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考点 20 应用文写作:建 议信、道歉信(解析版) 【命题解读】 书信类写作包括邀请信、感谢信、推荐信、求职信、祝贺信、告知信、求助信、建议信、 道歉信、咨询信以及慰问信等类别。 以下对建议信、道歉信类别提供对应的模板和基本写作技巧。 建议信 【考情分析】 1、学习类:给图书馆建议,提高服务质量;给选修课提建议;给读书节提建议 2、环境保护类:给相关部门或报纸提建议①限制使用白色塑料袋,②节约食物 ③合理使 用共享单车。 3、文化自信类(★★★★★):外国留学生,来你们学校学习,给他们的学习生活或学习 中文提建议。 4、身心健康:给校长写信,关于提高学生身心健康:身体健康,减压等。 【布局思维导图】首段 写信目的 段落要点 正文 提出建议、说明原因 结尾 表达期望和祝愿 【基本模板】 Dear ______ (称谓) You can’t imagine how ______(情感) I am hearing about ______(写信的原因). I’m more than glad to offer my advice for your reference. Firstly, you are supposed to ______ (建议一) . Additionally(For one reason), it makes sense to ______ (建议二/理由一) . Moreover(For another reason), ______ (建议三/理由二)is also a good choice . Do bear in mind that (Therefore)______ (建议四/理由三) I am fully convinced that use the tips above and we will______ (以上建议的好处) . I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议). Your sincerely, Li Hua 【必备词句】 I am writing to express my views concerning... 我写此信来表达我关于……的观点。 You have asked me for my advice about... ,and I will try to make some conducive suggestions. 对于你来信问我关于……的事,现提供几条有益的建议。 I would like to suggest that... 我建议…… Why not.../ Why don't you...?为何不……?I think it will be a good idea/more beneficial if you could... 我认为……是个好办法/有利的。 It's important to.../ It helps to...It should be a good idea to... 很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。 I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning... 我提出几条有关于……的建议。 Please take good consideration of my advice.Thanks. 请仔细考虑我的建议,谢谢。 I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations helpful/useful. 希望这些 建议对你有帮助。 Thank you for your attention.感谢你对此事的关注。 【 写作实操技巧 】 假如你是李华,你的外教Mr Geller计划让8岁的女儿在中国学习一门传统艺术作为兴 趣培养,正在书法、剪纸与象棋中选择,写邮件寻求你的看法和学习建议。请你给他回一 封邮件,内容包括: 1.推荐内容及简要原因; 2.切实可行的学习建议; 3.祝福与希望。 注意:1.词数:80词左右; 2.内容应包括以上要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 参考词汇:书法:calligraphy 剪纸:paper-cutting 象棋:Chinese chess _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ 【模板范文】 Dear ______ (称谓) You can’t imagine how overjoyed (情感) I am hearing about your plan (写信的原因). I’m more than glad to offer my advice for your reference. Firstly, you are supposed to choose Chinese calligraphy because it’s a natural combination of beauty, strength, history and technique (建议一) . Additionally, aiming at learning it well, it makes sense to devote himself/ herself to long hours of practice (建议二) . Moreover, signing up for acalligraphy course (建议三)is also a good choice, which would help her study in a systematic way . Do bear in mind that it’d also be beneficial to study and imitate the works of famous calligraphers (建议四) I am fully convinced that use the tips above and you will gain benefit (以上建议的好处) . I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议). Your sincerely, Li Hua 【仿写演练】 假定你是李华,你朋友张帅在美国学习,你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业,前 不久, 他来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信。 1.建议他回国。 2.你的理由是国内形势好、学有所用、就业机会多、便于照顾父母、报效祖国等。 注意:1.词数80左右: 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ 【模板范文】 Dear Zhangshuai (称谓) You can’t imagine how overjoyed (情感) I am hearing about you are going to graduate (写信的原因). I’m more than glad to offer my advice for your reference. In my opinion, you are supposed to come back after you finish your studies abroad (建议) . For one reason, what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China and it will be quite easy for you to find a good job (理由一) . For another reason, it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old (理由二). Therefore,it's a good idea for you to return. (总结)I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议). Your sincerely, Li Hua 道歉信 【考情分析】 ①活动没有去参加(道歉时,活动已经结束); ②活动不能去参加(道歉时,活动还没有开始); ③给别人造成了损失:如把对方东西弄丢;把车给损坏了; ④答应的事情(或任务)没有按时完成等。 【布局思维导图】 首段 表表示歉意,道歉的原由 段落要点 正文 解释原因,提出弥补措施; 结尾 再次请求原谅。 【基本模板】Dear ______ (称谓) I 'm terribly sorry to inform you that ______(写信事由). Thus, I am writing to apologize for not keeping my word. Something unexpected happened and ______(失约理由) . Shall we fix another time? I’ll be available any time after______(补救办法). Will ______(另约时间) suits your convenience? If it’s ok, let’s meet at ______(见面地点). If not, let me know what time suits you best. I hope the adjustment won’t put you into much trouble. Keenly anticipate your prompt reply. Your sincerely, Li Hua 【必备词句】 I would like to express my apology for... 对于……,我想要表达我的歉意。 Will you be good enough to excuse me for.../Excuse me for... 请原谅我…… Please accept my sincerest and deepest apology for... 请接受我最真诚的致歉…… I'm terribly sorry to tell you that.../ I regret to inform you that...很抱歉地告诉你…… I write to you to express my deep regret. 我写此信向你表示深深的懊悔。 I am writing to apologize to you for... 我写信向你致歉,因为…… Would you mind if I...?你是否介意如果我……? To make up my thoughtless behavior,I...