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专题 11 书面表达之书信体题(1)
建议信&感谢信
建议信是生活中常见的一种文体,是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人，也
可能是写给某个组织或机构,信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简
明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
感谢信是用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助、以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。信件不适宜过长，只需写明
感谢他人的理由，信文要感情真挚，措辞得体。
感谢信一般分为三个部分：
第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因；
第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助；
第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。
(2018年全国卷I) 假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件问你询问有关习俗，
请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 到达时间；
2. 合适的礼物；
3. 餐桌礼仪。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
试题分析
近几年新课标全国Ⅰ卷的书面表达一直很稳定。形式上看为提纲类书信体作文，内容上依然为彰显中
国传统文化突出中国传统价值观。今年作文考题与2017 年考题的汉语提示内容有相同点，即既注重对时
间表达的考查，又突出了中国元素之礼仪之邦涵盖的礼尚往来与餐桌礼仪。本题也具有以往试卷的半开放
式的命题特点，这就要求我们适当地增加细节，以使文章内容充实、行文连贯。需要注意的是，本文是一
封回信，考生内容上要兼顾这些细节，才能把分数拿到更高。在书信体告知中，一般会使用第三人称和第
二人称交替进行写作，时态应该以一般现在时为主。One possible version,
Dear Terry,
I’m glad to hear you will pay a visit to your Chinese friend and inquire some Chinese traditional customs. I’d love
to introduce some to you.
First, being on time is one of the most important for Chinese. So I suggest you arriving five to ten minutes earlier.
In addition, some suitable gifts such as fruits or flowers should be chosen. However, an umbrella as a gift is
considered to bring bad luck to the receiver. Remember to avoid it. Finally, you should pay special attention to
Chinese table manners. For example, you can’t take up your chopsticks until the host, especially the elders do.
Wish you a good time with your Chinese friends.
Yours
Lihua
(2019年浙江卷）假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮
件，内容包括:
1.表示感谢；
2.回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3.临别祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右；
2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Chris,
I am so regretful to know that you are going to return to your home before long. We get along well during
your stay in China and you offered me lots of help. I would like to express my gratitude to you for your help with
my English. While studying in China, you always spent your free time in helping me polish up my oral English. It
is you who shared me with rich knowledge of English and English culture. Never will I forget you and your
kindness. It is my hope that you can remember me as often as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
建议信模板①
Dear________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some
conducive suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to
further details.
Good luck with your________________(祝愿).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建
议的主题).
Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also
helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)
As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建
议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hope ____________(表达愿望)。
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
感谢信
模板一
Dear ________(对象),
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for________________________________(感谢的原因). If it had
not been for your assistance in________________________________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would
have been________________________________(没有对方帮助会产生的后果).
Everyone agrees that it was you who ________________________________(给出细节). Again, I would like
to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere thanks.Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板二
Dear ______,
How about your life/ study/ work? I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____(感谢的原因). If it had
not been your assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_____ (没有对方帮助时的
后果).
During the ______, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First, you _____.What’s
more, you ______. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is _______. (原因)
Thanks a lot for your kindness again. (再次致谢)
Give my best regards to ______. (祝愿)
Yours sincerely
_______
1．（2023•广东茂名•统考一模）假如你是李华，你的英国好友Mary给你发来邮件，说居家上网课时注意
力难以集中，她担心成绩落后，因此向你求助。请你回复她， 内容包括：
1. 安慰；
2. 建议；
3. 祝愿。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mary,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mary,
Terribly sorry to learn that you have trouble in studying online. Don’t worry about your falling behind. Here are my
suggestions.
How about tidying up your desk, which will keep you away from all the distractions. What’s more, turn off all the
apps that will disturb you. Last but not least, it is of importance for you to engage yourself in the class actively like
sharing your views and discussing problems because it leaves you no room for being absent-minded.
