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佳作抢鲜背 学写作思路,背精彩范文(报道——急救)
昨天你在回家途中看到一个年轻人在路边对晕倒的老人进行急救。请你写一篇
报道刊登到校英语报上。内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.事情的经过;3.你的感想。
精彩范文
Yesterday,I came across an emergency where a young man gave first aid
to an old man on the roadside.
At about 6 pm, I was walking home when I found there was a smal l
crowd. Out of curiosity,I walked forward only to find an old man lying on
the ground.Just at that time,a young man rushed forward and began to
give first aid to the old man.After a while,the old man recovered his breath
and opened his eyes.Seeing this,everyone clapped their hands.Then an
ambulance arrived and rushed him to the hospital.The doctors praised the
young man for his quick and proper action.
I think he has set a good example to us.
迁移运用
每日句型练透:be doing...when...
1._____________________________________________________________
I heard a knock on the door.
我正在看电视,在那时听到有人敲门。
2._____________________________________________________________
when suddenly it began to rain.
他正在街上走着,突然开始下雨了。
3.She _____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
Tom patted her.
她正在考虑那个问题,这时汤姆拍了拍她。1.pretend v.假装,装作
以练促学 单句语法填空/句式升级
①The boy pretended ___________________________________ (concentrate) on his
lesson,but in fact his mind was wandering.
②The boy pretended ____________________________ (fall) asleep when his father
came back.
③She opened a book, and pretended to read, with tears dropping on the open page.
(动作描写)
→She opened a book, ___________________________________________, with
tears dropping on the open page.(分词短语作状语)
用法归纳
pretend to be+n./adj. 假装是……
pretend to do sth 假装做某事
pretend to be doing sth 假装正在做某事
pretend to have done sth 假装已做过某事
pretend (that)... 假装……
佳句背诵 Honestly, I felt a huge sense of loss at that time.Yet I managed to force a
weak smile and pretended to appreciate it.(情绪描写)
说实话,当时我有一种巨大的失落感。但我还是勉强地笑了笑,假装很欣赏。
2.bother v.(使)苦恼;费心,麻烦;打扰,烦扰 n.麻烦;困难
以练促学 单句语法填空/完成句子
①Don’t bother ___________________________________________ (look) for myumbrella; it will turn up some day.
②I don’t want to bother her ________________________________________ my
problems at the moment.
③_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
but my father told me not to lose heart.(心理描写)
让我烦恼的是,我们找不到回去的路了,但父亲告诉我不要失去信心。
用法归纳
bother to do/doing sth 费心做某事
bother sb with/about sth 为某事打扰或麻烦某人;使某人为某事烦恼
bother sb to do sth 麻烦某人做某事
It bothers sb that/to do... 使某人苦恼的是……/做……使某人苦恼
佳句背诵 I used to bother you to do many things for me,but you were never
impatient with me.(感谢信) 我过去总是麻烦您为我做很多事情,但您从来没有
对我不耐烦。
3.acknowledge v.承认(某事属实或某情况存在) (admit);认可;告知收到;感谢,
致谢→acknowledgement n.承认;感谢;收件复函;致谢
以练促学 单句语法填空/完成句子
①Lu Xun,acknowledged ____________ one of the greatest modern writers in
China,was born in Shaoxing,Zhejiang Province.
②_____________________________________________________________
people cannot succeed or achieve their targets without a strong will and persistence.
人们普遍认为,没有坚强的意志和毅力,人们就无法成功或实现目标。
③Tom _____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________,
which made us quite depressed.
汤姆承认在比赛中失败了,这使我们很沮丧。
用法归纳acknowledge sb/sth to be/as...认为或承认某人/某物是……
acknowledge doing/having done sth 承认做过某事
It is universally/widely acknowledged that... ……是大家公认的。
佳句背诵 Among the Chinese historical figures that are widely acknowledged,
Fan Zhongyan is the most influential in my opinion.(短文投稿,2023·全国甲卷)
在公认的中国历史人物中,我认为范仲淹是最有影响力的。
4.make efforts/an/every effort to do sth努力做某事
以练促学 单句语法填空/完成句子
①She wrapped a handkerchief around her bleeding palm ____________ an effort to
protect it.
②Eager and excited, she waved her yellow blouse and
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
so as to attract others’ attention.(情绪描写+动作描写)
她又急又兴奋,挥舞着自己的黄色上衣,不遗余力地大叫,以吸引别人的注意。
用法归纳
in an effort to do sth 为了做某事
spare no effort(s) to do sth 不遗余力地做某事
with (an) effort 努力地,费力地
without effort 毫不费力地
佳句背诵 If I am lucky enough to be elected,I will make efforts/every effort to
serve for the benefit of students and our club.(申请信)
如果我有幸当选,我将尽最大努力为同学们和我们俱乐部的利益服务。
5.out of mercy出于怜悯
以练促学 单句语法填空/一句多译
①Some illegal hunters shot wild animals __________________________________
mercy so they were arrested.②如果我们对自己的缺点视而不见,我们对别人就不会仁慈。(主旨升华)
→If we are blind to our own faults,we _________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________.
(merciful)
→If we are blind to our own faults,we __________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________.(mercy)
用法归纳
·mercy n. 仁慈,宽恕;恩惠
show mercy to 对……怜悯/宽恕
have mercy on/upon 对……怜悯/宽恕
without mercy 残忍地;毫无同情地
at the mercy of... 任由……摆布
·merciful adj. 仁慈的;慈悲的;宽容的
佳句背诵 At the mercy of the strong wind,the little trees on the top of the
mountain couldn’t stand up straight.(环境描写)
在强风的摆布下,山顶上的小树都站不直了。
句型公式:as引导状语从句
【教材原句】 As a song in Ugly Betty puts it,“It’s a pretty person’s world”.
