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热点 05 “德、智、体、美、劳”五育之写作押题
强化“德、智、体、美、劳”教育引导，夯实全面发展基础。英语科试卷围绕人与自然、人与社会、人
与自我三大主题选材，将对体美劳教育的引导与考查内容、考查要求、考查情境有机融合。如2021年新高
考I卷考查到此话题。预测2024年“德、智、体、美、劳”五育并举仍会成为高考应用文写作的主题。
热点话题基本词汇：
favorite (最喜欢的);
taste (爱好，志趣);
read novels (读小说);
surf the Internet (上网);
chat online (在线聊天);
collect stamps (集邮);
make friends (交友);
climb mountains (爬山);
enjoy pop music (喜欢流行音乐)
亮点词汇：
develop an interest in (在……方面培养兴趣);
be fond of (喜欢);
be keen on (对……着迷);
have a taste in (喜爱);
【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】hobby (业余爱好);
be interested in (对……感兴趣);
have a great love for (非常喜爱……)
make friends with sb.(和某人交朋友);
a strong personality (个性强);
personal matters (私事);
friendly (友好的);
a close friend (一个亲密的朋友);
trust each other (互相信任);
share...with sb.(与某人分享);
keep in touch with sb. (与某人保持联系);
stay best friends with sb. (和某人保持很好的友谊);
a friend in need (患难之交)
亮点词汇：
know sb. very well(熟知某人);
precious(珍贵的);
worthy(有价值的);
understanding(善解人意的);
be loyal to(对……忠诚);
keep sb. pany.(陪伴，做伴)
physical and mental condition(身体与精神状况);
strong(强壮的);
【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】unhealthy/healthy(不健康的/健康的);
fat(太胖的);
thin(瘦的); nearsighted/short|sighted(近视的);
normal(正常的);
abnormal(不正常的);
energetic(精力旺盛的);
eating habit(饮食习惯);
eat too much junk food (吃太多的垃圾食品);
stay/keep healthy/fit(保持健康);
enough sleep(充足的睡眠);
good living habit(良好的生活习惯);
lose weight(减肥) ;
nutrition(营养)
亮点词汇
build up one's body/improve one's health(强身健体);
ease the burden(减轻负担);
be/go on a diet(节食);
overweight(太胖的);
take regular exercise(进行有规律的运动);
proper diet(合理的饮食);
be good for/do good to(对……有益处)
harmonious(和谐的);
【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】honest(诚实的);
credible (可信的);
balanced(平衡的);
social order(社会秩序);
peaceful(和平的);
sustainable development(可持续发展);
help each other(互助);
care for each other(互相关心);
have a liking for (喜爱);
build(创建);
cherish(珍惜);
public morals(社会道德)
亮点词汇
devote to(献身);
be public|spirited(有公德心的);
be concerned with (关心);
live in harmony(和谐共处)
典例分析
典例一
（2021·新高考I卷）你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 读报的经历；2. 喜爱的栏目；3. 期望和祝福。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。
Youth and Me
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【答案】Youth and Me
It has been 10 years since Youth was founded. In my memory, it is Youth that accompanies me through my
whole high school. When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of
imaginative stories. These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon. Besides, I even submitted my own
fiction to Youth. Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a
writer.
I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英文报Youth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：found→establish
沮丧的：depressed→upset
此外：besides→what’s more
得到：receive→obtain
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.
拓展句：Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of
imaginative stories. (运用了状语从句的省略和which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型 2] Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a
writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
典例二
（2021年6月浙江卷）
昨天你去学校参观了中国画的展览，请你为学校英语报写一篇宣传稿：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 你的感受；
3. 强烈推荐。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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【参考范文】
As is known to all, Chinese painting is a crucial part of our traditional cultural; therefore, with great
honor and curiosity, I paid a visit to the Chinese painting display exhibited in our school lecture hall at 9
a.m. yesterday. During my one hour and a half’s visit, I was fully exposed to a world of art. The visit includes
three parts, first of which is a brief introduction of the history of Chinese painting, traced back to 7000 years
ago. In this part, many works painted on pottery, ground and rock wall in pictures are shown. The second
part is tool display. The basic tools used are brush and ink and mineral pigments. At first, Chinese painting
was painted on pottery, ground and rock wall, and gradually developed into painting on wall, silk and paper.