为了弥补我欠考虑的行为,我…… I wish I could be given a chance to make up for my inconsideration. 我希望你能给我一个机 会来弥补我的考虑不周。 【写作实操技巧】 假定你是李华,你和外教MrSmith本来约好去看在你们所在城市举行的国际摄影展, 但你因故不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括: 1.表示歉意; 2. 解释原因; 3.补救措施。 注意:1. 词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ 【模板范文】 Dear MrSmith (称谓) I 'm terribly sorry to inform you that I can' t accompany you to the International Photography Festival held this Saturday (写信事由). Thus, I am writing to apologize for not keeping my word. Something unexpected happened and my parents have to go outside of the city this Saturday, so I have to stay at home and take care of my little brother (失约理由) . Shall we fix another time? I’ll be available any time after this S aturday (补救办法). Will this Sunday(另约时间) suits your convenience? If it’s ok, let’s meet at our school gate at 8 a.m.(见面地点). If not, let me know what time suits you best. I hope the adjustment won’t put you into much trouble. Keenly anticipate your prompt reply. Your sincerely, Li Hua 【仿写演练】 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友David本周六即将结束在中国的旅行,乘飞机返回英国, 你因有事无法按原定计划取机场为他送行,只好写信向他道歉,内容如下: 1.表达歉意;2.说明不能送行的原因。 注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________【模板范文】 Dear David (称谓) I 'm terribly sorry to inform you that I cannot make it to see you off at the airport this Saturday as promised (写信事由). Thus, I am writing to apologize for not keeping my word. Something unexpected happened and I have to help make preparations for the English Speaking Contest to be held this weekend . Actually, I have just been informed of this plan by the schoolmaster. Moreover, as the chairman of the Student Union, I feel responsible for this job. How I wish I could have the chance to talk with you once more about the happy days we spent together before you leave! (失 约理由) . I hope the adjustment won’t put you into much trouble. Wish you a safe journey. Your sincerely, Li Hua 【真题1】(2018全国卷I) 假如你是李华, 你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客, 发邮 件向你询问有关习俗, 请你回复邮件, 内容包括: 到达时间; 2.合适的礼物; 3.餐桌礼仪 注意:1.词数不少于80;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 【参考范文】 Dear Terry, How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and feel confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to offer you some advice. To begin with, I would like to suggest that you should arrive on time, because it is impolite to be late in Chinese traditional culture. In addition, it is a good idea to bring some appropriate gifts, such as a bunch of flowers or a box of Chocolates. Last but not least, you are supposed to pay attentionto table manners when enjoying the meal. For example, you should avoid-making noise while chewing the food or sticking your chopsticks into your food. I sincerely hope that my suggestions would be helpful/beneficial/be of benefit to you. I am sure you will have a great time. Yours, Li Hua 【真题2】(2017·北京卷)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条 线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他 回信,内容包括:1.你建议的线路;2.你的理由;3.你的祝愿。 注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 【参考范文】 Dear Jim, I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China. Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice. Hope you’ll have a good time in China. Yours, Li Hua 【真题3】(2019北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim打算暑假 期间来北京、天津和上海旅游,发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括: 1.交通出行;2.必备衣物。 注意: 1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Jim, I’m pleased that you’re coming to tour in China. I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities. Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you. Looking forward to your arrival. Yours, Li Hua 【真题4】(2017·北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的 邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他 回邮件,内容包括: (1) 表示欢迎;(2) 推荐他上哪所大学;(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。 注意:(1). 词数不少于50;(2). 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Jim,I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing. Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment. I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know. Yours, Li Hua 【真题5】【2019·天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的李津,英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为 期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间,英方教师 Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就 讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件: (1)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一); (2)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容; (3)希望从中有何收获。 注意: (1)词数不少于100: (2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯; (3)开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。 Dear Chris, I'm Li Jim,a student at Chenguang High School. