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►第 33 讲 新闻报道 （讲义）
【复习目标】
1. 精选写作话题，紧扣核心目标。
2. 提升语言质量。
3. 强化高效训练。
【考情分析】
近年高考真题应用文写作考点细目表
年份 卷别 体裁 主题 词数
2023 新高考I卷 建议信 给外教写信提出分组意见 80词左右
2022 新高考I卷 邀请邮件 邀请外教做一次访谈 80词左右
2021 新高考I卷 投稿短文 庆祝校报创刊十周年 80词左右
2020 新高考I卷 活动报道 学校五公里越野赛跑 80词左右
【网络构建】报道概述+写作步骤
命题规律：
新闻报道或活动报道，就是对近来发生的事件的如实介绍。报道的特点就是用事实来说话。
考查形式：新闻报道或活动报道，时态常以过去式为主。
写作步骤:
报道写作精华
高分策略之词汇：
一 单词新闻标题 headline 旨在 aim at
一次性的 disposable 保护 protection
组织 organize 发动 launch
抵制 resist 共同的 joint
促进 promote 背景 background
偶然地 occasionally 同时 meanwhile
二 短语
目标是…… with the aim/intention/purpose of.
打算……，意图是 be aimed/intended to do.
被邀请去…… be invited to.
被要求做…… be required to do.
将被举行 will be held/be to be held
由……组织 be organized by.
被期待做某事；有望做某事 be expected to do.．
采取措施 take measures/steps/action
按照 according to
吸引某人的注意力 draw one’s attention
对......评价很高 speak highly of
高分策略之句式：
一 高分开头：
1. Nowadays, with the improvement of living standards, more and more people are able to
take trips during the holidays.
现如今，随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的人能够在假期里去旅行。
2. In order to help teenagers learn more and appreciate poetry，a poetry contest was held
in the hall of our school last Sunday.
为了帮助青少年更多地学习和欣赏诗歌，上周日在我们学校的大厅举行了一场诗歌比赛。
3. Aiming to enrich/encourage/enhance..., our school held/organized a running race on the
school playground from 9 am to 12 am on October 3.
旨在丰富/鼓励/提高……10月23日上午9点到12点，我们学校在学校操场上举行/组织了一场跑步
比赛。
4. Our school witnessed a “Campus Labor Week”activity from May 18th to 22th.
5月18日至22日，我们学校举办了“校园劳动周”活动。
5. Aimed at enhancing students’ physical quality, this activity was well received in the
whole school.
为了提高学生的身体素质，这项活动受到了全学校的欢迎。6. The student union held a graduation party for them in the school hall on Friday evening,
the purpose of which was to leave the exchange students a deep impression on the vivid
school life in our campus.
周五晚上，学生会在学校礼堂为他们举办了一场毕业派对，目的是让交换生对我们校园生动的学校
生活留下深刻的印象。
7. The researchers come to a conclusion from the survey that...
专家从调查中得出结论说......。
8. In order to celebrate..., they held a party.
为了庆祝......，他们举行了聚会。
二 高分中间段：
1. It can be seen that the students in our school are cooperative and full of love ,so let’s carry forward
the good merits!
可以看出我们学校的同学善于合作，充满爱心，因此让我们把这种美德发扬下去！
2. As scheduled, the activity started at 8 am on Saturday morning and it lasted for three hours.该活
动如期于周六上午8点开始，并持续了3个小时。
3. The highlight moment of ... came up when we... 最精彩的时刻…当我们。
4. So popular was the activity with the students and teachers that it attracted hundreds of them.
这项活动在学生和教师中非常受欢迎，因此吸引了数百人。
5. All the students as well as our teachers participated in it. As scheduled, we assembled outside
the school gate at 8:00 a.m. and headed for the destination in high spirits.
