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秘籍 02 邀请信+建议信
目录
邀请信
【应试秘籍】邀请信思路...................................................................................................................................01
【应试秘籍】邀请信常用词块...........................................................................................................................02
【应试秘籍】邀请信必背句式...........................................................................................................................02
建议信
【应试秘籍】建议信思路..................................................................................................................................04
【应试秘籍】建议信常用词块..........................................................................................................................03
【应试秘籍】建议信必背句式..........................................................................................................................04
【抢分通关】建议信经典考题..........................................................................................................................05
【抢分通关】建议信经典考题..........................................................................................................................11
邀请信
秘籍：采用三段式，分为开头段、主体段和结尾段。具体思路如下：
开头段：开门见山表明写作意图，并向对方发出邀请。
主体段：详细描述活动的具体内容和要求。
结尾段：期待对方接受邀请。
邀请信常用词块
1. on behalf of sb.代表某人2. be eager/long to do sth.渴望做某事
3. invite sb. To do sth.邀请某人做某事
4. gain some insight into traditional Chinese culture 了解中国传统文化
5. have a better understanding of traditional Chinese culture了解中国传统文化
6. enrich your experience 丰富你的经历
7. broaden your horizons/perspective 拓展你的视野
8. be scheduled to do...计划做
9. show your talent and ability 展示天赋和才能
10. make some new friends 交到新朋友
11. build up your body 强身健体
12. stay healthy and energetic 保持健康和活力
13. cultivate the team/sports spirit 培养团队运动精神
14. sharpen your swimming skills 提高你的游泳技能
15. reduce your stress 减轻压力
邀请信必背句式
开头常用句
1. It’s my pleasure/a great honour/a great privilege to invite you to join us
非常荣幸邀请你加入我们。
2. On behalf of the Students' Union,I am writing to invite you to be the judge of the 10th English Speech
Contest held by our school
我代表学生会,写信邀请您担任我校举办的第十届英语演讲比赛的评委。
3. It is a great honor for me to invite you to take part in/join in/participate in/attend...
我非常荣幸地邀请您参加··....
4. We are going to hold a graduation ceremony in the school auditorium next Friday,and we feel it will be
wonderful if you can attend it.
下周五我们将在学校礼堂举行毕业典礼,如果您能参加就太好了。
5. Would you like to go swimming with me?
你愿意和我一起去游泳吗？
6. Learning that you are enthusiastic about sth, I'd like to invite you to join it.
知道你喜欢......，我想邀请你加入。
主体常用句
1. As scheduled, the activity is to be held from 9:00 a.m. to 5:00 p.m. in our school.
按照计划，活动将于上午九点至下午五点在我校举行。
2. It will begin at 3:00 p.m.and last two hours,during which time 1) well-prepared contestants will delivertheir speeches.比赛将于下午三点钟开始,持续两个小时,在此期间,十位准备充分的参赛者将发表演讲。
3. Here are arrangements for this activity./Some details about...are as follows.
这是活动的安排。/一些关于.···.的细节如下。
4. During the performance, we will have lots of activities which you will be interested in. First...,
Second....In addition...在演出期间，我们将有很多你会感兴趣的活动。首先......，其次......，另外......
5.As scheduled,the meeting will be held from 8:00 to 10:00 a.m.this Saturday in...
按计划,会议将在本周六的上午8点到10点在····.召开。
6.The performance will start with our school song at 10:00 a.m.,followed by..Then students will...All the
activities will finish at 4:00 p.m.演出将在上午10点以校歌开始,紧接着是···.
然后学生们将······所有的活动将在下午4点结束。
7. To begin with,we will....Besides,there will be a lot of activities,such as...,which will last for about three
hours.首先,我们会···此外,将有很多活动,比如····..,这将持续约三个小时。
8. Not only can it help you gain some insight into traditional Chinese culture, but also it can enrich your
experience. This is such a golden opportunity that it can't be missed.
