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【一轮复习讲义】2024年高考英语高频考点题型归纳与方法总结（新高考通
用）
第 25 讲 应用文写作之建议信类（精讲精练）
题型目录一览
建议信
一、知识点梳理
一、 写作步法
第一步:表示理解
基础表达：
1.I know you have trouble in... after reading your letter.
2 I am glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to...
高级表达:
1.I have received your letter saying that..., I’d like to suggest that...
2. Learning that..., I’m writing to give you some suggestions on how to...
3. You have asked me for my advice on...and I’ll try to make some suggestions.
第二步:提出建议
基础表达：
1.I think it would be more beneficial if you could...
2．I feel that it would be beneficial if you accept it.
高级表达：
1.I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details.
2．When I comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can...
第三步：表达祝愿
基础表达：
1.Pease take good consideration of my advice.
2. Hopefully, these suggestions will be of great help to you.
高级表达：
1.I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your...
2.If you have any more problems, please feel free to contact me at any time
二、模板展示
三步走：
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】1、 写信目的；
2、 具体建议；
3、 期待回复。
模板一：
Dear____，
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in_ (问题所在). I am writing this letter is try to
provide my useful suggestions on_ (话题) to you，and I think it would be beneficial for you
to take thees following steps.
(很抱歉听说你在……方面有困难，我写这封信是想给你提供我关于……的有用建议，我认
为采取以下措施对你是有益的)
First of all, is very good for you. In addition, if you can seriously consider xX， I am
sure you can benefit from it. The most important thing is that if you can do xX事情，your ability
will be improved very well.
(首先，___对您来讲是十分有好处的。此外，如果你能认真考虑 XX,我相信你一定能从中
受益。最重要的是,如果你能够做XX事，你的能力一定能得到很好的提高)
Please believe that where there is a will, there is a way. I am sure you will consider my advice
and if there are other matters I will be ready to discuss them with you to get more details. I look
forward to hearing from you.
(请相信，有志者，事竟成。我相信你一定会考虑我的建议，如果还有其他事宜，我将随时
准备与你讨论以便得到更多的细节。我期待着您的回复。)
Yours sincerely
模板二：
Dear____，
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in_ (问题所在).Thank you for trusting me.For
this, I would like to give you some advice about it.
In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.First of all, it would be good if you
_ (建议一)，because _ (理由)。In addition, it should be a good idea to _ (建议二).
Finally, we hope that _ (建议三)，I am sure you will _ if you can follow ny advice.
Please believe that where there is a will, there is a way.I hope my advice will be some help for
you.I am looking to receiving your reply as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
题型 分析
【典例】
你的英国朋友 Jim 最近开始学习中文，感觉有些难，来信希望你能给他一
些建议。请给他回信，内容包括：
1、中文难学的原因；2、你的建议及理由；3、你的祝愿。
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】题目分析
在三个写作要点里，最重要的就是第二点：你的建议及理由。所以提建议
的句式，就是我们今天要说的重点。
首先来看看范文里写到了什么。
1、It’s great to know that you have begun to learn Chinese!
2、You say you find Chinese difficult to learn.
3、I quite understand your problem.
给对方提建议的典型开场，就是把题目里的基本背景描述一遍，基本上没
有什么难度。需要注意的只有一个短语“find sth adj to do 发现某事做起来
怎么样”，按照意思自己就能替换出很多不一样的短语。
find some novels interesting to read
发现一些小说读起来很有意思
find voluntary activities important to get involved
发现参加志愿者活动很重要
4 、 Different from your language, most Chinese characters are from
images.
5 、 For English, most of time, you’ll know how to pronounce a
word when you see it. But it is impossible in Chinese.
6 、 In addition, Chinese grammar is totally different from English
grammar. That definitely brings you more trouble.
这部分内容在其它的建议类写作中涉及的可能性不大，所以我们简单地说
一下。范文谈到中文难学的原因，主要谈了三件事：汉字的来源、发音和语法，
而这三件事的写作，全都基于同一个写作手法——对比。
和英文不一样，中文来源于图画。
英文看到就知道发音，但是中文不可能。
中文和英文语法完全不同，会带来更多麻烦。
也就是说，在写到某事物的特点的时候，对比是个不错的写作思路，比如：
The Great Wall enjoys a long history.
长城历史悠久。
就可以改写成：
Compared with many other wonders around the world, the Great Wall
enjoys a much longer history.
和世界上很多其它的奇观相比，长城有更加悠久的历史。
你看，句子内容是不是变得丰富一些了？
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】然后是这篇文章的重点：提建议的部分。
7、However, any learning takes time. Don’t worry.
