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考点 28 非应用文写作：
说明文（解析版）
【命题解读】
短文类写作包括通知、倡议书、演讲稿、新闻报道、日记、约稿、宣传稿等类别。
以下对观点类、说明文等提供对应的模板和基本写作技巧。
说明文
【布局思维导图】
说明文用来解释或探讨各种问题，如机器的制造过程，自然现象或社会现象产生的原
因，工程的规划或问题的解决方案等等。【说明事物的顺序】
我们可以按以下三类顺序说明事物：
1、时间顺序，即按事物的发生、发展的先后顺序进行说明。
2、空间顺序，即按事物空间位置的顺序，由上至下，由近及远或由里至外地说明。
3、逻辑顺序，即按人们认识事物的规律进行说明，如由概括到具体，由整体到部分，
由现象到本质，由表及里，由原因到结果，由主要到次要，由特点到用途等。
【说明事物的方法】
1、定义法。定义法的目的是让不知此事物的人对此物有一个起码的了解，以利于下文的
展开。如：A thermometer is an instrument used for measuring temperature. 就是对
thermometer下了一个定义。有些事物也许不好下个明确定义，但我们可以交待这个事物的
背景，来源，或列举出它的一些典型特征，以便让读者明白。这类事物可以是术语，也可
以是外国人所不了 的中国的传统事物，如龙舟节等。
2、举例说明法。举出具有代表性的例子，能够真切地说明事物，化抽象为具体，使段落变
得有血有肉，丰富起来。举例时常用的表达有：for example(例如)，for instance(例如)，as
an example of (作为……的例子)，take… for example (以……为例)等。
3、比较法。为了突出事物鲜明的特点，我们常把它与其他事物进行比较。比方说我们想向
读者介绍什么是“电脑”，我们可以说“It’s a kind of electrical or artificial (人工的)brain.”这
样把电脑和人脑进行了比较，从而使人们对“电脑”有更清晰的认识。[来源:学科网]4、细节描述法。介绍一种事物，仅用概述性的词语如beautiful, friendly, boring, good 或
bad 是不够的。作者要提供一些细节，使被描述的对象更加形象具体，从而加深读者的印
象。
除上述几种方法外，我们还可以通过引经据典 (即引用专家、名人等的话语)、列举数字等
其他方法说明一件事物，从而使文章更加严密，内容更具有科学性，更有说服力。也可以
综合运用多种方法。
【写作模板】
模板01（主题型）
①________ is a most effective _______to _______. ②For most people, it’s almost
impossible to ______. ③________is really _________.④With the functions of _______,it enables
us to _______.⑤It can even ______. ⑥Just imagine, all this can be done with _______. ⑦A
convenient tool can certainly make _______, but it doesn’t always help _______.⑧Too much
_________.⑨Too many ________.⑩Relying too much on _______ makes ________.
①点明要介绍的事物的必要性 ②介绍该事物对多数人的重要意义 ③该事物优势或显著特
点 ④该事物的作用 ⑤进一步说明该事物的作用 ⑥说明该事物的重要性 ⑦承上启下，
介绍事物的另一方面 ⑧该事物的负面影响一 ⑨该事物的负面影响二 ⑩总结说明过分使
用该物品给我们带来的负面影响。
模板02（说明原因型）
Nowadays, there are more and more in some big cities. It is estimated
that ____________________.（用具体数据说明某现象）
Why have there been so many ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first reason
is that __________________.（原因一）Besides, __________________.（原因二）The third
reason is __________________. （ 原 因 三 ） To sum up, the main cause of is due
to__________________ .（指出主要原因）
It is high time that something should be done. For one thing, __________________.（解决
建议一）
For another thing, . All these measures will certainly __________________.（解决建议二）模板03（描述事物型）
What I have known about is that _________________.（具体描述某事物）
Firstly, __________________.（描述要点一）__________________.（具体阐述要点一）
Secondly, __________________.（描述要点二）（具体阐述要点二）__________________.
