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UNIT 5 THE VALUE OF MONEY
佳作抢鲜背 学写作思路，背精彩范文(求助信——指导改编短剧)
(全国Ⅲ卷)假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教 Miss
Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1.剧情简介；2.指导内容；3.商
定时间地点。
精彩范文
Dear Miss Evans，
I’m writing to ask for your help with our English short play adapted from our
English textbook.
The story starts with a boy named Huckleberry Finn，who ran away from
home and lived with his friend Jim ， a former slave ， on a raft on the
Mississippi River. Then Finn was cheated by two men ， with his raft stolen and
Jim sold to a farm. Finn and his friend Tom Sawyer made a plan to save Jim
from the farm.At last they managed to free Jim.
I wonder if you would like to give us some advice.The vocabulary and grammar
of the plot need to be adjusted，and we also need your guidance on our
performance.If possible，shall we meet you in your office at 10 am tomorrow?
Looking forward to your early reply.Best regards!
Yours truly，
Li Hua
迁移运用
每日句型练透：with复合结构
1.He stood before his teacher with his head down.
他低着头站在老师面前。
2.I sat in my room for a few minutes with my eyes fixed on the ceiling.
我在房间坐了一会儿，眼睛盯着天花板。
3.With exams approaching，it’s a good idea to review your class notes.
随着考试的临近，复习一下你的课堂笔记是个不错的主意。
4.With all the things bought，she headed for home joyfully.东西买齐，她高兴地回家了。
1.apologise (also apologize) vi.道歉；谢罪→apology n.道歉
以练促学 单句语法填空/一句多译
①To be frank，you owe your father an apology(apologise)，for you shouldn’t have
spoken to your father in a rude manner.
②我没能按计划与你共度本周末，我写信向你致以诚挚的歉意。(道歉信，2021·
北京卷)
→I’m writing to make/offer my heartfelt apology to you for my failing to hang out
with you this weekend as scheduled.(apology)
→I’m writing to sincerely apologize/apologise to you for my failing to hang out with
you this weekend as scheduled.(apologise),
用法归纳——————————————————————————
·apologise to sb for (doing) sth 因(做)某事向某人道歉
apologise to sb that... 向某人道歉……
·make/offer an apology to sb (for sth) (因某事)向某人道歉
owe sb an apology 应向某人道歉
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佳句背诵 I gathered my courage，and sincerely apologised to him for my bad
manners.
我鼓起勇气，真诚地为我的无礼向他道歉。
2.judge vt.&vi.评价；评判；判断 n.法官；审判员；裁判员→judg(e)ment n.判
断；辨别力
以练促学 单句语法填空/补全句子
①Apparently，blindly following others’ advice will affect our own judg(e)ment
(judge).
②Having a lump in my throat，I clapped my hands even more loudly，determined
never to judge a man/book by/from his appearance /its cover.(主旨升华)如鲠在喉，我更大声地拍手，决心再也不以貌取人了。
③Judging by/from your last letter，you are about to take part in the Chinese Bridge
Competition and I am writing with the intention of informing you of some dos and
don’ts.(告知信)
从你上封信来看，你即将参加汉语桥比赛，我写信的目的是告诉你一些注意事
项。,
用法归纳——————————————————————————
·judge...from/by... 从……判断……
as far as I can judge 据我判断；我认为
·judging by/from... 从……判断(作状语)
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佳句背诵 As far as I can judge, only if we make joint efforts to protect the earth
can we make our world a better place.(演讲稿)
我认为，只有我们共同努力保护地球，我们才能使我们的世界变得更美好。
[点拨] judging by/from用在句首时为一个独立成分，不受句子主语和时态的影
响；与其用法相同的现在分词短语还有：generally speaking(一般来说)；frankly
speaking(坦率地说)；talking of(谈到)；considering(考虑到，鉴于)等。
3.spot vt.(spotted，spotted，spotting)看见；注意到；发现 n.地点；处所；斑点
污迹
以练促学 单句语法填空/补全句子
①Unknowingly，the milking house appeared in my vision，in which I spotted
(spot)that the broken window had been repaired.(2023·浙江1月卷)
②Feeling dizzy on the spot，I grabbed my bag，dashed out of the classroom and
headed home with tears in my eyes.(动作描写)
③Spotting the polar bear approaching us，we stood rooted to the spot with fear.(心理
描写，2020·浙江7月卷)
看到北极熊向我们靠近，我们吓得呆若木鸡。,
用法归纳——————————————————————————
·spot sb doing sth 发现某人正在做某事
be spotted with... 满是……的斑点
·on the spot 当场；立即；在现场sightseeing spots 观光景点
