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►专题 18 应用文写作高分技巧（下）
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17. 新闻报道
新闻报道一般包括六要素和四部分。六要素即时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(why)
和方式(how)；四部分包括：标题、导语、主体和结语。写作时常以一般过去时为主，以第三人称为主体人称，
语言较为正式、严谨、简明。
（一）常用语块
1. 由……举办 ____________________ 2. 参加，加入 __________________________________________
3. 增强体质 ________________________4. 丰富某人的校园生活 __________________________________
5. 从……中获益良多_______________________6. 以……为主题 __________________________________
7. 对……评价高 _______________________ 8. 保护城市的文化遗产________________________________
9. 提高保护文化遗产的意识 __________________________________________________________________
10. 提供各种中国特色小吃 ___________________________________________________________________
（一）常用语块
1. be held by… 2. join in/participate in/take part in 3. strengthen one’s body 4. enrich one’s school life
5. benefit a lot from… 6. with the theme of…/whose theme was... 7. think highly of… 8. protect the city’s cultural
heritage 9. raise the awareness of protecting the cultural heritages 10. supply various Chinese characteristic
snacks
（二）套用句式
1. 学生会举办了一场以……为主题的活动。
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2. 对……感兴趣的老师和学生都参加了这次活动。
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3. 每个人对该活动的评价都很高，因为这是一个……的好机会。
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5. 这次活动不仅提高了学生们的……意识，而且也丰富了校园生活。
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1. An activity, whose theme was…,/with the theme of..., was held by the Students’ Union.
2. Teachers and students who are interested in…join in/participate in/take part in it.
3. Everyone thinks highly of this activity, for it is a good chance to….
4. The activity turned out to be a great success.
5. Not only does the activity raise the students’ awareness of…, but it also enriches the school life.
（三）范文模板
假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了以“保护城市文化遗产”为主题的摄影活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，
内容包括：1. 参加人员； 2. 活动内容； 3. 活动反响。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
(标题) A Picture Is Worth A Thousand Words
(导语) A photography activity, whose theme was preserving the city’s cultural heritage, was held by the
Students’ Union last Sunday. /A photography activity with the theme of “preserving the city’s cultural heritage” by
the Students’ Union last Sunday, attracted many photography lovers.
(主体) Teachers and students who are interested in photography participated in it. They took some wonderful
photos of the cultural heritages in our city. Meanwhile, some students interviewed some senior citizens and asked more
about the cultural heritages. Finally, after returning to school, everyone shared the photos and had a discussion about
how to protect the cultural heritages.
(结语) The activity turned out to be a great success. Not only does it raise the awareness of protecting the cultural
heritages but it also enriches our school life. / Everyone thinks highly of this activity, for it is a good chance to learn
more about our city’s cultural heritage.
By Li Hua
School Newspaper
18. 经历感受经历感受就是把已经发生的事情叙述出来并加上个人的感想。常考的话题有参加某场活动的记录或某次经历的
叙述。以一般过去时为主，按事情发展的先后顺序来进行讲述。通常包括三部分内容：
1. 开篇：事情发生的时间和地点
2. 正文：事件发生的经过和结果
3. 结尾：事件带来的感受
（一）常用语块
1. 在……上进行讨论 _______________________ 2. 在初夏的一个下午____________________________
3. 祖国 ___________________________________ 4.一段难忘的经历 ______________________________
5. 故事分享会_____________________________ 6. 热情介绍 _____________________________________
7. 深受……鼓舞 __________________________ 8. 杰出的代表人物__________________________________
9. 放声大哭 _____________________________10. 需要帮助的人 __________________________________
11. 参与新中国的建设 _______________________________________________________________________
（一）常用语块
1. have a discussion on/about… 2. an afternoon of early summer 3. motherland 4. an unforgettable experience 5.
story-sharing meeting 6. enthusiastically introduce 7. be deeply inspired by… 8. outstanding representative figure
9. burst into tears 10. the one in need 11. participate in the construction of new China
（二）套用句式
1. 上周，我在街上遇到一个小男孩，他在人群中显得很无助。
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2. 在活动中，我们都热情地介绍了我们最钦佩的科学家。
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3. 深受……的鼓舞，我们都决心……。
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4. 从这次经历中，我意识到……。
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5. 我永远不会忘记我们在活动中……的那一天。
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（二）套用句式
1. Last week, I met a little boy on the street, who seemed helpless in the crowd.
2. In the activity, we all enthusiastically introduced the scientists we admire most
3. Deeply inspired by ..., we are all determined to ....
4. From this experience, I realize that....
5. I’ll never forget the day when ... in the activity.
（三）范文模板
假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Jeff得知你参加了你校学生会主办的“我最敬佩的科学家”故事分享会，写信询
问有关情况。请你回信，内容包括：
1. 分享会的时间及内容； 2. 你的分享； 3. 你的感想。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jeff,
(写信背景) I’m glad to know that you are interested in the story-sharing meeting themed “My Most Admired
Scientist” held by the Students’ Union of our school last week. (写信目的) I would like to tell you some details about
it.
