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查补易混易错点 12 应用文写作之告知信、建议信、道歉信
体裁 命题形式 写作主题
I卷 应用文 邀请信 写邮件邀请外教进行一次访谈
新高考
II卷 应用文 邀请信 写邮件邀请外教进行一次访谈
2022
乙卷 说明文 投稿 利用填表调查结果给报社投稿
全国卷
甲卷 应用文 投稿 以世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿
校刊youth庆祝十周年，向校刊表达自己经历，并送
I卷 应用文 投稿 上祝福
新高考
校刊youth庆祝十周年，向校刊表达自己经历，并送
II卷 应用文 投稿 上祝福
2021
以“be smart online learners”为主题写一篇发言稿
乙卷 应用文 发言稿 参赛
全国卷
征求外国朋友建议，哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友
甲卷 应用文 征求建议 人
I卷 应用文 投稿 写一篇以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题投稿参赛
2020 全国卷 II卷 应用文 日记 写一篇英文短文介绍上周末采摘活动
III卷 应用文 求助信 给外教写一封信，请帮忙指导
【告知信】
首段：交代写信背景及写信目的
1. I'm more than delighted to know that you will...Therefore，I'm writing to remind/inform you...
得知你将……我非常高兴。因此，我写信提醒/通知你……
2. I'm very excited/glad to know that you take a great interest in...Consequently，I'd like to introduce...
to you. 得知你对…很感兴趣，我非常兴奋/高兴。因此，我想给你介绍…
3. Knowing you intend to/are going to...，I am delighted to share with./tell you some information
about... 知道你打算…..，我很乐意和你分享/告诉你一些关于……的信息。
主体部分：阐述活动目的及活动内容
1. In order to raise our awareness of environmental protection，we will organize a tree-planting activity
in the western mountainous area.为了提高我们的环保意识，我们将在西部山区组织一次植树活动。
2. The details of..are as follows.一些关于…的细节如下。3. The event is scheduled to start at..活动安排在……（时间）开始。
4. Firstly，in order to.，you should..Besides，you'd better..首先，为了……，你应该……。另
外，你最好……
5. To achieve better performance，you'd better..为了获得更好的表现，你最好…….
尾段：表达祝愿与期待
1. If you have any difficulty/trouble in...，please feel free/don t hesitate to turn to me for help.如果你
在……方面有任何困难，请尽管找我帮忙。
2. Wish you a nice/pleasant stay/time in...！祝你在……过得愉快！
3. I will be very grateful if you can... 如果你能够，我将非常感激。
【满分范文】
Dear Tom，
Knowing you take a great interest in Chinese culture， I am delighted to share with you some information
about the Beijing Opera Week.
It's the perfect time for you to join us because the annual Beijing Opera Week is coming soon.
There will be lots of rehearsals before the shows and we'd like you to play a role.You don't have to
memorize lines but need to learn some movements，so be sure to come to the concert hall for practice on
Friday and Sunday evenings.In order to feel easy and comfortable，you'd better wear light clothes and
shoes.
I hope you will find it fun.
Yours，
Li Hua
【建议信】
首段：开门见山表明写信目的
1. I'm very sorry to hear that you have trouble in.......at the moment.Here are some tips for you.
获悉此刻你遇到……麻烦，我深感遗憾。这是给你的一些建议。
2. Learning that......，'m writing to give you some suggestions on how to........
得知，我写信给你一些关于如何…的建议。
主体部分：提出具体建议
1. When it comes to such a situation，I would like to suggest that........For one thing，........For
another,.......What's more........
当遇到这种情况时，我想建议…。一方面，……。另一方面，……。而且，…2. As far as I'm concerned/From my point of view，it is a good idea to......./it would be wise of you
to.......Besides，I strongly advise you to..Last but not least，you can.........
就我而言/在我看来，……是个好主意/你……是明智的。此外，我强烈建议你……。最后但同样重要的
是，你可以……
尾段：希望采纳建议并表示祝福
1. Personally，it would be beneficial if you stick to........在我看来，如果你坚持……的话会有好处的 2. I
will be very happy if you can take my advice/ideas into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会很开心。
2. Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help to you. 希望这些建议对你有很大的帮助。
【满分范文】
Dear Michael，
I'm more than delighted to learn that you are going to participate in the Traditional Chinese Culture
Competition.I'm willing to give you a hand and offer some practical suggestions at your request.