As a college student, __________________.（结合自身描述要点三）
All in all, __________________.（做出总结）Therefore, we should __________________.
（提出建议）
模板04（问题解决型）
In recent days, there has been a problem , which is becoming more and more serious.（说明
问题及其现状）First, __________________. Second, __________________.（进一步阐释现
状）
We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing,
________. For another thing, ________. Finally, ________.（列举解决该问题的方法）
Personally, I believe that ________/Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting
us because ________.（结尾段，指出＂我＂的信心及理由）
模板05（说明利弊题型）
Nowadays, many people prefer A because it is playing a more and more important role in our
daily life. Generally/Generally speaking/On the whole, its advantages can be seen as follows./it
has the following advantages. First of all, _________________ (A的优点之一).
Besides,/What’s more, _________________A的优点之二）.
However, every coin has two sides./Everything has both advantages and disadvantages. The
negative aspects are also apparent./Its disadvantages are also obvious. One of the important
disadvantages is that _________________ (A的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,/To
make the matter worse,/To make things worse/What’s worse, _________________(A的第二个
缺点)．Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative
ones./The above analysis shows us that it has more advantages than disadvantages. Therefore, I
would like to _________________ (我的看法)．
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it
reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only in this way can
we_________________(对前景的预测)．)
【高频词句】
1简要说明图表内容的句型： 从图表可以看出
The table/chart shows that …
As can be seen from the chart…
From the table/chart/forms we can see…
The table tells us that…
2表示变化/比较的句型：
There was a great / slight increase/rise in …
There has been a sudden /slow/rapid fall/ drop in… It is 20% lower /higher than…
The number/rate has nearly doubled, as against that of last year.
The number is … times as much as that of…
It increases/rises/decreases/reduces by … times/ … percent/ 2/3.
3说明原因的句型：
The reason for …is that…
One may think of the change as a result of…
The change in… largely results from the fact that…
There are several causes for this significant growth in … First…
This brings out the important fact that…
4 结尾句型：
In summary, it is important….
From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that…
Obviously, if we want to…, it is necessary ….
There is no doubt that attention must be paid…【真题1】 （2016·浙江卷）“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此
为题用英语写一篇100~120词的短文。
要求如下：
1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。
注意：1.文章的标题已给出（不计词数）：
2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行
为认定。
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【参考范文】
Planning Is Good,But Doing Is Better
Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to do.However,a plan can
bear no fruit without being actually carried out.
My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before
the event,I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that,I
set out to read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful
pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize
winner.
I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.
【真题2】（2017·江苏）请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入（box-office income）的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Saturday Afternoon. In a Shopping Centre.
Li Jiang: Hi, Su Hua. Which movie shall we see?
Su Hua: Whatever. We’ve got so many choices, Kung Fu Yoga, Journey
to the West…Each sounds great!
Li Jiang: Yeah! And some movie stars are fantastic.
Su Hua: And the high-tech!...
Li Jiang: Perfect! Let’s get some food first. We only have 20 minutes
left.
Su Hua: No hurry. The cinema is on the same floor.
One Day in 2016. At Home.
Son: Mum, shall we go and see a film tonight?
Mother: Why bother? We can stay at home and watch films online. It’s convenient with our new and faster network
Son: But it feels good in a cinema.
Mother: And the price… We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.
Son: Only 10 yuan more than last year.
Mother: But still we cannot get the money’s worth. Some films are just boring…
【写作内容】
1. 用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；
2. 我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法（上述对话仅供参考，原因不
少于两点）；
3. 谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。
【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
【参考范文】
As is indicated in the graph, the box-office income of Chinese films increased constantly from
2012 to 2015, but its growth, for one reason or another, slowed down in 2016.
The increase in the box-office income can be attributed to a number of factors. The quality oflife has improved and watching films is regarded as a good means of entertainment. Besides, filming
technology has advanced and more quality films are on offer. Moreover, the Internet plays an
important part. On the Internet, people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tickets
at a discount as well, which is both time-saving and economical.