(活动内容) In the activity, we all enthusiastically introduced the scientists we admire most, such as Newton,
Einstein, Chen Jingrun, etc. The scientist I admire most is Qian Xuesen, who is the most outstanding representative
figure of the aerospace (航空宇宙) field. What I admire him most is that he overcame many difficulties to return to his
motherland and participated in the construction of new China.
(我的感想) Deeply inspired by these scientists, we are all determined to become the future of our motherland.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Susan看了你的微博后发来邮件，对你上周帮助一个迷路的3岁小孩回家的事情
很感兴趣。请你回信，内容包括：1. 助人经过； 2. 个人感受。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Susan,(感谢关注) Thanks for your attention! (写信目的) I’m writing to tell you about the story.
(助人经过：时间、地点、经过和结果) Last week, I met a little boy on the street, who seemed helpless in the
crowd. Then, I got close to him and asked what had happened to him. He told me that he had got lost and couldn’t find
his parents. Immediately, I took the poor boy to the police station and sought help from them.To my delight, the police
brought back an anxious woman an hour later, who burst into tears while seeing the boy. After she calmed down, she
expressed sincere gratitude to me and the police.
(个人感受) From this experience, I realize that helping others is really a kind of pleasure, which not only helps
the one in need, but also enriches my own mind.
Yours,
Li Hua
19. 问题解决
议论文的问题解决一般是提出一个问题，然后阐述解决问题的方法及理由。条理要清晰，理由要有说服力，使
人信服。议论文常用一般现在时，但述说过去的事实时则用过去时；预测将来时，要用将来时态。
1. 开篇：说明现阶段存在的问题
2. 正文：分析问题产生的原因及可能导致的后果
3. 结尾：提出解决方案
（一）常用语块
1. 设身处地 _____________________________ 2. 正如老话所说 _________________________________
3. 做……是(不)明智的_____________________ 4. 做……是可取的 _________________________________
5. 徒劳无功 _____________ 6. 证明自己 _________________ 7. 一定做…… _______________________
8. 采取措施做…… _________________________ 9. 做……是无意义的 ______________________________
10. 考虑到某事_____________________________11. 保护……免受 _________________________
12. 听取建议 ____________________________ 13. 禁止某人做某事_______________________________
（一）常用语块
1. put oneself in other’s shoes 2. just as the old saying goes 3. it is (not) wise to do… 4. it is advisable to do… 5.
in vain 6. prove oneself 7. be sure to do… 8. take measures to do… 9. it doesn’t make sense to do…
10. take sth into consideration 11.protect…from 12. take one’s advice 13. forbid sb to do sth（二）套用句式
1. 明智的做法是去和她面对面交流。____________________________________________________________
2. 解决这个问题有几种方法。__________________________________________________________________
3. 最可行的方法就是保持冷静。________________________________________________________________
4. 有志者事竟成。____________________________________________________________________________
5. 迟做总比不做好。__________________________________________________________________________
（二）套用句式
1. It is wise to communicate with her face to face.
2. There are several ways to solve/deal with the problem.
3. The most practical way is to keep/stay calm.
4. Where there is a will, there is a way.
5. Better late than never.
（三）范文模板
随着手机的普及，越来越多的中学生拥有手机。但他们却整天低头玩手机，严重地影响了他们的学习、生活与
健康。对此，请写一篇短文提出解决办法。要点包括：1. 问题的现状； 2. 具体的解决办法。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
(开篇：问题现状) In recent days, we have to face the problem that more and more students lower their heads
to play mobile phones all day, which seriously affects their study, life and health.
(正文：解决办法) Confronted with the problem, adults should take a series of measures to cope with the
situation. First, schools should strictly forbid students to bring mobile phones to school. Second, teachers should
make students understand that playing phones heavily influences learning because it takes up much time. Finally,
students should be told that bowing their heads for a long time can cause a variety of severe health problems.
（结尾：预测将来）I believe that as long as we let students realize these facts, the phenomenon will be greatly
improved.
20. 中华文化
中华文化专栏与物品介绍中艺术类方面的写法相似，不同的是它更偏向于对中华文化层面的介绍，如谚语、十
二生肖、成语、书法、戏曲或其它非物质文化遗产等极具中国特色的文化介绍。通常包括三部分内容：1. 开篇：引出要介绍的某种文化
2. 正文：具体介绍该种文化及象征意义
3. 结尾：概括总结，表达个人观点
（一）常用语块
1. 古代中国 ________________ 2. 因……而闻名 _____________________ 3. 起源于… _________________
4. 对…表现出极大的喜爱 _______________________ 5. …被广泛/普遍认为 __________________________
6. 在…背后的文化 _____________________________ 7. 把…与…联系起来 __________________________
8. 中国谚语 __________________________________ 9. 中国文学 __________________________________
10. 中国农历 _________________________________ 11. 传统中国文化 _____________________________
12. 一代又一代(地) ____________________________ 13. 文房四宝 _________________________________
（一）常用语块
1. ancient China 2. be best known for… 3.show great preference for 4. be widely/universally acknowledged as…
5. the culture behind… 6. originate from… 7. associate…with… 8. Chinese proverbs 9. Chinese literature 10.
