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【冲刺2024高考】高中英语应用文写作
(创新话题命题类)新题速递
审题+框架搭建+下水文+话题表达总结
2024年2月浙江省名校协作体高三英语应用文
创新点:倡议、寄语、低碳生活
假定你是校英文报的主编李华,最近准备出一期关于“倡导低碳生活”的
专刊。请为专刊写一篇寄语, 内容包括:
1.专刊的意义;
2.专刊的内容;
3.寄予的希望。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Readers,
____________________________________________________________________
Warm regards,
Li Hua
Editor-in-chief
第一部分 审题
体裁:寄语(其实主要还是介绍)
语气:formal
时态:一般现在时为主,一般将来时
人称:第一人称为主
交际对象:广大读者朋友
专刊:special issue,指报刊就某个专题内容编辑的一栏或一期。
低碳生活:low carbon living,就是指减少二氧化碳的排放,低能量、低消耗、
低开支的生活方式,主要是从节电、节气和回收三个环节来改变生活细节。第二部分 框架搭建
首段:目的、意义
表明写作的目的,并简单点明要点一(专刊的意义),这里很多考生直接
写成the aim is to…,可以简单提及意义关键词 significance; importance,表达其
价值或者作用,但是直接和读者表达意义不太符合交际原则,可以转嫁到是为
了…(即目的)或者能够……这上去;这里的意义也可以和内容一起阐述。意
义表达时 用上常用的表意图的动词:design, intend, attempt, aim。
思考点1:围绕“Why”展开,“倡导低碳生活”的专刊有什么意义?
1. 本期特刊的意义在于唤起人们的低碳生活意识,激发人们对可持续发展的关
注。
The significance of this special issue lies in that it aims to arouse people’s low-carbon
life awareness and __________ their concern for __________ development.
2. 该专栏的意义在于通过阐明现存的环境问题和提出减排建议,来倡导低碳生
活。
The point of the column consists in advocating living a low-carbon life by
_____________ existing environmental problems and offering emission reduction
_________.
正文:围绕主题“倡导低碳生活”,呈现专刊的内容
思考点2:围绕“What”展开,“倡导低碳生活”专刊的内容有哪些?
1. 我们将分享一些成功采用低碳做法的个人或社区的成功故事,以及他们在实
践中获得的益处。
We are to share some success stories of individuals or communities that have
successfully adopted low-carbon practices and the benefits they have _______ in the
practice.
2. 我们将呈现在应对气候变化和促进可持续生活方面,国际做出的努力,并探
索个人在实现全球碳排放目标方面的作用。
We would _________ international efforts to ________ climate change and promote
sustainable living, exploring the role of individuals in contributing to global carbonemissions _______.
尾段:表达寄语的希望,关键词wish, hope或者使用情态动词
1. 我们真诚地希望这期专刊能对社会产生巨大的影响,吸引越来越多的人
过低碳生活。
It is our sincere hope ____ the issue can make a great difference to society,
__________ an increasing number of people to _____ a low-carbon life.
2. 希望这期专刊能激励更多人养成更环保的习惯,共同为更可持续的未来
做出贡献。
_______ this column inspire more people to adopt greener habits and join
together to ____________ a more sustainable future.
第三部分 下水文&范文
下水文
Dear Readers,
Intended to appeal for more attention to the worsening climate change and
promote various ways to ease the problem, we School English Weekly is scheduled to
make a specific edition concerning “Advocating Low-Carbon Life”.
In this edition, the definition of green and low-carbon lives will be illustrated in a
completely new perspective. Based on the climate crisis nowadays several students
will share their solutions and give vivid practical experiences in their lives,
showcasing how simple and how easy you can contribute to less carbon emission. In
the following tech column, we’ll present you with some cutting-edge inventions that
reduce carbon in the air, to boost our confidence in fighting climate change by living a
low-carbon life.
Numerous options to live green are there for you to discover. Wish every reader
could gain some inspiration on their way to carbon-free.
Warm regards,
Li Hua
Editor-in-chief参考范文
Dear Readers,
As the chief editor of our school’s English newspaper, I’m pleased to introduce
our latest issue focused on advocating a low-carbon lifestyle. This edition’s
significance lies in its aim to inspire a commitment to environmental conservation
among us.
Featuring articles on the benefits of reducing carbon emissions, tips on
sustainable living, and success stories of individuals and communities making a real
difference, we provide a comprehensive guide to eco-friendly practices.
We aspire for this issue to serve as a catalyst for positive change, encouraging
everyone to take actionable steps towards a greener future.
Warm regards,
Li Hua
Editor-in-chief
第四部分 话题表达总结
专刊:special issue
低碳生活:1ow-carbon lifestyle, live a low carbon life
关于“低碳、环保”话题语料素材整理
减少碳排reduce carbon footprint
可持续能源使用sustainable energy usage
可再生能源renewable energy sources
环保实践eco-friendly practices
绿色交通选择green transportation options
节能家电energy-efficient appliances
减少浪费循环利用waste reduction and recycling
环保努力environmental conservation efforts我们都应该努力采用低碳生活方式,减少对环境的影响。
We should all strive to adopt a low-carbon lifestyle to reduce our impact on the
environment.
骑自行车或使用公共交通是开车的环保替代方案。
Riding bicycles or using public transportation are eco-friendly alternatives to driving
cars.
种植树木和参加海滩清理活动是重要的环境保护努力
Planting trees and participating in beach clean-up activities are important
environmental conservation efforts.