正如《丑女贝蒂》里的歌曲所唱的那样,“这是一个看脸的世界”。
以练促学 单句语法填空/完成句子/一句多译
①For in - person humor , quality isn’t as important ____________ you might
think.Your attitude and effort count a lot.
②_____________________________________________________________,
they managed to make it to the finish point.
尽管他们劳累而疲惫,但他们还是设法到达了终点。③随着科技和互联网的进步,几乎每个人都能使用手机。
→_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________ , cell
phones can be accessible to almost everyone.(with复合结构)
→_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________ , cell
phones can be accessible to almost everyone.(as引导状语从句)
用法归纳
as作连词,有以下用法:
·“按照……的方式(方法)”,引导方式状语从句。
·“当……时候;一边……一边……”,引导时间状语从句。
·“因为;既然”,引导原因状语从句。
·“尽管”,引导让步状语从句。
·引导比较状语从句,常用于as...as...句型,意为“像……一样……”(第一个as
是副词,第二个as是连词)。
[点拨] 当as引导让步状语从句时,从句使用部分倒装,即将形容词、副词、
名词、动词等放于as前面;单数可数名词提前时应该省掉冠词。
佳句背诵 The twins cheered up and did as they were told.(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)
双胞胎高兴起来,照吩咐做了。
维度一 语境辨义练——熟词生义/一词多义
1.写出加黑部分的词性和汉语意思
①We crossed big rivers and vast plains, climbed high mountains, and overlooked
deep valleys.____________②She asked for the woman’s name and address so that she could repay the money
that the woman lent her.(2021·浙江6月卷改编)____________
2.选出acknowledge的汉语意思
A.v.认可 B.v.感谢 C.v.承认
①Acknowledge that you hurt her,and then apologize.______
②Harry was acknowledged to be the cleverest boy in the class.______
③I gratefully acknowledge financial support from several local businesses.______
维度二 语境运用练——单句语法填空
1.He spared no effort ____________ (carry) out a series of reforms to make his
country prosperous.(2023·全国甲卷)
2.That includes huge ____________ (save) in maintenance costs and better protection
of railway personnel safety.(2022·全国乙卷)
3.To us, the most likely explanation appears to be that the basis lies in their living
with humans, which gives them a lot of exposure to human facial ____________
(express).(2021·浙江6月卷)
4.Lincolns ____________ (large)the house to a full two stories in 1856 to meet the
needs of their growing family.(2021·浙江6月卷)
5.It upset him that nobody ____________ (bother) to tell him about it.
6.To tell the truth , I think his behaviour is completely beyond ____________
(comprehend).
7.Once, after a particularly long swimming lesson, I spotted Kathy swimming
____________ (graceful) in the pool.
8.____________ (assume)that I am chosen to be a volunteer at Paris Olympic Games,I will serve the people heart and soul.
9.Driven by a burning desire ____________ adventure and travel,Li Bai left home
and started to travel around in his early twenties.
10.Next time you are cornered by such a dog, pretend ____________ (pick) up a
stone.It will be frightened away.
练一 单元话题作文(议论文——如何看待美)
1.根据提示,利用本单元所学知识翻译句子
①人们普遍认为美在我们的生活中起着重要的作用。(acknowledge)
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
②许多女孩认为外表不能被忽视。(assume, overlook)
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
③为了追求理想的身材,她们试图尝试她们知道的每一种方法,这使她们很烦
恼。(attempt to, bother)
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
④一些女孩甚至用自己的积蓄购买减肥药片来减肥。(saving, pill)
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
⑤在我看来,内在美是最重要的,也是增强我们自信的最好方法。(boost one’s
confidence)
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
⑥真正重要的不是从头到脚打扮,而是用知识和全面的能力武装自己。(from
head to toe)_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
2.使用恰当的过渡衔接词连句成篇
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
练二 续写增分技巧15——描写“宽慰与温暖”
1.Alice felt relieved to see a car approaching.
看到一辆车靠近,爱丽丝松了一口气。
2.A mixture of warmth and relief flooded over her.
一种温暖和解脱交织的感觉涌上她的心头。
3.Tears of appreciation welled up in her eyes as she thanked the stranger for his
help,but he just smiled warmly.
她感谢陌生人的帮助时,感激的泪水涌上了她的眼睛,但他只是暖暖地一笑。
4.Reaching the tall building where her office was,Alice breathed a sigh of relief.
爱丽丝到了她办公室所在的大楼,如释重负地松了口气。
5.She felt warm in the cold day,and believed there was kindness in every corner.
她在寒冷的天气里感到了温暖,相信处处都有善良。
[小试身手]
Despite the cheering of my classmates,I was almost the last to cross the finish
line.①________________ , I was so tired that I knelt down on the
track.②________________________.Immediately,my classmates rushed to me,
③________________,and urged me to rise to my feet.I was surrounded,with
towels and all kinds of drinks handed to me.④__________________.That sports meet
is an unforgettable experience,which gives us a lot of confidence,both in my
fellow students and in my own potential.
尽管同学们都在欢呼,但我几乎是最后一个冲过终点线的。如释重负,我累得
跪在跑道上。我的汗水从脸上流下来。同学们立刻向我冲过来,抓住我的胳膊,
敦促我站起来。我被围了起来,毛巾和各种各样的饮料递给我。我感到一种温
暖。那次运动会是一次难忘的经历,它给了我们很多信心,无论是对我的同学
还是对我自己的潜力。