Chinese lunar calendar 11. traditional Chinese culture 12. generation by generation
13. the Four Treasures of the study
（二）套用句式
1. 得知你想了解…，我很高兴告诉你一些信息。
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2. 作为中国传统文化的一部分，中国谚语是人们智慧和经验的总结。
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3. …在中国古今都很受欢迎。
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4. 希望上面所提到的能对你有所帮助。
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5. 希望我的信息对你有用。____________________________________________________________________
（二）套用句式
1. Learning that you want to know ..., I am very glad to tell you something about it.
2. As part of the traditional Chinese culture, Chinese proverbs are summaries of people's wisdom and experience.3. ... enjoys great popularity in both ancient and modern times in China.
4. I sincerely hope the above can be of some help.
5. Hopefully you can find my information useful.
（三）范文模板
假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Peter来信询问有关中国谚语的知识及其学习方法。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 中国谚语的由来(人们的智慧和经验，口头传承)；
2. 中国谚语的特点(简短而富有意义)；
3. 实用的学习方法。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中国谚语Chinese proverbs
Dear Peter,
(熟人问候) How is everything going with you? (写信背景) Delighted to know that you want to learn about
Chinese proverbs and their learning methods,(写信目的) I am writing to tell you something about them. / (写信背
景) Learning that you want to know the culture behind the Chinese proverbs, (写信目的) I am very glad to tell you
something about it.
(中国谚语的由来) As part of the traditional Chinese culture, Chinese proverbs are summaries of people's wisdom
and experience. (中国谚语的特点) They are some brief and meaningful sentences created by people and are passed on
orally generation by generation.(学习方法) Regarding the practical ways to learn Chinese proverbs, I suggest that you
find some relevant materials online, which may give you specific explanations. Additionally, it is beneficial to recite
the proverbs every day, and you can apply them to communicating with Chinese people around you.
(希望与期盼) Hopefully you can find my information useful.
Yours,
Li Hua
21. 物品介绍
物品介绍包括产品介绍、图书介绍、电影介绍、艺术作品介绍等。对于实体物品，一般介绍其外观（尺寸、颜
色和材料等）和功能特点，若有象征意义，则一起介绍，常用一般现在时；对于艺术类介绍，可稍微提及作者或导演名字，但更着重于讲述当中的故事及所代表的意义/精神等，谈及其历史事情需用一般过去时，讲述现
状用一般现在时，若展望未来则用一般将来时。
（一）常用语块
1. 呈现…的形状 ____________________ 2. 在尺寸/长度/宽度/高度方面_____________________________
3. 以合适的价格 _________________________ 4. 喜欢/热衷于… __________________________________
5. 象征/代表… ___________________________ 6. 为满足…的需求 _______________________________
7. 栩栩如生的 ____________________________ 8. 中国古代民间故事_____________________________
（一）常用语块
1. in the shape of… 2. in size/length/width/height 3. at a proper price 4. have a fancy for…/fancy…
5.stand for/symbolize… 6. to meet the need for… 7. life-like 8. ancient Chinese folk tales
（二）套用句式
1.每个雕塑都是由2英寸大小的黏土制成，并涂上不同的颜色。
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2.这些泥塑表情各异，栩栩如生，每个人都在讲述着一个有趣的故事。
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3.你可以从附件中找到每个泥塑的图片和它们的故事简介。
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4.如果你想了解更多关于它的信息，请尽管问我。
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（二）套用句式
1. Each figure is made of clay, 2 inches in size with different colors painted.
2. With various facial expressions, the clay figures are life-like, each enjoying an interesting story.
3. Enclosed you can find pictures and short stories of each figure.
4. If you want more information about it, please do not hesitate to ask me.
（三）范文模板假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tony是个电影迷，很喜欢中国古代民间故事，请你写封邮件向他推荐最近上映
的电影《花木兰》(Mulan)，并简单介绍花木兰的故事和精神。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：heroine女英雄
Dear Tony,
(熟人问候) How’s everything going with you? (写信背景) I know you are a cinema-goer and have a special
fancy for ancient Chinese folk tales. Recently a film directed by Disney named Mulan is just the one to satisfy your
taste, (写信目的) so I am writing to tell you something about it.
(故事简介) Mulan was a daughter of a famous fighter, who was then badly ill. To fight foreign enemies, Mulan was
brave enough to dress herself up as a young man, acting as a replacement for her father. (精神) Chinese people think
highly of her great bravery and admire her as a heroine for the love she showed for her country.
