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热点 04 人物介绍之应用文写作押题
纵览高考命题思路，2023年全国甲卷应用文写作中考到人物介绍的话题，虽然新高考卷没有出现，但是
人物介绍依然是写作的热点话题，人物介绍主要要写该人物是谁，主要贡献是什么，该人物的影响等，所
以平常考生要多积累人物介绍的素材，才能在考试中游刃有余。
（一）人物简介的写作步骤；(概,貌,育,平,估)
1）概.age, sex, birth-place, background
2）貌,.)appearance ,character
3）育,education
4）平, big events in his or her life ( in order of time )
5）估.evaluation
(二) 语法，句法高分技巧
A. 概况 （尽量用同位语结构，分词)
B．外貌,性格 (巧用with做定语)
C. 教育经历 (注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼)
D．生平 (尽量用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章)
E．评估 （注意运用一些动词,形容词等短语，词组）
典例分析
（2023·浙江丽水·统考期末）假定你是李华，将参加学校举行的以“The Person I am Especially Moved by”
为主题的英文演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 人物介绍；
2. 感动原因；
3. 对你的影响。
注意：1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
It’s my privilege to deliver a speech here. Of all the most respectable people, I am especially moved by Zhong
Nanshan.
This 85-year-old man with gray hair works really hard, for the people, for the motherland, for his
responsibility. He is one of Chinese heroes volunteering many times to fight against pandemics. The picture of him
resting on the high-speed rail seat made us touched and tearful. Such great contribution did he make that he was
awarded the Medal of the Republic. His deeds and spirit do make a great difference to me.
Thank you.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为即将参加学校举行的英文演讲比赛写一篇英文演讲稿，主
题为“The Person I am Especially Moved by”，内容包括：人物介绍；感动原因；对你的影响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
荣耀：privilege→honor
发表演讲：deliver a speech→make a speech
祖国：motherland→homeland
责任：responsibility→duty
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This 85-year-old man with gray hair works really hard, for the people, for the motherland, for his
responsibility.
拓展句：This 85-year-old man whose hair is gray works really hard, for the people, for the motherland, for his
responsibility.
【点睛】[高分句型1] He is one of Chinese heroes volunteering many times to fight against pandemics. (运用了
非谓语动词做后置定语)
[高分句型2] Such great contribution did he make that he was awarded the Medal of the Republic. (运用了倒装句
即在“such…that+句子”句型中，such位于句首，该部分用部分倒装)
（建议用时：10分钟/篇）1．（2023上·山东·高三校联考开学考试）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter对中国文学作品感兴趣，来
信请你介绍一位中国古代文学作家及其作品，请你给他写一封e-mail，内容如下：
1.介绍一位中国古代文学作家及其作品；
2.说明你喜欢的理由。
注意：1、词数 80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m glad to know that you are interested in Chinese classic works. Now I am writing to introduce Sushi and his
works to you.
Sushi lived in Song Dynasty in ancient China. During his life, he created many works, including poems and
many essays. I have read a lot of his works, and one poem called Ode to Chibi is my favorite, which described one
big war breaking out on the Yangtze River.
I admire Sushi for his great contributions to the literature and his high spirit when facing challenges. I am sure
you will also like his works.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Peter写封e-mail，介绍一位中国古代文学作家及
其作品。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
给……取名：call→name
肯定的：sure→certain
对……感兴趣：be interested in→show interest in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：During his life, he created many works, including poems and many essays.
拓展句：During his life, he created many works, which included poems and many essays.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m glad to know that you are interested in Chinese classic works. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I have read a lot of his works, and one poem called Ode to Chibi is my favorite, which described one
big war breaking out on the Yangtze River. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2．（2023·浙江金华·统考模拟预测）下周，你将参与你校与英国友好学校举办的“我最喜爱的艺术家”线
上交流活动。请你准备一篇英语发言稿。内容包括：
1.介绍你最喜爱的艺术家及其代表作；
2.说明理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】Dear all,
It is my pleasure to share with you today about my favorite artist, Vincent van Gogh. Van Gogh was a Dutch
post-impressionist painter, best known for his vivid and expressive use of color. One of his most famous works is
“Starry Night”, which depicts the night sky over a village in France. The swirling stars and bold brushstrokes make
the painting come to life, conveying a sense of movement and emotion.