它不仅能让你更加了解中国传统文化，而且也能丰富你的经历。这种绝佳的机会，不容错过。
结尾常用句
1. Sincerely, We hope you can attend it.
真诚地，我们盼着你能参加。
2. We are looking forward to your coming.
我们期待着你的到来。
3. We would feel much honored if you coul1 come.
如果您能来,我们会感到非常荣幸。
4. Please give me a call or drop me a line to let me know your decision.
请尽快给我打电话或写信让我知道你的决定。
5. We would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience
如果您能尽早确认参加,我们将不胜感激。
6. I'd appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early convenience.
如果你能尽早确认参加，我会不胜感激。
7. I do hope you can take my invitation into serious consideration. Eagerly looking forward to your
participation.
我希望你能把我的邀请认真考虑一下。热切期待你的参加。
8. Eagerly looking forward to your early reply to confirm your participation.
热切期待你尽早确认确认参加。
建议信秘籍：建议信采用三段式，分为开头段、主体段和结尾段。具体思路如下：
开头段：表明写信目的，并提出建议。
主体段：陈述建议的具体内容并说明理由。
结尾段：指出采纳建议的好处并表达愿望。
建议信常用词块
1. offer/provide 提供，给予
2. improve 改善，提高
3. approval n.赞成，同意
4. constructive adj. 建设性的;积极的
5. concerning prep.关于 in/with regard to关于
6. relieve stress减轻压力
7. contribute to 有助于
8. stick to/persist in坚持
9. pour out one's trouble to sb.向某人倾诉烦恼
10. build up your confidence建立你的信心
11. present one's opinions 发表意见
12. be of use/benefit to sb.对某人有用/好处
13. share some advice with you和你分享一些建议
14. take my advice into account考虑我的建议
15. follow/take/adopt one’s advice采纳某人的建议
建议信必背句式
开头常用句
1. I am writing to offer you some advice on how to improve your spoken English.
我写信是想就如何提高英语口语水平给你一些建议。
2. You asked me for advice in the letter about... and here are my suggestions. I think it would be a good idea if you
could...
你在信中问了我一些建议，关于……以下是我的建议。如果你能做到的话，我想这将是个好主意
3. With regard to the problem you mentioned in your last letter, my suggestions are as follows.
关于你上一封信中提到的问题，我的建议如下。
4. I'm more than delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on... I'll make some suggestions here.我非常
高兴收到你的来信，询问我关于……的建议。我在这里提一些建议。5. I have learned that you have some trouble in ...and 1 would like to give/offer you the following suggestions.
我得知你在……方面有些困难，我想给你提如下一些建议。
主体常用句
1. I think it would be of great benefit/very beneficial if you...我认为如果你……将会受益匪浅。 When it comes
to such a situation, I would like to suggest that... For one thing... For another... What's more...
当涉及这种情况时，我建议……一方面……另一方面……而且……
2. In my opinion/Personally/As far as I'm concerned/From my point of view, it is a good idea to do.../it would be
wise of you to do... Besides, I strongly advise you to do... Last but not least , you can...
就我而言/在我看来，做……是个好主意/你做……是明智的。此外，我强烈建议你……最后但同样重要
的是，你可以……
3. First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take/make/write notes in class so that you can go over
your lessons as soon as you can after class.
首先，你应该在课堂上认真听老师讲课并做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。
4. Besides, the success stories of world-famous people, which are also attractive to me, help me learn a lot.
此外，世界名人的成功范例对我也很有吸引力，帮助我学到了很多东西。
5. What's more , try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class. Only in this way can you
improve your listening and spoken English quickly.
此外，试着在课堂上用英语和你的同学交流。只有这样，你才能快速提高你的英语听力和口语能力。
结尾常用句
1. I hope you will find these suggestions/proposals helpful.
我希望你现在会发现这些建议/建议会有所帮助。
2. Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English
Post.
在此,我希望我的建议能够为我们学校的《英语报》的改进版增添精彩的一笔。
3. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
4. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work !
无论你决定做什么,祝你学习/工作好运!
邀请信
1．（2024·湖南益阳·三模）
假定你是学生会主席李华，你校计划定于6月 10 日在体育馆举办高三毕业典礼，请写封邮件邀请你校外
教 David 参加，内容包括：1.典礼时间与地点；
2.典礼内容；
3.期待回复。
注意：1.词数80 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear David,
How is everything going? With great excitement and delight, I am writing to invite you to attend our
graduation ceremony, which is scheduled to be held at 9:00 am on June 10, 2024 in the school gym.