In the third part of this exhibition, many paintings by famous arts are appreciated and discussed by students
and teachers., Through this visit, I fall in love with Chinese painting and I would like to recommend my
fellow students to have an amazing experience to this art show as well. And you won’t regret it.
（建议用时：25分钟/篇）
1．（2023·福建·统考一模）假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了以“The Power of Voluntary Work”为主题的
演讲比赛，请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.参加人员；
2.比赛过程；
3.活动反响。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】One possible version：
Last week, an English speech contest on “The Power of Voluntary Work” was held in our school. Students
from different grades participated in the competition. By sharing some of their most unforgettable volunteering
experiences, 20 contestants deeply impressed the audience with their vivid stories, feelings and insights. The
judges, consisting of our headmaster and teachers, also commented on each student’s performance and finally
selected the best three.
The activity, as one of the students says, will be very helpful for the better understanding of volunteering work
among middle school students, and more activities of this kind are expected.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，就学校上周日举办的以“The
Power of Voluntary Work”为主题的演讲比赛进行报道，内容包括：参赛人员、比赛过程和活动反响。
【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】【详解】1. 词汇积累
比赛：contest→competition
参赛者：contestant→competitor
参加：participate in→take part in
选择：select→choose
种类：kind→sort
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：The judges, consisting of our headmaster and teachers, also commented on each student’s performance and
finally selected the best three.
拓 展 句 ： The judges, who consisted of our headmaster and teachers, also commented on each student’s
performance and finally selected the best three.
【点睛】【高分句型1】By sharing some of their most unforgettable volunteering experiences, 20 contestants
deeply impressed the audience with their vivid stories, feelings and insights.（运用了介词后接动名词短语的形
式作方式状语）
【高分句型 2】The activity, as one of the students says, will be very helpful for the better understanding of
volunteering work among middle school students, and more activities of this kind are expected.（运用了以as引导
的状语从句作插入语的结构和以and引导的并列句）
2．（2023·山东枣庄·统考一模）假定你是李华，你校英文报正在开展“The Sports I Like”征文比赛。请用
英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1.喜爱的体育运动；
2.喜爱的原因；
3.运动的收获。
注意：词数80左右；
The Sports I Like
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【答案】The Sport I Like
When it comes to sports, I like basketball best. It is a ball game between two teams, each consisting of five
players. It requires speed, strength, talent as well as skills.
Basketball has been an important part in my life ever since I was introduced to it at the age of 9. For one thing,
it helps build up my body, enabling me to be energetic and dynamic all the time. For another, it has taught me to
value teamwork over individual performance.
【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】Basketball fills my days with wonders and challenges. I will keep playing basketball in the rest of my life.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇说明文，要求考生介绍一项自己喜欢的运动并陈述理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
由……组成：consist of→be made up of
重要的：important→significant
珍惜：value→cherish
个人的：individual→personal
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：For one thing, it helps build up my body, enabling me to be energetic all the time.
拓展句：For one thing, it helps build up my body, which enables me to be energetic all the time.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Basketball has been an important part in my life ever since I was introduced to it at the age
of 9.（ever since引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]For one thing, it helps build up my body, enabling me to be energetic all the time.（现在分词作状
语）
3．（2023·湖北·校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华，上周你班举行了一场主题为“人工智能(AI)与英语学
习”的讨论，请为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.讨论目的;
2.讨论内容;
3.你的收获。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
AI and English Learning
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【答案】One possible version:
AI and English Learning
In order to explore the impact of AI on English learning and exchange ideas about its advantages and
disadvantages, our class hosted a discussion on “AI and English Learning” last week.