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________ Thank you for your time.Yours, Li Jin 【参考范文】 Dear Chris, I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. I got the news that your school will send teachers to my school for a week-long summer exchange. During the activity,you will give a lecture on Western art. You want to seek for advice on what topic the lecture will be about. From my personal note,music is my priority. I am interested in all kinds of music,among which Jazz is my favorite. I want to know about the history of jazz,and some famous jazz singers. I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz. Thank you for your time. Yours, Li Jin 【真题6】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中 国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括 (1) 表示欢迎; (2) 推荐他上哪所大学; (3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。 注意:(1). 词数不少于50; (2). 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Jim,I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing. Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment. I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know. Yours, Li Hua 【真题7】 (2016·新课标卷III)假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因 故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括: 1.表示歉意; 2.说明原因; 3.另约时间。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 【参考范文】 Dear Bob, I’m sorry to say that I can't go to the bookshop with you on Sunday morning as we planned last week. I am writing to apologize for breaking my promise. Here is the reason why I can’t go to the bookstore with you. Since the final exam is just around the corner, I decide to stay at home to go over my lessons. You know, I didn’t do well in the last exam. So I want to devote all my spare time to working on my lessons in order to get good scores in the final exam. I am wondering if we can go to the bookstore on the second Sunday in January. Sorry again for the inconvenience caused to you. Yours, Li Hua 【真题8】(2014·北京卷)你给英国朋友Chris写一封信,内容包括: 1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游;2.由于脚部受伤,你无法按原计划前往; 3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。 注意: 1.词数不少于50;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词 数。 【参考范文】 Dear Chris, How is everything going? I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned. I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Joe 【真题9】(2014·山东卷)假如你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你 发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点 给他回封邮件: 1.未及时回信的原因;2.你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等) 注意: 1. 词数:120-150;2 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 【参考范文】 Dear Tom, How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know, I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back. In your letter, you asked me for my plans on summer vacation. Now, I am writing to tell you some specific details. Overall, three things will make my summer vacation meaningful. To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation, in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make morefriends. What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my life. I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, what’s your plan to spend your summer vacation? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【真题10】2021年6月北京卷 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴 约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括: 1.表达歉意并说明原因; 2.提出建议并给出理由。 注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Yours , Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Jim, How are you these days? We have planned to hang around together this weekend, and how much I am expecting that! To my pity, I was informed to attend the nursery house with the Student Union this morning. Since this weekend is the Double Ninth Day, a traditional day celebrated for the senior in China, our school has launched this activity to show our concern and responsibility for the old, which is a meaningful and instructive activity for us teenagers. I am really sorry and how about going out together next weekend, and as a compensation, I would like to teat you a big meal and invite you to visit local museum. If the time is not convenient for you, you can set anytime next week. Please accept my sincere apology for that. Looking forward to seeing you soon! Yours,Li Hua 【模拟检测 1】(2022·江苏·模拟预测)假定你是李华,得知你的英国好友Jim在国际数学 奥林匹克大赛(International Mathematical Olympiad)中失利。请用英语给他写一封邮件, 内容包括:1. 获知消息;2. 劝他坦然面对挫折;3. 给予鼓励。 