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秘籍 01 感谢信+道歉信
目录
感谢信
【应试秘籍】感谢信思路...................................................................................................................................01
【应试秘籍】感谢信常用词块...........................................................................................................................02
【应试秘籍】感谢信必背句式...........................................................................................................................02
道歉信
【应试秘籍】道歉信思路..................................................................................................................................03
【应试秘籍】道歉信常用词块..........................................................................................................................03
【应试秘籍】道歉信必背句式..........................................................................................................................04
【抢分通关】感谢信经典考题..........................................................................................................................05
【抢分通关】道歉信经典考题..........................................................................................................................11
感谢信
秘籍：采用三段式，分为开头段、主体段和结尾段。具体思路如下：
开头段：表明写作意图，并向对方表达感谢之情。
主体段：针对感谢的原因展开具体说明，中间列为2到3个理由。语气诚恳、真诚。
结尾段：再次表达感谢，并表示希望回报对方
感谢信常用词块
1. generous help慷慨的帮助2. timely and selfless help及时和无私的帮助
3. professional assistance专业的帮助
4. mean a lot to sb 对某人十分重要
5. generous donation慷慨捐赠
6. enable sb to do sth使某人能够做某事
7. encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
8. have the chance to do sth有机会做某事
9. constructive and instructive help 建设性的、有益的帮助
10. be grateful/thankful to sb for sth因某事感激某人
11. convey the endless appreciation to sb向某人表达无尽的谢意
12. make remarkable achievements取得非凡的成就
13. express the sincere gratitude/thanks for sth为某事表达真诚的谢意
感谢信必背句式
开头常用句
1. I'm writing to express my thanks for...
我写信是为了表达我的感谢。
2. On behalf of. . . , I would like to express our great appreciation for your timely help and assistance.
代表……我谨对您的及时帮助表示衷心的感谢。
3. Words fail to express my thanks/gratitude/appreciation to you.
言语无法表达我对你的感激和感激。
4. l'd like to take this opportunity to express my sincere gratitude to you for your timely help.
我想借这次机会对您的及时帮助向您表达真诚的感谢
5.Now I'm writing to extend my gratitude to on behalf of my school and myself.
现在我写信代表我们学校和自己向您感激。
主体常用句
1. Under your professional guidance,I made such unbelievable progress in English.在你的专业指导下,我在
英语方面取得了难以置信的进步。
2. But for your help during my one year's stay in London, I wouldn't have adapted to quickly.
在伦敦一年的时间里,要不是你的帮助,我如此迅速地适应它。
3. What impressed me most is the beat scenery and friendly people in your country.
给我印象最深的是你们国家那迷人的景色善的人们。
4. More importantly, your help and kind made it easier for me to have a better un standing of Bri of
British culture and adapt to the there.
更重要的是,你的帮助和善意使我更容易英国文化,并且适应那里的生活。
5. It was with your generous help and te care that I had a wonderful time there.正是慷慨帮助和悉心照顾让我在那里度过了美时光。
结尾常用句
1. Thank you again for recommending these English novels to me.
再次感谢推荐这些英文小说给我。
2. Words fail me to express my thanks to you./My gratitude to you is beyond my description.
对您的感谢我无法用语言来表达。
3. Please accept my sincere gratitude for your participating in today's lecture.
您来参加今天的讲座,请接受我真心的感谢。
道歉信
秘籍：道歉信采用三段式，分为开头段、主体段和结尾段。具体思路如下：
开头段：表明写作意图，向对方表达歉意。
主体段：陈述原因并提出补救措施。
结尾段：如果第二段只是陈述原因，结尾段也可提出补救措施并再次致歉。
道歉信常用词块
1. cancel the appointment with sb. 取消与某人的约会
2. regretful adj.后悔的;遗憾的
3. something urgent紧急的事情
4. occupy vt.占据，占用
5. sincere adj.诚挚的，真诚的
6. excuse me for 原谅我……
7. delay n.耽搁;推迟 vi.&vt. 推迟;延期
8. fail to do sth.未能做某事
9. absence n.缺席;缺乏
10. forgive vt. 原谅
11. regret to do sth.遗憾要做某事
12. fault n.过错
13. apologize for (doing) sth.