Many students noted the potential benefits of AI, such as providing personalized learning and instant feedback.
However, some also expressed concerns about the negative effects on traditional teaching methods and
interpersonal communication.
From my perspective, this was a thought—provoking discussion which inspired me to ponder the role of AI in
【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】English learning and how we can strike a balance between technology and human communication.
Overall, this discussion highlighted the need for continued examination of AI’s role in English learning as we
strive to create effective and engaging learning environments.
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生就班上举行的一场主题为“人工智能(AI)与英语学习”的
讨论，写一篇英文报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
为了：in order to→in a gesture to/with the aim of
在我看来：from my perspective→as far as I am concerned/as I see it
强调：highlight→lay emphasis on/stress
影响：impact→influence/effect
2.句式拓展：
简单句变复合句
原句：In order to explore the impact of Al on English learning and exchange ideas about its advantages and
disadvantages, our class hosted a discussion on “AI and English Learning” last week.
拓展句：A discussion on “AI and English Learning” was held by our class, with the aim of exploring how AI has
an impact on English learning and exchanging ideas about its advantages and disadvantages.
【点睛】【高分句型1】From my perspective, this was a thought—provoking discussion which inspired me to
ponder the role of AI in English learning and how we can strike a balance between technology and human
communication.(运用了which引导定语从句和how引导宾语从句。)
【高分句型2】
Overall, this discussion highlighted the need for continued examination of AI’s role in English learning as we strive
to create effective and engaging learning environments.(运用了as引导状语从句。)
4．（2023·湖南常德·统考模拟预测）假如你是李华，上周末你校组织了一次“感恩父母行”的活动，请你
为学校英文报写一篇短文，内容包括：
1.活动目的;
2.你的行动;
3.你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Gratitude to my parents
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【答案】参考范文
Gratitude to my parents
【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】In order to arouse our awareness of being grateful to our parents, our school held an activity last weekend.
To show my thanks, I decided to do something for my parents. Getting up earlier than usual last Saturday, I
spent much time preparing their breakfast and then I began to help do cleaning in our house, which made me tired
and exhausted. When I saw my parents’ satisfied smiles, I felt that my labor was worthwhile.
Through this activity, I’ve learnt that it is not easy for my parents to work and take care of us at the same time.
It is their selfless and unconditional love that l should appreciate.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校英文报写一篇短文，介绍上周末学校组织了一次“感
恩父母行”的活动，内容包括活动的目的、行动和对活动的感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激的：grateful →thankful
开始：begin →set out
筋疲力尽的：exhausted →worn out
值得的：worthwhile →rewarding
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In order to arouse our awareness of being grateful to our parents, our school held an activity last weekend.
拓展句：Our school held an activity last weekend, which is aimed at arousing our awareness of being grateful to
our parents.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Getting up earlier than usual last Saturday, I spent much time preparing their breakfast
and then I began to help do cleaning in our house, which made me tired and exhausted.（运用了现在分词作状语
以及which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】It is their selfless and unconditional love that l should appreciate.（运用了强调句型强调句子宾
语）
5．（2023·广东·校联考模拟预测）你校英文报正在组织作文比赛，请你以“Failure Is Not Necessarily Bad”
为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你的理解；
2. 举例说明。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Failure Is Not Necessarily Bad
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【答案】参考范文：
Failure Is Not Necessarily Bad
【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】People often feel sorrowful for failure, thus trying to avoid it at any cost. However, in daily life, failure is
unavoidable. It is our attitude towards it that counts. Thus, we should treat failure as a stepping stone instead of as a
block.
Take myself as an example, I used to do poorly in math, however hard I tried. Repeated failure in the subject
was a blow to my confidence. I never thought of giving up, though. I began to reflect on my failure. By and by, I
made progress and achieved my final success. I learnt an important lesson about never giving up and determination
from the experience.