However, the film market may witness a slowdown in the near future. Cinemas have gradually
given way to the rise of the Internet and cellphones, and the ticket price is on the increase. Therefore,
the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers.
【真题3】（2015·江苏）请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文
章.
[写作内容]
1. 用约 30 个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;
2. 结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;
3. 根据你的分析,从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示
(不少于两点)。
[写作要求]
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3. 不必写标题。
[评分标准]
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
【参考范文】
The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also
threaten people’s lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.
Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large-scale construction of
roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing
number of cars these years. What’ s worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it
vital to obey traffic rules.
In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without
them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don’t
secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody’s duty to
observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.
【真题4】（2015·广东）Sally walked onto the platform, picked up a piece of chalk and wrote
on the blackboard: “Rule 1: We are family! “ All students stopped to look at her. And she
continued with Rule 2, Rule 3… In the following weeks, Sally worked out 10 class rules and
posted them on the walls of the classroom. She patiently explained all the rules to the students and
require everyone to follow them.
Surprisingly, Sally was not driven out like the former teachers; instead, she won respect from
the students. Over the year, she witnessed gradual change in the class. At the graduation ceremony,
just as she expected, she was very proud to stand with a class of care, manners and confidence.
[写作内容]
1. 用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 用约120个词就班规谈谈你的想法，内容包
括：
(1) 你们班最突出的问题是什么？
(2) 针对该问题你会设计一条什么班规？
(3)你认为班规会带来什么影响？【写作要求】
1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接
引用原文的句子。2. 作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
【参考范文】
Sally was a teacher. who taught some students full of problems. The students didn’t follow
the school rules. Therefore, she made the rules for them. Later they made great progress.
In our class ,some students don’t work hard and often fight with each other. I will tell them
some stories about hard-working people.I will make a study plan to encourage them to study
work. I put up some sayings on the walls to remind them to do so.I will explain to them that
studying hard is very important. They aren’t allowed to fight at school.In this way, students have a
good habit. Most of the students follow the school rules and study work. They will respect
teachers and other classmates. They will have good manners and confidence. Later they will get
better grades.
【真题5】（2015·浙江）在班级活动中，当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时，你是坚持自
己的观点并说服别人，还是尊重大多数同学的意见？请你以“When I Have a Different
Opinion”为题，用英文写一篇100～120个词“短文。要求如下：
1.从以上两种做法中选择一种；2.以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。
注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则，按考
试作弊行为认定。
When I Have a Different Opinion
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When I Have a Different Opinion
We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to
deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it . By doing so, I
can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.
Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a
park while I had an idea of going to a nicer peace. I managed to persuade my classmates into
accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day . Good opinions are worth sticking to
because they can benefit us all.
【真题6】（2015·重庆）请就以下话题，按要求用英文写作。
If you could give your younger self one piece of advice, what would you say?
要求：
（1）作出回答并说出理由；（2）词数不少于60；（3）在答题卡上做答。
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【参考范文】
Were I three years younger than I am now, I would strongly recommend that I set more practical
and specific goals. As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing
without a compass. Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more
courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward. If only I could go back and reset my
goals.
【真题7】[2014·福建卷] 如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的
引语(quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。
“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.”
—Sir Winston Churchill
内容要求：1．你对该引语的理解；2．你的相关经历；3．恰当的结尾。
注意：
1．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2．文中不能出现考生的具体信息；3．词数120
左右。
This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that
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【参考范文】
This_quotation_from_Winston_Churchill_tells_us_that we shouldn't get discouraged right
after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to
continue efforts through failures.
At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn't wait
to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and
difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my
father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better.
Looking back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.
Actually, we can't succeed in everything we try. What's important is that we should stick at it.
【真题8】[2013·福建卷]
孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分
严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。
内容要求：
1. 描述漫画内容；2. 分析漫画所揭示的问题； 3. 提出你的看法。注意：
1. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；
3. 词数120左右；4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。
参考词汇：铺路 pave the way
From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.
