshes my mind and gives me
much energy to fulfill better results.
What impresses me most is the friendship formed in the period. I think friends in high school
are my best friends forever, because they know me a lot and witness all of my emotions.
As for my future, I’m eager to be admitted into a well-known university. Thus, I work so hard
for it, so I must learn more as I can to fulfill myself.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Li Jin
【写作指导】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Tom回一封电子邮件，介绍自己的高
三生活。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
由于：due to→on account of
目标：goal→target/aim
实现：fulfill→achieve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As for my future, I’m eager to be admitted into a well-known university.
拓展句：As for my future, I’m eager to be admitted into a well-known university, where I will
further explore my potential and achieve my dreams in the long run.【典型句式】
[高分句型1]
Apart from study, I would play football with my friends after school or at the weekend to get
myself relaxed, which in turn refreshes my mind and gives me much energy to fulfill better
results. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
What impresses me most is the friendship formed in the period. (运用了what引导的主语从句)