In brief, failure is not necessarily bad.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校英文报正在组织作文比赛，请你以“Failure Is Not Necessarily
Bad”为题写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
因此：thus→therefore
重要：count→matter
障碍：block→obstacle
开始：begin→start
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I began to reflect on my failure. By and by, I made progress and achieved my final success.
拓展句：After I began to reflect on my failure, I made progress and achieved my final success.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] Take myself as an example, I used to do poorly in math, however hard I tried. (运用了
however引导让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] I learnt an important lesson about never giving up and determination from the experience. (运用了动
名词作宾语)
6．（2023·广东梅州·统考二模）你校将以“关爱健康”为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿，
内容包括：
1.保持健康的重要性；2.保持健康的方法(至少两条)。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Keep healthy
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【答案】One possible version:
Keep healthy
It is very important for us to keep healthy, because a healthy body will ensure a happy life and smooth work.
There are many ways to keep healthy. We’d better eat more fruits and vegetables and less meat. Take exercise
【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest, so it is important to go to bed early and get up early.
We should wash our hands as often as possible to keep away from bacteria or viruses.
In addition, we mustn’t drink wine or smoke. They are bad for our health.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于你校将以“关爱健康”为主题，举办英语征文比赛，
写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：important→ vital
确保：ensure → make sure
足够的：enough→ sufficient
此外：In addition→ What’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In addition, we mustn’t drink wine or smoke. They are bad for our health.
拓展句：In addition, we mustn’t drink wine or smoke because they are bad for our health.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is very important for us to keep healthy, because a healthy body will ensure a happy
life and smooth work.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】We need enough sleep and rest, so it is important to go to bed early and get up early.（运用了it
is+形容词+to do sth的固定句型）
7．（2023·广东广州·统考一模）你校英文报 “Teenage Life”专栏本期的主题为“Sports and Health”。请你
用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 运动的重要性;
2. 你的运动建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Sports and Health
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【答案】[Version 1]
Sports and Health
As we know, the column Teenage Life of our school newspaper is intended to draw students’ attention into
“Sports and Health”, for which I am absolutely willing to share my perspectives.
It is a common sense that regular exercises benefit us in various ways. Not only can it serve as a chance for
students to strengthen a good figure in face of increasing learning burden but also it is central to promoting personal
【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】mental well-being. In the course of doing sports, it’s highly recommended that students should work out a
reasonable timetable in compliance with their physical quality and curriculum arrangement.
I sincerely wish everyone would take an active part into sports and gain more insight into the benefits it
conveys because of our endeavors.
[Version 2]
Sports and health
Learning that the column Teenage Life of our school English newspaper is committed to casting a light on the
topic “Sports and health”, I am more than thrilled to express my view.
The reasons why we should work out regularly are that not only does it build up our bodies, but it boosts our
learning efficiency as well. Based on such a meaningful theme, a wide variety of activities are highly
recommended. Additionally, several health professionals can be invited to give some lectures about how to do daily
exercise properly after all the competitions.
Only by raising the awareness of taking exercise and participating actively can we truly enjoy the benefits it
brings. I believe every participant will achieve something amazing.
【导语】本文是应用文写作。要求考生用英语以“Sports and Health”为主题写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
非常兴奋：thrilled→excited
锻炼：work out→exercise
此外：additionally→furthermore
参加：participant→take part in
2. 句式拓展
原句：Based on such a meaningful theme, a wide variety of activities are highly recommended.
拓展句：As is based on such a meaningful theme, a wide variety of activities are highly recommended.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Learning that the column Teenage Life of our school English newspaper is committed to
casting a light on the topic “Sports and health”, I am more than thrilled to express my view.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型 2]The reasons why we should work out regularly are that not only does it build up our bodies, but it
boosts our learning efficiency as well.(why引导的定语从句)
8．（2023·辽宁大连·一模）假设你是李华，最近你校举办了“家务活，我在行”活动。请你为校英文报写
一篇报道，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动内容；
3.活动反响。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Housework, I can do it
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【答案】Housework, I can do it
An activity named “Housework, I can do it” was launched by our school last week. The purpose of this event
was to promote awareness of the importance of doing housework.