The fighting scenes in the film are pretty fierce, surely you will enjoy it. And if you want more information about
it, please do not hesitate to ask me.
Yours,
Li Hua
22.人物介绍
人物介绍的文章一般都是对所写的人的基本概况（如年龄、出生地、家庭背景、受教育情况等）作简单的概述，
继而再叙述其事迹或在某个领域中做出的贡献，最后对其进行评价。
（一）常用语块
1. 出生在一个…的家庭 _______________________ 2. 长相普通/英俊 ______________________________
3. 毕业于…________________________ 4. 在某人十几/二十几/三十几岁的时候______________________
5. 获得…(方面的)学位 __________________________ 6. 对…有浓厚的兴趣 _________________________
7. 对…有天赋 _____________________________8. 竭尽全力做某事________________________________
9. 受…尊重 _______________________________ 10. 献身于 ______________________________________
11. 为…树立榜样 __________________________ 12. 被誉为…_____________________________________
13. 全心全意为…服务______________________ 14. 高度评价 ___________________________________15. 为…做出伟大的贡献 ______________________________
（一）常用语块
1. be born in a…family 2. ordinary/plain-looking / handsome-looking 3. graduate from…
4. in one’s teens/twenties/thirties 5. get/obtain a…degree in… 6. show (a) great interest in…
7. have a gift/talent for… 8. make every effort /try one’s best to do sth. 9. be respected by…
10. devote oneself to 11. set an example to… 12. be honored as… 13. serve…heart and soul
14. think highly of 15. make great contributions to…
（二）套用句式
1. 杰克由他当农民的祖父母抚养，从小就对植物和昆虫产生了浓厚的兴趣。
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2. 他主修医学，1989年在中山大学毕业并获得学士学位。四年后，他出国留学深造。
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3. 凭着决心和毅力，他在两年内创下了多项世界纪录并在田径界获得了高度的评价。
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4. 他不仅献身于志愿者工作，而且还全心全意为人民服务。
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5. 尽管他的相貌平凡，但是他有丰富的教学经验，深得其他老师和学生的尊敬。
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6. 我是一个长着大眼睛、留着长发的漂亮女孩。
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7. 我，一个贫苦家庭的儿子，2002年3月6日出生于广东广州。
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8. 我不但对科学感兴趣，而且也有音乐天赋。
____________________________________________________________________________________________9. 我叫李华，性格随和，善于交际。
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10. 我18岁，精通英语，特别是听说方面不错。
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1. Brought up by his grandparents, who were farmers, Jack showed a great interest in plants and insects when he was a
child.
2. Majoring in medical science, he graduated from Sun Yat-Sen University with a bachelor’s degree in 1989 and four
years later, he went abroad for further studies.
3. With great determination and perseverance, he set several world records within two years and was thought highly of
by the athletic circles.
4. Not only did he devote himself to voluntary work, but also he was willing to serve people heart and soul.
5. Ordinary-looking as he is, he has rich teaching experience and he is deeply respected by other teachers and
students.
6. I’m a beautiful girl with long hair and big eyes.
7. I, the son of a poor family, was born in Guangzhou, Guangdong Province on March6, 2002.
8. Not only do I show great interest in science, but also I have a gift for music.
9. I’m Li Hua, easy-going and skilled at communicating.
10. I’m 18 years old and have a good command of English, especially in terms of speaking and listening.
（三）范文模板
感恩节将至，学校的广播站即将推出感恩节系列专题“我要感恩×××”。请你用英语写一篇文章给广播站投稿，
介绍一位你要感谢的人物，要点如下：
1. 简单介绍该人物的基本信息；
2. 叙述该人物与你之间发生的事情；
3. 说明你为什么要感谢他/她。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
(基本信息：需与事迹相关) Mr. Zhang, a middle-aged man in his forties, is my math teacher. Ordinary-looking
as he is, he is extraordinary in his work.
(突出事迹) I used to be poor at math. Seldom did I pass math examinations. However, he never looks down uponme, nor does he become fed up with my “silly” questions. Instead, he explains the knowledge to me patiently, keeps
encouraging me and sparking my interest in learning math with lots of novel ways and ideas. Gradually, my math
improved.
(感谢原因) I express my gratitude to him not only because of his profound knowledge as well as humorous
teaching style, but also his devotion to work and patience with his students. (总结) He is really a good teacher who
deserves my admiration and respect.