To begin with，it is necessary for you to consult some books concerning traditional Chinese
culture，thus broadening your horizons and well equipping you for the coming competition.Secondly，why
not watch some video clips？You are bound to get some inspiration from them.As for when and where to
meet，can we make it at4：00this Friday afternoon in your classroom？If it’s not convenient for you，
please let me know what time is suitable for you in advance.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【道歉信】
首段：表明写作意图，对某事表示歉意
1. I'm truly sorry to tell you that.…., and I’m writing to express/convey my deepest apology to you...
很抱歉告诉你……，我写信向你表达我深深的歉意。
2. I am writing to owe you an apology for being unable to... 我没能……,我写信向你道歉。
3. I am terribly sorry for what I did, but believe I didn't mean to...
对于我做的事，我感到十分抱歉。但请你相信,我并非有意要……
4. I apologize most sincerely for what I said that day. I didn't mean to hurt you.
我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。5、Please forgive me for not being able to inform you. 请原谅我没能通知你。
6、I owe you an apology for being unable to help you. 我没能帮助你，应该向你道歉。
7. I am indeed sorry for what I said, but believe I had no intention to...
对于我说的话，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非故意要......。
8. Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words. 请原谅我说话欠妥。
主体部分：说明道歉的具体原因
1、I feel awfully sorry about it and I wonder if it's convenient for you to make it another time.
为此我感到非常抱歉，我想知道你是否方便另约时间。
2、Much to my regret, I was unable to.….and I wish that my apology could help to some extent.
很遗憾,我不能够……希望我的道歉在某种程度上能起到作用。
3、I’m afraid I have brought you too much trouble and I want you to know how regretful I am
feeling.
恐怕我给你带来了太多麻烦，同时我也想让你知道对此我觉得很抱歉。
4、I just do not know what to say about the matter. 关于这件事我不知该说些什么。
5、I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now. 我想让你知道现在我是多么遗憾。
6、I did not mean to hurt your feelings. 我不想伤害你的感情。
7、I feel you are displeased at my failing to keep my promise, but I hope you will forgive me.
恐怕你会因为我的失约而不高兴，但是希望你能原谅我。
段尾：再次表明歉意，请求谅解并提出补救措施
1. Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused . 对于造成的不便，我再次表示歉意。
2. I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apologies.
我衷心希望你能理解我的处境,并接受我的道歉。
3. Please allow me to say sorry again 请允许我再次表示歉意。
4. I'm sorry for all the inconvenience. 我为引起的所有不便表示歉意。
5. Please accept my sincere apology once more for any inconvenience caused.
对于任何带来的不便，请再次接受我真诚的道歉。
满分范文
Dear Tom,
I am terribly sorry for not having attended your class on time. Now I am writing you this letter to show my
deep regret.
I will be very grateful if you are kind to listen to my explanation. Because it is my first time to live inGuangzhou and I can not adapt to the weather here quickly, I've had a headache these days. be honest, I think you
will be my best teacher to help me improve my English. So I apologize again for my not attending your class. I will
make my great effort on English in the future and will not disappoint you next time!
I wonder if you could excuse me.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
写作模板
Dear ______ (称谓)
Aware of your enthusiasm for /Delighted to learn that ______(活动主题、你对主题的兴趣), I’m writing
to extend my ______(看法、关心、欢迎等) and inform you of some relevant information.
______(活动信息). To begin with, ______(要点一). Furthermore, ______(要点二). To sum up, ______(要
点三).
I highly expect the experience to be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua写作模板
Dear ______ (称谓)
You can’t imagine how ______(情感) I am hearing about ______(写信的原因). I’m more than glad to offer
my advice for your reference.
Firstly, you are supposed to ______ (建议一) . Additionally(For one reason), it makes sense to ______ (建议
二/理由一) . Moreover（For another reason）, ______ (建议三/理由二)is also a good choice . Do bear in
mind that （Therefore）______ (建议四/理由三)
I am fully convinced that use the tips above and we will______ (以上建议的好处) . I would appreciate it if
you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua写作模板
Dear ______ (称谓)
I 'm terribly sorry to inform you that ______(写信事由). Thus, I am writing to apologize for not keeping my
word. Something unexpected happened and ______(失约理由) .
Shall we fix another time? I’ll be available any time after______(补救办法). Will ______(另约时
间) suits your convenience? If it’s ok, let’s meet at ______(见面地点). If not, let me know what time suits you
best. I hope the adjustment won’t put you into much trouble.