Student participants of the event were encouraged to complete different tasks to raise the awareness of the
value of completing these chores. The event included several activities, such as a discussion session and a
bedmaking competition. Through these activities, participants learned more about the significance of completing
family chores, as well as techniques to make housework cleaner.
The event was enthusiastically received by the students. Many expressed their appreciation for the event,
stating that they had gained a better understanding of the importance of doing housework.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道。要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，报道学校举办的“家务活，我在
行”活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
活动：activity→event
目的：purpose→aim/goal
完成：complete→accomplish/finish
任务：task→mission/assignment
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：An activity named “Housework, I can do it” was launched by our school last week. The purpose of this
event was to promote awareness of the importance of doing housework.
拓展句：An activity named “Housework, I can do it” was launched by our school last week, whose aim was to
promote awareness of the importance of doing housework.
【点睛】【高分句型1】An activity named “Housework, I can do it” was launched by our school last week. (运
用了过去分词短语作后置定语)
【 高 分 句 型 2 】 Many expressed their appreciation for the event, stating that they had gained a better
understanding of the importance of doing housework. (运用了现在分词短语作伴随状语和that引导宾语从句)
9．（2023·辽宁·辽宁实验中学校考一模）你校将举办一场以“在劳动中成长(Grow Up in Labor)”为主题的
英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿参赛。内容包括：
1.个人劳动经历；
2. 你的感受。
【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Hello, everyone!
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That’s all. Thank you !
【答案】 Hello, everyone! I’m more than privileged to deliver my speech here. The topic is about
Grow Up in Labor.
I still remember the day when I first was asked to wash stocks by myself. I just put them in the basin full of
water. Then I tried to twist them, but no matter how hard I did, they were still dirty. At that moment, I remembered I
should mix some washing liquid into the stocks. At last, I cleaned them, which made me very happy.
From this experience, I learned that before we begin to do anything, we should plan it carefully.
That’s all. Thank you !
【导语】本文是开放性作文。要求考生写一篇以“在劳动中成长(Grow Up in Labor)”为主题的演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常：more than→very
做（演讲）：deliver→give
话题：topic→subject
要求：ask→require
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I just put them in the basin full of water.
拓展句：I just put them in the basin which is full of water.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I still remember the day when I first was asked to wash stocks by myself.（运用了由
when引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】At last, I cleaned them, which made me very happy.（运用了由which引导的非限制性定语从
句）
10．（2023·辽宁·校联考一模）假设你是李华，你校英文网站举办智能机器人设计征文大赛，你设计了一
款智能英语学习助手。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 设计目的；
2. 功能介绍；
3. 你的期望。
注意：
【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】1. 写作词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 开头已给出。
My Intelligent Robot for Learning English
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【答案】My Intelligent Robot for Learning English
Aiming to improve students’ learning efficiency and help them tackle their problems timely, I designed an
intelligent robot to assist students in learning English.
With this English learning assistant, students can have someone make a conversation in English so that they
can practise their oral English. Additionally, this intelligent robot can not only help students check their
compositions by finding some grammar mistakes and spelling mistakes, but also offer some inspiration for students
to have new ideas for their writing assignments. What’s most impressive is that it is capable of providing some
exercises according to the mistakes collected in their former exercises.
I do hope students can benefit from my invention.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学校英文网站举办的智能机器人设计征文大赛投稿介绍自
己设计的一款可以帮助学习英语的智能机器人。
【详解】1.词汇积累
解决：tackle→solve
及时地：timely→in time
另外：additionally→moreover
提供：offer→provide
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Aiming to improve students’ learning efficiency and help them tackle their problems timely, I designed an
intelligent robot to assist students in learning English.