23.地点介绍
地点介绍是英语作文说明文的基础类型之一，介绍一个地方通常会涉及地理位置、占地面积、人口、历史、文
化经济、风景特色等。
注意事项：
1. 时态。一般描述用现在时，包括一般现在时、现在完成时等，如涉及历史典故则用过去时。
2. 说明顺序。一般从基本情况(地理位置、人口、面积)到延伸内容(政治文化等)。
3. 避免开头指代不明。若文章没有给出写作对象或设定情景，避免用 it作主语引导第一句，而应该具体写出
描述的对象，如the Great Wall， Hong Kong等。
（一）常用语块
1. 位于 __________________________________ 2. 由……组成 ____________________________________
3. 占地(面积) … ___________________________ 4. 有……的历史 _________________________________
5. 作为……而著名 _________________________ 6. 因……而著名 __________________________________
7. 在……方面很丰富 _______________________ 8. 学习中国历史 _________________________________
9. 起源于 ________________________________ 10. 保护文化遗产 _______________________________
11. 灿烂的历史文化 _______________________ 12. 了解我们的民族文化 _________________________
13. 自然资源和旅游资源 ___________________ 14. 一个文明古国 _______________________________
15. 历史遗迹 _____________________________ 16. 与…为邻/接壤 _______________________________
17. 高度发达的 ___________________________ 18. 官方语言 ___________________________________
19. 第三大城市 ___________________________ 20. 在……的交叉处 _____________________________
21. 东边有…… ___________________________
（一）常用语块
1. be located/be situated in/lie in 2. consist of 3. with/cover/have an area of… 4. with/have a history of…5. be famous/well-known as 6. be famous/well-known for 7. be rich/abundant in 8. study Chinese history
9. have its origins in/originate from 10. protect cultural relics/heritage 11. glorious history and culture
12. learn about our national culture 13. natural and tourism resources 14. a country with an ancient civilization 15.
places of historic interest 16. neighbor 17. highly-developed 18. official language 19. the third largest city 20. in
the intersection of 21. on its east lies…
（二）套用句式
1. 中国有着960万平方千米的面积和13亿人口，由56个民族组成。
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2. 作为一个文明古国，中国有着5000年的灿烂历史和丰富的文化。
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3.这里的交通和住宿都很方便。_________________________________________________________________
4. 宜宾是四川省重要的交通枢纽，高铁、高速公路、水路和航空交通都十分便利。
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5. 每年这如画的风景吸引了国内外很多游客。
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（二）套用句式
1. China, covering an area of 9, 600, 000 square kilometers, has a population of 1.3 billion, consisting of 56
nationalities.
2. As a country with an ancient civilization, China has a brilliant history of 5000 years and rich culture.
3. Both the traffic and accommodation here are very convenient.
4. Yibin is an important transportation center of Sichuan Province, with high-speed rail, expressways, waterways and
airlines conveniently available to the city.
5. Every year the picturesque scenery attracts lots of visitors from home and abroad.
（三）范文模板
假定你叫李华，是一名导游，你将带领一个外国旅游团游览广东省。请你用英语写一篇发言稿简介广东。要点
如下：1. 地理位置； 2. 历史； 3. 特产； 4. 其他方面。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Ladies and Gentlemen,
Welcome to Guangdong Province. I’m Li Hua. And I’m more than glad to be your guide.
Guangdong Province, also called “Yue” for short, has a long history and is known for the saying, “Don’t hesitate
to have meals here.” Located by the South Sea in the southeast part of mainland China, it has quite a few islands off
its coast[line, which has a total length of 3,368 kilometers. Known as a fruit king, Guangdong Province is famous
for its high-quality bananas, sugar cane, lychees and pineapples. It is also one of the most developed industrial
provinces in South China, with convenient transportation both on land and water. It has several special economic zones
such as Shenzhen, Zhuhai, Shantou and so on.
Finally, I sincerely hope every one of you will enjoy yourself here.
假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Chris对中国的地理和历史非常感兴趣，特来信请你为他做介绍。现请你给他写
封回信，介绍中国的概况。内容包括：
1. 中国的地理及概况；
2. 中国的历史及其历史遗迹；
3. 邀请他来中国游玩或学习。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头与结语已为你写好。
Dear Chris,
( 熟人问候) How is everything going with you? (写信背景) I am glad that you are very interested in Chinese
history and geography. (写信目的) Let me introduce China to you now./ I’m writing to introduce China to you.
(地理概况) My motherland, China, whose capital is Beijing, is located in the east of Asia. It covers an area of
9,600,000 square kilometers and has a population of 1.3 billion, consisting of 56 nationalities. (历史遗迹) As a
country with an ancient civilization, China has a brilliant history of 5,000 years and rich culture. There are many
historical sites and cultural relics in China, which are well protected by Chinese people who are hard-working and
brave. For example, the Great Wall is one of the seven wonders in the world.
(邀请对方来中国) If you come to China, you may study Chinese history and learn about our national culture. Iam sure you will love China.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
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练
好题优选演
应用文文体突破
第一节 求职信
求职信开头通常直接说明要申请的职位，其次是简单明了地说明年龄、毕业学校、所学专业等情况，需要
说明的是，结尾部分需要表明自己非常喜欢、珍惜这份工作。请牢记几个常用句型：I would appreciate it if I
am accepted. / I will make every effort to do the job well if you give me a chance.