14. inconvenience n.不便，麻烦因为(做)某事而道歉15. apologize to sb. for sth.
16. promise n. 承诺 vi.& vt.保证，答应 因某事向某人道歉
17. be excessively/extremely sorry万分抱歉
18. be available 有空
19. have no choice/option but to do... 别无选择，只能做……
20. make up for 弥补
道歉信必背句式
开头常用句
1. I'm writing to apologize for .….我写信是为了向你道歉。
2. I feel extremely sorry that I can't keep my word to ..
我为自己不能遵守诺言而感到遗憾。.
3. Sorry for being unable to...
很抱歉不能......
主体常用句
1. I have just had a bad cold and I'm advised to stay at home for a rest. So I feel terribly sorry to
miss the opportunity to ... (with you).
我刚刚得了一场重感冒，有人坚决建议我呆在家里休息一下。所以我非常遗憾地错过了这个机会……
（和你在一起）。
2. The reason why I will not be available at that time is that there is a change in my school
arrangements.我当时将缺席的原因是我的学校安排发生了变化
3. I have to pick up my uncle at the airport. I'd tried to find an alternative person but no one else is
available.
我得去机场接我叔叔。我试着找一个人，但没有其他人。
结尾常用句
1. Would you give me a chance to make an apology to you face to face ? I sincerely invite you to..你
能给我机会面对面向你道歉吗？我真诚地邀请你来参加。
2. Shall we postpone our meeting/visit/...till...
我们要不要推迟我们的时间到……
3. Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence / the abrupt change.
再次抱歉为我的缺席/突然更改造成的不便。感谢信
1.（2024·辽宁·二模）
假定你是李华。几个月前，你由于英语学习进步缓慢而感到沮丧，外教 Mr. Smith给予了帮助。请你给他
写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.回顾Mr. Smith对你的帮助；
3.你的感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80个左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Smith,
How are you going? I want to take a moment to express my sincere gratitude for your invaluable assistance in
improving my English.
A few months ago, I was at a loss what to do because I had little progress in English. It’s your guidance and
support that have made a significant difference to my academic performance. You not only helped me expand
vocabulary but also directed me to improve my grammar. Most importantly, with your help, I have gained
confidence in English and achieved results that I never thought possible.
I have benefited a lot. Once again, thank you, Mr. Smith, for being such an outstanding teacher and mentor.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Mr. Smiths写一封感谢信，就对方在英语上给与自己的帮助表示感
谢。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
宝贵的：invaluable→precious进步：progress→advance
帮助：help→assist
指导：direct→instruct
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：You not only helped me expand vocabulary but also directed me to improve my grammar.
拓展句：Not only did you help me expand vocabulary but also you directed me to improve my grammar.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s your guidance and support that have made a significant difference to my academic
performance.（运用了It’s…that强调句型）
【高分句型2】Most importantly, with your help, I have gained confidence in English and achieved results that I
never thought possible.（运用了that引导限制性定语从句）
2.（2024·山东日照·一模）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，最近英文报开设了“英文诗歌创作”专栏，外教Andy提供了很大的支持和
帮助。请你给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 表达感谢；
2. 回顾所提供的帮助。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Andy,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Andy,
I am writing to inform you that I won the first prize in the “English poetry writing”column started by the
English newspaper. I am grateful for what you have done for me. Without your patient guidance and continuous
encouragement, I could not have made it.
It was kind of you to set aside half an hour every day from your busy schedule to teach me how to write a
poem. Besides, after I wrote the poem, you revised my poem and gave me some advice.
Thanks again for your generous help.
Yours,Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生写一篇感谢信，感谢外教Andy在你参加“英文诗歌创作”活动中所提
供给你的的支持和帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激的：grateful→thankful
指导：guidance→direction
友好的：kind→nice
此外：Besides→In addition
2.句式拓展
改为定语从句
原句：Besides, after I wrote the poem, you revised my poem and gave me some advice.