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佳句背诵 We lay on the grass，staring at the night sky which was spotted with
twinkling stars.(动作描写)
我们躺在草地上，凝视着繁星点点的夜空。
[点拨] spot在定语从句中作先行词时，从句如缺状语则用 where引导，如缺主
语或宾语则用that/which引导。
4.patience n.耐心；忍耐力；毅力→patient adj.耐心的 n.病人→patiently adv.耐
心地→impatiently adv.不耐烦地
以练促学 补全句子
①I put my palm on his back，patted him with patience/patiently and persuaded him to
take part in the competition.(动作描写，2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)
我把手放在他的背上，耐心地拍了拍他，说服他参加比赛。
②She was usually patient with her students for which they showed great respect for
her.(人物介绍，2020·全国Ⅰ卷)
她对学生通常很有耐心，因此他们十分尊重她。,
用法归纳——————————————————————————
·have the patience to do sth 有耐心做某事
with patience＝patiently 耐心地
out of patience 失去耐心；不耐烦
run out of/lose patience 失去耐心
·be patient with sb 对某人有耐心
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佳句背诵 Seeing the room in a mess，my mother eventually ran out of her
patience.(场景描写)
看到房间乱糟糟的，我妈妈最终没了耐心。
5.hesitate vi.犹豫；迟疑；顾虑→hesitation n.犹豫；迟疑
以练促学 单句语法填空/补全句子
①Hearing the screams，Henry dashed to the riverside，threw off his clothes and
jumped into the water without hesitation (hesitate).(动作链)
②I hesitated for a moment，wondering how to hide my inner embarrassment that day.(心理描写)
那天我犹豫了一会儿，揣摩如何掩饰我内心的尴尬。,
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·hesitate about/over (doing)... 对(做)……犹豫
hesitate to do sth 迟疑做某事，不愿做某事
·without hesitation 毫不犹豫
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佳句背诵 If you are enthusiastic about English and have a sharp mind，don’t
hesitate to join the debate team.(通知)
如果你对英语有热情，有一个敏锐的头脑，别犹豫来加入辩论队。
6.manner n.举止；行为方式；方法；[pl.]礼貌；礼仪；规矩；习俗
以练促学 补全句子
①She treated her friends in a rude manner，making her mother disappointed and
annoyed.(情绪描写)
她以一种粗鲁的方式对待她的朋友们，这使她妈妈既失望又生气。
②It’s good manners to bring a gift，such as a bunch of flowers，when you visit a
Chinese friend.
当你拜访一位中国朋友的时候，带个礼物是有礼貌的，比如一束花。,
用法归纳——————————————————————————
·in a...manner 以一种……的方式；带着一副……的样子
·It is good/bad manners to do sth. 做某事是有/没有礼貌的。
table manners 餐桌礼仪
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佳句背诵 I’d like to share with you some suggestions on how to mind your table
manners in China.(建议信)
我想跟你分享一些你在中国如何注意餐桌礼仪的建议。
7.permit vt.& vi.(permitted，permitted，permitting)允许(allow)；准许；使有可能
→permission n.准许；许可；批准；许可证；通行证
以练促学 单句语法填空/补全句子
①Much to my disappointment，the door guards didn’t permit bringing (bring) my
camera.
②I was very happy and very excited to go there but I needed to ask permission(permit) from my parents.
③Weather permitting，a winter hike will be launched to get us close to nature and
raise us students’ health awareness.(通知)
天气允许的话，将举办冬日远足活动，让我们接近大自然并提高我们学生的健康
意识。
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·permit sb to do sth 允许某人做某事
permit (doing) sth 允许(做)某事
·ask sb for permission＝ask permission from sb 请求某人许可
with/without (one’s) permission 得到/未经(某人的)允许
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佳句背诵 No one is permitted to take photos of the exhibits in the museum
without permission.(通知)
任何人未经允许禁止对博物馆里的展品拍照。
8.in return作为回报；作为回应
以练促学 对比填空/补全句子
①I deeply appreciate your help and I hope to have the opportunity to show you around
Beijing in return for your kindness.(in return for/in return)
②As we all know，all theories come from practice and in turn serve practice.(in
turn/in return)
③On/Upon her return，their reunion after a long separation brought mixed feelings of
joy and sorrow to them both.(情绪描写)
她一回来，他们两人久别重逢，悲喜交加。
用法归纳——————————————————————————
·in return for... 作为……的交换；作为……的报答
on/upon one’s return 某人一回来
·in turn 轮流，依次；反过来
by turns 轮流；时而……时而……
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佳句背诵 Apart from this，I wouldn’t hesitate to help those in trouble and in
return，we expect them to work hard.