首先是一个过渡句，使用 However 完成“问题—建议”的转折。
8、I suggest you start with Pinyin, which will help you know how to
read Chinese characters.
提建议的句式一：直接使用 suggest 这样的表示建议的动词，同时配合定语
从句 which 描述按照建议做之后的结果。
9 、 Besides, listening to Chinese songs or watching Chinese
movies will also help.
提建议的句式二：使用动名词作主语，“doing sth will help 做某事会有
帮助”。
10、The more you are exposed to the language, the more familiar you
will get with it.
提建议的句式三：“比较级，比较级”，表示“越……，就越……”，第
一个比较级后面加建议的动作，第二个比较级后面加正面的结果。
“be exposed to sth 接触到某物”，“get familiar with sth 熟悉某
物”，这是核心词汇短语，必须熟悉。
最后是结束语的部分，基本上就是一些套话，没有难度。
11、I wish you every success in learning the language!
12、If you have any further questions, feel free to ask. Good luck!
范文看完以后，你会发现，建议类应用文需要掌握的就是两点：
建议的主题相关语句：给予对方的肯定、引出建议的过渡句、开场和收尾
提出建议的具体句式：各种不同的提建议的方式
在下一篇文章里，我们会进一步了解这两方面具体的写法。
全文呈现
It’s great to know that you have begun to learn Chinese! You say you
find Chinese difficult to learn. I quite understand your problem.
Different from your language, most Chinese characters are from
images. For English, most of time, you’ll know how to pronounce a word
when you see it. But it is impossible in Chinese. In addition, Chinese
grammar is totally different from English grammar. That definitely
brings you more trouble.
However, any learning takes time. Don’t worry. I suggest you start
with Pinyin, which will help you know how to read Chinese characters.
Besides, listening to Chinese songs or watching Chinese movies will also
help. The more you are exposed to the language, the more familiar you
will get with it.
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】I wish you every success in learning the language! If you have any
further questions, feel free to ask. Good luck!
【题型训练】
1．（2023·全国·统考高考真题） 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人
一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包
括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken
English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within
the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the
conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel
uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have
difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose
their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their
spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students
choose their own partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language
abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation,
leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they
don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从
句）
2．（2023·广东·华南师大附中校考三模）你是高中学生李华，你的英国朋友 Anna计划明
年夏天高中毕业后来中国游玩，准备提前学一点汉语。她来email询问你关于汉语学习的
建议。请给Anna回信，主要内容包括：
1.学习难点；
2.方法建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Anna,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_
Best regards,
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】Li Hua
【答案】Sample 1:
Dear Anna,
It’s wonderful to hear you’re planning to visit China and learning Chinese! I am thrilled to
offer some advice that may help you along your language learning journey.
Firstly, one of the biggest challenges of learning Chinese is the pronunciation and tones. The
four basic tones in Chinese can be tricky, and even slight variations in tone can change the
meaning of a word. Listening to native speakers and practicing with a tutor or language partner
can help you to develop your ear for the language and improve your pronunciation. Another
challenge is getting used to the grammar. Chinese sentence structure is quite different from that of
English, so it may take some time to adjust. I suggest starting with basic sentence patterns and
gradually working your way up to more complex structures. It may also be helpful to focus on
learning practical vocabulary related to travel, such as directions, transportation, and ordering
food. This will enable you to communicate more effectively during your trip.
I hope these tips are helpful to you, and I wish you the best of luck in your language learning
journey. Don’t forget to have fun exploring the language and culture of China!
Yours,
Li Hua
Sample 2:
Dear Anna,
Thank you for your email. I’m so looking forward to your visit to China and I think it’s a
great idea to learn some Chinese before you come.
English-speaking people often think Chinese is difficult to learn because we don’t use the
alphabet, but in practice it is not as difficult as it seems once you begin. What is much harder is
the pronunciation, as the same sound with different tones would mean different things and
correspond to different characters. I think the best advice about learning a language is to try to do
a little every day — that’s much more effective, in my opinion, than doing a lot once a week or
once a fortnight. It’d be sensible to have some lessons, but you’d have to do a lot of work on your
own in between the lessons if you want to make good progress. Although pronunciation is difficult
at first, I think that’s what you should concentrate on. Don’t worry too much about the writing of
the characters. That way you’ll be able to communicate, even if you don’t know how to write.
