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考向 48 应用文写作之道歉信和感谢信
道歉信
【写作示例】
假定你是李华, 与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店, 因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 表示歉意; 2. 说明原因; 3. 另约时间。
注意: 1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
【考场审题】
Step 1: 精准审题 谋篇布局
人称 I (Li Hua), You(Bob)
时态 一般现在时, 一般将来时
开头点题: 点明写作目的, 并表达歉意
段落布局 主体段落: 说明致歉的原因
结尾: 再次致歉, 并另约时间
Step 2: 头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词: express my heartfelt apology; represent our school to do; available; as a result
(2)佳句: ①I can’t go with you as planned.
②I’m writing to express my heartfelt apology to you.
③How about going to the bookstore this Sunday.
Step 3: 斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1: 我很抱歉无法跟你一起去书店。
一般表达: I’m sorry that I can’t go with you to the bookstore.
句式升级(高级词汇, 名词性从句, 分词作状语)
我诚挚地向你道歉, 这周五不能按计划和你去书店了。
I have to express my heartfelt apology to you that I can’t go with you to the bookstore this Friday as planned.
要点2: 我入选代表我校参加英语辩论赛。
一般表达: I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition.
句式升级(定语从句, for引导的并列句)
我入选代表我校参加英语辩论赛, 这对我非常重要, 因为我一直梦想有这样的机会代表我校参赛, 展示我们的实
力。
I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition, which is of great importance to me,for I have been dreaming of having such a chance to show our strength on behalf of my school.
要点3: 这个周日去书店如何? 那时你是否有时间呢?
一般表达: How about going to the bookstore this Sunday? Will you be available then?
句式升级(高级词汇, 意趣盎然)
Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookstore this Sunday?
Step 4: 衔接过渡 斐然成篇
【参考范文】
Dear Bob,
How are you doing? I’m indeed very sorry that I can’t go to the bookstore with you this Friday as planned.
How I wish I could go with you! However, I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate
competition, which is of great importance to me, for I have been dreaming of having such a chance to show our strength
on behalf of my school. As a result, I have to miss our appointment.
Please accept my sincere apology from the bottom of my heart. Would it be convenient for you if we go to the
bookstore this Sunday?
Yours,
Li Hua
感谢信
【写作示例】
假定你是李华, 经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请你写一封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助;
3. 临别祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
【考场审题】
Step 1: 精准审题 谋篇布局
人称 I(Li Hua), You(Alex)
时态 一般过去时, 一般现在时
开头点题: 点明写作目的, 感谢对方帮助
段落布局 主体段落: 具体指出曾经的帮助
结尾: 再次表达感谢, 给出临别祝愿Step 2: 头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词: have difficulty in, under your patient guidance, not only. . . but also. . . , generous
(2)佳句:
①I can well remember there was a time when I had difficulty in learning English.
②It is you who taught me how to learn English well.
③Not only did you help improve my English, but also gave me more confidence in learning.
Step 3: 斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1: 你教给我如何学英语。
一般表达: You taught me how to learn English.
句式升级 (强调句)
是你教给我如何学英语。
It is you who taught me how to learn English.
要点2: 你帮助我提高了英语并且给了我更多学习的自信。
一般表达: You helped improve my English and gave me more confidence in learning.
句式升级 (倒装句)
你不但帮助我提高了英语, 并且给了我更多学习的自信。
Not only did you help improve my English, but also gave me more confidence in learning.
Step 4: 衔接过渡 斐然成篇
【参考范文】
Dear Alex,
I’ve heard that you’re leaving China soon, so I’m writing to express my sincere blessing and thanks.
I can well remember there was a time when I had difficulty in learning English. It is you who taught me how to
learn English. Under your patient guidance, I gradually made progress and began interested in English. Not only did
you help improve my English, but also gave me more confidence in learning. Thanks again for your generous help.
Wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
【检测训练】
1．假设你是李明，你因生病没能按时上交李老师安排的作业。请你用英语给他写一封道歉信，内容包括：
1. 向他道歉
2. 解释原因
3. 保证尽快补交作业。注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3. 信的开头和结尾已经给出，但是不计入总词数
Dear Mr.Li
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Your student
Li Ming
2．假设你是李华，是一名在Eric家里的交换生(exchange student)。昨晚，你和几位同学在房间里大声讨论周末
班级出游事宜，影响了Eric一家休息。
请给Eric写一封道歉信，内容包括：
1.表示道歉; 2.说明原因; 3.提出解决办法。
注意：1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假如你是李华，你约好昨天去公交车站接你的朋友 Dylan，但你却迟到了 10 分钟，令他很失望。 请用英
语给他写一封道歉信，要点如下:
1. 向他表示道歉; 2. 表达你对此事的认识; 3. 请求他的原谅。
注意:1.词数 80 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Dylan，_________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．毕业季也是感恩季，来自澳大利亚的Feinstein在她的网站上发起感谢信接力的活动。假设你是红星中学高三
学生李华，请写一封感谢信参加接力，内容包括：
1. 感谢的人或事物；
2. 感谢的原因；
3. 你的美好愿望。
注意：1.词数100左右 字。 2.不得透露个人信息及感谢人信息
Dear ___________,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．你是李华，父亲节即将来临，在父亲节这天，需要说哪些话语来感谢自己的父亲呢？请根据以下要点用英文
给父亲写一封感谢信。内容包括：
1. 感谢养育之恩；
2. 感谢父亲在你遇到挫折时给你鼓励和安慰；
3. 感谢父亲在你成功时以你为荣；
4.爱父亲。
注意：1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。Dear Father,
With Father’s Day approaching,
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6．假定你是李华，是某市外国语学校的学生。请你用英语给外教Mr. Green写一封感谢信，感谢他捡到并归还
你的钱包。内容包括:
1. 写信目的；
2. 解释事情经过；
3. 表示感谢。
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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