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必修第三册 Unit 2 Making a difference
佳作抢鲜背 学写作思路,背精彩范文(短文投稿——中国历史人物)
(2023·全国甲卷)你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请
你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:1.人物简介及事迹;2.
意义或启示。
精彩范文
The Historical Figure in China
Among the Chinese historical figures that are widely acknowledged,Fan
Zhongyan is the most influential in my opinion.Here are the reasons.
Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty,Fan Zhongyan
was highly appreciated because he made great contributions to society.He
spared no effort to carry out a series of reforms to make his country
prosperous.Besides , he proposed the establishment of a national school
system,which had a far-reaching influence on the Chinese educational system.
What impresses me most is his famous philosophy of life:“Be the first to
worry about the troubles across the land , the last to enjoy universal
happiness.” Fan Zhongyan is such a role model that he always
encourages me to be a man of noble character.
迁移运用
每日句型练透:so/such...that...
1.I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English
teacher.
我英语学得很好,因此被选为英语老师的助手。
2.Then she became so excited that she accidentally knocked over the box in anattempt to get closer.(浙江1月卷)
然后她变得如此兴奋,以至于她不小心碰翻了盒子,试图靠得更近一些。
3.We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the
students of our school.
我们做得如此好,以至于被邀请和学校所有学生分享我们的想法和经历。
1.relief n.减轻,缓解;宽慰,轻松→relieve v.减轻,缓解→relieved adj.放心的,
宽慰的
以练促学 单句语法填空/完成句子
①Once the helicopter landed,we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved
(relieve).
②Take the medicine as instructed,and you will be relieved of your pain.
③To my relief (让我宽慰的是), they smiled politely back at me when they saw my
smile, and I could see their exhaustion in their eyes.(情绪描写+动作描写,2022·浙
江6月卷)
用法归纳
·in/with relief 宽慰地,释然地
to one’s relief 令某人宽慰的是
breathe a sigh of relief 松了一口气
·relieve sb of... 帮助某人减轻……
佳句背诵 Seeing his confident smiles, I sighed with/in relief.(情绪描写,2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)
看到他自信的微笑,我松了一口气。
2.donate v.捐赠,捐献→donation n.捐赠,捐赠物→donor n.捐赠者,赠送者
以练促学 单句语法填空/翻译句子
①Given the chance, I would make donations (donate)to those who still live under the
bottom line of the modern living condition.
②老人给学校捐了很多钱。它使学生能够回到他们的教室。
The old man donated a lot of money to the school, enabling the students to return to
their classrooms.(分词短语作状语)
用法归纳
·donate...to...把……捐献给……
·make donations/a donation to 向……捐赠
佳句背诵 I believe these donated books will not only make you more familiar
with China but also help improve your Chinese.(建议信)
我相信这些捐赠的书籍不仅会让你更加熟悉中国,也有助于提高你的中文水平。
3.hesitate v.迟疑,犹豫→hesitation n.迟疑,犹豫
以练促学 单句语法填空/完成句子
①If you are enthusiastic about English and have a sharp mind, don’t hesitate to join
(join) the debate team.
②Hearing the screams, Henry dashed to the riverside,threw off his clothes and
jumped into the water without hesitation.(动作链)
听到尖叫声,亨利冲到河边,脱下衣服,毫不犹豫地跳进水里。
用法归纳
·hesitate to do sth迟疑做某事;不愿做某事
hesitate about/over... 对……犹豫不决
·without hesitation 毫不犹豫地佳句背诵 He hesitated for a while, his eyes growing tender.(情绪描写)
他犹豫了一会儿,眼神变得温柔起来。4.assistance n.帮助,援助→assist v.帮助,
援助→assistant n.助手
以练促学 完成语段
The children decided to assist Bernard to pop the corn.With the assistance of their
mother,they finally made delicious popcorn.When he was worried that he couldn’t
sell out the popcorn,John came to his assistance.