Have fun in learning Chinese and enjoy the preparation process for your visit to China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给计划明年夏天高中毕业后来中国游玩并准
备学点汉语的英国朋友Anna写一封关于汉语学习建议的信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的：thrilled→excited
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】习惯：get used to→become used to
有帮助的：be helpful→be of help
适应：adjust→adapt
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I suggest starting with basic sentence patterns and gradually working your way up to more
complex structures.
拓展句：I suggest that you start with basic sentence patterns and gradually work your way up to
more complex structures.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Listening to native speakers and practicing with a tutor or language
partner can help you to develop your ear for the language and improve your pronunciation.(运用
了动名词短语作主语)
【高分句型2】It may also be helpful to focus on learning practical vocabulary related to travel,
such as directions, transportation, and ordering food.(运用了it作形式主语，不定式作真正主语
的结构)
3．（2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈师大附中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友
Caroline来信说她打算参加所在学校举办的文化节活动并介绍中国文化，想请你从下列主
题中推荐一项：1.传统节日；2.文字发展。请你给她回信，内容包括：
1.你的建议；
2.推荐理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Caroline,
Glad to receive your letter. With regard to the matter you mentioned, I’m writing to offer
some suggestions.
I propose a brief introduction to the Chinese writing system be a good choice. To start
with,China is widely known for its incredible civilization. Written Chinese becomes an important
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】means by which China’s present is connected with its past. Moreover, Chinese writing is a
significant part of the culture, known as Chinese calligraphy.Today, many people enjoy practicing
this classic art,making it popular both at home and abroad.
Hope my suggestions can help. If you have any question, please feel free to tell me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Caroline.
Glad to receive your letter. With regard to the matter you mentioned, I’m writing to offer
some suggestions.
I propose Chinese traditional festivals. To start with, China is widely known for its rich
history. Over 5000 years’ history has witnessed the creation of many Chinese traditional festivals.
You can talk about the Chinese new year, the Mid-autumn festivals, or the Dragon boat festival,
each of which has incredible stories behind. Moreover, celebrations of traditional festivals can
reflect people’s lifestyles. You can even compare festivals and their celebrations with the similar
ones in your country.
Hope my suggestions can help. If you have any question, please feel free to tell me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Caroline写封回信，向她推荐一
个主题以帮助她参加其学校举办的文化节活动并介绍中国文化。
【详解】1.词汇积累
关于：with regard to→ in reference to/concerning/as to
首先：to start with→ first of all/firstly
此外：moreover→ what’s more/besides
重要的：significant → important
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Today, many people enjoy practicing this classic art, making it popular both at home and
abroad.
拓展句：Today, many people enjoy practicing this classic art, which makes it popular both at
home and abroad.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Written Chinese becomes an important means by which China’s present
is connected with its past.（运用了which引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】If you have any question, please feel free to tell me.（运用了if引导的状语从
句）
4．（2023·北京海淀·三模）假设你是红星中学学生会“环保部”部长李华。你的英国好友
Jim的学校正在征集主题为“Beat Plastic Pollution”的环境保护活动方案，他一时没有想法，
写信请你给提供建议。请你用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】1. 简要介绍你的设计方案及理由；
2. 询问意见并表达祝愿。
注意：1．词数 100 左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
____
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Extremely thrilled to know that you are calling for activity plans themed “Beat Plastic Pollution”,
I feel it my privilege to offer mine, hoping to give you a hand.
First, it is a wise choice to propagandize the using of cloth bags instead of plastic bags in school
and call for students to spread the behavior to the people around them. Second, make a rule that
students should be prevented from using plastic bags, encouraging the use of degradable plastic
bags. Finally, collecting and recycling plastic bags are easy to be conducted in school.
I sincerely hope my plan is of benefit to you.
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。假设你是红星中学学生会“环保部”部长李华。你
的英国好友Jim的学校正在征集主题为“Beat Plastic Pollution”的环境保护活动方案，他一
时没有想法，写信请你给提供建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
激动的：thrilled→excited/full of excitement
提供：offer→provide/supply
规章制度：rule→regulation
有益的：be of benefit→be beneficial
2.句式拓展：
原句：I sincerely hope my plan is of benefit to you
拓展句：I sincerely hope my plan that I mentioned above is of benefit to you
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Second, make a rule that students should be prevented from using plastic bags, encouraging the
use of degradable plastic bags.(运用了that引导同位语从句，现在分词作状语。)
【高分句型2】
Extremely thrilled to know that you are calling for activity plans themed “Beat Plastic Pollution”,
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】I feel it my privilege to offer mine, hoping to give you a hand.(运用了形容词作状语，that引导
宾语从句，过去分词作后置定语以及现在分词作状语。)
5．（2023春·陕西·高三专题练习）假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter想来你所在城市大
学留学。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐2-3所大学；
2. 你推荐的理由；
3. 你对Peter的希望。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Chris,
Hearing that you want to come to our city, Beijing, for further education, I am more than glad
to express my warmest welcome and offer you some advice.
