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考点 02 应用文写作的新高考命题新情景（核心考点精讲精练）
考点1 常规体裁（如邀请信、建议信等）+别出心裁的命题新情景（考
查思辨，体现学科素养，思维升级，基本不能通过刷题解决）
考点2常规体裁（如邀请信、建议信等）+择优选择的命题情景（考查优
应用文写作
选思维）
考点3 新体裁（看图写话、图表写作）+新情景
考点4 自由体裁（类似于命题作文）+表面似乎容易，但下笔写难
1. 2023年真题命题分析
特点
主题 命题情景 必考策略
卷别
命题情景新颖，学生背诵有关英语
扎实打好英语句
学习的范文不少，但瞬间用不上。
子写作的基本
考查思辨能力。很难押题预测，考
功，努力提高学
给外教写信 生必须考场上面对新情景。况且许
新高考I、II 生的思辨能力。
建议信 提出分组意 多农村学生根本没有上过外教课，
卷 多做些原创新
见 甚至连中国老师的口语课都没上
题，这虽然难。
过。（命题情景对他们来说不是一
对老师是一个新
般的新）
的挑战。
特点：不能通过刷题解决。
扎实打好英语句
子写作的基本
命题情景新颖，学生感觉很简单，
功，努力提高学
但下笔时才知道难写，认识的植物
2023年1月·浙 认识我们身 生的思辨能力。
报道 不少，写什么植物，你真正了解哪
江卷 边的植物 多做些原创新
些植物，你真正接触过大自然吗？
题，这虽然难。
特点：不能通过刷题解决。
对老师是一个新
的挑战。
北京卷和全国
卷，我尊敬的一
虽然说命题思想明确，立德树人， 个人，都有类似
以一位中国
用英语讲好中国故事。命题情景陈 的试题。这类题
投稿（记叙 历史人物为
全国甲卷 旧，北京卷曾经考过，模拟题有类 可以通过多做题
文） 题写一篇短
似的试题不少。特点：可以通过刷 解决。但还是要
文投稿
题解决提高。偏应试思维。 扎实打好英语句
子写作的基本
功，努力提高学
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】生的思辨能力。
在假期中学
描述活动或劳动过程及体验感受的 可以通过多做题
到的新技能
报道类模拟题很多，尤其是北京前 解决。但还是要
1.简要描述;
几年的看图写话，都是此类文章， 扎实打好英语句
全国乙卷 投稿
2.体验和感 模拟题也不少。容易模仿，可以通 子写作的基本
受。 背诵范文解决。特点：特点：可以 功，努力提高学
通过刷题解决提高。偏应试思维。 生的思辨能力。
2. 命题规律及备考策略
【命题规律】通过比较分析和研究，我们很清楚的看到了新高考和老高考区别，新高考注重思维，命题情景新颖，
不落俗套。这是我们2024年写作备考的真正的挑战，我们要努力扎实地打好写句子的基本功，然后就是不断提高
学生的逻辑思维能力，创新能力和批判性思维能力。
【备考策略】熟练掌握各种应用文的基本构架，根据题目要求，发挥想象写出内容丰富、句式多样的应用文；扎
实复习句子写作是提高应用文写作的根本。
【命题预测】
应用文客观考查了考生语言表达能力和创新思维能力，体现了交际素养和思辨能力。2024年高考应用文仍然
是命题情景新颖的新题，这就是我为什么单独做一个专题，这是我作为一个一线老师对新高考的真正思考，和大
家共勉。
【高考预测】
纵观近几年新高考试题，预测2024年全国高考试题还会
①题材贴近考生的学习和生活。历年来全国高考书面表达的题材都非常贴近考生的学习生活，让考生写清楚基本
的生活中的事情，目的很清楚，学习英语要学会生活英语，用英语表达基本的日常生活事物。
②写作的体裁主要是应用文。命题形式多为文字提示，以书信为主。 有时是记叙文。
③利用英语讲好中国故事，宣传中国文化，增强文化自信是命题的重要方向。
④重视劳动的意义和价值，让学生体会劳动过程中的喜悦和成就感。
⑤培养高尚的品德、创新的思维、健康的体魄、良好的审美情趣，促进学生全面发展。
【考点突破】——方法指导
1.基本规律：从近年来的后高考命题思想看，应用文命题给出的提示越来越少，需要学生发挥的空间越来越大，可
是对范文太大的发挥空间，有些考生却一下子无从下笔，需要较长时间的思考，给后面的考题造成了压力。新高
考应用文命题在不断创新，它力争摒弃陈旧的命题思想，摒弃已经考过的模拟题，不断推陈出新。
2．实用解题方法：①考前做好充分的思想准备，做一些新情境的应用文训练。②打开想象的思路，抓住命题的重
点③迅速调集相关的词汇，短语和句式，表达新思想④考前充分准备要考什么新领域，不要总紧跟着去年或以前
考过什么，盲目的练那些马后炮的无用工。思考未来可能考什么是我们老师下功夫的地方。
考点1 常规体裁（如邀请信、建议信等）+别出心裁的命题新情景（考查思辨，体现学科素养，思维升级，基本不
能通过刷题解决）
你校英语报社正在举行主题为“I Love Sports”的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 你最喜欢的运动；
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】2. 该项运动的规则；
3. 该项运动的益处。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I Love Sports
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【新颖度分析】写喜欢体育运动的不少，但要求写比赛规则的是不是没想到，我喜欢某运动，但我不知道规则，
是不是很懵，是不是要大脑中不断闪现喜欢的运动，但还要知道规则。是不是一时间束手无策，一脸茫然。
【参考范文】
I Love sports
In my daily life, I love all kinds of sports, among which jogging is my favorite. I think jogging is a good warm-up
exercise.