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
1．（2021·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，
你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit
my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won’t cause
you too much trouble.
How about going out next Saturday morning? If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at the school gate at 9: 00.
Please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available anytime next weekend.
In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers
together.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并建议
再约。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
通知：tell→inform
除此之外：in addition→besides
适合：fit→suit
有空的：available→free
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowerstogether.
拓展句：In addition, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park next Saturday, when we can go to see the flowers
together.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was
suddenly admitted to the hospital. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
2．（2019·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑
期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意
见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
⑶希望从中有何收获。
注意：
⑴词数不少于100；
⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School. ________________________________________________
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Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考答案】
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.It’s our great pleasure to have you visit our school and givea lecture on western art during the coming summer vacation.
When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver
the lecture on this topic. Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden
our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. It also gives us strength and hope when we are
overcoming difficulties.
I would appreciate it if you could take my advice, and I hope that I can gain more knowledge through the
lecture. Looking forward to your early reply.
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出意
见。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
做演讲：give a lecture→make a speech
提供：provide sb. with sth.→refer sb. sth.
机会：opportunity→chance
采纳建议：take one’s advice→follow one’s advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and
have a better understanding on culture diversities.
拓展句：Western music，which is served as a bridge ，provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our
horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you
could deliver the lecture on this topic.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties.（运用了when引导的时
间状语从句）
3．（2023届辽宁省普通高中高三第二次模拟考试英语试题）假定你是李华，你的一个朋友经常感到疲惫，因此非常苦恼。请你给他一些建议，要多锻炼，提高身体素质。内容包括：
1.锻炼的好处;
2.建议一种锻炼形式并说明理由。
3.祝愿健康。
注意：
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考答案】
To be fit and healthy you need to be physically active. Regular physical activity can help protect you from
diseases.
Cycling is a healthy exercise that can be enjoyed by people of all ages. It only takes two to four hours a week
to achieve a general improvement to your health. It causes less strain and injuries than most other forms of exercise.
Besides, cycling does not require high levels of physical skill. Once you learn, you don’t forget.
I sincerely hope you will be healthy and energetic with the help of physical exercise.
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“朋友经常感到疲惫，因此非常苦恼”给他写一封建议信，内
容包括：锻炼的好处、建议一种锻炼形式并说明理由并祝愿健康。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
获得：achieve → obtain
此外：besides → what’s more
要求：require → demand
真诚地：sincerely → genuinely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To be fit and healthy you need to be physically active.拓展句：You need to be physically active so that you keep fit and healthy and, more importantly, more energetic.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Cycling is a healthy exercise that can be enjoyed by people of all ages.（运用了that引导的限制
性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Once you learn, you don’t forget.（运用了once引导的条件状语从句）
4．（2023届天津市南开区高三资料调查试卷英语试题）假如你是晨光中学的李津，你最近收到英国
好友Chris的邮件。信中提到他将于4月中旬随学访团到天津交流学习，希望你给他推荐一下最值得去的
景点。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
(1) 表示欢迎；
(2) 简单介绍天津；
(3) 推荐一处旅游景点并给出理由。
注意：
(1) 词数不少于100；
(2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to receive your email.____________________________________________________________
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I hope this is helpful. Can’t wait to meet you!
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to receive your email. What makes me really excited is that you are going to visit Tianjin. What a
wonderful idea! Welcome to my hometown!
Tianjin is a city with a long history. The weather is good but perhaps a little bit hot in summer. You’ll have
various snacks in Tianjin and meanwhile find lots of western style buildings here on the Five Major Avenues. If youwant to enjoy beautiful city views, Haihe River should be a good choice. If you like to have fun and see some
animals, the Water Park and Tianjin Zoo could make you content. My favorite place is the Ancient Culture Street
where there are plenty of interesting traditional things.
I hope this is helpful. Can’t wait to meet you!
Yours,
Li Jin
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是晨光中学的李津，你最近收到英国好友Chris的邮件。信中提到
他将于4月中旬随学访团到天津交流学习，希望你给他推荐一下最值得去的景点。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
各种各样的：various→a variety of
欣赏：enjoy→admire/appreciate
满意的：content→satisfied
与此同时：meanwhile→at the same time
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Tianjin is a city with a long history.
