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专题 29 应用文写作 建议信
备考 2023 年高考英语二轮复习讲练测--测
（解析版）
名校综合限时练 共6篇 限时120分钟 （每小题25分, 共150分）
班级____________ 姓名____________
1. ( 湖南师范大学附属中学2022-2023学年高三上学期月考 )
假定你是李华，你的好朋友Jim是高三学生。在最近的一次来信中Jim提到因为书写不够美观、整洁，在多次
英语考试中他的作文得分都不理想，这是他目前最大的困扰。
请你给Jim回信并针对他的问题提出建议。内容包括：
1. 理解和安慰；
2. 你的建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
4. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hearing your upset about your English handwriting which has posed an influence on your writing scores, I feel
deeply concerned. Don’t be too worried, for it is common among your peers.
I have a deep understanding of your trouble. From my point of view, the situation might be caused by
inadequate practice and incorrect methods of practice. Here are my suggestions. Initially, it is essential that you practise
strokes and letters while watching a demo video or with a copybook. Then, you can arrange a fixed period every day for
further practice. Finally, put it into practice in the tests and make adjustments when necessary.
Take action now and I believe I will witness your gradual progress and final success.
Y
ours,
L
i Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你的好朋友Jim是高三学生。在最近的一次来信中Jim提
到因为书写不够美观、整洁，在多次英语考试中他的作文得分都不理想，这是他目前最大的困扰。请你给Jim
回信并针对他的问题提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不足的：inadequate→deficient
困难：trouble→difficulty
非常重要的：essential→allimportant
建议：suggestion→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Then, you can arrange a fixed period every day for further practice.
拓展句：Then, you can arrange a fixed period every day, which is used for further practice.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing your upset about your English handwriting which has posed an influence on your
writing scores, I feel deeply concerned. (运用了现在分词作状语和which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Initially, it is essential that you practise strokes and letters while watching a demo video or with a
copybook. (运用了it作形式主语和that引导的主语从句)
2.（柳州二中2022届高考英语模拟卷）假定你是李华，为纪念杂交水稻（hybrid rice）之父袁隆平院士（academician），你校英语俱乐部打算征集相
关活动的建议，你建议观看纪录片《袁隆平》。请你给俱乐部负责人Mary写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.活动安排；
2.活动目的和意义。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mary,
I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student. Learning that our English Club is collecting some suggestions on the activities in
memory of academician Yuan Long ping, I’m writing to recommend watching the documentary Yuan Long ping.
The activity is expected to be held in the school auditorium from 3 p.m to 5 p.m this Friday with all the students in
our school invited. The movie describes Yuan Longping’s dedication to Chinese Agriculture in a touching and vivid
way. By providing a platform for participants to have a better understanding of the whole life of Yuan Long ping, the
father of hybrid rice in China, this activity aims to arouse the science research spirits and patriotic feelings of us
students. I hold a firm belief that the activity will be so educational, impressive and meaningful that our students will
develop a strong sense of national pride and self-confidence.
Thanks for reading my letter I hope my proposal will be taken into account. Looking forward to your early
，
reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，为纪念杂交水稻（hybrid rice）之父袁隆平院士
（academician），你校英语俱乐部打算征集相关活动的建议，你建议观看纪录片《袁隆平》。请你给俱乐部负
责人Mary写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→advice
纪念：in memory of→in honor of
举行：hold→host
相信：hold a belief→believe
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Learning that our English Club is collecting some suggestions on the activities in memory of academician Yuan
Long ping, I’m writing to recommend watching the documentary Yuan Long ping.