There are many significant activities, which will never fail to impress you. At the beginning, the headmaster
will deliver a speech to express his sincere congratulations on our graduation. After that, to recall our unforgettable
experiences in high school, some elaborate shows will be performed. Besides, don’t miss the golden moment when
we will gather together to take photos.
We would be particularly honored by your distinguished presence at the ceremony and we are looking forward
to your coming. Please reply to me at your convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校外教 David写封邮件，邀请他参加学校于6月10日
在体育馆举办的高三毕业典礼。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜悦：delight →joy
表达：express →convey
此外：besides → what’s more
特别：particularly →in particular
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句：With great excitement and delight, I am writing to invite you to attend our graduation ceremony, which is
scheduled to be held at 9:00 am on June 10, 2024 in the school gym.
拓展句：With great excitement and delight, I am writing to invite you to attend our graduation ceremony,
scheduled to be held at 9:00 am on June 10, 2024 in the school gym.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There are many significant activities, which will never fail to impress you.（运用了
which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】After that, to recall our unforgettable experiences in high school, some elaborate shows will beperformed.（运用了不定式短语作目的状语）
2．（2024·全国·二模）
假定你是李华，最近你校将举办“校园冰雪文化节(Campus Ice and Snow Culture Festival)”活动。请给你校
国际交换生Bob写一封电子邮件，告知此事并邀请他参加，内容包括：
1. 活动内容；
2.相关事宜。
注意
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Bob,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Bob,
I hope you are doing well. I am excited to share with you that our school will be hosting a special event called
the “Campus Ice and Snow Culture Festival”.
Various activities such as ice sculpture exhibitions, snowball fights, ice skating, snow painting, live music
performances will be held there. It promises to be a fun and memorable event for everyone. By the way, the festival
will take place on December 15th at the school square. It will be held on our school playground, staring at 2:00 pm,
lasting for about three hours.
I would like to extend a warm invitation to you to come and join us at the festival. It would be wonderful to
have you be a part of this celebration of winter culture. Looking forward to seeing you there! Warm regards!
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于邀请函。要求考生告知并邀请国际交换生Bob参加学校将举办的“校园冰雪文
化节(Campus Ice and Snow Culture Festival)”活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：host→held
各种各样的：various→varieties of
难忘的：memorable→unforgettable
渴望：look forward to→anticipate
2.词汇积累简单句变复合句
原句：Various activities such as ice sculpture exhibitions, snowball fights, ice skating, snow painting, live music
performances will be held there.
拓展句：Various activities which include ice sculpture exhibitions, snowball fights, ice skating, snow painting, live
music performances will be held there.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am excited to share with you that our school will be hosting a special event called the
“Campus Ice and Snow Culture Festival”.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和过去分词作定语）
【高分句型2】It will be held on our school playground, staring at 2:00 pm, lasting for about three hours.（运用
了现在分词作状语）
3．（23-24高三·重庆永川·期中）
假定你是李华，得知你校的外教Mr Smith很喜欢中国传统文化，想邀请他一起过端午节。请给他写一封
信，内容包括：
1. 时间；
2. 活动安排（在家包粽子，悬挂艾草，赏龙舟赛）；
3. 再次表达期许。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为120左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：端午节： the Dragon Boat Festival 挂艾草：moxa grass 龙舟赛：dragon-boat racing
Dear Mr Smith,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
__________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a student of your English class. Knowing that you are very interested in Chinese traditional
culture, I’m writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival.
The festival is typically celebrated on May 5, a time for family reunion. After your coming, we’ll make zongzi
together and have a big dinner with my whole family. Then, I’d like to hang the moxa grass on the door with you to
pray for disaster relief. Finally, we are going to appreciate the dragon-boat racing in memory of Qu Yuan, which
will surely leave a deep impression on you.
I do hope you can accept my invitation. Please inform me of your arrival in advance if possible so that I couldgo and pick you up at school. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校的外教Mr Smith很喜欢中国传统文化，考生想邀请他一起过端午
节，要求考生按照要求给他写一封信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→ go in for
欣赏：appreciate→ enjoy
为了纪念：in memory of→ in honor of
当然：surely→ certainly
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句： Knowing that you are very interested in Chinese traditional culture, I’m writing to invite you to come to
my home to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival.