拓展句：Besides, after I wrote the poem, you revised my poem and gave me some advice, which played a very
important role in winning the first prize.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】I am writing to inform you that I won the first prize in the “English poetry
writing”column started by the English newspaper. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I am grateful for what you have done for me. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
3.（2023高三·浙江·阶段练习）
假如你是高考应届生李华，你的好友Mark被常春藤大学联盟(Ivy League University)录取，请你给他写一封
邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺
2. 询问学习方法
3. 表达祝愿
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Mark,
I’m more than glad to hear that you’ve been admitted into Ivy League University. I’d like to express my
cordial congratulations on your promising future! It was your intelligence and persistence that enabled you to make
it!
Honestly, with our college entrance examination approaching, I wonder if there are some efficient learning
methods. I’d appreciate it if you can share your learning strategies with me.
Wish you further success! Anticipating your early reply!Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。好友Mark被常春藤大学联盟(Ivy League University)录取，要求考生写
一封邮件表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad → delighted
衷心的、由衷的：cordial → heartfelt
老实说、确实：honestly → to be honest
期待：anticipate → look forward to
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：I’m more than glad to hear that you’ve been admitted into Ivy League University.
拓展句：Hearing that you’ve been admitted into Ivy League University, I am more than delighted.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It was your intelligence and persistence that enabled you to make it!(运用了强调句)
【高分句型2】Honestly, with our college entrance examination approaching, I wonder if there are some efficient
learning methods.(运用了with复合结构和if引导的宾语从句)
4.（2024高三·广东·阶段练习）
假定你是英语课代表李华，班主任给你指派了新的工作，所以你需要辞去英语课代表的职务。请你给外教
Mary写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．阐明写信事由；
2．表示感谢；
3．愿意做好交接工作。
注意：
1．写作词数应为 80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mary,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mary,
Please accept this as my resignation from the post of assistant to English teacher. Actually, I’m not willing to
give up the post. But my class teacher has assigned me a new job. And I really worry about not being able to do
both jobs.My last day will be the end of this month, two weeks from today. I appreciate the valuable experience I have
gained from the post. It has been a pleasure working as your assistant.
Please let me know how I can help during this transition and make it as smooth as possible. I wish you all the
best.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mary写一封邮件，说明你需要辞去英语课代表的职
务的原因和表示感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
实际上：actually→in fact
工作：job→work
宝贵的：valuable→precious
担任：work as→serve as
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：I appreciate the valuable experience I have gained from the post. It has been a pleasure working as your
assistant.
拓展句：Not only do I appreciate the valuable experience I have gained from the post, but also it has been a
pleasure working as your assistant.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I appreciate the valuable experience I have gained from the post. (运用了省略关系词的定
语从句)
[高分句型2] Please let me know how I can help during this transition and make it as smooth as possible. (运用了
how引导宾语从句)
5.（2024·全国·模拟预测）
假定你是李华。寒假里，你应美国朋友Mrs. Davis的邀请到芝加哥（Chicago）旅游。其间，你受到她们一
家人的热心帮助和款待，使自己享受到了一个很愉快的旅行。请给Mrs. Davis写一封感谢信，并且希望她
到中国游玩时住到自己家里。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mrs. Davis,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mrs. Davis,
I am writing the letter to thank your whole family for the many kindnesses you showed me when I stayed in
Chicago during the winter holiday. Certainly, my visit to Chicago was truly memorable, thanks in no small part to
your thoughtful hospitality. You certainly know how to make a guest feel at home! Your delicious meals were a
treat, and your flexibility in adapting to my irregular schedule made many things possible. It was just because of the
affection of your whole family that I could enjoy such a pleasing holiday.
