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组合练(十二) 写作组合规范练 短文改错＋书面表达
Ⅰ.短文改错
(2022·安徽宣城调研)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共
有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In your email，you ask me for some suggestions about how to have a healthy family.Here is
my advice.Generally spoken，a healthy family needs efforts of every family member.First，it is
obviously that parents should treat their children equally，that is important for the family.What’s
more，children or parents can benefit from having some day-to-day routines.In the addition，
every member should give other member right expectations.Finally，you should love my own
family life.In a word，if you want to own a healthy family，it is the positive attitude that are of
great importance.I would appreciate very much if you could write back and give me your own
opinion.
答案
In your email，you me for some suggestions about how to have a healthy family.Here is my
advice.Generally ，a healthy family needs efforts of every family member.First，it is that parents
should treat their children equally， is important for the family.What’s more，children parents
can benefit from having some day-to-day routines.In the addition，every member should give
other right expectations.Finally，you should love own family life.In a word，if you want to
own a healthy family ， it is the positive attitude that of great importance.I would
appreciate\s\up7(∧) very much if you could write back and give me your own opinion.
Ⅱ.书面表达
在学校刚举办的科技创新设计大赛中，你设计的一款老人智能陪护机器人荣获一等奖。
请以“My Intelligent Robot for the Elderly”为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括：
1．设计理由；
2．功能介绍；
3．你的期望。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．标题已给出，不计入总词数。My Intelligent Robot for the Elderly
参考范文
My Intelligent Robot for the Elderly
As we all know ， with the development of economy ， people have to face various
pressures.They don’t have enough time to attend to the old people in their families，which has
become a social problem.To solve this problem，I designed a kind of household robot，which is
intended to take care of old people.
It can cook meals at a fixed time which can be adjusted according to individual needs.It can
also accompany old people in having a chat，playing chess，and doing exercise.Moreover，it can
deal with emergencies.For example，if an old man falls ill suddenly，the robot will call doctors
for help.It would be a great help for us if we own such a robot.
I do hope everyone can find my robot beneficial to them.