Of course, it has certain rules. Firstly, the intensity of jogging should be reasonable. Besides, jogging posture does not
have to be that of a professional athlete, so long as we do it at a relaxing pace. Just relax your shoulders and lean forward
while jogging.
Jogging has great physical and mental benefits. It can not only improve the function of the heart, but also release bad
mood. So I decide to stick to it.
【解析】
本篇书面表达是一篇说明文。要求考生写一篇短文参赛，介绍自己最喜欢的运动。
1.词汇积累
合理的：reasonable→rational
此外：besides→in addition
决定做某事：decide to do sth.=be determined to do sth.
坚持：stick to=insist on
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：It can not only improve the function of the heart, but also release bad mood.
拓展句：Not only can it improve the function of the heart, but also release bad mood.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
In my daily life, I love all kinds of sports, among which jogging is my favorite.（among which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
I think jogging is a good warm-up exercise.（think后面是省略了that的宾语从句）
考点2常规体裁（如邀请信、建议信等）+择优选择的命题情景（考查优选思维）
假如你是某国际学校学生李华，你校校报正在为12月即将举办的科技节征集英文口号，要求主题积极向上，不超
过10个英文单词。请你根据该要求投稿，内容包括：
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】1.介绍你的口号；
2.预祝活动成功。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear editor,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【新颖度分析】文章要求征集英文口号，写什么口号，什么口号合适，还要不超过10个单词，什么口号吸引评卷
老师，口号是不是需要用时间认真思考，你有准备吗？
【参考范文】
Dear editor,
Knowing that our school newspaper is collecting English slogans for the Science&Technology Festival to be held in
December, I’m writing to recommend mine, which I believe can fully reveal the theme.
“Science and technology brightens our life” is the one I choose since technological advances have brought us
tremendous benefits. For instance, we’re now living comfortably and conveniently in houses equipped with various
intelligent home appliances. Besides, our working efficiency has been dramatically increased with the help of the Internet.
I would appreciate it if you can take my slogan into account. Wish this festival a huge success! 98
Yours,
Li Hua
考点3 新体裁（看图写话、图表写作）+新情景
[2023·东省新高考联合质量测评3月联考]
3月5日是“雷锋日”，你校组织活动，请根据图片写一篇英语短文，内容包括：
1.简要描述图片内容；
2.谈谈你对学雷锋的感想。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【新颖度分析】后高考时代写作出题多样化，图表题也出现了。备考要多体裁训练，不要只盯着考过什么，什么
可能考是我们要研究备考的重中之重。
【参考范文】
Lei Feng Day falls on March 5, when students participated in various voluntary activities to inherit and spread Lei
Feng’s spirit.
As is shown in the pictures, some students helped clean up the rubbish on the ground to beautify our surroundings,
while others warmly showed the way to the children who lost their way.
We should learn from Lei Feng with our practical deeds and be a “Lei Feng” in the new era, ready to help others in
trouble. Sometimes, it is our random acts of kindness that make our society a harmonious world.94
【基础过关】
（最新模拟题精练）
1.【2023·河北省保定市一模】假定你是李华。你校将举行废品手工制作爱心义卖活动。请给交流生James写邮件
邀请其参加，内容包括：
1．活动时间、地点；
2．活动内容。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear James,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear James,
I’m writing to invite you to a charity event. It is scheduled to be held in our school from 2 p.m. to 5 p.m. next Friday,
aiming to raise funds and promote environmental awareness. Students will create craft items from recyclable waste, which
will be sold on the spot to raise money for a local charity. It’s a fantastic opportunity to contribute to a good cause while
admiring the artistic skills and creativity of the students.
We would be delighted if you could join us.
Yours,
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】Li Hua
2.【2023年“安徽省示范高中皖北协作区”第25届高三联考】
学校英语俱乐部正在开展题为“Improve Communication Skills”的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 交际能力的重要性；
2. 提高交际能力的方法。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Improve Communication Skills
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【参考范文】
Improve Communication Skills
Communication skills are of great importance because they help us express ourselves clearly and improve our
relationships with others. Then how can we improve our communication skills?
Firstly, we should start with active listening. Only by doing that can we understand those around us better. Secondly,
it’s wise to learn to control our emotions and see things from different perspectives. Last but not least, we’d better actively
participate in school activities, where we can learn team spirit and enhance communication with each other.
All in all, if we treat people and things sincerely, we’ll be able to communicate effectively.