I hope your travels to China will soon realize. Plan on staying with my family, and we will look forward to
more hours of enjoyment.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给Mrs. Davis写一封感谢信，并且希望她到中国游玩时住
到自己家里。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢：thank→appreciate
难忘的：memorable→unforgettable
适应：adapt to→adjust to
因为：because of→due to
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I am writing the letter to thank your whole family for the many kindnesses you showed me when I stayed in
Chicago during the winter holiday.
拓展句：I am writing the letter so that I can thank your whole family for the many kindnesses you showed me
when I stayed in Chicago during the winter holiday.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing the letter to thank your whole family for the many kindnesses you showed me
when I stayed in Chicago during the winter holiday.（运用了when引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型2] It was just because of the affection of your whole family that I could enjoy such a pleasing holiday.
（运用了强调句）
道歉信
1．（2024高三·全国·专题练习）
假设你是李华，作为交换生(an exchange student)正在英国windmill College学习。今天早晨你骑车上学时不
小心刮擦到了一辆停在路边的汽车。由于急着上学，你无法在原地等候车主。请留一张便条，内容包括：
1. 表明身份；
2. 简述事情经过；
3. 道歉并表示愿意赔偿；
4. 联系方式(Tel: 5893671 E-mail: lihua@windmillco.org)。
注意：1. 词数：80左右；
2. 不得逐条翻译，内容要连贯得体。
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards!
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China studying at Windmill College. I’m truly sorry that my bike
scratched your car when I was riding to school this morning. I understand it will certainly put you in a very bad
mood. I sincerely apologize for what I did and promise I will cover all the relevant costs. As school will start soon,
I can’t wait on the scene for you. Please contact me at 589367 or linux@windmilloo.org. Many apologies again for
all the inconvenience I have caused you.
Best regards!
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生因为今天早晨骑车上学时不小心刮擦到了一辆停在路边的汽
车。由于急着上学，无法在原地等候车主。对此给车主留一张便条。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开始：start→begin
支付：cover→pay
有关的：relevant→related
造成：cause→lead to
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：As school will start soon, I can’t wait on the scene for you.
拓展句：I can’t wait on the scene for you because school will start soon.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m truly sorry that my bike scratched your car when I was riding to school this morning.
(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] I sincerely apologize for what I did and promise I will cover all the relevant costs. (运用了what引导
宾语从句)
2．（23-24高三·浙江嘉兴·期末）
假定你是校英语话剧社社长李华，原定于下周举行的英语话剧表演赛因故推迟，请给担任评委的外教
Katherine写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；
2.推迟原因；
3.后续调整。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Katherine,
How are things going with you these days? I’m sorry to tell you that the English drama competition scheduled
to be held next week has been postponed for some reason.
Today the school announces that there are some security problems in the auditorium, where the competition is
supposed to be held, so the place will be locked for repair. The greatest influence on us is that the competition this
year has been postponed to next month. And we will rearrange the competition and inform you in time. I hope it
would be convenient for you to be our judge then.
Looking forward to your early reply
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Katherine写封邮件，告诉她英语话剧表演赛因故推
迟，向她表示歉意，解释推迟原因，并告知后续调整事项。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
竞赛：competition→contest
推迟：postpone→put off
安全：security→safety
影响：influence→effect
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I’m sorry to tell you that the English drama competition scheduled to be held next week has been postponed
for some reason.
拓展句：I’m sorry to tell you that the English drama competition which was scheduled to be held next week has
been postponed for some reason.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to tell you that the English drama competition scheduled to be held next week
has been postponed for some reason.(使用了不定式作状语、that引导宾语从句、过去分词作后置定语)
【高分句型2】Today the school announces that there are some security problems in the auditorium, where thecompetition is supposed to be held, so the place will be locked for repair. (使用了that引导宾语从句、there be句
型、where引导非限制性定语从句、be supposed to do…结构、so连接并列句)
3．（23-24高三·山东菏泽·期末）
假定你是李华，留学生朋友Peter借给你一本英文名著《飘》(Gone with the Wind)，可是你不小心损坏了。
请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示道歉；
2.解释损坏原因；
3.提出补救办法。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to express my sincere apology for the accidental damage to the English classic Gone with the
Wind you kindly lent me.