注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 参考答案: Dear Jim, I am sorry to learn that you met your waterloo in the International Mathematical Olympiad, which you had prepared for the whole summer vacation. True, this big defeat might frustrate you for a long time. But please rest assured that failure is just part of life and in fact, without it, countless great men would never have drawn useful lessons from their loss and achieved their ambition. So, please assume a peaceful and calm mindset, meanwhile adjusting your strategy and resuming your hard work. You have already gone a long way in this Olympiad. In fact, hardly have I seen a more diligent contestant than you. So, pick yourself up and keep up your effort. I am fully convinced success is there for your taking in the next Olympiad. Yours, Li hua【解析】 【导语】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在得知英国好友Jim在国际数学奥林匹克大赛中失利 后用英语给他写一封邮件。其内容包括:获知消息、 劝他坦然面对挫折和给予鼓励。 【详解】 词汇积累 遭遇:meet→ suffer 没错:true→ indeed 事实上:in fact→ as a matter of fact 抱负:ambition→ aspiration 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:True, this big defeat might frustrate you for a long time. 拓展句:It is true that this big defeat might frustrate you for a long time. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】I am sorry to learn that you met your waterloo in the International Mathematical Olympiad, which you had prepared for the whole summer vacation.(运用了that引导的宾语从 句和which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】 In fact, hardly have I seen a more diligent contestant than you.(运用了hardly 放句首引起的部分倒装) 【模拟检测 2】(2022·天津和平·一模)假如你是晨光中学的李津,你给已经是大学一年级 学生的笔友Chris写信,请对方给你提一些建议。信的内容如下: (1)询问Christ大学生活的状况; (2)询问Christ当初根据什么选择的专业; (3)自己希望选择的专业及原因(如兴趣、父母意愿、就业前景等)。 参考词汇:专业major 注意: (1)词数不少于100; (2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯; (3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Chris, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jin 参考答案: Dear Chris, Nice to know that you have already been a first year student in the university. I am writing to ask you for some suggestions on my major in the future. What interests me is whether you have adapted to the university life. Do you have a tight schedule on your studies? I was wondering what it was that made you choose your present major. As for my major I am to take, I prefer to study English language because I have a great passion for it. In addition, my parents also strongly recommend me to take it as my major, which is playing a more and more significant role in spreading traditional Chinese culture around the world. Thirdly and most importantly, it has a most promising employment prospect. Hope everything goes smoothly with you and looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Jin 【解析】 【导语】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给已经是大学一年级学生的笔友Chris写信,请对方给 你提一些有关大学生活和专业选择的建议。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 建议:advice→suggestion 选择:select→choose 角色:part→role 希望:wish→hope2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:Do you have a tight schedule on your studies? 拓展句:Do you have a tight schedule that is on your studies? 【点睛】 [高分句型1] What interests me is whether you have adapted to the university life. (运用了what引导的主语 从句和whether引导的表语从句) [高分句型2] In addition, my parents also strongly recommend me to take it as my major, which is playing a more and more significant role in spreading traditional Chinese culture around the world. (运用 了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【模拟检测 3】(2022·辽宁实验中学一模)假定你是希望中学的高三学生李华,你的英国 朋友Tom来信询问你打算如何度过高考录取后至上大学前的这段时间。请给Tom回信告诉 他你的想法。内容包括: 1.上大学前的准备; 2.业余生活; 注意:1.词数80左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 2.书信开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, How is everything going with you? _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________ Yours, Li Hua 参考答案: One possible version: Dear Tom,How is everything going with you? I am now going all out for the final Examination yet to come in early June. But I am also thinking about how to spend the post-Gaokao time. Well, first, I will help with some housework and neighbourhood voluntary work if any. As for the new life ahead, getting familiar with my majors should be the biggest part of my plan so that I can adjust myself to the new academic requirements. I will pursue two new hobbies and travelling included. In short, I will get ready both mentally and physically before college life begins. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】 本篇书面表达属于一篇应用文。要求学生代替李华给英国朋友写信,向他介绍你高考录取 后至上大学期间这段时间的安排。 【详解】 1.词汇积累: 考虑:think about→consider/think over 关于,至于:as for→in regard to/with respect to 适应:adjust oneself to→adapt oneself to/acclimatize oneself to 总之:in short→in a word/in brief 2.句式拓展: 同义句转换 原句:I will pursue two new hobbies and travelling included. 拓展句:I will pursue two new hobbies, including travelling. 【点睛】 [高分句型1] But I am also thinking about how to spend the post-Gaokao time.(使用了疑问词+to do作宾 语。) [高分句型2] As for the new life ahead, getting familiar with my majors should be the biggest part of my plan so that I can adjust myself to the new academic requirements.(使用了so that引导结果状语从 句。)