拓展句：I designed an intelligent robot to assist students in learning English, the purpose of which was to improve
students’ learning efficiency and help them tackle their problems timely.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] With this English learning assistant, students can have someone make a conversation in
English so that they can practise their oral English. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
[高分句型2] What’s most impressive is that it is capable of providing some exercises according to the mistakes
collected in their former exercises. (运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
11．（2023·辽宁沈阳·统考一模）你校将以“节约粮食，减少浪费”为主题举办英语征文比赛，请你写一
【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1.浪费粮食的现象；
2.节约粮食的做法；
3.节约粮食的倡议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Say NO to Food Waste
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【答案】Say NO to Food Waste
As we know, food is very important for human survival. However, wasting food is a common phenomenon
that people order more food than they can eat, and even throw away their leftovers in restaurants, which is so
disappointing that I'd like to give some advice on reducing food waste.
First, we should have the awareness of saving food. Next, it’s time for us to take action to save food. We ought
to treasure grain wherever we are. What is most important is that we should have the courage to fight against
wasting food.
I call on everyone to say no to food waste. Saving food is a virtue. Please remember to order appropriately
starting with ourselves as early as possible.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生以“节约粮食，减少浪费”为主题写一篇短文参加英语
征文比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
常见的：common→general
建议：advice→suggestion
减少：reduce → decrease
意识：awareness→understanding
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Please remember to order appropriately starting with ourselves as early as possible.
拓展句：Please remember to order appropriately while we can start with ourselves as early as possible.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Next, it’s time for us to take action to save food.（运用了it充当形式主语，不定式to
take action充当真正主语）
【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】【高分句型2】What is most important is that we should have the courage to fight against wasting food.（运用了
主语从句和表语从句）
12．（2023·安徽·校联考模拟预测）学会面对失败和挫折是中学生成长路上必不可少的一课。你校英文校
刊正在以“Learn From Failure”为话题组织征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：1.你的一次失败经历;
2.你从失败中所学到的东西。
注意：1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Learn From Failure
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【答案】Failure is inevitable in everyone’s life. The problem that many of us face, however, is that we
automatically equate experiencing failure with being a failure. We feel frustrated or despaired in face of failure, but
it may be an educational lesson in certain ways.
I used to be an interest - driven learner, only willing to explore in the fields that I was passionate about as deep
as I could. While learning in this way did make me feel comfortable, it led to a harmful imbalance between my
grades of different subjects, some of which I failed afterwards. Nevertheless, I was not discouraged and made up
my mind to change my learning habits. Before long, I became skilled at subjects that I completely ignored in the
past.
Despite that dreadful failure, I stood up where I fell. Therefore, failure gives us an opportunity to learn, adapt
and grow. Just as the famous quotation from Churchill goes: Failure is not fatal, what matters most is the courage to
carry on. So learn your lessons of life.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于你校英文校刊正在以“Learn From Failure”为话题组
织征文活动，写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不可避免的：inevitable→ unavoidable
对……感兴趣：be passionate about→ be interested in
导致：led to→ resulted in
然而：Nevertheless→ However
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：We feel frustrated or despaired in face of failure, but it may be an educational lesson in certain ways.
拓展句：Though we feel frustrated or despaired in face of failure, it may be an educational lesson in certain ways.
【点睛】[高分句型1]The problem that many of us face, however, is that we automatically equate experiencing
【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】failure with being a failure.（运用了关系代词that引导的定语从句以及从属连词that引导的表语从句。）
[高分句型2]While learning in this way did make me feel comfortable, it led to a harmful imbalance between my
grades of different subjects, some of which I failed afterwards.（运用了While引导的让步状语从句以及介词
of+ which引导的定语从句。）
13．（2023·安徽·校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华，三月为“学雷锋，做好事”活动月，你校组织了许多
志愿者活动。请你写一篇短文，向英语校刊投稿。内容包括：
1. 介绍你校志愿者活动；
2. 呼吁更多人学雷锋。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Learn from Lei Feng and do good deeds
March 5th is Learning from Lei Feng Day.