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From_the_picture_we_can_see_a_family_of_three_walking_on_a_long_red_carpet.The son,
well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket
and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.
It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families,
shouldering the hope of their parents.Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no
effort to pave the way for their success.As a consequence, children become so reliant on their
parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.
Such a situation is of great concern.In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are
extremely bad for children's development.Instead of doing everything for them, parents should
encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves.Only
in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.【真题9】[2012·浙江卷]
你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动。该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句(quote)并相互交流。
以下是某同学摘录的句子：“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you”。请按
下列要求用英语写一篇100－120个词的短文：
1. 针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法；2. 举例说明理由。
注意：短文的开头已给出(不计词数)。
In_the_English_Reading_Week,_one_of_my_classmates_recommended_a_quote_to_us,_whi
ch_goes_like_ this ：“ Your _future_depends_on_many_things,_but_mostly_on_you.”_
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In_the_English_Reading_Week,_one_of_my_classmates_recommended_a_quote_to_us,_whi
ch_goes_like_ this ：“ Your _future_depends_on_many_things,_but_mostly_on_you.” I can't
agree more with this view. It's true that our future is determined by many things, such as
opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a
more important role. In other words, we are the master of our own future.
Take Abraham Lincoln for example. He was born in a poor family, and only received a
limited education in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his
own fate but also the history of America. Even to this day, Lincoln is regarded as one of the most
inspiring figures in the world. Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands.
【真题10】[2012·湖北卷] 请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。
You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.
注意： ①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；④词数为120左右。
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【参考范文】
Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary
school. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorlyequipped classroom, I found the
teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to
make the best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever
I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class,
which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.
My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that
determines who you are.
【真题11】2021.3天津卷：假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某
英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地
方。内容包括：
（1）该地方的基本情况（如名称、地理位置等）；
（2）该地方的特色（如文化、景点等）；
（3）你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
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A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of
interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan lrrigation project.
Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most
impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What's more, walking in the nature
reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also
many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujangyan lrrigation
Project. It dates from over 2, 000 years ago. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation
today.
I'm sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the
construction Dujiangyan lrigation Project.
【真题12】2018全国3卷
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信
内容包括：
1. 学校的体育场馆；
2. 主要的运动项目；
3. 你喜欢的项目。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Peter,
How are you doing? You asked me about how our school performs our PE classes in your last
letter, so I'm writing to share with you some details.
Equipped with two playgrounds as well as a splendid stadium, our school offers us an
opportunity to do a variety of sports. Not only dowe take volleyball and basketball courses, but our
school also holds all kinds of sports competitions. Among all sports, I'm crazy aboutvolleyball. As
far as I'm concerned, there is nothing better than playing volleyball, which contributes to us
cooperating with others.
Looking forward to hearing from you again!
Yours,
Li Hua
【真题13】2016年四川卷
某中学生英文报正举办＂The Season I Like Best＂的征文活动，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，
内容应包括：
1. 你最喜欢的季节；
2. 你喜欢该季节的两条理由(如：气候、景色、活动、感受……)。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好；
3. 行文连贯，语篇完整；
4. 文中不得透露个人真实信息。
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【思路点拨】以"我最喜欢的季节"为题写一篇文章，属于提纲作文中的"介绍事物"类型。学生看似
没写过、练过，但实则又有话可说。真正的难点在于对要点的分配和结构的把握全文需要
从陈述最喜欢的季节和给出理由两大方面进行构建，同时还要求在文章开头和结尾适当增
加内容。
审题时考生需要注意三点：1. 既然是为征文活动写的短文，那么最好增加标题(题干已
给出)，注意和书信类的应用文有所区别。2. 如前所述，内容主体虽然只涉及两个大方面，
但陈述两条理由的时候需要有层次地展开：既可以从客观事实和主观感受两方面来写，也
可以从季节本身的自然属性和发生在季节中的人文活动入手，这是该作文要求中比较灵活
的部分。3. 需要增加文章开头和结尾部分，以保证语篇的完整性和逻辑的通畅性，这是该
作文要求中比较开放的部分。这三点，是难点，也是失分点。
【参考范文】
The Season I Like Best
Each of us knows that there are four seasons a year. Different people like different seasons;
my favourite season is spring. I love to smell the fragrance of flowers, see the new green trees and
hear the singing of small birds. There are many busy butterflies and bees over the flowers. Sometimes
it rains, but usually rains quietly. The rain moistens the trees and the flowers. And I can play outside,
too! Whether we like riding bikes, jogging or going on long walks, spring allows us to enjoy outdoor
activities that we had to put on the back burner during winter. Of course, there are many other
reasons to explain why I’m so excited about spring. Thank you, spring!