Yesterday evening I was absorbed in the book when I carelessly knocked down the cup, the hot water pouring
over the book. I was upset that the whole book was in bad shape. Knowing how precious the book is to you, I’m
terribly sorry for any inconvenience caused.
I expect to make it up to you by replacing the book with a new copy. I’ve purchased one online, which will be
sent to you in 3 days. I hope this unfortunate incident won’t affect our friendship. Please accept my heartfelt
apology.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。留学生朋友Peter借给你一本英文名著《飘》(Gone with the Wind)，可
是你不小心损坏了。要求考生给他写封邮件道歉，同时解释损坏原因并提出补救办法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
衷心的：sincere → heartfelt
全神贯注于：be absorbed in → concentrate on
珍贵的：precious→ valuable非常：terribly → awfully
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I was upset that the whole book was in bad shape.
拓展句：I was upset because the whole book was in bad shape.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing how precious the book is to you, I’m terribly sorry for any inconvenience caused.
(运用了现在分词作原因状语)
[高分句型2] I’ve purchased one online, which will be sent to you in 3 days. (运用了关系代词which引导非限制
性定语从句)
4．（23-24高三·广东·期末）
假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Jerry写信邀请你寒假期间去伦敦游玩，你因故无法前往，请你回信表达歉
意，内容包括：
1. 谢绝的理由；
2. 提议暑假去拜访他。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jerry,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jerry,
Thanks for inviting me to London in the coming winter holiday. I’d love to visit you, but I’m sorry that I really
cannot make it.
As you know, I am in Senior Three this year, which means I am in the middle of preparing for the college
entrance examination to be held in the coming June. Therefore, I’m determined to make the best use of every
minute I have, the holiday included, to improve my academic performance.
Additionally, the winter holiday lasts only for two weeks, a bit short for a trip abroad, so I’m considering
rescheduling the trip for the coming summer holiday. What do you think of this plan?
Once again, I’d like to express my sincere apology. Looking forward to meeting you in London!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国朋友Jerry写信邀请你寒假期间去伦敦游玩，你因故无法前往给他回信表达歉意并说明自己的想法。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
因此：therefore → hence
另外：additionally → in addition/besides
考虑：consider → think about
衷心的：sincere → heartfelt
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：What do you think of this plan?
拓展句：What do you think of the plan I put forward?
【点睛】[高分句型1] As you know, I am in Senior Three this year, which means I am in the middle of preparing
for the college entrance examination to be held in the coming June.(运用了关系代词as引导非限制性定语从句和
关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Therefore, I’m determined to make the best use of every minute I have, the holiday included, to
improve my academic performance. (运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句)
5．（23-24高三·重庆·阶段练习）
假设你是李华，你上周没能参加Jim老师的英语写作课考试，请你写一封信，向老师陈述情况，内容包
括：
1.表达歉意；
2.无法参加考试的原因；
3.提出补救办法。
注意：1.词数100左右，可适当增加细节;
2.开头和结尾的称呼已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I am indeed very sorry that I missed the examination on English Writing you organized last Friday. I feel
terrible about it and want to explain what happened that day.I suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to take me to the hospital. The doctor examined me
and said I had a bad cold. Please find enclosed a copy of the medical bill. I sincerely hope you could understand my
situation and accept my apology.
I would appreciate your allowing me to take a make-up examination. I will come to your office and look
forward to the make-up exam.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生假设是李华，你上周没能参加Jim老师的英语写作课考试，
请你写一封信，向老师陈述情况
【详解】1.词汇积累
确实：indeed→truly
解释：explain→illustrate
附上：enclosed→attached
真诚地：sincerely→heartfeltly
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to take me to the hospital.
拓展句：My parents took me to the hospital because I suddenly fell sick early that morning.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am indeed very sorry that I missed the examination on English Writing you organized last
Friday. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I feel terrible about it and want to explain what happened that day. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