I admire van Gogh because of his ability to convey intense emotions through his art. He had a difficult life,
struggling with mental illness and poverty, but he found comfort and meaning in his painting. His dedication and
passion for art are truly inspiring to me.
Thank you for listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将与英国友好学校举办的“我最喜爱的艺术家”线上交流活动，
要求考生准备一篇英语发言稿，介绍自己最喜爱的艺术家及其代表作，并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
乐事：pleasure → enjoyment/delight
知名的：known → renowned/famous
描绘：depict → portray
因为：because of → due to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Van Gogh was a Dutch post-impressionist painter, best known for his vivid and expressive use of color.
拓展句：Van Gogh, who is best known for his vivid and expressive use of color, was a Dutch post-impressionist
painter.
【点睛】[高分句型1] One of his most famous works is “Starry Night”, which depicts the night sky over a villagein France. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型 2] The swirling stars and bold brushstrokes make the painting come to life, conveying a sense of
movement and emotion. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语)
3．（2023上·湖北襄阳·高三校联考期中）假如你是红星中学校报记者李华，请你为中学生英语报社写一篇
新闻报道，内容包括：
人物 王宗源，男，2001年10月24日出生于湖北襄阳
杭州亚运会获得两枚跳水金牌。六岁前学习体操，游泳，后转跳水，2017年进国家跳水队。曾
事件
获2021年东京奥运会男子跳水冠军。
个人感
……
想
注意：1．写作字数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Among the outstanding figures shining at the Hangzhou Asian Games, Wang Zongyuan is absolutely an
impressive one, who demonstrated his exceptional power and won 2 diving gold medals for China. Born on
October 24th, 2001, Wang Zongyuan spent most of his childhood practicing gymnastics in his hometown,
Xiangyang, hubei province. Then he was discovered as a talented diver. After joining in the national swimming
team in 2017, Wang got his first world champion in Tokyo Olympics in 2001, which opened his remarkable journey
in the swimming world.
Not only does Wang Zongyuan devote his own power to the diving event of China, but he also sets a good example
to the young swimmers in China.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给中学生英语报社写一篇新闻报道，报道杭州亚运会两枚跳
水金牌获得者王宗源的事迹。
【详解】1.词汇积累
优秀的：outstanding → superb
完全地：absolutely→ completely
表现，显露：demonstrate →show
非凡的：remarkable →extraordinary
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Born on October 24th, 2001, Wang Zongyuan spent most of his childhood practicing gymnastics in his
hometown, Xiangyang, hubei province.拓展句：Wang Zongyuan ,who was born on October 24th, 2001, spent most of his childhood practicing
gymnastics in his hometown, Xiangyang, hubei province.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Among the outstanding figures shining at the Hangzhou Asian Games, Wang Zongyuan
is absolutely an impressive one, who demonstrated his exceptional power and won 2 diving gold medals for China.
(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Not only does Wang Zongyuan devote his own power to the diving event of China, but he also sets
a good example to the young swimmers in China. (运用了部分倒装句)
4．（2023上·山东潍坊·高三统考阶段练习）假定你是李华，你班本周 Class Report的主题是A Man of
Perseverance。请你写一篇发言稿。内容包括：
1. 人物事迹简介；
2. 给你的启示。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone. Today, I’d like to share a story about a man of perseverance.
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Thanks for your listening.
【答案】One possible version:
Good morning, everyone. Today, I’d like to share a story about a man of perseverance.
Thomas Edison, the great inventor, faced numerous failures before his groundbreaking success. He made
countless attempts to invent the electric light bulb, experiencing over a thousand failures. However, instead of
giving up, he famously said, “I have not failed. I’ve just found 10,000 ways that won’t work.” His tenacity and
refusal to accept defeat ultimately led him to success, forever changing the world.
This story teaches me a valuable lesson about perseverance. It reminds me that failure is not a reason to quit
but an opportunity to learn and grow. It is through persistence that we can overcome obstacles and achieve our
goals.
In conclusion, let us remember the words of Thomas Edison and embrace perseverance in our own lives.
Thanks for your listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生写一篇主题为 A Man of Perseverance的发言稿参加本周
的课堂报告，需简要介绍人物事迹，并分享自己得到的启示。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
无数的：numerous→countless, numberless, innumerable
经历：experience→undergo, go through放弃：give up→quit, abandon
宝贵的：valuable→precious, treasurable
战胜：overcome→conquer, surmount
阻碍：obstacle→barrier, impediment
实现：achieve→accomplish, obtain
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：His tenacity and refusal to accept defeat ultimately led him to success, forever changing the world.