Considering your excellent academic performance, I recommend you apply for Peking
University or Tsinghua University, both of which are among the first universities to enroll
international students in China. Besides, with their profound culture, high-quality instruction, rich
variety of courses and abundant research opportunities, the two universities attract students and
scholars from all over the world. I’m sure the ideal academic atmosphere will feed your need of
studying.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true. If you have further questions, don’t hesitate to
contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter想来所在城市大学
留学，要求你给英国朋友Peter回一封电子邮件，推荐2-3所大学，并阐述推荐的理由以及
你对他的希望。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
表达：express→extend
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】优秀的：excellent→outstanding
满足：feed→satisfy
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that you want to come to our city, Beijing, for further education, I am more than
glad to express my warmest welcome and offer you some advice.
拓展句：I am more than glad to hear that you want to come to our city, Beijing, for further
education, and I’m writing to express my warmest welcome and offer you some advice.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Hearing that you want to come to our city, Beijing, for further
education, I am more than glad to express my warmest welcome and offer you some advice. (运用
了非谓语动词作状语以及that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型 2】Considering your excellent academic performance, I recommend you apply for
Peking University or Tsinghua University, both of which are among the first universities to enroll
international students in China. (运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句、虚拟语气以及“both of
which”引导的非限制性定语从句)
6．（2023·重庆·统考三模）假定你是学生李华，你的南非朋友Louis对中国古代四大名著
很感兴趣，希望你能给他推荐其中的一部。请你用英语给Louis回信，内容包括：
1. 简要介绍一本名著；
2. 说明你推荐的理由。
注意：
1. 词数80左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：
《三国演义》Romance of the Three Kingdoms
《水浒传》Water Margin
《西游记》Journey to the West
《红楼梦》A Dream of Red Mansions
Dear Louis,
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Li Hua
【答案】Possible version
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】Dear Louis,
I’m glad you’re fond of our traditional culture and the China’s four great classical novels. I
will recommend Journey to the West to you at your request.
Journey to the West tells the story of Tang Xuanzang and his three disciples who go to India
for Buddhist scriptures. During their journey, they bravely face a series of dangers and finally
conquer those devils and monsters. This book is not only interesting in content and vivid in
language, but also conveys a spirit of courage. In our daily life, we are bound to meet with all
kinds of challenges. We should be brave and never give up.
The book is well worth reading. I hope you will like it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的名义给朋友Louis介绍四大名著中
的一部，并说明推荐的理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted/pleased
勇敢地：bravely→courageously
战胜：conquer→beat/defeat
各种各样的：all kinds of→a vareity of/vareities of
2.句型拓展
陈述句变到状语
原句：This book is not only interesting in content and vivid in language, but also conveys a spirit
of courage.
拓展句：Not only is this book interesting in content and vivid in language, but also it conveys a
spirit of courage.
【点睛】[高分句型 1]Journey to the West tells the story of Tang Xuanzang and his three
disciples who go to India for Buddhist scriptures.（运用了who引导的限制性定语从句）
[高分句型 2]I’m glad you’re fond of our traditional culture and the China’s four great classical
novels.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句）
7．（2023·广东·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Hans来信请你为他负责策划的4
月20日“中文日”班级庆祝活动提建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1.来信收悉；
2.提出活动建议；
3.望录制和分享。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Hans,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Hans,
I’m glad to hear you will hold an activity on the “Chinese Language Day”. Here are some
tips to make it amazing and educational.
First, engaging audience in entertaining activities is the key. It can start with Chinese
calligraphy show demonstrating the beauty of Chinese characters. Then, why not hold a Chinese
speech contest to highlight the unmatched charm of this elegant language? After that, it could be
wrapped up with “Jasmine”, a traditional Chinese song, which will certainly impress the audience.
I am sure this will be a feast of culture and I sincerely hope you could record this
unforgettable show and share your achievement with me!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Hans回复邮件，为他负责策划的
4月20日“中文日”班级庆祝活动提建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
以……开始：start with→begin with
比赛：contest→competition
真诚地：sincerely→genuinely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First, engaging audience in entertaining activities is the key.
