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组合练(九) 写作组合规范练 短文改错＋书面表达
Ⅰ.短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共
有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Good morning，everyone! I feel delight to share some of my views here.Being a better self，
I think，mean more than being excellent in study but being a all-round person.
To be a better self ， we should recognize us correctly by knowing our strengths and
weakness.Based on self-recognition，we need to take action to enhance that we are good at and
gain experience our failures.We need to keep a good state of mind but believe ourselves.It is also
essential to improve our ability to communicate proper and address difficulties.
Let’s strive with our utmost efforts.I’m convinced that you can，and I can，to be a better
self.Thank you!
答案
Good morning，everyone! I feel to share some of my views here.Being a better self，I
think， more than being excellent in study but being all-round person.
To be a better self，we should recognize correctly by knowing our strengths and .Based on
self-recognition，we need to take action to enhance we are good at and gain experience
\s\up7(∧) our failures.We need to keep a good state of mind believe ourselves.It is also
essential to improve our ability to communicate and address difficulties.
Let’s strive with our utmost efforts.I’m convinced that you can，and I can，to be a better
self.Thank you!
Ⅱ.书面表达
(2022·江西宜春质检)
假定你是李华，为丰富校园生活，你校上周举行了“学生才艺大赛”，请你根据所给提
示，向你校英文周刊写一篇短文报道此次活动。
1．活动目的；
2．活动简介；
3．活动反响。
注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：学生才艺大赛Student Talent Show
参考范文
Aiming to enrich the school life，an activity themed “Student Talent Show” was held in
our school last week，attracting 16 students to participate.
The activity lasted from Monday to Saturday，during which students of talent signed up，
prepared and competed.The competition fell on Saturday afternoon，when students from all grades
showed their great talents.Some amazed us with their beautiful voices while others showed their
incredible dancing skills.However，what impressed us the most was the one who danced to a rap
while playing a tongue twister.
The activity was a huge success and had a positive effect on everyone involved.It’s firmly
believed that such an event will not only improve students’ ability but also fuel their enthusiasm
towards their lives.