拓展句：Tianjin is a city which has a long history.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】What makes me really excited is that you are going to visit Tianjin.（运用了what引导的主语从
句和that引导的表语从句）
【高分句型2】My favorite place is the Ancient Culture Street where there are plenty of interesting traditional
things.（运用了where引导的定语从句）
5．（2023届陕西省西安市新城区高三下学期第二次模拟考试英语试题）假定你是李华，为迎接高考，
学校英语社团将举办“我为学习献计策”的征文比赛活动，请你以How to keep positive under pressure为题
写一篇短文参赛。内容如下：
1. 背景介绍；2. 提出建议；3. 鼓励前行。
注意：1. 词数应为100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
How to keep positive under pressure________________________________________________________________________________________
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【参考答案】
How to keep positive under pressure
With the college entrance exam approaching, some senior 3 students are loaded with extra pressure. How to
keep positive is crucial to improving learning efficiency. Here are some tips for that.
First of all, be confident in yourself. No matter what arises, believe you have the ability to deal with it.
Second, focus your attention on performing the task at hand instead of worries, fears and doubts. What’s more, set
short term goals and reward yourself when you have achieved each one, which will make you feel motivated to
keep up with the good work. Keeping a healthy lifestyle such as balanced diets or regular exercise also matters in
reducing pressure.
No pressure, no diamonds. So please choose to be positive even if you are facing pressure.
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，为迎接高考，学校英语社团将举办“我为学习献计策”的
征文比赛活动，请你以How to keep positive under pressure为题写一篇短文参赛。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
首先：first of all→to begin with
集中：focus on→concentrate on
实现：achieve→realize
处理：deal with→handle
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Keeping a healthy lifestyle such as balanced diets or regular exercise also matters in reducing pressure.
拓展句：It is keeping a healthy lifestyle such as balanced diets or regular exercise that matters in reducing
pressure.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] How to keep positive is crucial to improving learning efficiency. (运用了“特殊疑问词+不定式”结构)
[高分句型2] What’s more, set short term goals and reward yourself when you have achieved each one, which will
make you feel motivated to keep up with the good work. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
6．（2023届海南省高三一轮复习调研考试英语试题）近年来，中学生近视率呈上升趋势。请你为学
校“英语园地”宣传栏写一份倡议书, 呼吁大家合理用眼, 保护视力。倡议书内容包括：
1.倡议的原因和目的；
2.提出合理用眼的建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Protect our eyesight
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【参考答案】
Protect our eyesight
Recent years have witnessed an increasing number of students who become near-sighted, bringing eyesight
problems of teenagers to public attention. Therefore, I call on everyone to take effective measures to protect our
eyesight.
We can make it a habit to stop for a few minutes during our study and look at distant objects to get regular
breaks. Besides, we should keep at least 30 centimeters away from the reading material. Last but not least,
whenever signs of eyesight problems occur, consult a doctor immediately.
In these ways, we can protect ourselves from becoming near-sighted.
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。近年来，中学生近视率呈上升趋势。请你为学校“英语园地”宣传栏写一
份倡议书, 呼吁大家合理用眼, 保护视力。
【详情解析】1.词汇积累
呼吁：call on→appeal to
咨询：consult→counsel
立即：immediately→at once
采取措施：take measures→take action
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Therefore, I call on everyone to take effective measures to protect our eyesight.
拓展句：Therefore, it is effective measures that I call on everyone to take to protect our eyesight.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Recent years have witnessed an increasing number of students who become near-sighted, bringing
eyesight problems of teenagers to public attention. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] We can make it a habit to stop for a few minutes during our study and look at distant objects to get
regular breaks. (运用了it作形式宾语)
7．（2010·山东·高考真题）假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周
末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：
1. 表示歉意；
2. 解释原因；
3. 另约时间。
注意：
1. 词数120~150；
2. 可适当增加细节。
Dear Tom,
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________.
Sincerely yours
Li Hua【参考答案】
Dear Tom,
I was far too happy that we made an appointment to visit Beijing together next weekend. How I appreciate the
opportunity to be your guide in Beijing! But I’m afraid we’ll have to make it another time, because I’ll be meeting
my uncle at the airport. He is on business from Australia, and will be home for only two days. It’s a rare chance for
our family to get reunited since he left home ten years ago. I hope you’ll forgive me for not keeping my word. If it’s
convenient for you, we can make it the weekend after next, or you may make the choice, OK?