3.【2023届湖北省七市（州）高三3月联合统一调研测试】假定你校的英文校报将发行以“劳动课”为专题的一
期报纸，请你写一篇稿件投稿，内容包括：
1．介绍你最喜欢的劳动课内容(如做清洁、种植和修理等)；
2．劳动课的意义。
注意：
1．写作词数80左右：
2．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯：
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数，请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Labor class, part of our school courses, is required in primary and middle schools every week.
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【参考范文】1
Labor class, part of our school courses, is required in primary and middle schools every week. Labor education is
attached importance to since it strengthens students’ awareness of labor and develops their practical skills.
Of all the labor courses, I like planting most, because it offers me opportunities to endure hardships and get close to
nature. And the planting process can bring me a sense of satisfaction and achievement, so I really consider it the best way to
relax myself.
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】Thanks to labor class, I’ve found my personal interest and become a well-rounded student! Here I sincerely invite all of
you to enjoy the fun of farming, or some other labor courses you like.
【参考范文】2
Labor class, part of our school courses, is required in primary and middle schools every week. The new course
arrangement stresses the importance of labor education since it strengthens students’ awareness of labor and develops their
practical skills.
Now the labor course varies from cooking to cleaning to planting, of which I like planting most. Such a specific topic
can always interest me because it offers me opportunities to endure hardships and get close to nature. When I’m involved in
the planting process, the cycle of sowing, fertilizing and harvesting can bring me a sense of satisfaction and achievement, so
I really consider it the best way to relax myself. Thanks to labor class, I’ve found my personal interest and become a well-
rounded student!
4. 【石家庄市2023届高中毕业年级教学质量检测(一)】你校英文报正在举办题为How English Can Help Me in My
Future Life的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿，谈谈英语能怎样助力你的未来生活。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
How English Can Help Me in My Future Life
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【参考范文】
How English Can Help Me in My Future Life
English, as we all know, is a widely used language, connecting people all over the world. Mastering the universal
language can definitely open up more possibilities in the future.
As for me, I intend to become a doctor and English can help me exchange ideas with foreign experts. We can make
progress together in a challenging field. Moreover, English will serve as a window to the world, allowing me to gain a
global view towards life, understand people from different cultures and make more friends.
In a word, if knowledge enriches the mind, then English adds wings.
5. 【唐山市2023届一模】一句名言“I walk slowly, but I never walk backward.”引发了你的思考。请你写一篇感想
与同学交流。内容包括：
1. 你对这句话的理解；
2. 这句话对你的影响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【参考范文】
I walk slowly, but I never walk backward.
“I walk slowly, but I never walk backward.” is a positive energy. It asks people to persevere, because the big state
affairs or small life dribs, if you want to make their own achievements, in fact, can not be separated from our persistence
and efforts. Most people who achieve something seem to be closely related to the positive term “persistence”. Time is
changing and people are changing, but as long as keep in the bottom of my heart that stick to the same, one day, this positive
energy will bring you once again “youth”.
Perhaps, in our way there are numerous thorns and swamps, few roads and thoroughfares. So, why can’t we use the
courage to ask yourself firmly and confidently, saying to yourself “Hold on a little longer, try again!”? Perhaps it is the
persistence and attempt of this time that make you finally bright.
Remember the motto positive energy gives us in life: I walk slowly, but I never walk backward.
【真题感知】
【2023年1月·浙江卷】上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，
内容包括：
1. 活动的过程；
2. 收获与感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
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【参考范文】 Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various
plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I
was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical
purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that
plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们身边
的植物”活动。
1. 词汇积累
参与：participate in → attend
开始：begin → start
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】观察，调查：observe → survey
震惊：strike → astonish/surprise
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’
Union.
拓展句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’
Union, which benefited me a lot.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different
characteristics and uses of various plant species.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned
about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.（运用了一般过
去时的被动语态和定语从句）
[2023·新高考全国Ⅰ卷]
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你
给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.说明问题;
2.提出建议。
注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【思路点拨】 本文要求给外教Ryan写一封邮件。内容为:指出外教Ryan随机分两人一组练习口语的方式存在问题
并提出自己的建议,属于应用文写作中的建议信。
写作时应注意:
1. 要点要齐全:(1)外教Ryan随机分两人一组练习口语的方式导致的问题;
(2)提出自己的建议。
注意:
时态: 表达观点用一般现在时;
逻辑:指出存在的问题时注意逻辑性(可列举一二);
提出自己的建议时要符合实际。
2. 恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅;
3. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文的档次。
【参考范文一】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after
class. The reasons are as follows.
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can
hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other
student to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get
along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This
way, everyone can feel more comfortable practising and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I’m very pleased with your teaching style, but I’d like to express my concerns regarding your
plan to randomly divide students into pairs for post-class oral practice.
If the two students paired together are both poor in spoken English, it’ll be extremely difficult for them to carry on the
practice. If we keep the fixed grouping mode, there will be limited room for our improvement.
Based on these concerns, I suggest allowing students to form teams voluntarily based on their interests, learning goals
or language abilities.
I’d appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with
your work!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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