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专题 01 提高词句表达能力的技巧
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提高词句表达能力的技巧-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------2页
一、提升句子表达练习---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------2
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Ⅰ.根据提示提升句子----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------2页
Ⅱ.用高级词汇或短语替换普通词语----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------3页
Ⅲ.用高级句式升级下列句子-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------4页
二、应用文写作------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------5
页01 提高词句表达能力的技巧
一、提升句子表达练习
Ⅰ.根据提示提升句子
1.Our annual autumn outing, _________________________________（以“通过劳动学习”为主题）, will be
held at the practical training base on September 20th.（with介词短语作定语）
2．And there is a wide variety of activities ____________________________（像这里春节期间的龙舟舞）．
(列举活动让表达丰富)
3.To facilitate movement for themselves and the future generation, Yugong, ___________________（临近90多
岁了）, was determined to remove the mountains, _________（一铲一铲地）.（运用现在分词短语作定语和
方式状语增加细节，丰富内容）
4.In the afternoon, we’ll travel to the countryside where you can enjoy ______________________________（美
丽的风景和各种有机食品）.（用并列连词both...and...提升句子品质）
5．As far as I know, traditional Chinese culture, _________________________________________（包括剪纸艺
术、古筝等）, has its unique characteristics.（用介词including列举具体内容，让表达更具体）
6._________________________________________（已经审阅了你的关于“保护野生动物”的海报设计竞赛
的初稿）, I’m writing to offer some suggestions for improvement.（用现在分词短语的完成式提升句子品质）
7 ． We hold the firm belief that the visitors will know more about traditional Chinese culture ，
______________________________________________________________（所以我希望我们学生在业余时间
读更多关于中国传统文化的书籍）．(增加希望)
8. I would be very grateful if you could review the article and provide any suggestions or corrections
______________________________________________________________（提高其整体的清晰度、连贯性和
准确性）.（用不定式作定语增加细节内容，让表达更具体）
9.This activity was highly thought of, ____________________________________________________（因为这
不仅产生了作用，而且提高了学生的参与意识）.（增加原因）
10.When I came back home, I shared my experiences with my parents.___________________________________（他们为我感到骄傲）．(增加评价)
11.We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the
earth.________________________________________________________________（例如，我们可以使用可回
收的塑料袋代替塑料袋，拒绝使用一次性产品，节约能源）．(用for example举例增加细节)
12 ． At last, I hope to play Chinese chess with you
____________________________________________________（这样我们就可以一起取得进步）．(增加结
果)
13．As for me, I'm passionate about basketball ____________________________________________________
（因为它给了我力量去面对我生活中的挑战）．(增加原因)
14.You can see some famous painters drawing Chinese paintings on the spot,
____________________________________________________（我想，这肯定会吸引游客的目光）.（用非限
制性定语从句增加扩展细节内容）
15.______________________________（常言道）, all work and no play makes jack a dull boy, so you can
relieve yourself from the heavy study loads from this.(用非限制性定语从句增强表达效果)
Ⅱ.用高级词汇或短语替换普通词语
1.I’m very privileged to deliver my speech here. The topic is about Grow Up in Labor.
→I’m _________ privileged to deliver my speech here. The topic is about Grow Up in Labor.
2．There stands a big stadium in our school，where many sports activities are held there.
→There stands a big stadium in our school，where ____________ sports activities are held there.
3．I believe that our country will become stronger and stronger.
→I _____________ our country will become stronger and stronger.
4.I would appreciate it if you can consider my slogan.
→I would appreciate it if you can _______________.
5．Remember that you should avoid getting hurt during the training and keep a balanced diet.
→__________ that you should avoid getting hurt during the training and keep a balanced diet.
6．Aimed to help us to know the importance of working, an activity themed “Working is the most beautiful” was
held last week.
→Aimed to help us to _________ the importance of working，an activity themed “Working is the most
beautiful” was held last week.
7．Surrounded by green trees, the farm is at the foot of the hill near our school.
→Surrounded by green trees, the farm _________ the foot of the hill near our school.8.I should be free any time after school next week.
→I should be ____________ any time after school next week.
9.As scheduled, we participated in several good activities.
→As scheduled, we participated in several ________ activities.
10.Hearing the bad news, the boy cried sadly.
→Hearing the bad news, the boy _________________ sadly.
Ⅲ.用高级句式升级下列句子
1．They didn't realize the importance of environmental protection until all the fish in the river died.
→____________________________________________________________________.(倒装句)
→_________________________________________________________________________.(强调句)
2.Again, I sincerely invite you to go to the exhibition with me. The exhibition will leave a deep impression on
you.
→Again, I sincerely invite you to go to the exhibition with me, ______________________________.(定语从句)
3．The environment will never improve until everybody takes care of it.
→_______________________________________________________________.(倒装句)
4. The tour not only instilled me with a sense of pride in our scientific advances, but it also planted in my heart a
seed of scientific exploration.
→__________________________________________________________________________________.( 倒
装句)
5.Last week I engaged in an unforgettable activity — “Show Gratitude to Our School through Labor” which
was organized by the Student Union.
→__________________________________________________________________________________.( 过
去分词短语作定语)
6．I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.
→__________________________________________________________________________________.( 强
调句)
7．There are a lot of trees and flowers in our school and our school looks like a big garden.
→_____________________________________________________________________.(with复合结构)
8．For example，there are huge amounts of reference books.I am often confused to choose from them.
→_______________________________________________________________________________.(定语从
句)9.We can enjoy the pleasure in doing housework when we really realize the great significance of doing it.
→_______________________________________________________________________________.(倒装句)
10.You should make good use of the time to improve my performance at school and prepare myself well for
the future.
→_______________________________________________________________________________.(用虚拟
语气提出建议)
二、应用文写作
1.（2024·福建省漳州市高中毕业班第二次质量检测）假定你是学校英语俱乐部负责人李华。你的英国外教
Andrew询问你在接下来的课程中是否需要介绍一些有关英国的历史知识。请你写一封邮件回复他。内容如
下：
（1）你的态度；
（2）你的理由；
（3）你的建议。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2.（2024·湖南省长沙市高三上学期1月新高考适应性考试）为了丰富校园生活，你校将组织迎新年音乐会，
请你写一则通知，刊登在学校英文网站上。内容包括：
1. 举办时间和地点；
2. 活动的内容；
3. 活动的意义。
注意：词数80左右。
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