By the way, my family and I will be overjoyed to have your company when my uncle is home. If you have no
plan, please let me know, and I’ll fetch you upon my uncle’s return. Have a happy weekend.
Sincerely yours
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文。
【详情解析】
这是一篇电子邮件写作，写作缘由是因为自己因故，而不能赴与在上海上学的英国朋友Tom下周末去
北京旅游的约定。邮件内容主要包括表达歉意，解释原因，以及另约时间。在结构上面，文章使用了三段
式，第一自然段首先真诚地表达自己的歉意，第二自然段，仔细说明自己失约的缘由，第三自然段，再次
主动真诚的邀请Tom一起去北京旅游。文章结果层次分明，调理清晰。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不
能遗漏要点。时态：用一般现在时。使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者
在范文中使用了较多主从复合句和固定句型：How I appreciate the opportunity to be your guide in Beijing!这
句话运用了感叹句。If it’s convenient for you, we can make it the weekend after next, or you may make the
choice, OK?运用了条件主语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，
文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8．（贵州省六校联盟2022-2023学年高三下学期适应性考试英语试题）假如你是李华，你的来自美国
的留学生朋友Mike跟你约好去参观茶文化博物馆，但你因故将不能赴约，请用英语给Mike写一封电子邮
件，说明情况。内容如下：
1．表示歉意并说明原因;
2．邀请他参加你校下周六茶艺社团的活动。
注意：1．词数100左右;
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：茶艺 tea ceremony
Dear Mike,
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Mike,
Due to a change in my school arrangement, I’m very sorry that I won’t be able to keep my appointment to visit
the Tea Museum with you as scheduled．I sincerely apologize for any inconvenience caused by the unexpected
change.
I suggest we put off our meeting from 3 pm this Saturday to the same time next Sunday．Will that be suitable
for you? The good news is that some activities about tea culture are to be held in our school next Saturday．A
lecture and a tea ceremony show will be included, which will definitely attract tea culture lovers like you．I
sincerely invite you to the event, which will help you better understand Chinese tea culture．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你的来自美国的留学生朋友Mike跟你约好去参观茶文化
博物馆，但你因故将不能赴约，请用英语给Mike写一封电子邮件，说明情况。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
因为：due to→because of
建议：suggest→advise
举行：hold→host诚挚地：sincerely→heartfeltly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I sincerely apologize for any inconvenience caused by the unexpected change.
拓展句：I sincerely apologize for any inconvenience, which was caused by the unexpected change.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] A lecture and a tea ceremony show will be included, which will definitely attract tea culture lovers
like you.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] The good news is that some activities about tea culture are to be held in our school next Saturday.(运
用了that引导表语从句)
9．（2018·全国·高考真题）你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英
语短片Growing Together，内容包括：
(1)短片内容：学校的发展；
(2)放映时间、地点；
(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Boys and girls,
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________
The Students Union
June 8, 2018
【参考答案】
Boys and girls,
I have good news for you. The English film Growing Together made by our teachers and some senior
students will be displayed this weekend. It shows us the whole history of school’s development, which is I think the
attraction to us. If you are curious about the history of our school or concerned about its future, you mustn’t missthis excellent opportunity! Besides, all your suggestions and comments about this film will be welcome.
It will be displayed in the School Film Hall, from 9:00 am to 10:00 am, June 9th, Saturday.
That’s all. Thank you.
The Students Union
June 8, 2018
【详情解析】
英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主，多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用
较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。
第二个注意点：层次一定要清晰，一个层次要表达一件事情，使人看起来一目了然。
10．（山东省济南市2022-2023学年高三上学期期末统考英语试题）你校外教Frank受邀本周末在学
校报告厅做报告。因特殊原因，学校将报告调整为线上举行。假如你是李华，请你给他写一封邮件，通知
相关内容，要点如下:
1.变更原因;
2.变更后的时间和方式;
3.表达歉意。
注意:
1.词数为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Frank,
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Frank,
I’m sorry to inform you the report scheduled in the lecture hall this weekend will have to be made online.
Given that the equipment in the hall broke down and it needs repairing, we have no choice but to rearrange
your lecture. I wonder if it is possible for you to conduct a Tencent conference or Tintin conference this Saturdayevening. Should you have any problem or suggestion, do feel free to contact me for further information.