拓展句：First, what matters is to engage audience in entertaining activities.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】I’m glad to hear you will hold an activity on the “Chinese Language
Day”. （运用了省略that的宾语从句）
【高分句型 2】After that, it could be wrapped up with “Jasmine”, a traditional Chinese song,
which will certainly impress the audience.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
8．（2023·山西朔州·怀仁市第一中学校校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jeff
来信说他痴迷于刷短视频，对学习失去了兴趣，很苦恼。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.肯定短视频在某些方面的好处；
2.你的建议；
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jeff,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jeff,
I’m sorry to hear that you are addicted to short videos and lack interest in learning. I’m
writing to offer you some suggestions.
Short videos do have some benefits. We can release pressure, share good times, cherish
memories, etc. However, in my opinion, firstly, you should strike a balance between leisure
activities and learning. Only on the premise of self-consciousness can we benefit from modern
technologies rather than being slaves of such new technologies. You should focus on study, and
don’t waste your time on distractions. Secondly, you can join your friends in playing various
sports activities, such as running, cycling or playing basketball, etc.
I hope my suggestions will be of some help for you. I believe you can make it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友 Jeff写封信，肯定短视频在某些
方面的好处，对他沉迷刷短视频提点建议，并表达祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：offer→provide
建议：suggestion→advice
然而：however→nevertheless
各种各样的：various→a variety of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Secondly, you can join your friends in playing various sports activities, such as running,
cycling or playing basketball, etc.
拓展句：Secondly, you can join your friends in playing various sports activities, which include
running, cycling or playing basketball, etc.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you are addicted to short videos and lack interest in
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】learning. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Only on the premise of self-consciousness can we benefit from modern technologies
rather than being slaves of such new technologies. (运用了部分倒装句)
9．（2023·北京房山·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校交换生Jim打算今
年暑假回英国，想送给他的妈妈一件具有中国特色的礼物，特发来邮件就准备什么礼物向
你咨询。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1. 建议的礼物；
2. 说明选择该礼物的原因；
3. 表达祝福。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear from you! As you want to give a gift with Chinese characteristics to your
mom, I would suggest a Chinese silk scarf.
Chinese silk scarf is an excellent choice to showcase the beauty of Chinese culture. It is not
only sophisticated in pattern and design, but also comfortable to wear. Besides, there are many
patterns with rich cultural meanings to choose from. For instance, peony, lotus, and phoenix all
represent happiness, prosperity, and good luck in Chinese culture.
I hope this gift will impress your mom and bring her joy. Please convey my best regards and
best wishes to her. Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校交换生Jim打
算今年暑假回英国，想送给他的妈妈一件具有中国特色的礼物，特发来邮件就准备什么礼
物向你咨询。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggest→recommend
表达：convey→express
快乐：joy→happiness
选择：choice→option
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：It is not only sophisticated in pattern and design, but also comfortable to wear.
拓展句：Not only is it sophisticated in pattern and design, but also it is comfortable to wear.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] As you want to give a gift with Chinese characteristics to your mom, I
would suggest a Chinese silk scarf. (运用了as引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] I hope this gift will impress your mom and bring her joy. (运用了省略that的宾语
从句)
10．（2023·山西太原·太原五中校考一模）最近，你的英国笔友Jerry总是感到焦躁不安，
来信和你交流，请你回信帮助他摆脱困境。内容包括：
1.说明负面情绪的不良影响；
2.提出有效的建议；
3.安慰并表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jerry,
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jerry,
I am awfully sorry to learn you have been trapped in a bad mood.
Actually, negative emotions are unavoidable, but don’t let it occupy the whole of you for too
long. Uneasiness and worry are infectious. Not only does it harm you, but also the people around
you. To overcome the bad situation, you could try some useful ways. For example, working out
regularly, I think, is a nice choice, which can relieve you of your terrible feelings. Another choice
is that you could turn to books about famous people. Getting a glimpse of their life helps you to
get to know more about the beauty of our own life.
Anyway, there is always a way out. Don’t worry too much. Beautiful life is just ahead
waiting for us to explore.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友 Jerry写封信，帮助他摆脱困境，
内容包括：1.说明负面情绪的不良影响；2.提出有效的建议；3.安慰并表达祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】非常：awfully→extremely
实际上：actually→as a matter of fact
有用的：useful→helpful
选择：choice→option
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To overcome the bad situation, you could try some useful ways.
拓展句：You could try some useful ways that can help you overcome the bad situation.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Not only does it harm you, but also the people around you. (运用了部分
倒装句)
[高分句型2] For example, working out regularly, I think, is a nice choice, which can relieve you
of your terrible feelings. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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