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►第 31 讲 道歉信 (讲义)
【复习目标】
1. 精选写作话题,紧扣核心目标。
2. 提升语言质量。
3. 强化高效训练。
近年高考真题应用文写作考点细目表
年份 卷别 体裁 主题 词数
2023 新高考I卷 建议信 给外教写信提出分组意见 80词左右
2022 新高考I卷 邀请邮件 邀请外教做一次访谈 80词左右
2021 新高考I卷 投稿短文 庆祝校报创刊十周年 80词左右
2020 新高考I卷 活动报道 学校五公里越野赛跑 80词左右
【网络构建】道歉信概述+写作步骤
命题规律:
考查形式:道歉信是因为过失或疏忽做错了事,给别人带来了麻烦或损失,给别人赔礼道歉而写的信件。
写作步骤:
道歉信写作精华
高分策略之词汇:
一 单词
道歉 apologize v. 及其,非常 extremely
不便 inconvenience 遗憾 regret
原谅 excuse 饶恕,宽恕 forgive
十分,很 awfully 麻烦 trouble
真诚的 sincere 道歉 apology n.
二 短语
给你带来不便 cause you inconvenience
因某事向某人道歉 apologize to sb.for sth./make an apologize to sb.for sth.
向...说对不起 say sorry to
接受我的道歉 accept my apology
为某事原谅某人 forgive sb.for sth.
并非故意做某事 have no intention to do sth.
弥补;赔偿 make up for
给你带来许多麻烦 cause you much trouble
犯这样愚蠢的错误 make such a stupid mistake
更加小心 be more careful承担责任 be responsible for/shoulder/undertake the responsibility
下不为例 never let it happen again
遵守承诺 keep one’s word/ promise
到机场接某人 pick sb.up at the airport
安排另外一个时间 fix another time
让我感到很遗憾 much to my regret
高分策略之句式:
一 高分开头:
1. I’m terribly/awfully sorry I couldn’t reply to your email in time.
十分抱歉我不能及时回复您的邮件。
2.It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together.
错过了在一起的机会,我感到很遗憾。
3.1. I'm truly sorry to tell you that.…., and I’m writing to express/convey my deepest apology to you...
很抱歉告诉你……,我写信向你表达我深深的歉意。
4. I am writing to owe you an apology for being unable to...
我没能……,我写信向你道歉。
5. I am terribly sorry for what I did, but believe I didn't mean to...
对于我做的事,我感到十分抱歉。但请你相信,我并非有意要……
6. I apologize most sincerely for what I said that day. I didn't mean to hurt you.
我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。
7. Please forgive me for not being able to inform you.
请原谅我没能通知你。
8. I am indeed sorry for what I said, but believe I had no intention to...
对于我说的话,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信,我并非故意要......。
9. Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.
请原谅我说话欠妥。
二 高分中间段:
1. I feel awfully sorry about it and I wonder if it's convenient for you to make it another
time.
为此我感到非常抱歉,我想知道你是否方便另约时间。
2. Much to my regret, I was unable to.….and I wish that my apology could help to some
extent.
很遗憾,我不能够……希望我的道歉在某种程度上能起到作用。
3. I’m afraid I have brought you too much trouble and I want you to know how regretful I am
feeling.
恐怕我给你带来了太多麻烦,同时我也想让你知道对此我觉得很抱歉。
4. I just do not know what to say about the matter.关于这件事我不知该说些什么。
5. I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.
我想让你知道现在我是多么遗憾。
6. I did not mean to hurt your feelings.
我不想伤害你的感情。
7. I feel you are displeased at my failing to keep my promise, but I hope you will forgive me.
恐怕你会因为我的失约而不高兴,但是希望你能原谅我。
三 高分结尾段:
1. Anyhow, I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for…Will you be available this Sunday morning?
无论如何,我真心希望我们可以再找一个时间……这个星期天早上你有空吗?
2. Shall we put it off till this Sunday morning? We can go earlier so that we will have more time to read and
chose books.
我们把它推迟到这个星期天早上好吗?我们可以早点去,这样我们就有更多的时间阅读和选择书籍。
3. Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused .
对于造成的不便,我再次表示歉意。
4. I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apologies.
我衷心希望你能理解我的处境,并接受我的道歉。
5. Please allow me to say sorry again
请允许我再次表示歉意。
6. I'm sorry for all the inconvenience.
我为引起的所有不便表示歉意。
7. Please accept my sincere apology once more for any inconvenience caused.
对于任何带来的不便,请再次接受我真诚的道歉。
【高分模板 】
Dear________,
I am excessively sorry to tell you that________(陈述道歉原因).Now Iam writing you this letter of
apology to show my deep regret.
I hope you will understand me and excuse me for________(请求对方原谅的事由).The reason for my
delay/absence was/is that________(解释道歉原因).Therefore,I sincerely hope that you can accept my
apology and understand it. I would appreciate your allowing me to________(提出补救措施).
Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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(2023年全国高三专题练习)假如你是李华,你和你的外籍好友Andrew约好了本周末去图书馆,但是你
因为临时要参加学校组织的“垃圾分类,全民行动”志愿活动而不能赴约。请根据以下要点给他写一份道歉信。内容要点:
1.表达歉意;
2.简要介绍活动内容和意义;
3.另约时间。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Dear Andrew,
I have signed up for a voluntary activity themed “Trash Sorting, All Involved” and won’t be able to
accompany you to the library this weekend as planned. I feel terribly sorry and want to express my deepest apology.
As you know, we students should spare no efforts in implementing the policy of garbage classification. So, I
seized this opportunity without hesitation. On that day, we will go to communities to publicize the significance as
well as methods of trash sorting and direct the residents to accurately distinguish different kinds of rubbish, which
will take a whole day. Considering that, I’m afraid I can’t keep my word. Shall we put it off till next Sunday?
I am sorry for any inconvenience caused and hope you can accept my heartfelt apology.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是道歉信。因参加学校组织的志愿者活动,而不能与好朋友 Andrew周末一起去图书馆,要
求考生为些给Andrew写一封道歉信。
【词汇积累】
计划:plan→schedule
表达:express→covey
真诚地:heartfelt→sincere
希望:hope→expect
2.句式升级
原句:I have signed up for a voluntary activity themed “Trash Sorting, All Involved” and won’t be able to
accompany you to the library this weekend as planned.
拓展句:I have signed up for a voluntary activity which is themed “Trash Sorting, All Involved” and won’t be able
to accompany you to the library this weekend as planned.
[高分句型1] I am sorry for any inconvenience caused and hope you can accept my heartfelt apology.(运用了过去
分词作后置定语和省略连词的宾语从句)
[高分句型 2]On that day, we will go to communities to publicize the significance as well as methods of trash
sorting and direct the residents to accurately distinguish different kinds of rubbish, which will take a whole day.(运
用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)