拓展句：Because I know that you are very interested in Chinese traditional culture, I’m writing to invite you to
come to my home to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are very interested in Chinese traditional culture, I’m writing to invite
you to come to my home to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival.（运用了现在分词Knowing作状语、that引导的
宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Finally, we are going to appreciate the dragon-boat racing in memory of Qu Yuan, which will
surely leave a deep impression on you.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
4.（23-24高三下·河南·阶段练习）
假定你是李华，得知你的交换生同学Amanda今年将第一次在中国过春节。请你给她发一封电子邮件，邀
请她到你家做客。内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 发出邀请；
3. 期待回复。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Amanda,
How are you doing?
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Amanda,
How are you doing? Knowing that you will spend the Spring Festival in China, I’d like to extend a warm
welcome to you.
As far as I know, you will celebrate the traditional Chinese festival here for the first time, which may leave
you slightly confused. Since where you live is not far from my home, it would be a great pleasure for me to have
you as the distinguished guest of our family. If you come, I can introduce various customs about the festival to you.
I’d be more than glad if you could accept my invitation. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生同学Amanda写封电子邮件，邀请她到你家做客。
【详解】1.词汇积累
困惑的：confused→puzzled
各种各样的：various→a variety of
高兴的：glad→delighted
据我所知：as far as I know→to my knowledge
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：If you come, I can introduce various customs about the festival to you.
拓展句：If you come, I can introduce various customs which are about the festival to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As far as I know, you will celebrate the traditional Chinese festival here for the first time,
which may leave you slightly confused. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Since where you live is not far from my home, it would be a great pleasure for me to have you as the
distinguished guest of our family. (运用了since引导的原因状语从句和where引导的主语从句)
5. （2024·云南·模拟预测）
假定你是李华。你的英国交换生朋友Chris对中国少数民族(ethnic minorities)服饰非常感兴趣。请你给他写
一封邮件，邀请他一同参观中国少数民族服饰展，内容要点如下：
1.时间地点；
2.参观内容；
3. 发出邀请。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Knowing that you’re keen on the costumes of the ethnic minorities of China, I’m writing to invite you to visit
an exhibition of ethnic costumes.
The exhibition will be held from March 15 to April 15 in the Provincial Museum, where various ethnic
costumes will be on display, each of them featuring the characteristics of a nationality. While admiring the
costumes, you’ll have a better understanding of the customs, culture as well as the history of different nationalities
living in our country.
I’m sure that you will have fun at the exhibition. I’m expecting your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国交换生朋友Chris写一封邮件，邀请他一同参观中国
少数民族服饰展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举行：be held→take place
各种各样的：various→a variety of
欣赏：admire→appreciate
玩得开心：have fun→ enjoy oneself
2.句式拓展
改写同义句
原句：Knowing that you’re keen on the costumes of the ethnic minorities of China, I’m writing to invite you to
visit an exhibition of ethnic costumes.
拓展句：Because I know that you’re keen on the costumes of the ethnic minorities of China, I’m writing to invite
you to visit an exhibition of ethnic costumes.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The exhibition will be held from March 15 to April 15 in the Provincial Museum, where
various ethnic costumes will be on display, each of them featuring the characteristics of a nationality.（运用了
where引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】While admiring the costumes, you’ll have a better understanding of the customs, culture as well as
the history of different nationalities living in our country.（运用了while引导的状语从句的省略）
【高分句型3】I’m sure that you will have fun at the exhibition.（运用了that引导宾语从句）建议信
1．（2024·山东德州·一模）
假定你是李华，从上学期以来，外教Mary开展了“课前3分钟演讲”活动，你觉得活动很好，但存在不
足之处。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．你对活动的评价；
2．说明问题并提出改进建议。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mary,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mary,
I really appreciate the activity “Pre-class 3-minute English Speech”, which boosts our speaking skills and
confidence. However, I’ve noticed some problems needing to be solved.