拓展句：Since our English Club is collecting some suggestions on the activities in memory of academician Yuan Long
ping, I’m writing to recommend watching the documentary Yuan Long ping.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that our English Club is collecting some suggestions on the activities in memory of
academician Yuan Long ping, I’m writing to recommend watching the documentary Yuan Long ping. (运用了that引导
宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I hold a firm belief that the activity will be so educational, impressive and meaningful that our students
will develop a strong sense of national pride and self-confidence. (运用了that引导同位语从句)
3.假定你是李华，你的好友王芳喜欢打排球，但老师和家长都极力劝她放弃打排球，全身心投入高考。为此，
她非常纠结和郁闷。请你给她写一封建议信，帮她解决这个困扰。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Wang Fang，
I am sorry to hear that you are troubled by something. As you said in your letter, your teachers and parents suggest
you give up playing volleyball because of the College Entrance Examination. But you don't want to do that. I think you
don't need to worry a lot for this. Here are my suggestions.
First of all, you should understand your teachers and parents，who just want the best for you.Second，I think you
should reduce the time spent playing volleyball instead of giving it up.Third ，you should arrange your time
properly.As long as you can make a balance between your study and hobby，your teachers and parents will surely not
object to it.
I hope my suggestions are helpful to you. Best wishes!
Yours，Li Hua
4.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来
北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
1．表示欢迎；
2．推荐他上哪所大学；
3．建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：1.词数不少于50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
Yours，
Li Hua
满分范文
Dear Jim，
I'm so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my
warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best
universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese
profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance is needed like A Dream of Red
Mansions while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt to the Chinese language
environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it's my pleasure to show you around Beijing when that day comes.
If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours，
Li Hua
5. （2022年河北高三阶段练习）
假定你是李华，你的加拿大笔友August在今年该校举办的“汉语桥”大赛中失利。请你给他写一封电子
邮件，内容包括：
1.表示安慰;2.提出建议。
注意：
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear August,
I am sorry to hear that you failed to pass the Chinese Bridge Competition in your school.
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________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear August,
I am sorry to hear that you failed to pass the Chinese Bridge Competition in your school.
I hope this failure won’t let you down. Knowing you have standard pronunciation and devoted love for Chinese, I
always feel amazed whenever I meet you. So, summon up your courage and keep on trying.
As we all know, delivering a speech in public is not an easy thing, especially when the speaker is a foreign
language learner. From my viewpoint, firstly, you should pay attention to the use of Chinese words and expressions in
different situations. Reading some Chinese poems is also a good choice. Lastly, learn from the mistakes and practice
more.
I hope you can make it in the next competition.
Y
ours,
L
i Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给在校举办的“汉语桥”大赛中失利的加拿大笔友 August写一封回信表
示安慰。
【详解】1.词汇积累
竞赛：competition→match使失望：let down→disappoint
标准的：standard→normal
观点：viewpoint→perspective
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Knowing you have standard pronunciation and devoted love for Chinese, I always feel amazed whenever I meet
you.
拓展句：Because I know you have standard pronunciation and devoted love for Chinese, I always feel amazed
whenever I meet you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am sorry to hear that you failed to pass the Chinese Bridge Competition in your school.(运
用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型 2】As we all know, delivering a speech in public is not an easy thing, especially when the speaker is a
foreign language learner.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)
6.（2022年上海市敬业中学高三期中）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近收到好友王磊的邮件。在邮件中，王磊表示自己因为拖延症
(procrastination)而耽误了重要事情，想请你提一些建议，如何克服拖延症。回复一封邮件，内容须包括：
1）你的建议
2）你的理由
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________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Wang Lei,
I am glad to hear from you. I know you are not satisfied with your procrastination. Procrastination has negative
effects on our life, which bothers many people. Now I am writing to give you some suggestions to get rid of it.
Firstly, we can write down our tasks in a visible place with their due dates. Additionally, we can tell our family
or friends about our goal because they will motivate us along the way. Last but not least, reward ourselves for a job well
done.
Hopefully, my suggestions will be of help to you.Y
ours,
L
i Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给好友王磊写封信，给他一些克服拖延症的建议，并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
建议：suggestion→advice
另外：additionally→moreover
摆脱：get rid of→rid oneself of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hopefully, my suggestions will be of help to you.
拓展句：I hope that my suggestions will be of help to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Procrastination has negative effects on our life, which bothers many people. (运用了which引
导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型 2] Additionally, we can tell our family or friends about our goal because they will motivate us along the
way. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