孩子们决定帮助伯纳德爆玉米。在他们妈妈的帮助下,他们终于做出了美味的
爆米花。正当他担心爆米花卖不完的时候,约翰来帮助他。
用法归纳
·with the assistance of... 在……的帮助下
come to one’s assistance 帮助某人
·assist sb to do/in doing sth 帮助某人做某事
assist sb with/in sth 在某方面帮助某人
佳句背诵 Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for
assistance.(动作描写)
尽管她很虚弱,她还是挣扎着站起来,继续寻求帮助。
5.aid v.帮助,援助(assist,help) n.帮助,援助
以练促学 单句语法填空/词汇升级
①He is so kind a boy that he often aids his mother to clean (clean) the furniture.
②A woman in the street saw that he was in trouble and helped him.
→A woman in the street saw that he was in trouble and came to his aid.
用法归纳
·aid sb to do sth 帮助某人做某事
aid (sb) in (doing) sth 帮助(某人)(做)某事
·come to one’s aid 帮助某人
with the aid of 在……的帮助下
佳句背诵 With the aid of the kind neighbour,we resolved the problem at last.在好心的邻居的帮助下,我们终于解决了问题。
6.major adj.重要的,主要的(main, chief,primary) vi.主修
n.主修课程;(大学专业的)主修学生→majority n.大多数
以练促学 猜测词义/单句语法填空/同义替换
①When I applied for the major of college, my mother persuaded me to major in
electrical engineering. n . 主修课程 v i . 主修
②If you look at the audience, the majority (major) are over the age of fifty.
③When it comes to education,most people believe that it is a lifetime study
process.the majority of
用法归纳
·major in... 主修……;以……为专业
·the majority of 大多数……
in the/a majority 占大部分/大多数
佳句背诵 Calligraphy has been regarded as a major part of Chinese culture since
the Han Dynasty.(传统文化)
书法自汉代以来就被视为中国文化的重要组成部分。
句型公式:独立主格结构
【教材原句】 These are among the 669 children,most of them Jewish,that
Nicholas Winton will go on to save from death at the hands of the Nazis.
这些孩子大都是犹太人,他们是尼古拉斯·温顿即将从纳粹分子死亡之手里解救
的669名儿童中的一部分。
以练促学 完成句子/句式升级
①He lay there,his teeth set,his hands clenched,his eyes looking straight up.(动
作描写)他躺在那里,紧咬牙关,紧握双手,眼睛直视上方。
②She didn’t know how to answer her son,her heart broken.
她不知道如何回答儿子,她的心都碎了。
③He sat there and wept sadly and he buried his face in his hands.(动作描写)
→He sat there and wept sadly,burying his face in his hands.(分词短语作状语)
→He sat there and wept sadly,his face buried in his hands.(独立主格结构)
用法归纳
独立主格结构的逻辑主语与主句的主语不一致,它独立存在。该结构在句中一
般作状语,表示时间、条件、原因、伴随状况等。独立主格结构的常用形式:
·逻辑主语+现在分词;
·逻辑主语+过去分词;
·逻辑主语+动词不定式;
·逻辑主语+形容词/副词/名词/介词短语。
佳句背诵 Totally touched, she failed to utter a single word,tears blurring her
eyes.(情绪描写)
她完全被感动了,一句话也说不出来,泪水模糊了她的双眼。
A big smile on her face,the innocent girl unwrapped her delicate gift box.(情绪描
写)
带着灿烂的笑容,这个天真的女孩打开了精致的礼品盒。
维度一 语境辨义练——熟词生义/一词多义
1.写出加黑部分的词性和汉语意思
①Since 1934,better than half a billion dollars has gone into that Fund to purchasemore than 5 million acres of habitat.(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷) n.基金
②Studying history can give us insight into why our culture does certain things,and
how the past has shaped it into what we know now.
(2020·天津5月卷) n.洞察力
③Jim didn’t really have to extend himself in the exam. v . 使竭尽全力
④They hoped the new venture would further the cause of cultural cooperation in
Europe. v . 促进,增进
2.选出major的汉语意思
A.adj.重要的,主要的 B.n.主修课程
C.v.主修 D.n.(大学专业的)主修学生
①It is fair to say, though, that our psychological biases play a major role.(2023·北
京卷)A
②She was named the outstanding history major at the University of Oklahoma.D
③Everything taken into account, I would like to major in medicine at college.C
④Some believe it is better to choose a major that will bring more job
opportunities.B
维度二 语境运用练——单句语法填空
1.Putting electric fencing around chicken houses and other farm animal quarters is
also highly effective (effect) at getting grizzlies away.(2023·全国甲卷)
2.Last year it recovered more than 807,500 pounds of food by taking donations
(donate) and collecting blemished(有瑕疵的)produce.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)3.He hesitated (hesitate) and then said he had decided not to run.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)
4.That can be dangerous work that could be avoided with drones assisting (assist) the
crews’ efforts.(2022·全国乙卷)
5.Isak’s story is typical of a child who has a specific learning disability (disable).