The students crazy about English are always seizing the opportunity to present themselves, leaving shy
students no chance. So I suggest making some adjustments. First, students can take turns giving presentations to
guarantee everyone an equal chance to express themselves. Moreover, you can require students to review each
other’s speeches in groups, which will not only greatly reduces the error rate but also improves their writing skills.
I'd appreciate it if my advice could be considered.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。从上学期以来，外教Mary开展了“课前3分钟演讲”活动，考生觉
得活动很好，但存在不足之处，要求考生按照要求给外教写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
欣赏：appreciate→ admire
提高：boost→ promote
解决：solve→ settle
抓住：seize→ grasp
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句
原句：However, I’ve noticed some problems needing to be solved.
拓展句：However, I’ve noticed some problems, which need to be solved.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I really appreciate the activity “Pre-class 3-minute English Speech”, which boosts our
speaking skills and confidence.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】The students crazy about English are always seizing the opportunity to present themselves, leaving
shy students no chance.（运用了现在分词leaving作状语）
2．（2024·全国·模拟预测）
假定你是李华，你校交换生George给你发来邮件，说他在学习唐诗时遇到了一些困难，希望你能给他提供
一些建议。请你根据以下提示给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 给出建议；2. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear George,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear George,
I’m sorry to hear that you’ve experienced some difficulties while studying Tang poetry. I’m happy to offer
some advice to help you.
Firstly, if I were you, I would read translations of Tang poems to get a better understanding of the poems’
meaning. Secondly, it makes sense to focus on understanding the historical and cultural background of the poems to
appreciate the poetic language and imagery. Thirdly, you’d better try to read the poems out loud to better
understand the poems’ structure. Finally, why not join a study group that can help you with your studies?
Don’t be discouraged. With time and effort, I’m sure you will be able to achieve your goals.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生George回信，给他提供一些学习唐诗的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先：firstly→first of all
集中：focus on→concentrate on
沮丧的：discouraged→upset
能够：be able to→be capable of2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：With time and effort, I’m sure you will be able to achieve your goals.
拓展句：As long as you try with time and effort, I’m sure you will be able to achieve your goals.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you’ve experienced some difficulties while studying Tang poetry. (运
用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Firstly, if I were you, I would read translations of Tang poems to get a better understanding of the
poems’ meaning. (运用了虚拟语气)
3．（23-24高三上·江西南昌·期中）
假设你是某国际学校的李华，在上个月的体育节中，由于部分赛事安排在中午午休期间，同学们的热情欢
呼以及赛场噪音，严重影响了你和其他同学的午间休息，请你向学生会写一份信。
1. 写信目的； 2. 说明情况；3. 提出建议。
要求 1. 词数80左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Student Union,
I’m Li Hua.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Student Union,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to address a concern about the recent sports day at our school.
While enjoyable, it caused disruptions to our lunch break. Certain events were scheduled during the midday
break, resulting in enthusiastic cheering and noise from the sports field. This greatly affected our ability to rest and
recharge. I understand the importance of promoting an active school environment, but it’s vital to ensure students
have a chance to rest.
I suggest rescheduling these events to afternoons or weekends so that all students can enjoy without
compromising their lunch break. Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。在上个月的体育节中，由于部分赛事安排在中午午休期间，同学们的
热情欢呼以及赛场噪音，严重影响了你和其他同学的午间休息。要求考生给学生会写一封信说明情况，并
提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累处理：address→deal with
导致：cause → lead to
影响：affect→ influence
建议：suggestion→ advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： I’m writing to address a concern about the recent sports day at our school.
拓展句： I’m writing to address a concern about the recent sports day at our school, which has been bothering us.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Certain events were scheduled during the midday break, resulting in enthusiastic
cheering and noise from the sports field.（运用了现在分词作状语的结构）
【高分句型2】I suggest rescheduling these events to afternoons or weekends so that all students can enjoy
without compromising their lunch break. （运用了so that引导状语从句）
4.（23-24高三下·辽宁大连·阶段练习）
假定你是李华，你们学校将举办主题为“校园最美，因为有你”（Most Beautiful Campus, Thanks to You）
的海报设计大赛，学生作品将在校内展出，你的好朋友Ryan，现就他的参赛作品初稿征求你的意见。请回
复邮件，内容包括：
1. 提出存在的问题；
2. 给出修改建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
Having reviewed your initial draft for the poster design competition on “Most Beautiful Campus, Thanks to
You”, I’m writing to offer some suggestions for improvement.