Hopefully, these proposals will be of some help to you. Best wishes for your improvement.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你的英国好友Mary给你发来邮件，说居家上网课时
注意力难以集中，她担心成绩落后，因此向你求助。请你回复她， 内容包括：1.安慰；2.建议；3.祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
得知：learn→ know
建议：suggestion → advice
此外：what’s more→besides
参加：engage in→ participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hopefully, these proposals will be of some help to you.
拓展句：I hope that these proposals will be of some help to you.
Writing 1
1．（2023•湖南永州•统考二模）假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校本周五将举办一场关于消防安全（fire
safety）知识的讲座，请你代表校学生会写一则通知。内容包括：
1.讲座的时间、地点；
2.讲座的内容；
3.欢迎大家积极参加。注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：灭火器 fire extinguisher 火灾逃生演练 fire escape drill
Notice
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Students’ Union
【答案】Notice
To help you know more about fire safety, a lecture is scheduled to kick off at 3 pm in the lecture hall this Friday.
Firstly, the fireman invited will introduce the possible causes of a fire. Then he will show us how to use a fire
extinguisher, and how to sound the alarm. Finally, a fire escape drill is arranged to ensure us students to learn the
right steps to take in case a fire breaks out.
There is sure to be of great significance. Do come and attend the lecture.
Students’ Union
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生就本周五将举办一场关于消防安全（fire safety）知识的讲座写一则
通知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助：help→assist
启动：kick off →begin/launch/start
确保：ensure →guarantee/make sure
参加：attend→take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To help you know more about fire safety, a lecture is scheduled to kick off at 3 pm in the lecture hall this
Friday.
拓展句：To help you know more about fire safety, a lecture is scheduled to kick off at 3 pm in the lecture hall thisFriday,which will be accompanied by a fire escape drill .
Writing 2
2．（2023•河南郑州•郑州外国语学校校考模拟预测）假如你是李华， 你的美国笔友Tom来信说， 当他
了解到人工智能（AI）围棋手Master战胜了60位顶尖职业围棋高手后， 他迷上了下围棋（Go）， 希望
你能给他关于提高棋艺方面的建议。要点如下：1. 最好到中国参加培训班。2. 熟能生巧，尽量在网上对
进行对弈练习。3.多观看网上的围棋大赛直播。
注意:1. 词数100左右；2.可加入适当细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I am delighted to receive your letter, in which I’ve learned that you became a Go addict after knowing that Mater
had defeated 60 world-class professional players and asked for my advice on how to learn Go well. Here are some
tips for you.
To begin with, it is a good idea for you to register for a training class in China, where Go was born. In addition, as
the proverb says, practice makes perfect. Therefore it is advisable that you play the game online as much as
possible, preferably on a daily basis. Last but not least, I strongly recommend that you watch live broadcasts of
international games online. Not only will it help you acquire advanced Go-playing skills, but also keep you
informed of the latest trends in the Go field.
I hope my advice proves useful. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如考生是李华， 你的美国笔友Tom来信说， 当他了解到人工智能
（AI）围棋手Master战胜了60位顶尖职业围棋高手后， 他迷上了下围棋（Go）， 希望你能给他关于提
高棋艺方面的建议。【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→ pleased
建议：advice→ suggestion
获得： acquire→ obtain
因此：therefore→ thus
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Here are some tips for you.
拓展句：Here are some tips for you, which are beneficial to you.
Writing 3
3．（2023•山西太原•统考一模）假定你是李华，请你给离家读书并生病好几天的美国网友David写一封建
议信，内容包括：
1.对David目前生病状况的感受；
2.说明锻炼和学习的关系；
3.鼓励他积极锻炼身体。
注意：1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear David,
I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. You have been so absorbed in
study away from your home that you have had no time for exercise. It is really harmful to your health. I feel it
would be more beneficial to your health if you could take more exercise in the future.
In fact, exercise can contribute to your health and fresh your mind. Only when you have a strong body can you
keep on studying hard without feeling bad or ill. Otherwise, your study will be interrupted from time to time by
sickness.
In a word, exercise is as useful and important as your study. So I put forward a suggestion that you take at least onehour’s exercise every day from now on.
Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给离家读书并生病好几天的美国网友David写一封建议信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
抱歉：sorry → regrettable
沉溺于：be absorbed in → be addicted to/be indulged in
有助于：contribute to→ benefit
总之：in a word → in short/in brief
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You have been so absorbed in study away from your home that you have had no time for exercise. It is
really harmful to your health.
拓展句：You have been so absorbed in study away from your home that you have had no time for exercise,which
is really harmful to your health.
Writing 4
4．（2023•四川南充•统考一模）假定你是李华, 你的英国好友Peter准备参加“元旦汉语诗歌朗诵比赛”,
向你咨询建议。请你根据提示给他回复邮件。内容包括：
1. 朗诵选材;2. 朗诵技巧;3. 其他注意事项。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;；
2. 可以运当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
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___________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,I am delighted to hear that you are going to participate in the Chinese poetry recitation contest to be held in our
school on New Year’s Day. I am writing to offer some advice, which I hope may be of great help to you.
Considering that the coming contest is related to New Year, you’d better choose some Chinese poetry with the
theme of bidding farewell to the old year and welcoming the new year. When it comes to recitation techniques, you
are supposed to speak standard Mandarin and pay attention to using proper pronunciation, stress, intonation and
speed. In addition, practice makes perfect. Therefore, you can’t practice too many times in advance. By the way, I
have collected some classic poems that feature blessings for the new year and attached them to the mail.
If there is any problem, don’t hesitate to contact me. Hope you can take my advice into consideration and look
forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国将准备参加“元旦汉语诗歌朗诵比赛”好友 Peter写
一封邮件给出建议，其内容包括朗诵选材、朗诵技巧和其他注意事项。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice→suggestion
期待：hope→expect
帮助：help→assistance
而且：In addition→what's more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： In addition, practice makes perfect.
拓展句： In addition, it is known to us all that practice makes perfect.
Writing 5
5．（2023•四川德阳•统考一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mark发电子邮件告诉你，他最近容易发脾
气，严重影响学习和生活，请你用英语给他回复，内容如下：
1．表示理解并给予安慰；
2．提出建议并说明理由。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mark,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mark,
I am sorry to know that you are having such a bad time at the moment. Actually, it is common for people to have
one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong. So you don’t have to worry so much. Here I’d like to
give you some useful tips.
First, you can talk to someone you trust about how you feel. It is a good way to let your anger out without hurting
others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play games with your friends, for physical exercise is an effective way
to get rid of bad feelings. Third, keep optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be
helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Mark发电子邮件就他最近的情绪问题表示理解、
给予安慰并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：tips →suggestions
摆脱：get rid of→ remove
提高：lift →improve
继续：carry on→ go on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It is a good way to let your anger out without hurting others or yourself.
拓展句：It is a good way that you can let your anger out without hurting others or yourself.
二、申请信
Writing 6
6．（2023•云南•云南师大附中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，看到英国留学生 David 在网上发帖，希望有人能一对一帮助他提高汉语普通话水平，请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 希望来应聘这份工作；
2.有关个人信息；
3. 提高普通话的具体建议。
注意：1. 字数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，且该部分不计入总词数。
一对一：one-on-one
Hi David,
This is Li Hua
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文
Hi David，
This is Li Hua. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Putonghua(Mandarin Chinese)one-on-one.
If possible, I feel honored to have the chance to help you.
Please allow me to introduce myself. As a Chinese student, my biggest advantage is that I’ve been a broadcaster in
school for years, which equips me with outstanding language proficiency. When it comes to how to learn
Putonghua well, I suggest you get yourself involved in Chinese learning activities, such as exploring Chinese
culture and learning Chinese history. Another suggestion is to practice listening and speaking every day. What
about half an hour’s online video chat with me every evening? I’m right here and ready to help.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国留学生 David写一封电子邮件，告知他应聘这份工作
的意向，个人信息以及如何提高普通话的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：chance →opportunity
允许：allow →permit
建议：suggest →advise
准备好：ready →well-prepared
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Another suggestion is to practice listening and speaking every day.