6.Sighing in relief (relieve), I couldn’t stop thinking about the whole event.
7.Although three days isn’t very long, a shortage (short) of time was the least of his
problems.
8.Words failed me to convey my thanks for his kindness and generosity (generous).
9.The majority (major) of those farmers make a living by growing wheat and corn.
10.No matter who we are and what we do, we can help people and make a
difference.
练一 单元话题作文(人物介绍——钱学森)
1.根据提示,利用本单元所学知识翻译句子
①在中国空间技术领域取得巨大成就的钱学森于1911年出生于上海。(定语从
句,achievement)
Qian Xuesen, who made great achievements in China’s space technology, was born
in 1911 in Shanghai.
②钱学森1935年赴美深造并于1939年在美国获航空、数学博士学位。(further,
obtain)
In 1935, Qian Xuesen went to America for further study and obtained his doctor’s
degree in aeronautics and mathematics in 1939 in the US.
③尽管美国政府试图阻止他,但他仍不屈不挠,于 1955 年回到中国。
(perseverance)
With great perseverance , he came back to China in 1955 though the Americangovernment tried to stop him.
④他为中国的航天事业作出巨大的贡献。(contribution)
He made great contributions to China’s aerospace .
⑤2009年,他在北京去世。(pass away)
In 2009, he passed away in Beijing .
⑥中国人民将永远不会忘记他对人民和国家的贡献。(contribution)
Chinese people will never forget his contributions to the people and the country .
2.使用恰当的过渡衔接词连句成篇
【参考范文】
Qian Xuesen,who made great achievements in China’s space technology, was
born in 1911 in Shanghai.In 1935, Qian Xuesen went to America for further study
and obtained his doctor’s degree in aeronautics and mathematics in 1939 in the
US.With great perseverance,he came back to China in 1955 though the American
government tried to stop him.Then he made great contributions to China’s
aerospace.In 2009, he passed away in Beijing.
Anyhow, Chinese people will never forget his contributions to the people and the
country.
练二 续写能力升华(热考话题分步构思)
构思情节第二步:主题升华
1.Despite the chill autumn wind,their home was filled with the warmth of love
and reunion.(2020·浙江1月卷)
尽管秋风凛冽,但他们的家却充满了爱和团聚的温暖。
2.The rain that came that day was a miracle,saving our farm,just like my boy
saved a life.
那天下的雨是个奇迹,它拯救了我们的农场,就像我的儿子拯救了一条生命一
样。
3.Appearing to be feeling better,the wolf slowly raised his head and gave a gentle
kiss to Becky’s hand as if to express thanks.What a warm scene!
狼似乎感觉好多了,慢慢地抬起头,轻轻地吻了一下贝基的手,好像在表达感谢。多么温馨的一幕啊!
4.As humans,we should also take care of the animal’s loneliness.
作为人类,我们也应该照顾动物的孤独。
[小试身手]
About two weeks later,I heard my husband calling,“Oh,my God!” Thinking
something similar happened again,I ran over to have a look.①He was looking out of
the window and said excitedly,“Look!What a surprise!There are three eggs in
the sparrow’s nest!They’re going to have babies of their own!” ② He was
happy , like a child and unconsciously opened the closed window .After that,there
are always breadcrumbs on the window platform of the reading room.
大约两周后,我听到丈夫喊道:“哦,我的天哪!”我以为又发生了类似的事
情,就跑过去看了看。他正看着窗外,兴奋地说:“看!真是个惊喜!麻雀的
巢里有三个蛋!它们要有自己的孩子了!”他很高兴,像个孩子似的,不知不
觉地打开了紧闭的窗户。在那之后,阅览室的窗台上总是有面包屑。