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强化练(三十八) 书面表达(2) (限时：30 分钟)
Ⅰ.作文升档
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友
Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括：
1．成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)；
2．对活动的感受；
3．对自己未来的展望。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：成人礼the coming-of-age ceremony；新冠肺炎COVID-19
Dear Chris，
I’m so glad to hear from you.
Yours，
Li Jin
学生习作
Dear Chris ，
I ’ m so glad to hear from you. ①In your last letter，I’ve learned that you want to know
about the coming-of-age ceremony of our school.②The following is a short introduction to the
ceremony.
③The ceremony was held on June 8，and during it we reviewed the past events and
watched some videos about the brave deeds of our schoolmates in the battle against
COVID-19.④We were deeply moved by their deeds.⑤We decided to follow the examples of our
excellent schoolmates and make ourselves useful to the whole society.⑥Through the ceremony，
we realize that the sense of responsibility always accompanies the process of our growth.⑦Such is
my understanding about growing up.⑧What about yours?
⑨Looking forward to your reply.
Yours ，
Li Jin
我来提升档次作文升档第一步 让词汇高级亮丽
利用高级词汇升级文中黑体词汇
1．want to know→
2．short→
3．was held→
4．brave→
5．decided to→
作文升档第二步 让句式丰富多变
按要求升级句式并将黑体词汇替换为升级后的词汇
1．用非限制性定语从句升级句③。
2．用过去分词作状语合并句④和句⑤。
作文升档第三步 过渡衔接更巧妙
利用适当的过渡词汇衔接升级后的作文并誊写
Dear Chris，
I’m so glad to hear from you.
Yours，
Li Jin
Ⅱ.写作演练
(2022·吉林延边质检)
假设你是李华。2022年北京冬奥会取得圆满成功，你的美国朋友Jenny发来邮件表示祝
贺，并询问中国做了哪些措施使得本届冬奥会受到世界各国的赞誉。请你写邮件告知，内容
包括：
1．表示感谢；
2．列举措施(至少两项)；
3．表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