I deeply apologize for any inconvenience we may have caused. Your early reply is what we are expecting.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给受邀本周末在学校报告厅做报告的外教Frank写
一封邮件，告知他因特殊原因学校将报告调整为线上举行并说明相关内容。
【详情解析】
词汇积累
告诉：inform→tell
别无选择：have no choice but to→have no option but to/have no alternative but to
会议：conference→meeting/session
联系：contact →in contact with/contact with
句式拓展
同义句转化
原句：Given that the equipment in the hall broke down and it needs repairing, we have no choice but to rearrange
your lecture.
拓展句：We have no choice but to rearrange your lecture because the equipment in the hall broke down and it
needs repairing.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I wonder if it is possible for you to conduct a Tencent conference or Tintin conference this Saturday
evening. (运用了if引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I deeply apologize for any inconvenience we may have caused. (运用省略that或者which的倒装
句)
11．（2023届四川省南充市高三下学期高考适应性考试英语试题）假设你是李华，你的英国笔友John
对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣，清明节将至，他发来邮件询问有关清明节的信息，请你用英文给他回一封
电子邮件，内容包括：
1.节日的时间；
2.节日的活动；
3.节日的意义。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：清明节the Tomb-Sweeping Day
Dear John,
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear John,
I’m glad to be informed that you show great interest in traditional Chinese festivals. Here I feel rather
delighted to introduce the Tomb-Sweeping Day to you.
China’s traditional Tomb-Sweeping Day dates back to the Zhou Dynasty, which usually falls on April 5 in the
solar calendar, with a history of more than 2, 500 years. The festival was created to honor the dead. Traditionally,
people will bring food and drinks to the cemetery to worship their ancestors. Meanwhile, it is also a chance for the
family members to reunite and to remember.
In my opinion, as a traditional Chinese festival, the Tomb-Sweeping Day keeps us reminded of our lost
families and cherishing the living ones. By celebrating it, we follow the trace of the forefathers and move on with
their memories.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友John写封电子邮件，介绍清明节的相关情况。【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
同时：meanwhile→in the meantime
有益的：chance→opportunity
追溯到：date back to→trace back to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In my opinion, as a traditional Chinese festival, the Tomb-Sweeping Day keeps us reminded of our lost
families and cherishing the living ones.
拓展句：In my opinion, the Tomb-Sweeping Day, which is a traditional Chinese festival, keeps us reminded of our
lost families and cherishing the living ones.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I’m glad to be informed that you show great interest in traditional Chinese festivals. (运用了that引
导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] China’s traditional Tomb-Sweeping Day dates back to the Zhou Dynasty, which usually falls on April
5 in the solar calendar, with a history of more than 2, 500 years. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
12．（浙江省强基联盟2022-2023学年高三上学期仿真模拟卷英语试题）假定你是李华，你目前在给
你的英国朋友Jordan上中文诗词课。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划，内容包括：
1．上课时间和地点；
2．上课内容；
3．课前准备。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jordan,
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Jordan,
How is everything going? I’m writing to inform you about our arrangement of the next class. The related
matters are as follows.
We’ll start at 10 a m. this Saturday in our school library lounge. The class is concerning the poetry of Tang
Dynasty, so you are expected to go through the materials that I have already emailed to you. Also, please remember
to read about the history of Tang Dynasty, which would be of great benefit to understanding the background of the
poems.
I am looking forward to our next class.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你目前在给你的英国朋友Jordan上中文诗词课。请你写封
邮件告知下次上课的计划。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
告知：inform →notify
浏览：go through →read through
并且：also →besides
有益的：be of great benefit →be very beneficial
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to inform you about our arrangement of the next class.
拓展句：I’m writing to inform you something about how we arrange the next class.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 The class is concerning the poetry of Tang Dynasty, so you are expected to go through the
materials that I have already emailed to you.（运用了so连接并列句，that引导定语从句）
【高分句型2】Also, please remember to read about the history of Tang Dynasty, which would be of great benefit
to understanding the background of the poems.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
13．（安徽省马鞍山市2022-2023学年度上学期第一次教学质量检测英语试题）假定你是李华，你和交换生David约好本周末一起去图书馆。现在你因身体不适，不能按时赴约。请给他写邮件表达歉意，内
容包括：
1. 说明原因;
2. 另约时间。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
______________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
______
Yours
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear David,
Terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t go to the library with you this weekend. I have got a flu and don’t fell
well today. In order not to get you infected, I’m afraid we have to put off our appointment.