Firstly, your design seems to lack some touching stories, which can vividly showcase how students are trying
their best to beautify our campus, from their working hard to civilized behaviors. Additionally, some of the text onthe poster is difficult to read and recognize due to font (字体/字型) choice and size. Therefore, I’d like to propose
selecting a convincing example of students keeping the school environment harmonious and refreshing, clean and
tidy by starting with small things. And it’s beneficial to choose a clean and easy-to-read font, simplifying the layout
by removing some unnecessary elements.
I hope my feedback is helpful. Good luck with your design. Your revised work is highly expected.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文 2
Dear Ryan,
I hope this letter finds you well. So delighted to receive your first draft for the poster design competition
themed “Most Beautiful Campus, Thanks to You”, I’m writing to brief you on the noticeable problems and offer
some suggestions for improvement.
Fabulous as your work is, there’s still something to be improved. To begin with, the theme of the poster,
presented in your poster, fails to fully raise/arouse/enhance students’ awareness of loving and maintaining our
campus sustainably, which should be highlighted, for it is what the judges look forward to. In addition, as for the
layout of the poster, which was a little bit chaotic, if you put them in a certain order or refer to specific display, the
overall view would be greatly/significantly improved.
I hope my suggestions are of some help to your improvement. Your revised work is highly expected.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给好朋友Ryan写封邮件，就他的参赛作品初稿提出意
见。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提供某人某物：offer sb. sth.→provide sb. with sth.
首先：firstly→to begin with
尽最大努力做某事：try one’s best to do sth.→spare no effort to do sth.
因此：therefore→as a result
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Additionally, some of the text on the poster is difficult to read and recognize due to font (字体/字型) choice
and size.
拓展句：Additionally, some of the text on the poster is difficult to read and recognize due to font (字体/字型)
choice and size, which will leave a bad impression to the judges.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Having reviewed your initial draft for the poster design competition on “Most Beautiful
Campus, Thanks to You”, I’m writing to offer some suggestions for improvement. (运用了现在分词的完成式作状
语)
【高分句型2】Firstly, your design seems to lack some touching stories, which can vividly showcase how students
are trying their best to beautify our campus, from their working hard to civilized behaviors. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
6. （23-24高三下·全国·阶段练习）
假定你是李华，最近收到好友Ben来信，信中说他因为使用人工智能完成作业而受到老师批评。请你写一
封回信，内容包括：
1. 对使用人工智能完成作业的看法；
2. 你的建议。
注意：
1. 词数80词左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Ben,
I’m sorry to learn about your current trouble regarding the use of AI tools for your assignment. I can fully
relate to your situation as I once faced similar temptations to manage heavy academic workloads. However, AI
should never replace our own intellectual efforts.
As a scientist once said, “Our intelligence is what makes us human, and AI is an extension of that quality.”
While AI can assist in certain areas, over reliance on it undermines the essence of learning and compromise
academic integrity. Therefore, I suggest you improve your work without solely depending on AI tools and have an
open conversation with your teacher, clarifying your intentions and demonstrating your commitment to genuine
learning.
Learning is not just about completing tasks but also about the process of acquiring knowledge. Wish you all
the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给因为使用人工智能完成作业而受到老师批评的好友Ben写
一封回信，阐述对使用人工智能完成作业的看法并提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
理解：relate to→understand
代替；取代：replace→take the place of
因此：therefore→thus
建议：suggest→advise
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句原句：I’m sorry to learn about your current trouble regarding the use of AI tools for your assignment.
拓展句：I’m sorry to learn about your current trouble which is concerning the use of AI tools for your assignment.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I can fully relate to your situation as I once faced similar temptations to manage heavy
academic workloads. (运用了as引导的状语从句)
【高分句型2】While AI can assist in certain areas, over reliance on it undermines the essence of learning and
compromise academic integrity. (运用了while引导的让步状语从句)