【技巧点拨】
事物介绍类书面表达属于说明文。说明文是用简洁的文字介绍事物的特性、构造、变
化或结果的文章。高考中，说明文常见的话题有：事物介绍、地点描述、方位描写、变化
分析和购物指南等。写这类文章需要注意以下几点：
1. 首先要审题，弄清需要介绍的内容，把握信息要点。
2. 写作内容要条理清楚，层次分明。说明科技方面的内容常用定义法、比较对比法、分类
法和因果法等；
明自然环境方面的内容常用时空次序法与分类法等。
3. 时态常用一般现在时，当然若是介绍其历史，要用一般过去时；语态可能会用到被动语
态；若是介绍地点、环境等，要善于运用there be结构。
4. 人称多以第三人称为主。【真题14】2020.7全国二卷
上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，
内容包括：
1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人感受。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。
题目：My Weekend
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【参考范文】
My Weekend
Last weekend，we took part in a picking activity. We drove from the school, and the farm
was about 2 kilometers away from our school. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of
animals, green fresh vegetables and fruit trees in the farm. We were divided into two groups. One
group was responsible for picking fruits, the other packed up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the
activity was over. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it. Through this activity,
we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is. We should treasure the food planted
by the farmers.
【模拟检测 1】（2022·天津河西·一模）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你正在参加与英国
友好校以“畅想奥运盛事”为主题的线上交流活动。友好校的学生 Chris得知2022年北京
冬奥会的主题口号是“一起向未来”，非常赞成。请你根据以下提示进行线上发言交流。（1）向Chris表示感谢并赞同他的看法；
（2）你对口号的理解（奥运精神、同享共创未来、中国发出邀请等）；
（3）表达期望。
要求：不少于100词：开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
参考词汇：主题口号official motto
一起向未来Together for a Shared Future
Hi, Chris,
I want to express my most sincere appreciation to you.
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参考答案：
Hi, Chris,
I want to express my most sincere appreciation to you. As far as I am concerned, you are
definitely right. I can’t agree more.
The official motto of the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics—“Together for a shared future” is
consistent with the core values and vision of the Olympic. We hope to convey to the world several
layers of meaning, the first of which is the need to work together in the future. Currently,
COVID-19 brings all mankind the global challenge, so only by helping each other can we build a
beautiful future together. Second, China is inviting the world to join hands to create a more
inclusive world every individual can share and enjoy.
Finally, on behalf of all the students in our school, I wish that there will be more programs
like this in the future.
Thank you.
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你正在参加与英国友好校以“畅想奥运盛事”为主题的线上交流活动。友好校的学生Chris得知2022年北京冬奥会的
主题口号是“一起向未来”，非常赞成。请你根据以下提示进行线上发言交流。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
诚挚的：heartfelt→sincere
目前：at present→currently
就我个人而言：personally speaking→as far as I am concerned
一致：agree with→be consistent with
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：Currently, COVID-19 brings all mankind the global challenge, so only by helping each
other can we build a beautiful future together.
拓展句：Currently, since COVID-19 brings all mankind the global challenge, only by helping
each other can we build a beautiful future together.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] We hope to convey to the world several layers of meaning, the first of which is the
need to work together in the future. (运用了“介词+关系代词”引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I wish that there will be more programs like this in the future. (运用了that引导宾
语从句)