所有的学生和我们的老师都参与了进来。按照计划，我们于上午 8点在学校大门外集合，兴高采烈
地前往目的地。
6. Tired as we were，we found it interesting to participate in...
虽然我们很累，但我们发现参与其中很有趣。
7. Only through this experience did I realize that ...
只有通过这次经历，我才意识到这一点。
8. Not only does the activity broaden our horizon but it also inspires us to...
这项活动不仅拓宽了我们的视野，而且还激励着我们。
9. We had a better understanding of...through the activity.
我们对……有了更好的理解。通过这次活动。
10. It was not until half past six in the evening that the activity came to an end.
直到晚上六点半，这个活动才结束。
三 高分结尾段：
1. It is this activity that further raises our awareness of/ enriches our knowledge about...
正是这项活动进一步提高了我们的意识/丰富了我们的知识。
2. Undoubtedly, this activity is of great importance，which provides us with an opportunityto/turns out to be a huge success.
毫无疑问，这项活动是非常重要的，它为我们提供了一个取得巨大成功的机会。
3. The activity was highly spoken of because not only did it enrich our school life but also it
improved our interest.
这项活动被高度评价，因为它不仅丰富了我们的学校生活，而且提高了我们的兴趣。
4. The activity provided a platform for us to ..., from which we benefited a lot.
该活动为我们提供了一个平台……我们从中获益很多。
5. Further details will be reported when it becomes available.
进一步的细节将在它可用时报告。
6. What impressed us most was Li Hua’s deed, who...
最让我们印象深刻的是李华的行为，他...
7. The activity was indeed extremely successful, and the students involved realized that even small acts could
make a difference to the earth.
这个活动确实非常成功，参与的学生意识到，即使是小的行为也能对地球产生影响。
8.The competition offered a wonderful opportunity for us to have a better understanding of English classics,
evoking our love for English culture.
这次比赛为我们提供了一个绝佳的机会，让我们更好地理解英国经典，唤起了我们对英国文化的热爱。
【高分模板1】
In order to _____________________(活动目的), _____________________(活动名称)has been launched
______________________(地点)。
At 8:00 o’clock, we gathered at ___________________( 地 点 ) and set out
for______________________(目的地). All the way we_____________________(所作事情)， enjoying the
fresh air and the beautiful scenery. What’s more, ___________________(具体事项或印象或感受). Not only
did it get us ______________________(好处一) and give us relaxation from heavy school work,but also
______________________(好处二).
What a wonderful time we had! I hope_____________________(期待下次)。
（2023年江苏南通模拟试题）假如你是李华，上周五你校举办了一次远足研学活动。请给你校英文报写一
篇报道。内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动内容；
3. 活动反响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。An Educational Outing
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【答案】
An Educational Outing
Last week, our school organized an educational outing with the purpose of broadening students’ perspectives,
cultivating their abilities and increasing their cultural literacy.
During the activity, we hiked through countryside, visited some villages, and admired the breathtaking
scenery. We also participated in outdoor games and team-building activities, which helped us learn to work together
and improve our communication skills.
Overall, the outing was a valuable experience, where we gained a better understanding of the world around us.
What’s more, we were able to develop a sense of responsibility towards the environment.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的报道。要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，报道学校上周五举办
的远足研学活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目的：purpose→ aim
令人惊叹的：breathtaking → marvelous/magnificent
提高：improve → enhance
此外：what’s more→ in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last week, our school organized an educational outing with the purpose of broadening students’
perspectives, cultivating their abilities and increasing their cultural literacy.
拓展句：Last week, our school organized an educational outing which is aimed at broadening students’
perspectives, cultivating their abilities and increasing their cultural literacy.
【高分句型1】We also participated in outdoor games and team-building activities, which helped us learn to work
together and improve our communication skills.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Overall, the outing was a valuable experience, where we gained a better understanding of the
world around us.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
（2023年浙江卷1月）上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇
报道，内容包括：
1. 活动的过程；
2. 收获与感想。注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
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【答案】
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’
Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of
various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants.
Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about
plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a
greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我
们身边的植物”活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
参与：participate in → attend
开始：begin → start
观察，调查：observe → survey
震惊：strike → astonish/surprise
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our
Students’ Union.
拓展句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our
Students’ Union, which benefited me a lot.
【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different
characteristics and uses of various plant species.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and
learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.
（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句）