If it is convenient for you, let’s meet at 7：30 am next Sunday outside the school gate. If not, pleased tell me
in advance.
Allow me to make an apology again. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本文是一篇应用文。要求考生给David写信告知你因身体不适不能如约和他去图书馆，表示你的歉意
并要求另约时间。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累害怕的：afraid →worried
提前：in advance →ahead of time
道歉：make an apology →apologize
约会：appointment → date
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I have got a flu and don’t fell well today.
拓展句：Because I have got a flu, I don’t fell well today.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t go to the library with you this weekend.（运用了that引导的
宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 If it is convenient for you, let’s meet at 7：30 am next Sunday outside the school gate. （运用了
if引导的条件状语从句）
14．（2023届贵州省“3+3+3”高考备考诊断性联考英语试题）假如你是李华，你和你的外籍好友
Andrew约好了本周末去图书馆，但是你因为临时要参加学校组织的“垃圾分类，全民行动”志愿活动而
不能赴约。请根据以下要点给他写一份道歉信。内容要点：
1.表达歉意；2.简要介绍活动内容和意义；3.另约时间。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Andrew,
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Andrew,
I have signed up for a voluntary activity themed “Trash Sorting, All Involved” and won’t be able to
accompany you to the library this weekend as planned. I feel terribly sorry and want to express my deepest apology.As you know, we students should spare no efforts in implementing the policy of garbage classification. So, I
seized this opportunity without hesitation. On that day, we will go to communities to publicize the significance as
well as methods of trash sorting and direct the residents to accurately distinguish different kinds of rubbish, which
will take a whole day. Considering that, I’m afraid I can’t keep my word. Shall we put it off till next Sunday?
I am sorry for any inconvenience caused and hope you can accept my heartfelt apology.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本文是道歉信。因参加学校组织的志愿者活动，而不能与好朋友Andrew周末一起去图书馆，要求考
生为些给Andrew写一封道歉信。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
计划：plan→schedule
表达：express→covey
真诚地：heartfelt→sincere
希望：hope→expect
2.句式拓展
句式升级
原句：I have signed up for a voluntary activity themed “Trash Sorting, All Involved” and won’t be able to
accompany you to the library this weekend as planned.
拓展句：I have signed up for a voluntary activity which is themed “Trash Sorting, All Involved” and won’t be able
to accompany you to the library this weekend as planned.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]I am sorry for any inconvenience caused and hope you can accept my heartfelt apology.(运用了过去
分词作后置定语和省略连词的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]On that day, we will go to communities to publicize the significance as well as methods of trash
sorting and direct the residents to accurately distinguish different kinds of rubbish, which will take a whole day.(运
用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
15．（2023届湖北省荆荆宜仙4市高三下学期2月联考英语试题）假定你是荆州外国语学校学生李华，
你和你校外籍教师Tom约好本周末去方特乐园赏烟花、过火把节，但你因故不能赴约，请按下列要求给
Tom写一封电子邮件:1.表示歉意; 2.解释原因; 3.另约时间。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80词左右。
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇:荆州方特乐园一Jingzhou Fantawild 火把节-the Torch Festival
Dear Tom,
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours;
LiHua
【参考答案】
Dear Tom,
I’m terribly sorry that I can’t accompany you to Jingzhou Fantawild to admire the fireworks and experience
the Torch Festival this weekend. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Recently I have had a high fever and have to stay at home for a few days in case it becomes worse. Were it not
for the illness, I would definitely spend much fun time with you. Please accept my sincere apology. I would
appreciate it if you could allow me to fix another time to show you around Fantawild.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生给外籍教师Tom写一封电子邮件解释，你因故不能在本周末去方特
乐园赏烟花、过火把节。
【详情解析】
1. 词汇积累
非常地：terribly→extremely
欣赏：admire→appreciate
造成：cause→lead to真诚的：sincere→honest
2. 句式拓展
同义句替换
原句：Recently I have had a high fever and have to stay at home for a few days in case it becomes worse.
拓展句：Recently I have had a high fever, which makes me have to stay at home for a few days in case it becomes
worse.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Were it not for the illness, I would definitely spend much fun time with you. Please accept my sincere
apology.(省略if的虚拟语气)
[高分句型2]I would appreciate it if you could allow me to fix another time to show you around Fantawild.(if引导
的条件状语从句)