拓展句：His tenacity and refusal to accept defeat ultimately led him to success, which has forever changed the
world.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It reminds me that failure is not a reason to quit but an opportunity to learn and grow. (运用
了连接词that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It is through persistence that we can overcome obstacles and achieve our goals. (运用了It is…that…
强调句型)
5．（2023下·湖北襄阳·高三襄阳市襄州区第一高级中学校考开学考试）进入新时代，我们的身边涌现出了
许多青年榜样：如零零后消防员，零零后志愿者等。为了向青年榜样们学习，你校组织了主题为“We
Should Shoulder the Responsibility”的英语征文活动，请你投稿。
内容包括：
1. 青年榜样的突出品质；
2. 他们对你的影响；
3. 呼吁年轻人向他们学习。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We Should Shoulder the Responsibility
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【答案】We Should Shoulder the Responsibility
Nowadays, many young role models have emerged in various fields: post-00s firefighters, post-00s volunteers,
etc. They demonstrate their bravery and ambition, especially, their sense of responsibility.
They make me think about our responsibility. As a student, study is our priority and we should shoulder the
responsibility to complete our studies seriously and do solid work. Only if we are equipped with knowledge can we
better serve our country. Meanwhile, we have to grow up with physical and mental health, which is what our
beloved parents expect. That’s why we should not shirk any responsibility of love and care.
To conclude, I appeal to all the young people to learn from them and shoulder the responsibility.【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作，现要求考生写一篇“We Should Shoulder the Responsibility”英语征文投稿。
其内容包括：青年榜样的突出品质、他们对你的影响以及呼吁年轻人向他们学习。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很多：many→plenty of
特别：especially →in particular
考虑：think about→reflect on
应该：should→be supposed to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：They make me think about our responsibility.
复合句：What they did made me think about our responsibility.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Only if we are equipped with knowledge can we better serve our country.（only if放在
句首的倒装句）
【高分句型2】That’s why we should not shirk any responsibility of love and care.（why引导的表语从句）
6．（2023·河北·校联考三模）假定你是李华，受校英文报约稿，请你写一篇介绍某位名人的英语短文，刊
登在校英文报People专栏，内容包括：
1. 该人物的生平；
2. 他的主要事迹；
3. 你的评价。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】One possible version:
Yuan Longping, known as the “father of hybrid rice”, is one of China’s most famous scientists.
Yuan Longping was born in September 1930 and died in 2021, aged 91. He cultivated the world’s first high-
yielding hybrid rice, which has helped feed nearly one-fifth of the world’s population.
After fighting China’s food shortages, he turned his attention to a much bigger challenge, solving world
hunger. Since the 1980s, Yuan’s team has offered training courses in dozens of countries in Africa, the Americas
and Asia, providing a huge food source in areas with high risks of famine.
Yuan Longping’s legacy is not only the progress of hybrid rice-his curiosity, devotion, courage, perseverance,
diligence, cooperation and selflessness have left an indelible spiritual wealth to us all.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于受校英文报约稿这一情况，写一篇介绍某位名人的
英语短文，刊登在校英文报People专栏。
【详解】1.词汇积累
培育：cultivated→ breed
提供：offer →provide
巨大的：huge→ enormous
财富：wealth→ treasure
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Yuan Longping, known as the “father of hybrid rice”, is one of China’s most famous scientists.
拓展句：Yuan Longping, who is known as the “father of hybrid rice”, is one of China’s most famous scientists.
【点睛】【高分句型1】He cultivated the world’s first high-yielding hybrid rice, which has helped feed nearly
one-fifth of the world’s population. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型 2】Since the 1980s, Yuan’s team has offered training courses in dozens of countries in Africa, the
Americas and Asia, providing a huge food source in areas with high risks of famine. （运用了现在分词作状语）
7．（2023·湖南邵阳·统考二模）在2022年8月发生的重庆山火和2023年1月发生的泸定地震中涌现出了
很多青年逆行者榜样人物：00 后消防员，00 后志愿者等。你校正在组织“We Should Shoulder the
Responsibility”英语征文活动，请你投稿。
内容包括：1．青年榜样的突出品质；
2．他们对你的影响；
3．呼吁年轻人向他们学习。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．参考词汇：00后：post-2000s generation／post-00s；
3．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We Should Shoulder the Responsibility
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【答案】One possible version:
We Should Shoulder the Responsibility
Recently many young role models emerged in the mountain fire in Chongqing and the Luding earthquake, in
which post-00s firefighters, post-00s volunteers showed their bravery and ambition, especially, their sense of
responsibility.