一、试题要求
假设你是北京的一位中学生李华，得知你的加拿大笔友Mike一家将来京旅游两天。你有意为他
们做导游。请给Mike写一封e-mail表达你的想法，并包括以下要点。
1. 个人优势：熟悉北京，擅长英语；
2. 参观景点：鸟巢，水立方，故宫，长城。
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 100词左右。首尾句已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：故宫 the Palace Museum 鸟巢 the Bird’s Nest 水立方 the Water Cube
二、精彩范文
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to learn that you and your parents will come to Beijing for a two-day trip, and I’d like to ① serve as
your guide.
② Born and growing up in Beijing, I know the city quite well. ③ Above all, I can speak English quite fluently,
so we can communicate with each other easily. I know you ④ have been longing for a visit to the Olympic venues like
the Bird’s Nest and the Water Cube, ⑤ therefore, I’ll first take you there. On the next day we can go to the Palace
Museum, ⑥ whose splendid construction will surely catch your imagination. Of course, you won’t ⑦ lose the
chance to be on the Great Wall, ⑧ In a word, you’ll have a good time with me as your tour guide.
I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【精彩语句】
① serve as your guide“担当……的向导”比用act as更能体现作者的热情。
② Born and growing up in Beijing使用分词作状语说明主语I的情况，表达清晰，也显示了扎实的语言基本功。
③ 短语above all在此处起到强调的作用。
④ 现在完成进行时have been longing for的使用突出了对这次游览的迫切要求。
⑤ 使用therefore增强了上下文之间的联系。
⑥ whose 引导的定语从句补充说明了先行词the Palace Museum的特点。
⑦ lose the chance to do / of doing表示“失去干……的机会”。
⑧ 使用in a word进行总结，类似的表达还有：all in all，to sum up，in conclusion。
第二节 推荐信
推荐信的基本功能就是客观地说明被推荐人的性格、能力和品行，以便取得招聘单位的充分信任。当然更
要突出被推荐人的相应特长、技能、工作经历等。
一、试题要求
国外某网站将举办新一轮网上讨论活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经
常访问该网站。现在请你用英文给该网站发一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括：
1.自我介绍；
2.写信的目的；
3.话题：我们应该感恩（thankful）；
4.推荐的理由；
5.预祝活动成功。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.邮件格式已为你给出；
3.邮件中不能出现本人的真实信息。
Dear Editor,
_______________________________________________________________________________
I wish your activity a success.
Yours,Li Hua
二、精彩范文
Dear Editor,
I am Li Hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School, and in my spare time I often visit your website, ① from
which I know that you are collecting topics for discussion. ② Being interested in it, I want to recommend my topic,
③ which is “We Should Be Thankful”. ④ As you know, we middle school students, the new generation, who were
born in the early 1990s, have been growing up with so much love for us. Some of us always ⑤ take it for granted that
our parents or grandparents should take care of us. ⑥ Needless to say, we seldom think of others’ feelings. Therefore, I
hope by discussing this topic, we can ⑦ learn to thank those ⑧ who always give us their selfless love.
I wish your activity a success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【精彩语句】
①“介词 + 关系代词”（from which）构成的定语从句在起到相应的语法及句意表达功能的同时，出现在文
章开头句的醒目位置，会吸引评卷老师的注意，增加得分点。
② 分词作状语表示原因，比直接用原因状语从句更加简洁明了，同时又显示出了作者深厚的语法功底。
③ 这里使用了非限制定语从句形式（which is “We Should Be Thankful”），使用很恰当。
④ as引导的非限制性定语从句置于句首，as you know也是一个固定短语，又是一个得分点。
⑤ 短语take it for granted 表示“对……想当然”。
⑥ 短语needless to say 表示“当然；无须说”，起到了加强文章逻辑性的作用。
⑦ learn to thank意思为“学会感激”。
⑧ 段尾处的定语从句是引人注意的得分点。
第三节 感谢信
感谢信主要是表达作者对某人或某单位所做的事情的感激之情，在写作中需要注重整体上的因果关系，逻
辑关系要清晰。整体写作原则是：真诚、及时、简短和得体。
一、试题要求
假设你是李华，曾在美国学习半年，现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师 Mr. Smith，但没有其联系方式。
请根据下列要点给你的美国同学Tom写一封信：
1. 感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助；
2. 询问Mr. Smith的近况并索要其联系方式；3. 邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。
注意：1. 词数100；
2.可适当增加细节。
二、精彩范文
Dear Tom,
① It has been half a year since we parted last time. Now I’m getting on well with everything and have been
missing you all the time. I’ve been missing the days in America ② when you helped me a lot with my English study.
③ Thanks to your kind help, I have improved my English a lot. But ④ to my regret, I have lost contact with my
teacher Mr. Smith. ⑤ Would you please tell me something about him and tell me how to get in touch with him?
