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作业 38 应用文写作＋读后续写
Ⅰ.应用文写作(告知信)(满分15分)
(2024·山东青岛一模)
假定你是李华，你校今年开设了蔬菜栽培、手工艺(handcraft)等实践课程。请你给外国
好友John写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．你的参与情况；2.你的体会。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
Ⅱ.读后续写(满分25分)
(2024·广东佛山二模)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Mom，please，” Anna begged eagerly.“Please，let me do it by myself！” She had
never made cookies by herself before，but at the age of nine，she felt capable of handling many
things.Her friends had been baking cupcakes for a year.Yet，it seemed her parents had little faith in
her.
“Anna is going to make cookies? Alone？” her brother，Carl，asked with a laugh.“That
is going to be disaster！” Carl used big words to act smarter than Anna.Having a big brother
could be annoying.Admittedly，Anna always appeared clumsy.But that was before she turned
nine.She thought her parents should realize she would do better now.At her words，a flash of uncertainty crossed her parents’ faces.Would they agree? Holding
her breath ， she had waited for what seemed like ages.Surprisingly ， Mom nodded ，
saying，“Okay，but please be careful，and remember to take a look at the cookbook first.”
Fueled by determination，Anna raced to the kitchen.With each step，there was a sense of
purpose and confidence growing within her.She had already done it with Mom a million times
before.Putting the cookbook aside，she got down to baking cookies from memory，breaking
eggs，dropping a cold stick of butter，adding salt and then...um...yes，mixing it well! Using a
mixer was easy.She turned on the mixer at the medium speed—and whoa.Whoa.Whoa! Butter
splattered(飞溅) everywhere，making the kitchen in a mess.Collecting herself，she turned back to
the mixing bowl and started again.This time with softer butter.
Anna placed rounded spoonfuls of mixture onto the cookie pan and put it into the oven(烤炉)．
Within a few minutes，a fantastic smell filled the kitchen—the smell of cookie success! She was
going to silence all those doubts.No more eye-rolling from her big brother.No more “You’re too
young，Anna” from her parents.She believed she had grown up and became mature enough to be
relied on.
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
The moment Anna pulled the pan out of the oven，Carl stepped into the kitchen.
Now she decided to have another try，carefully following the cookbook.
答案精析
Ⅰ.参考范文
Dear John ，For the sake of developing students’ hands-on skills and helping them appreciate the value of
labour，our school has launched varieties of practical courses，such as vegetable planting and
handcrafts.I’m extremely delighted to share this experience with you.
Exhausting but rewarding，planting vegetables benefited me enormously，during which I
engaged in and witnessed the whole eggplants growing process.What’s more ， under the
guidance of professional craftsmen，I was absorbed in creating refined conventional Chinese
artworks，such as paper-cutting，Chinese knot，clay figures and so on.This experience has been
eye-opening，giving me a deeper appreciation of our cultural heritage.
Not only did the courses teach me valuable skills but they also instilled a greater respect for
nature and tradition in me.I can’t wait to show you some of the crafts I’ve made and perhaps
share some fresh vegetables when you visit!
Yours sincerely ，
Li Hua
Ⅱ.参考范文
The moment Anna pulled the pan out of the oven，Carl stepped into the kitchen.There was a
smug grin on his face.“Well，well，well，Anna，it seems your cooking adventure ended in
disaster，just as I predicted，” he teased with superiority.Anna’s heart sank as she surveyed
the misshapen burnt cookies on the tray.She had underestimated the importance of measuring
ingredients accurately，resulting in an unappetizing mess.Carl’s mocking laughter echoed in her
ears，fueling her frustration and disappointment.She knew her failure resulted from her ignoring
the cookbook.
Now she decided to have another try，carefully following the cookbook.Determined to
redeem herself，Anna carefully measured each ingredient，ensuring precision in every step of the
process and taking care to avoid the mistakes of her previous attempt.After twenty minutes，Anna
opened the oven door to reveal perfectly golden-brown cookies.Her parents’ eyes were filled with
pride and admiration.Even Carl couldn’t hide his astonishment.At that moment，Anna realized
success wasn’t just about baking perfect cookies；it was about believing in herself and being
meticulous in everything she does.