拓展句：Another suggestion is that you should practice listening and speaking every day.
Writing 7
7．（2023•湖南岳阳•统考一模）假设你是中学生李华，在英国学习，担任学校中国语言与文化社社长。近
期，校学生会发布了举办“国际文化节”的通知，参加活动会有一个摊位进行宣传，请写一封邮件申请一
个摊位。内容包括：
1.你的摊位名称：中国茶艺展；
2.具体活动安排。
参考词汇：摊位 booth
注意：
1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Student Union,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Student Union,
I am Li Hua, president of China language and Culture Society. I am glad to know that the annual International
Cultural Festival is to be held soon. I am writing to apply for a booth.
The name of the booth is Chinese Tea Art Show, where we will introduce different kinds of Chinese Tea and its
benefits. Chinese tea is considered as the most beneficial drink with a long history of planting. It has become agreen, healthy and popular drink in our daily life, through which we can enjoy a healthy and pleasant life. Besides
students visiting our booth will enjoy drinking various Chinese tea.
I would appreciate it if you can take my application into account. Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。学校将举办“国际文化节”，要求考生给学生会写信申请一个摊位对中国传统
文化进行宣传。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开心的：glad→delighted
种类：kind→sort
被认为是：be considered as→be regarded as
考虑：take...into account→take...into consideration
2.句型拓展
合并句子
原句：Chinese tea is considered as the most beneficial drink with a long history of planting. It has become a green,
healthy and popular drink in our daily life, through which we can enjoy a healthy and pleasant life.
拓展句： Considered as the most beneficial drink with a long history of planting, Chinese has become a green,
healthy and popular drink in our daily life, through which we can enjoy a healthy and pleasant life.
Writing 1
1.（2022·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于
英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；
2．交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
How’s everything?
I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. Our classmates seem to be weak in
organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a
paragraph, and how to structure an essay?
The talk will last about an hour, and you can decide on a date at your convenience. Please let me know which
platform you’ll use. It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your
talk.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 2
1.（2019·全国·高考真题）假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封
信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 个人优势；
3. 能做的事情。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 结束语已为你写好。
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【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art
gallery. I think I am qualified for this job, because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood. Besides, I am
fluent in both Chinese and English, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. If I am lucky enough to
be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.
I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Li Hua
Writing 3
（2018·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应
聘，内容包括：
（1） 口语能力：
（2） 相关经验；
（3） 应聘目的。
注意：
（1） 词数80左右；
（2） 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.
I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native
speakers of English. What’s more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign
students.
I’m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and
interpersonal communication skills.
Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
Writing 4
（2017·北京·高考真题）你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：
“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你建议的线路；
2.你的理由；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m happy receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the
your along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot
about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-
known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours
Li Hua
Writing 5
1.（2021·全国·高考真题）假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。
请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1．阐明写信事由；
2．征求建议；
3．表示感谢。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Chris，
How are you doing these days? I’m writing to ask you some advice.
In order to promote Chinese traditional culture and post some class meetings on English websites, our school
is going to organise class meetings, the theme of which is traditional Chinese culture. We can choose a variety of
themes, such as calligraphy, martial arts, oil paintings, papercutting and so on. I’m wondering if you could let me
know which of them you like best and which of them people from outside of China are more likely to be interested
in.
Thank you for your help. I’d appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.
Yours，
Li Hua
Writing 6
2.（2021·天津·高考真题）假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母
亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回
复，内容包括：
(1) 表示感谢并问候；
(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情；
(3) 你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
注意：
(1) 词数不少于100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
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Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Nancy,
I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me duringmy study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.
Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I'm going toTian
'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy the
elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid
development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to
join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for
consultation. Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient.
Yours,
Li Jin
Writing 7
3．（2019·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给
他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3. 临别祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude
to you for your help.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional
guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank
first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out,
which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strongenough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 8
1. （2017·北京·高考真题）你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：
“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.你建议的线路；
2.你的理由；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m happy receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the
your along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot
about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-
known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours
Li Hua