⑥ In addition, ⑦ it would be a great honor for me to invite you to my country during the Spring Festival, ⑧
when you will experience colorful Chinese culture.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【精彩语句】
①“It is/has been + 时间段 + since + sb. did (did动词必须是瞬间动词)”，此句为高级句式结构。
② when引导的定语从句修饰先行词days。
③ 短语thanks to表示“多亏，由于”，此表达式不仅仅说明了原因，更主要的是体现了写信人的感激之情。
类似的表达还有：because of，owing to及due to。
④ to one’s regret表示“让某人遗憾的是……”。
⑤“Would you please…? ”句型的使用让语气更加委婉，符合交流的情景。
⑥ 短语in addition与besides都表示上下文存在递进关系，但短语的使用要优于单词的使用。
⑦ it作形式主语构成句型“It would be an honor for sb. to do sth.”，表示“做某事是某人的荣幸”。
⑧ 关系副词when引导的定语从句强调了时间。
第四节 投诉信
投诉信是作者表达对某个单位的行为、服务或者所购商品表达不满的书面形式，需要注意应该有理有据地
说明问题所在，证据要充分、令人信服；措辞要婉转，语气不要太激烈，态度不能太强硬。下面就请欣赏
2009·黄冈模拟试题中投诉信的精彩例文。
一、试题要求
假设你是艾学习，上个星期天去市图书馆看书时发现了以下问题，你写信向馆长Mr. Wang 反映：1. 实用性的书、新书太少；
2. 书架上的书摆放比较混乱；
3. 阅览室的光线对视力有害；
4. 管理员工作时彼此闲聊。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Wang,
Last Sunday, I went to do some reading in your library.
So, for the sake of readers, I suggest that you change all those mentioned above as soon as possible.
Yours,
Ai Xuexi
二、精彩范文
Dear Mr. Wang,
Last Sunday, I went to do some reading in your library. While I was there, I found something unpleasant.
Therefore, I am writing to ① voice my opinion, ② which, I hope, would help you to create a more comfortable place
for readers.
First, there are not enough new and practical books on the shelves, and most books are ③ out of date. Second,
some books are not sorted ④ in proper order, ⑤ making it rather difficult for readers to find what they want quickly.
⑥ What’s more, the assistants didn’t offer good service. Instead, they were always chatting. In addition, poor light in
the reading-room is bad for eyes.
So, for the sake of readers, I suggest that you change all those mentioned above as soon as possible.
Yours,
Ai Xuexi
【精彩语句】
① voice my opinion表示“表达自己的观点”，在这个短语中，voice用作动词。此表达式比用 express my
opinion更加新颖、出众。
② which引导的非限制性定语从句起到了对前一句补充说明的作用，同时，定语从句中的插入语 I hope使句子
节奏灵活自然。③ out of date表示“过时的，陈旧的”，本词组比用old表达更清晰、更精准到位。
④ in proper order此表达式用得很贴切。
⑤ 这里的现在分词短语作结果状语，这种用法使句子结构多样，提升了文章的档次；同时在本结构中，it做
形式宾语，不定式复合结构for readers to find what they want quickly做真正宾语，rather difficult做宾补。
⑥ 短语what’s more 与下文的in addition都表示上下文存在递进关系。
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测
名校真题必
1.【湖北省高中名校联盟2023届新高三第一次联合测评】
假如你是校英语社团负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她担任英语配音(dubbing)比赛的评委。内容包
括：
1. 比赛时间和地点；
2. 比赛环节安排。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Caroline,
________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Caroline,
I’m Li Hua, a student in charge of our school English club. Considering your proficiency in English, I’m writing to
sincerely invite you to be our judge for the upcoming dubbing contest.
Intended to make us appreciate the charm of English and arouse our interest in oral English, the show is scheduled
for next Friday afternoon lasting from 3 pm. to 5 pm. in the school meeting hall. Among the 12 selected groups, only
those who have excellent pronunciation and intonation, vivid role play as well as decent costume will stand out fromothers. Before the prize-giving ceremony, you are expected to give an overall evaluation of their performance and some
practical suggestions. I’m sure it will be an audio and visual feast for all of us.
We would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她担任英语配音比赛的评委，邮件主要内容包
括比赛的时间、地点和环节安排情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚地：sincerely→genuinely
考虑：take...into consideration → take...into account
建议：suggestion→advice
回复：reply→ response
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Intended to make us appreciate the charm of English and arouse our interest in oral English, the show is
scheduled for next Friday afternoon lasting from 3 pm. to 5 pm. in the school meeting hall.