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【答案】
Learn from Lei Feng and do good deeds
March 5th is Learning from Lei Feng Day. In order to promote the spirit of Lei Feng and encourage students to
do good deeds, our school organized a series of volunteer events in March. First of all, a poem contest was
organized, in which students recited poems composed by themselves related to Lei Feng spirit. At weekends, the
Students’ Union arranged visits to the Nursing Home nearby, where they did what they could to make the elderly
feel happy. Besides, volunteers helped clean the street, which won cleaning staff’s praise.
Lei Feng spirit has inspired generations of Chinese people and I hope an increasing number of students can
learn from Lei Feng and extend his spirit.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求作者写一篇短文，向英语校刊投稿，介绍我校为迎接三月份
的“学雷锋，做好事”活动月，所组织的志愿者活动，并呼吁更多的人学习雷锋。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
鼓励、激励：encourage→inspire
比赛：contest→competition
与……有关系：be related to→be linked to
此外：besides→in addtion
帮助：help→assist
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】原句：In order to promote the spirit of Lei Feng and encourage students to do good deeds, our school organized a
series of volunteer events in March.
拓展句：Our school organized a series of volunteer events in March in order that they could promote the spirit of
Lei Feng and encourage students to do good deeds,
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, a poem contest was organized, in which students recited poems composed by
themselves related to Lei Feng spirit.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和以关系代词which引导的非限制性定
语从句）
【高分句型2】 At weekends, the Students’ Union arranged visits to the Nursing Home nearby, where they did
what they could to make the elderly feel happy.（运用了以关系副词where引导的非限制性定语从句和以连接
代词what引导的宾语从句。）
14．（2023·安徽淮南·统考二模）你校交换生Felix刚看完“美丽中国”摄影展，应邀给校英文网站写一篇
观后感，内容包括：
1. 画展特色；
2. 观看感受；
3. 意见建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Charming China” Photographic Exhibition is perfectly fantastic.
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【答案】
“Charming China” Photographic Exhibition is perfectly fantastic. It displays a wide variety of photos that
reflect Chinese abundant and unique cultures, attractive scenery and a long history as well as great achievements in
every aspect and so on. I am especially interested in tea culture, Peking opera, Chinese calligraphy and traditional
handicraft. Through the exhibition, I am exposed to Chinese culture and have a deeper understanding of China and
the Chinese people. It serves as a bridge between China and other countries to enhance each other’s understanding.
I hope that there will be more opportunities in the future for exchange students like me to learn more about China.
【导语】本书面表达属于应用文。要求就“美丽中国”摄影展写篇观后感描述画展特色及自己的感悟。
【详解】1.词汇积累
大量的：a variety of→a range of
丰富的：abundant →fruitful
迷人的：attractive→fascinating
【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】加强：enhance→ strengthen
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：Through the exhibition, I am exposed to Chinese culture and have a deeper understanding of China and the
Chinese people.
拓展句：Through the exhibition, I am exposed to Chinese culture which makes me have a deeper understanding of
China and the Chinese people.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It displays a wide variety of photos that reflect Chinese abundant and unique cultures,
attractive scenery and a long history as well as great achievements in every aspect and so on.（运用了that引导的
定语从句）
【高分句型2】I hope that there will be more opportunities in the future for exchange students like me to learn
more about China.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
15．（2023·安徽·统考一模）你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留
言板上写一则评论，内容包括：
1. 音乐会特点；
2. 观看感受；
3. 意见建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
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【答案】This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
The performers from the two schools have done their best in entertaining the audience with one song after another.
Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one. I
enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to
sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. They performed the song in a way that touched my heart and gave
me a feeling of connection. I hope there will be more opportunities in the future for us Chinese students and our
international friends to learn about and from each other.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生就学校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会，在
线上留言板上写一则评论。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确定无疑地：undoubtedly→without doubt
尤其地：particularly→ especially
【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】感动：touch→ move
希望：hope→ expect
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a
live one.
拓展句：There is no doubt that their performances are of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different
from a live one.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no
different from a live one.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from
Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】