What they did made me think about our responsibility. As young people, we have to work hard to serve thecountry. As a student, we have a responsibility to complete our studies seriously and steadfastly, enduring all kinds
of hardship. We should not escape any responsibility of love and care.
In a word, all of us young people should learn from them and shoulder our responsibility.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校组织的以“We Should Shoulder the Responsibility”为题
的英语征文活动投稿，内容包括青年榜样的品质、影响并呼吁学生向他们学习。
【详解】1.词汇积累
承担，肩负：shoulder →undertake
完成：complete →finish
忍受：endure →bear
总之：in a word →in short
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As young people, we have to work hard to serve the country.
拓展句：As young people, we have to work hard to serve the country, which can show our love for our country.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What they did made me think about our responsibility.(运用了what引导主语从句)
【高分句型2】As a student, we have a responsibility to complete our studies seriously and steadfastly, enduring
all kinds of hardship.(运用了现在分词短语作伴随状语)
8．（2023上·安徽·高三校联考期末）假定你是李华，你们班本周将举行一次英文主题班会，介绍为人类做
出突出贡献的人物。请你写一篇短文，内容包括：
1.人物简介；
2.做出的贡献；
3.你的感想。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】Tu Youyou
Tu Youyou is a great Chinese medical scientist.
Determined to help those suffering from malaria, TuYouyou devoted most of her time to finding the cure.
Luckily, her efforts paid off. In 2015, she was awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine for discovering
artemisinin, which is the key to the treatment of malaria. Behind her success were numerous failures and setbacks,
but never did she give up.
So great is her contribution to the world that she has become an idol of many people, including me. Inspiredby her story, I decide to study harder so as to realize my dream.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文，介绍一位为人类做出突出贡献的人物，包括人物简介及其所做贡献并
分享自己的感想。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
下定决心的：determined→resolved
幸运地：luckily→fortunately
努力：effort→endeavor
无数的：numerous→countless
实现：realize→achieve
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Determined to help those suffering from malaria, TuYouyou devoted most of her time to finding the cure.
拓展句：As she was determined to help those suffering from malaria, TuYouyou devoted most of her time to
finding the cure.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】In 2015, she was awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine for discovering
artemisinin, which is the key to the treatment of malaria. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Behind her success were numerous failures and setbacks, but never did she give up.（运用了介词
短语置于句首的全部倒装及否定词位于句首的部分倒装）
【高分句型3】So great is her contribution to the world that she has become an idol of many people, including
me.（运用了so+形容词前置的倒装及so... that...引导的结果状语从句）
9．（2022·辽宁·校联考模拟预测）我们身边有许许多多值得我们学习的榜样。请你以“The Power of an
Example”为题写一篇短文,投稿于你校英文报。内容包括：
1.你的学习榜样；
2.该榜样对你的影响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】One possible version:
The Power of an Example
Comrade Lei Feng, who served people wholeheartedly, is the best example that I determine to follow. March 5
is the “Learn from Lei Feng Day”. People used to sing the song “Learn from Lei Feng's good example”and do good
deeds that day, which influenced several generations of people.As for me, I impress on myself that we live to better others' lives. That way I will do all in my power to help
the people in need as well as make the most of my time to do well in all my subjects at school. All in all, I am to
have the “screw spirit” of creating extraordinary achievements in ordinary work based on my own duties.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。我们身边有许许多多值得我们学习的榜样.请考生以“The Power of an Example”
为题写一篇短文。投稿于你校英文报。
【详解】1.词汇积累
影响：affect→ influence
充分利用：make the most of →make the best of
全心全意地：with heart and soul→ wholeheartedly
帮助：assist→ help
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：In conclusion, we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper
way to make our study more efficient.
拓展句：In conclusion, we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages, finding a
proper way to make our study more efficient.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] . Comrade Lei Feng, who served people wholeheartedly, is the best example that I
determine to follow.（who引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型 2]. People used to sing the song “Learn from Lei Feng's good example”and do good deeds that day,
which influenced several generations of people.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