拓展句：The show, which is intended to make us appreciate the charm of English and arouse our interest in oral
English, is scheduled for next Friday afternoon lasting from 3 pm. to 5 pm. in the school meeting hall.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Among the 12 selected groups, only those who have excellent pronunciation and intonation,
vivid role play as well as decent costume will stand out from others. （运用了who引导定语从句）
【高分句型2】I’m sure it will be an audio and visual feast for all of us.（运用了宾语从句）
2.【2023届山东省齐鲁名校高三第一次学业质量联合检测】
假定你是李华，你校要举行手工艺品（handicraft）制作大赛。请给你校交换生David写封邮件，邀请他参加。
内容包括：
1. 邀请参加；
2. 活动意义；
3. 参赛要求。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear David,
________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
How are you getting along? I am writing to invite you to participate in the on-coming handicraft-making contest in
.
our school
The contest is aimed at enriching students’ after-class activities, arousing individual creative awareness and
developing their hand-on ability. Since you are interested in designing and making small crafts in your spare time, it is a
good opportunity to show your talent. Remember to submit your artwork to Students’ Union before September 20 and
there will be an exhibition for award-winning works during the National Day.
If you need more information, log on the school website.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生David写封邮件，邀请他参加手工艺品大赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：participate in→take part in
比赛：contest→competition
机会：opportunity→chance
天分：talent→gift
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The contest is aimed at enriching students’ after-class activities, arousing individual creative awareness and
developing their hand-on ability.
拓展句：The contest is aimed at enriching students’ after-class activities, which arouse individual creative awareness
and developing their hand-on ability.【点睛】【高分句型1】Since you are interested in designing and making small crafts in your spare time, it is a good
opportunity to show your talent. (使用了since引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】 It is a good opportunity to show your talent. (It为形式主语，真正的主语为to show your talent)
3.【江苏南京六校联合体2023届高三联合调研试题】
假定你是李华，上周末你参加了学校组织的为贫困山区的孩子捐赠书籍的活动，给贫困山区的孩子捐了20本
书。请你给你的英国好朋友Pam写一封邮件介绍这次活动，内容包括：
1．活动目的；
2．活动内容；
3．你的感受。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节；
3. 开头、结尾已给出，不计算在词数以内。
Dear Pam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Pam,
Last weekend, I took part in a book-donation event held by our school. I’d like to tell you something about it.
Aiming to help those children in poor areas, our school launched the activity. It was applauded by all students and
teachers, who donated as many books as they could. I collected up to 20 books and handed them to the volunteers, who
thanked me for my generous support and offered me a little present.
The event was attached so much meaning to that our school even made headlines the next day. Hopefully, more
such activities will be held to help those in need, from which we students will learn the true essence of the harmonioussociety.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Pam写一封邮件介绍学校组织的为贫困山区的孩子
捐赠书籍的活动，信中包括活动目的；活动内容以及个人感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in→ participate in
举办：launch → hold
礼物：present→ gift
感激：thank→ appreciate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last weekend, I took part in a book-donation event held by our school. I’d like to tell you something about it.
拓展句：Last weekend, I took part in a book-donation event held by our school, about which I’d like to tell you
something.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 It was applauded by all students and teachers, who donated as many books as they
could. （运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Hopefully, more such activities will be held to help those in need, from which we students will learn
the true essence of the harmonious society.（运用了介词+关系代词引导非限制性定语从句）
4.【湖北省“宜荆荆恩”2023届高三起点考试】
假如你是校英语社团负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她担任英语配音(dubbing)比赛的评委。内容包
括：
1. 比赛时间和地点；
2. 比赛环节安排。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Caroline,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Caroline,
I’m Li Hua, a student in charge of our school English club. Considering your proficiency in English, I’m writing to
sincerely invite you to be our judge for the upcoming dubbing contest.
Intended to make us appreciate the charm of English and arouse our interest in oral English, the show is scheduled
for next Friday afternoon lasting from 3 pm. to 5 pm. in the school meeting hall. Among the 12 selected groups, only
those who have excellent pronunciation and intonation, vivid role play as well as decent costume will stand out from
others. Before the prize-giving ceremony, you are expected to give an overall evaluation of their performance and some
practical suggestions. I’m sure it will be an audio and visual feast for all of us.
We would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她担任英语配音比赛的评委，邮件主要内容包
括比赛的时间、地点和环节安排情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚地：sincerely→genuinely
考虑：take...into consideration → take...into account
建议：suggestion→advice
回复：reply→ response
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Intended to make us appreciate the charm of English and arouse our interest in oral English, the show is
scheduled for next Friday afternoon lasting from 3 pm. to 5 pm. in the school meeting hall.
拓展句：The show, which is intended to make us appreciate the charm of English and arouse our interest in oral
English, is scheduled for next Friday afternoon lasting from 3 pm. to 5 pm. in the school meeting hall.【点睛】【高分句型1】Among the 12 selected groups, only those who have excellent pronunciation and intonation,
vivid role play as well as decent costume will stand out from others. （运用了who引导定语从句）
【高分句型2】I’m sure it will be an audio and visual feast for all of us.（运用了宾语从句）