除此之外，我会毫不犹豫地帮助那些有困难的人，作为回报，我们希望他们努力工作。
1.句型公式：would rather not do sth
【教材原句】 Oh，I ’d rather not pay you now.
哦，我宁愿现在不付钱给你。
以练促学 单句语法填空/一句多译
①We would rather our daughter stayed (stay) at home with us，but it is her choice.
②I would rather I had followed(follow) your advice yesterday.
③为了过低碳生活，我宁愿骑车而不愿开车上班。(环境保护)
→To live a low-carbon life，I would rather ride a bike than drive a car to work.
→To live a low-carbon life，I would ride a bike rather than drive a car to work.
→To live a low-carbon life，I prefer to ride a bike rather than drive a car to work.
用法归纳——————————————————————————
·would rather (not) do sth 宁愿(不)做某事
would rather (not) have done sth 宁愿(没)做过某事(对过去的虚拟)
· 宁愿做某事而不愿做某事
·would rather sb did sth 宁愿某人做某事(对现在或将来的虚拟)
would rather sb had done sth 宁愿某人做过某事(对过去的虚拟)
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佳句背诵 The little girl held her grandmother’s hands whimpering，“I would
rather not have lied to you/(that) I hadn’t lied to you.”(情绪描写)
小女孩握着奶奶的手，呜咽着说：“我宁愿没向您撒谎。”
2.句型公式：否定副词位于句首的倒装
【教材原句】 I remember thinking that never would I hold such a note as this...
记得当时我认为我手里永远不会握着这样一张钞票……
以练促学 补全句子
①Rarely have I found him impatient with his children who run around the yard
playing happily.
我很少发现他对在院子里跑来跑去快乐玩耍的孩子们不耐烦。
②No sooner/Hardly had the writer stepped on the stage than/when the audience broke
into thunderous applause，showing their sincere admiration for him.(场景描写)
这位作家一走上舞台，观众就爆发出雷鸣般的掌声，表达了对他真诚的钦佩。,用法归纳——————————————————————————
·否定副词如never等置于句首，句子用部分倒装，将情态动词、系动词或助动词
提前。
·常用的表示否定意义的副词或词组：little，rarely，seldom，hardly，scarcely，
neither，nor，no sooner...than，hardly...when等。
·表“绝不”的介词短语：at no time，by no means，in no case，in no way，on no
condition等。
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佳句背诵 Never before in my life had I been so overwhelmed with such
helplessness that I stood there motionless，my mind going blank.(心理描写)
我这辈子从来没有经历过这样的无助，以至于我一动不动地站在那里，大脑一片
空白。
维度一 语境辨义练——熟词生义/一词多义
1.写出加黑部分的词性和汉语意思
①We managed to leave this spot to climb higher because of the spare time until
sunset.(2023·全国乙卷) n.地点，位置
②After we found a crazy-looking road that hung over a bunch of rocks，we decided
to photograph the scene at sunset.(2023·全国乙卷) n.场景
③The police uncovered his plot to trick the old man out of his life savings. n . 阴谋
2.选出manner的汉语意思
A.n.方式；方法 B.n.举止；态度 C.n.礼貌；礼仪 D.n.规矩；习俗
①As far as I’m concerned，it is bad manners to talk with your mouth full.C
②Stop trying to balance time between them all.Find ways to enjoy them in a combined
manner.(2022·浙江1月卷)A
③Normally people in the upper class have a polite and cool manner.B
④He bought a book about the social morals and manners of the seventeenth
century.D
维度二 语境运用练——单句语法填空
1.Judging (judge) by what he has done ， he is determined to take part in the
campaign，totally ignoring (ignore) our advice.2.The original intention (intend) of the project is to involve more people in our
voluntary activities and spread warm love like sunshine.
3.Eventually (eventual)，the intelligent man took exercise on a regular basis (base)
with the intention of staying healthy.
4.So moved was Mother that she hugged (hug) them tightly and kissed them again and
again.(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)
5.After arguing with her friend Tom，she is unwilling (willing) to carry on talking
with him.
6.The diagram indicates (indicate) that people spend more time exercising with the
aim of pursuing (pursue) physical fitness.
7.We were dancing happily when smoke was spotted rising (rise) from the kitchen，
which panicked us.
8.Bicycle riding is a fun and healthy outdoor activity that/which can be enjoyed within
the whole family.
9.My money is running out，so I have no choice but to postpone buying(buy) the
advanced facilities.
10.I was about to go back to classroom when I felt my jeans split down in the middle
of my backside.
练一 单元话题作文(书评——评论《百万英镑》)
1.根据提示，利用本单元所学知识完成作文
①说到我最喜欢的英语戏剧，我脑海里首先闪现的是《百万英镑》。(强调句型)
When it comes to my favorite English drama ， it is The Million Pound Bank Note
that flashes through my mind first.
②马克·吐温写的这部戏剧讲述了两个百万富翁兄弟打赌一个身无分文的人能否
用一百万英镑的钞票活一个月的故事。(make a bet，过去分词短语作定语，
whether引导宾语从句)
The drama written by Mark Twain tells us a story that two millionaire brothers made
a bet on whether a penniless person could survive for a month with a million pound
bank note.
③结果，亨利，这个贫穷而诚实的人，被偶然选中，然后经历了一系列有趣的事
情。(by accident)As a result ， Henry ， the poor and honest man ， was chosen by accident and then
experienced a series of funny things.
④这部剧给我印象最深的是对不同人在一百万英镑钞票前荒唐举止的详细描写。
(manner，what引导主语从句)
What impressed me most in this drama are the detailed descriptions of different
people’s ridiculous manner before one million pound bank note .
⑤从这个故事中，我意识到我们不应该以貌取人以及正确对待金钱的态度的重要
性。(judge，部分倒装),
From this story ， I realize that never should we judge a person from his
appearance and the importance of correct attitude towards money.
⑥如果时间允许，我宁愿你们所有人都读一读，欣赏这部作品的魅力。(permit，
独立主格，would rather引导虚拟语气)
Time permitting ， I would rather all of you read it and enjoyed its beauty .
2.使用恰当的过渡衔接词连句成篇
When it comes to my favorite English drama，it is The Million Pound Bank Note
that flashes through my mind first.
The drama written by Mark Twain tells us a story that two millionaire brothers made
a bet on whether a penniless person could survive for a month with a million pound
bank note.As a result，Henry，the poor and honest man，was chosen by accident
and then experienced a series of funny things.In fact，what impressed me most in this
drama are the detailed descriptions of different people’s ridiculous manner before
one million pound bank note.
From this story ， I realize that never should we judge a person from his
appearance and the importance of correct attitude towards money.Time
permitting，I would rather all of you read it and enjoyed its beauty.
练二 续写能力升华(热考话题分步构思)
构思情节第二步：快乐结局塑造
1.“Thanks.” Clinging her hands to the bag opening，she was overwhelmed by a
surge of gratitude and warmth. “谢谢。”双手紧紧抓住包口，一股感激和温
暖涌上心头。
2.The two strong strangers undoubtedly lit her day up.
这两个强壮的陌生人无疑点亮了她的一天。3.Though I was dissatisfied with my ugly gesture and stupid image，I was satisfied
with the happiness and fun that I brought to others.(2021·浙江1月卷)
虽然我不满意我丑陋的姿势和愚蠢的形象，但对我带给别人的快乐和乐趣感到满
意。
4.I felt that I could ride independently slowly，while my father was cheering for
me.Finally I could ride a bike just like a free bird flying happily in the air. 我觉得
我可以独立地慢慢地骑，而我的父亲在为我欢呼。最后，我会骑自行车了，就像
一只自由的小鸟在空中快乐地飞翔。
5.Everyone was surprised and excited to see grandpa stand up.At that moment，
Jack noticed a tear coming from the corner of his grandfather’s eye.
看到爷爷站起来，每个人都感到惊讶和兴奋。就在那一刻，杰克注意到爷爷的眼
角涌出了一滴泪水。
[小试身手]
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.One day，
towards evening ， ① we found a great camping site at the foot of a high
mountain.David and I helped Dad put up the tent，and Mom was busy preparing
supper.When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains，the tent was set
up and the meal was ready.Sitting around the camp fire ， ② we talked and
laughed.Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey ③a pleasant
smile would spread over Mom’s face.
我们开车经过好几个州，沿途看到了许多美丽的景色。一天，快到傍晚的时候，
我们在一座高山脚下发现了一个很棒的露营地。大卫和我帮爸爸搭帐篷，妈妈忙
着准备晚饭。当夕阳在山上投下橘黄色的光芒时，帐篷已经支好了，饭菜也准备
好了。围坐在营火旁，我们有说有笑。每次我们提到旅途中的趣事时，妈妈的脸
上都会露出愉快的笑容。
